IELTS-雅思補充材料

做筆記評分表StandardsOfGradingTable姓名Name演講內(nèi)容(Speech)Content語言表達(Language)Expression形象風(fēng)度Image&Behaviour/BodyLanguage綜合印象ComprehensivePerformance會場效果AudienceResponse總分TotalScore(100)whatarethedifferentgeneticallymodifiedfoodandorganicfood?myexpertiseisinissuesthatsu雅思寫作大作文解析：Environment環(huán)境類??觀點：全球變暖??Gasessuchascarbondioxidetrapheatfromthesun,thiscausesglobaltemperaturestorise.Thisprocessisknownasthegreenhouseeffect.??二氧化碳等廢氣將來自太陽的熱量滯留在了地球，這是導(dǎo)致全球氣溫上升的原因。這個過程被稱為溫室效應(yīng)。??Factoriesandvehiclesproduceemissionsandexhaustfumes.Cheapairtravelisallowingmorepeopletofly.Humanactivityisamajorfactorintheriseofthegreenhousegases.??工廠與汽車產(chǎn)生廢物與廢氣。廉價航空使得更多的人可以坐飛機。人類活動是溫室氣體上升的主要原因。??Manydevelopingcountriesarebecomingindustrialized.??很多發(fā)展中國家變得越來越工業(yè)化。??全球變暖的影響??Globalwarmingwillhaveasignificantimpactonourplanet.??全球氣候變暖對我們地球有顯著的影響。??Risingtemperatureswillcausemeltingofthepolaricecapsandsealevelswillrise.Wecanexpectmoreextremeweatherconditions.Floodinganddroughtsmaybecomemorecommon.??氣溫上升會導(dǎo)致極地冰川融化與海平面上升。未來我們會有更多極端的天氣。洪水與干旱會越來越普遍。??人類對環(huán)境的影響??Theincreasingworldpopulationisputtingpressureonnaturalresources.Fossilfuelslikeoilandgasarerunningout.??日益增長的世界人口對自然資源造成很大壓力。化石能源如石油與天然氣正消耗殆盡。??Wearedestroyingwildlifehabitats.Wehavecutdownenormousareasofrainforest.Thishasledtotheextinctionofmanyspeciesofanimalsandplants.??人類摧毀了野生動物的棲息地。人類砍伐大片原始林森。這些都導(dǎo)致了很多動物與植物的滅絕。??環(huán)境問題的對策??Governmentscouldintroducelawstolimitemissionsfromfactories.Theyshouldinvestinrenewableenergyfromsolar,windorwaterpower.Theycouldimpose“greentaxes”ondriversandairlinescompanies.Governmentcampaignsshouldpromoterecycling.??政府應(yīng)該制定法規(guī)來限制工廠排放。政府應(yīng)該投資可再生能源，如太陽能，風(fēng)能或水力發(fā)電。政府應(yīng)該向司機和航空公司征收“環(huán)保稅”。政府應(yīng)當(dāng)大力發(fā)展資源回收。??Naturalareasandwildanimalsshouldbeprotected.??自然與野生動物都應(yīng)當(dāng)受到保護。??Individualsshouldalsotrytobegreener.Weshouldtakefewerflightsabroadforholidays.Weshouldtakepublictransportratherthandriving.Weshouldchooseproductswithlesspackaging.Weshouldrecycleasmuchaspossible.??對于個人來說，我們要變得更環(huán)保。我們出國旅行應(yīng)該少乘坐航班。我們應(yīng)當(dāng)多使用公共交通，少開車。我們應(yīng)當(dāng)選擇那些環(huán)保包裝(少包裝)的產(chǎn)品。我們應(yīng)該盡量循環(huán)利用所有資源。??廢物/垃圾??Theamountofwasteweproducehasincreased.Thisproblemisaresultofourconsumerculture.Productsarenotmadetolast.Ifsomethingbreaks,wethrowitawayandbuyanewone.??我們產(chǎn)生的垃圾越來越多。這個問題是由我們的消費文化產(chǎn)生的。產(chǎn)品都不能用很久。如果一些東西壞了，我們就丟掉再買一個新的。??Advertisersencourageustobuythenewestfashions.??廣告商鼓勵人們?nèi)ベI最新潮的東西。??Packagingisanimportantpartofselling.Mostfoodsaresoldinnon-biodegradableplasticspackaging.??包裝成了商品重要的一部分。很多食品是用不可降解塑料包裝的。??Theamountofhouseholdwasteisgrowing.Thiswasteendsupinlandfillsites.??家庭垃圾的數(shù)量在增長。它們最后都填埋處理了。??亂丟??Peopledonotthinkabouttheconsequencesofdroppingrubbish.Theyassumethatsomebodyispaidtocleanthestreets.??人們不考慮亂丟垃圾的后果。他們認為會有人來清潔街道的。??Mostofthelitterseenonstreetsisfastfoodpackaging.Theseplasticpackagingdoesnotbreakdowneasily.??很多丟棄在街上的垃圾都是快餐食品包裝。這些塑料袋不易降解。??回收利用與其他對策??Companiesshouldmakegoodsthatlastlonger.??公司應(yīng)該生產(chǎn)能使用更久的產(chǎn)品。??Theyshouldnotusesomuchpackaging.Governmentsshouldputlegallimitsonpackaging.Consumersshouldavoidbuyingover-packagedproducts.??產(chǎn)品不應(yīng)該過度包裝。政府應(yīng)當(dāng)對包裝進行法律限制。消費者應(yīng)當(dāng)避免購買過度包裝的產(chǎn)品。??Governmentsshouldbestricter,aboutwasterproducedbycompanies.??政府應(yīng)該嚴格控制公司生產(chǎn)的廢品。??Weshouldrecycleandreuseusefulmaterials.Householdscanuseseveralrubbishbinstoseparatewaste.Recyclingsavesenergyandrawmaterials.??我們應(yīng)該回收利用有用的材料。家庭可以使用不同的垃圾桶來分類垃圾?；厥詹粌H節(jié)約能源，還節(jié)省原材料。??Therearecollectionbanksforglass,paperandplasticbottles.??應(yīng)該建立一個玻璃，紙和塑料瓶等可回收垃圾的回收銀行。??核電：優(yōu)點??Thereareseveralbenefitstobuildmorenuclearpowerstations.Nuclearpowerstationsarecleanerthanfossilfuelpowerstations.Therisksofaccidentsarebeingreduced.??修建核電站有很多好處。核電站比燃料發(fā)電站更清潔。核能的事故風(fēng)險已經(jīng)減少了。??Nuclearpowerisasustainableenergysource.Nuclearcanbeusedtoproduceelectricitywithoutwastingnaturalresources.??核能是一種可持續(xù)的能源。核能生產(chǎn)電力，不需要消耗自然資源。??Fossilfuelslikeoilandgasarerunningout.Nuclearcouldreplacetheuseofnaturalresourceslikecoal,oilorgas.??化石能源如石油與天然氣正消耗殆盡。核能可以替代自然資源，如煤炭，石油或天然氣。??Nuclearcouldhelptoreducecarbonemissionsthatcauseglobalwarming.??核能可以幫助減少碳排放，而這會減輕全球變暖效應(yīng)。??核電：弊端??Opponentsofnuclearpowerworryaboutthesafetyofpowerstations.Thebuildingofnewnuclearpowerstationsisunpopular,nobodywantstolivenearone.??反對使用核電的人擔(dān)心核電站的安全。核電站建筑不太受(老百姓的)歡迎,沒人想住它附近。??Nuclearwastedisposalisasignificantproblem.Thereiscurrentlynowaytodecontaminateradioactivematerial.??核廢料處理是一個難題。到目前為止，我們還沒有能力處理(核電站排放的)放射性物質(zhì)。??Peopleworrythatterroristscouldstealradioactivematerials.??人們擔(dān)心恐怖份子會偷走放射性物質(zhì)。??Itissafertoproduceenergyfromsolar,windorwaterpower.??太陽能，風(fēng)能或水力發(fā)電會更加安全。范文(250Words,band9)政府與個人應(yīng)如何應(yīng)對環(huán)境問題？Explainsomeofthewaysinwhichhumansaredamagingtheenvironment.Whatcangovernmentsdotoaddresstheseproblems?Whatcanindividualpeopledo?Humansareresponsibleforavarietyofenvironmentalproblems,butwecanalsotakestepstoreducethedamagethatwearecausingtotheplanet.Thisessaywilldiscussenvironmentalproblemsandthemeasuresthatgovernmentsandindividualscantaketoaddresstheseproblems.Twoofthebiggestthreatstotheenvironmentareairpollutionandwaste.Gasemissionsfromfactoriesandexhaustfumesfromvehiclesleadtoglobalwarming,whichmayhaveadevastatingeffectontheplanetinthefuture.Asthehumanpopulationincreases,wearealsoproducingevergreaterquantitiesofwaste,whichcontaminatestheearthandpollutesriversandoceans.Governmentscouldcertainlymakemoreefforttoreduceairpollution.Theycouldintroducelawstolimitemissionsfromfactoriesortoforcecompaniestouserenewableenergyfromsolar,windorwaterpower.Theycouldalsoimpose‘greentaxes’ondriversandairlinecompanies.Inthisway,peoplewouldbeencouragedtousepublictransportandtotakefewerflightsabroad,thereforereducingemissions.Individualsshouldalsotakeresponsibilityfortheimpacttheyhaveontheenvironment.Theycantakepublictransportratherthandriving,chooseproductswithlesspackaging,andrecycleasmuchaspossible.Mostsupermarketsnowprovidereusablebagsforshoppersaswellas‘banks’forrecyclingglass,plasticandpaperintheircarparks.Byreusingandrecycling,wecanhelptoreducewaste.Inconclusion,bothnationalgovernmentsandindividualsmustplaytheirpartinlookingaftertheenvironment.太陽能的利弊？(342words,band9)Solarenergyisbecomingmoreandmorepopularasasourceofhouseholdenergyinmanycountriesaroundtheworld.Whyisthis?Whataretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofsolarenergy?Solarpowerasasourceofdomestichouseholdenergyisbecomingmoredesirablebecausemanyindividualsandgovernmentsareconcernedthatburningfossilfuelsaddscarbontotheatmosphereandthusacceleratesglobalwarmingandclimatechange.Othersfeelthatnuclearpowerispotentiallyunsafe,anddonotlikeitsassociatedpollutionfromradioactivewaste.Therefore,manyresearchersandconsumershavelookedatalternativesourcesofenergyandhavefoundthatsolarpowerhasmanybenefitsandfewdrawbacks.Themainadvantageofsolarenergyisthataftertheinitialinstallation,itisentirelyfreeandrenewable,andtherearenoextracostsinvolvedinproducingtheenergy.Solarenergyissilentandenvironmentallyfriendlyaswell-itdoesnotdestroyorpoisontheeco-system.Thisisbecausetherawmaterial,sunshine,doesnotneedtobeextractedorrefined,sotherearenopollutantsortoxicresidueproduced.Anothermajoradvantageisthatitisproducedwhereitisneededsothereisnoenergywastedontransport.Thisdecentralizationofthepowersourcenotonlyleadstosavingontransmission,butalsotomoreself-reliantcommunities-theabilitytoproducetheirownpowerisasignificantadvantageforremotepopulations.Therearealsoemploymentopportunitiesinthedesignanddevelopment,manufacture,installationandmaintenanceofthenewtechnologyforsolarpanels,whichareconsequentlybecominglessexpensive,moreavailableandmuchmoreefficient.Thegreatestdrawbackofsolarpoweristhatitistotallyreliantonsunlight,whichisnotalwaysconstant;infact,thereareregionswhereitmaynotbepracticable.Asitdoesnotworkatnight,powerfromdaytimesunshinemustbestoredinlargebatteries.Inaddition,thepanelstendtobebigandcumbersome.Amajordrawbackforsomeisthattheinitialpurchaseandinstallationoftheequipmentiscostly.Inmyview,thebenefitsofaclean,quite,renewable,eco-friendlysourceofenergyfaroutweighthedrawbacks,providedthatthereissufficientsunlightavailabletomakethissourceofpowerfeasible.Itisoftenclaimedthatnuclearenergyissomethingwecannotdowithout.Weliveinaconsumersocietywherethereisanenormousdemandforcommercialproductsofallkinds.Moreover.anincreaseinindustrialproductionisconsideredtobeonesolutiontotheproblemofmassunemployment.Suchanincreasepresumesanabundantandcheapenergysupply.Manypeoplebelievethatnuclearenergyprovidesaninexhaustibleandeconomicalsourceofpowerandchatitisthereforeessentialforanindustriallydevelopingsociety.Thereareanumberofotheradvantagesintheuseofnuclearenergy.Firstly,nuclearpower.exceptforaccidents,isclean.Afurtheradvantageisthatanuclearpowerstationcanberunandmaintainedbyrelativelyfewtechnicalandadministrativestaff.Thenuclearreactorrepresentsanenormousstepinourscientificevolutionand,whatevertheanti-nucleargroupsays,itiswrongtoexpectareturntomoreprimitivesourcesoffuel.However,opponentsofnuclearenergypointoutthatnuclearpowerstationsbringadirectthreatnotonlytotheenvironmentbutalsotocivilliberties.Furthermore,itisquestionablewhetherultimatelynuclearpowerisacheapsourceofenergy.Therehave.forexample.beenverycostlyaccidentsinAmerica,inBritainand,ofcourse.inRussia.Thepossibilityofincreasesinthecostofuranium(鈾)inadditiontothecostofgreatersafetyprovisionscouldpricenuclearpoweroutofthemarket.Inthelongrun,environmentalistsargue,nuclearenergywastesvaluableresourcesanddisturbstheecologytoanextentwhichcouldbringaboutthedestructionofthehumanrace.Thus,ifwewishtosurvive.wecannotaffordnuclearenergy.Inspiceofthecaseagainstnuclearenergyoutlinedabove.nuclearenergyprogrammesareexpanding.Suchanexpansionassumesacontinualgrowthinindustrialproductionandconsumerdemands.However,itisdoubtfulwhetherthisgrowthwillorcancontinueHavingweigheduptheargumentsonbothsides,itseemstherearegoodeconomicandecologicalreasonsforsourcesofenergyotherthannuclearpower.參考譯文常有人聲稱核能是我們不可或缺的能源。我們生活在一個消費社會中，這個社會對于各種商業(yè)產(chǎn)品的需求量極大。此外，工業(yè)生產(chǎn)的增長也被視為是解決大規(guī)模失業(yè)問題的一個途徑。這種增長需要充足和廉價的能源供應(yīng)。許多人相信核能提供了一種取之不盡且便宜的能源，因此為工業(yè)發(fā)展社會所必需。使用核能還有很多其他的優(yōu)點。首先，除非發(fā)生事故，核能是很清潔的。它的另一個好處是經(jīng)營和維持一個核電站需要相對較少的技術(shù)扣管理人員。核反應(yīng)技術(shù)代表著科學(xué)發(fā)展的一大進步，無論反核能論者怎么說，指望人們重新使用比較原始的燃料作能源都是錯誤的。然而，核能反對者們指出，核電站不僅對環(huán)境，而且對公民自由都是一種直接的威脅。此外，核能最終是否是一種廉價的能源還值得商榷。比如說，在美國、英國、當(dāng)然還有俄羅斯，都發(fā)生了代價高昂的事故。鈾的成本有可能提高，加上更加安全的防范設(shè)施所需的巨大成本會使核能的價格超出市場接受能力。環(huán)境保護論者宣稱，從長遠角度看，核能浪費了寶貴的資源，對生態(tài)的破壞甚至?xí)_到毀滅人類的地步。因此，如果我們想繼續(xù)生存下去，我們就不能使用核能。盡管有上述種種反對使用核能的理由，核能的開發(fā)計劃還在擴大。這種擴大以工業(yè)生產(chǎn)和消費需求的繼續(xù)增長為前提。但是，這種增長是否能夠持續(xù)，這令人懷疑。權(quán)衡了兩個方面的意見，我們似乎有很好的經(jīng)濟和生態(tài)環(huán)境方面的理由來利用其他形式的能源，而不是核能。Beforewriting,youmightwanttofigureoutthetopicofyouressay?Whatareyougoingtodiscuss?Learningaforeignlanguageoffersaninsightintohowpeoplefromotherculturesthinkandseetheworld.?Theteachingofaforeignlanguageshouldbecompulsoryatallprimaryschools.??Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisview?Youshouldwriteatleast250words.Allowyourself40minutesforthistask.Youshoulduseyourownideas,knowledgeandexperienceandsupportyourargumentswithexamples.modelanswer:(Clearstatementfollowedbyaquestionbasedonthepremise.)Languageislinkedtotheidentityofanation,andspeakersofacommonlanguagesharemanythings,butdoesthisgivegovernmentstherighttorestrictthewayalanguageisusedortaught?(Concessionmodetothe"For"case,butfollowedbytheAgainst'pointofview.Anexampleisgivenwhichcommentsonthelikelyeffectivenessofsuchapolicy.)Itcanbearguedthatanationmaintainsitsculturethroughitslanguage,andsothereisaneedtorestricttheuseofforeignwordsandchangesinpronunciation.However,inrealitythisapproachisfruitless,becauselanguageisalivingthinganditisimpossibletostopitfromchanging.Thispolicyhasbeentriedinsomecountries,butitneverworks.People,especiallyyoungpeople,willusethelanguagethattheyheararoundthem,andwhichseparatesthemfromothers;stoppingtheuseofcertainwordswillonlymakethemappearmoreattractive.(PutsthecaseAgainst'governmentspreventingspellingreform,butconcedesitmaybeuseful.)Asforspelling,weallknowthattheEnglishsystemisirregularand,Ibelieve,itwouldbenefitfromsimplificationsothatchildrenandotherlearnersdonotwastetimelearningtoreadandwrite.Ontheotherhand,somepeoplemayfeel,perhapsrightly,thatitisimportanttokeeptheoriginalspellingofwordsasalinkwiththepastandthisviewisalsoheldbyspeakersoflanguageswhichdonotusetheRomanalphabet.(Putsbothsidesoftheargumentaboutwhichlanguagetouseinschools.)Whileitisimportantforpeoplewhospeakaminoritylanguagetobeabletolearnandusethatlanguage,itispracticalforeducationtobeinacommonlanguage.Thiscreatesnationalprideandlinkspeoplewithinthesociety.Realistically,schoolsarethebestplaceforthistostart.(Endswithaclearstatement.)Ultimately,thereisaroleforgovernmentstoplayintheareaoflanguageplanning,particularlyineducation,butatnotimeshouldgovernmentsimposeregulationswhichrestrictpeople'slinguisticfreedom.Theessaytopicis:"Shouldparentsbeobligedtoimmunizetheirchildrenagainstcommonchildhooddiseases?Ordoindividualshavetherighttochoosenottoimmunizetheirchildren?"1.并列關(guān)系and,furthermore,morethanthat,also,likewise,moreover,inaddition,whatismore,forinstance,forexample2.轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系although,however,onthecontrary,but,inspiteof,nevertheless,yet,otherwise,despite3.順序關(guān)系first,second,third,andsoon,then,after,before,next4.因果關(guān)系asaresult,for,thus,because,forthisreason,so,therefore,as,since,consequently,onaccountof5.歸納關(guān)系asaresult,finally,therefore,accordingly,inshort,thus,consequently,inconclusion,so,inbrief,inaword幾個用得比較多的句子：AsfarasIamconcerned,theadvantagesof…outweighitsdisadvantages.Nevertheless,thedisadvantagesof…isundeniable.Tosumup/Ingeneral/Onthewhole/Inbrief/Inshort/Inaword,itistruethat…bringaboutbothpositiveandnegativeresults.Butwecantryourbesttoreducethenegativeinfluencetotheleastextent.Obviously,ineveryaspect,…Thisdiagramunfoldsaclearcomparisonbetween…and…Astotheotherthree,thoughthegrowthrateswerenotsohigh,theywereindeedremarkableandimpressive.一、雅思寫作連接詞之轉(zhuǎn)折詞語

1.

for

one

thing,

for

another,

above

all

things;

2.

to

begin/start

with,

next/besides/moreover,

last/finally;

3.

in

the

first

place,

in

the

second,

in

the

third,

(and)

best

of/worst

of

all;

4.

one

of

these,

another,(there

is)

still

another(reason/factor);

雅思寫作連接詞之轉(zhuǎn)折詞語句型介紹：

1.

首先；其次；最重要的是；

2.

首先；然后/此外/而且；最后；

3.

第一，首先；第二；第三；最好的是/最糟糕的是；

4.

其中一個；另一個；還有一個（原因/因素）；

二、雅思寫作邏輯連接詞之對比轉(zhuǎn)折詞語

1.

but,

but

on

the

contrary,

but

on

the

other

hand,

but

then;

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by

contrast,

in

contrast,

in

contrast

with/to,

as

a

contrast

to,

as

opposed

to;

3.

by

contraries,

on

the

contrary,

to

the

contrary,

contrary

to

(A),

opposite

to,

in

opposition

to;

4.

whereas,

while,

while

on

the

other

hand,

while

on

the

whole,

yet,

however;

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(as)

compared

with/to,

by

comparison,

in

comparison

with,

by

comparison

to

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First...,

Next...,

Last...;

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In

the

first

/

early

/

initial

/

infant

period

/

stage

/

phase（或In

its

infancy）...,

In

the

second

/

middle

/

adult

/

ripe

period

/

stage

/

phase...,

In

the

third

/

last

/

closing

/

later

/

concluding

period...;

8.

One

step

(way/course/approach/secret/trick)...,

Another

step...,

Still

another

step...;

9.

The

first

measure/step/move...,

Next

to

it

comes...,

And

the

last/final/the

most

important

measure...;

10.

The

direct

experience/lesson/factor/way（或One

lesson）...

The

indirect

experience/lesson/factor/way（或The

other

lesson）...

雅思寫作連接詞之對比轉(zhuǎn)折詞語句型介紹：

1.

但是；但相反地；但另一方面；但是接下去；

2.

通過對比；經(jīng)過對比；經(jīng)與…對比；作為與…的對比；作為…的對照；

3.

相反；相反；相反；與A相反；與…相反；與…相反；

4.

然而；然而；然而另一方面；然而整體而言；然而；然而；5.

跟…相比

6.

首先…；其次…；最后…；

7.

在第一個/早期/開始/嬰兒時期/階段；在第二個/中間/成人/成熟時期/階段；在第三個/最后/結(jié)束/后面的階段；

8.

一個措施/方法/做法/秘密/計策是…；另一個措施是…；還有一個措施是…；

9.

第一個措施是…；接著是…；最后一個/最重要的措施是…；

10.

直接經(jīng)驗/教訓(xùn)/因素/途徑是（一個教訓(xùn)是）…；間接經(jīng)驗/教訓(xùn)/因素/途徑是（另一個教訓(xùn)是）…

三、雅思寫作對比轉(zhuǎn)折句型

1.

But

the

obvious

(fatal/serious)

flaw

(defect/drawback)

in

their

argument

(attitude/idea/view/action/behavior)

is

that.../But

the

basic

(main/great/key/

big)

problem

with

their

argument

(...)

is

that...

e.g.

...that

they

are

ignorant

of

(blind

to)

a

bare

fact:

Social

changes

have

attached

new

meanings

and

values

to

the

division

between

good

and

bad.

2.

But

if...it

is

(not)

easy

(difficult/hard)

to

see

(find/discover)

that

...

e.g.

But

if

they

adjust

their

frame

of

mind

a

little

in

the

other

direction

,

it

is

not

hard

for

them

to

find

that

life

is

just

as

promising

as

before.

3.

Too

much

emphasis

(attention/stress/concern/significance)

placed

on

(given

to/focused

on/attached

to/paid

to)

the

negative

(sunny/gloomy/bright)

side

of

the

issue,

however,

may...（如mislead/confuse/cloud/bias/disturb

our

judgment

of

it.）A

e.g.

...,

however,

may

mislead

us

to

form

a

pessimistic

estimate

of

current

situations.或...,

however,

may

stop

us

from

rendering

(passing/forming/having)

a

fair

(correct/clear/infallible/wise)

judgment

on

it.

4.

But

in

most

cases/from

the

point

of

view

of

justice

(objectivity)/as

a

matter

of

fact/in

a

very

true

sense,

their

(public/general)

satisfaction

(dissatisfaction/disillusionment/concern)

with...（或their

criticism

of.../their

argument

for/against.../their

objection

to.../their

approval

for...）can

not.../is...,

for...

e.g.

But

in

an

impartial

sense,

the

public

dissatisfaction

can

not

hold

every

water,

for

our

society

is

still

abundant

in

goodness

and

beauty.

5.

As

a

result

of...,

however,

things

would/are

bound

to...

e.g.

As

a

result

of

such

an

utter

indifference

to

vicious

behavior,

however

,

things

would

be

past

saving/mending/all

the

hope.

雅思寫作轉(zhuǎn)折句型介紹：

1.

但他們辯論/態(tài)度/觀點/看法/行為中的明顯/致命的/嚴重的缺點/缺陷是…；他們辯論的基本/最大/主要問題在于…

例：…他們忽視了一個赤裸裸的事實：社會變革給善惡的區(qū)分賦予了新的意義和價值。

2.

但如果…很（不）容易/難發(fā)現(xiàn)…

例：但如果他們稍微調(diào)整一下思路，就不難發(fā)現(xiàn)生活還是跟以前一樣前途光明。

3.

然而，對問題負面/正面/陰暗面給予/集中/附加了太多的強調(diào)/注意/關(guān)注會…（如誤導(dǎo)/混淆/掩蓋/歪曲/干擾我們對它的判斷）

例：然而，…會誤導(dǎo)我們對目前的形勢形成悲觀的估計。或：然而，…會阻礙我們對其形成/有一個正確的/清楚的/無誤的/明智的判斷。

4.

但大多數(shù)情況下/從公正（客觀）的角度來看/實際上/真正意義上，他們/公眾/對…的滿意/不滿/幻滅/關(guān)注（或：他們對…的批評/他們對…辯解（辯駁）/他們對…的反對/他們對…的支持）不能…/是…，因為…

例：但從公正的角度來看，公眾的不滿并不都有道理，因為我們的社會仍然充滿著善與美。

5.

然而，作為…的結(jié)果，事情會注定…

例：然而，作為對不良行為全然漠視的結(jié)果，事情將成為過去，希望還在。

四、雅思寫作邏輯連接詞之情景短語

1.

when,

if,

the

other

day

in

a

certain

place,

suppose/imagine/assume

(that...),

in

(the)

course/time

of...for

instance,

in

the

event

of等；

2.

in

the

case

of,

as

for/to,

as

far

as...is/are

concerned,

The

same

is

true

of...,

when

compared

with,

in

comparison

with,

by

comparison等；

3.

If

there

is

anything

that

comes

close

to/is

comparable

to/with...,...there

is

hardly,

a

thing

that

compares

favorable

with/can

rival...

雅思寫作邏輯連接詞情景短語之句型介紹：

1.

當(dāng)…的時候；如果；幾天前在某