讀后續(xù)寫公開課講評：親情類母子化解誤會Adam個人成長課件【知識精研+能力提升】高三英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項

后續(xù)寫讀講評閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OncetherewasalittleboycalledAdamwhocamefromarichfamily.Hewasayoungstudentatprimaryschoolandwasveryclever.Healwaysgainedgoodmarksinhisexams.Adamgoteverythinghewanted,suchastoycars,airplanemodels,watergunsandsoon.Hisparentsboughthimwhateverhewanted.Onedayhewentouttoastorewithhismotherandinthetoysectionhefoundaverycooltoycar.Hewassurprisedtoseethatkindoftoycar,soherantohismotherandtoldhereverythingaboutit.Adamtookhismothertothetoysectiontoshowhowitworked.However,hismotherrefusedtobuyitforhimbecausehealreadyhadalotoftoycars.Adamwassadandwonderedwhyhismotherdidnotbuyitforhim.Twoweekslater,Adamandhismotherwenttothesamestoreagain.Adamthoughtthathismotherwouldbuyitforhimthistime,soheaskedhismotherforthetoycaragain.Hismotherignoredhimbecauseshewaslookingforsomethingelse.ButAdamreallywantedthetoycar.So,whilehismotherwasbusylookingforsomeotheritems,hetookthetoycarandputitinsidehisbackpack.ThesalesmansawAdamstealingthetoycarandtriedtostophim.Adamtriedtorunbutthesalesmancaughthim.Adamstartedtocry.Hismotherheardhisvoiceandrantohim.Shewasshockedtoseethesalesmanholdingherson.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按照如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:“whathappened?”sheaskedwithconcern.___________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Aftertheygothome,Adamwenttohisroomandregrettedhavingdonethat.______________________________________________________________________________1.搞清原文劇情---六要素（5W+H）WhoALittleboy(Adam),hismother，thesalesmanWhenoneday;twoweekslater（過去時）WhereinthestorehomewhatAdamstolethetoycar,andthesalesmancaughthim.whyAdamaskedhismotheraboutthetoycartwice,buthismotherignoredhim.howAdamstartedtocry,andhismotherwasshocked.2.讀兩段提示語-------構(gòu)建情節(jié)線所見：所聞：所思（畫面、想法、感受）：所說：所做：para1.“Whathappened？”sheaskedwithconcerns.店員向媽媽說：Adam偷東西兒子此刻的想法/感受（羞愧）媽媽此刻的想法/感受（生氣）媽媽、兒子或店員此刻的做法道歉、歸還質(zhì)問、責(zé)備在店里回家路上生氣或憤怒的表達1.She

(seize)byannoyancewhenherfriendcamelate.

2.Unabletocontainmyrageanylonger,Iturnedaroundandgavehimalookofburning

(angry).

3.Enteringhisson’smessyroom,hegrew

(annoy)andpulledaface.

4.Mybrothershouted

(angry).

(他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖）.

5.Theteacher

(勃然大怒），whichmadeusallalittlefrightened.

6.Thewomanfeltsoangrythatshe(storm)outoftheroom,whichalso

(使她怒火中燒）wasseizedangerannoyedangrilyHisvoicetrembledwithangerburstintoangerburstintoangerstormedp23尷尬、羞愧、內(nèi)疚的表達embarrass-embarrassed（尷尬的）-embarrassmenttoone’sembarrassment;withembarrassmentshame-ashamed(羞愧的),be/feelashamedof,guilt-guilty(內(nèi)疚的，有罪的)，be/feelguiltyabout1.Feelingasifthewholeworldwaswatchingher,shefeltquite

(embarrass),andherheartbeatpainfullyfast.

2.Ifrozethere,with

(embarrass)writteninmyredface.

3.Thatgirlsatthere

(embarrass),withhereyeswideningandface

(turn)red.

4.Sherosefromherchair,andsoshamedwasshethatshecould

（覺得臉紅了）.

5.Idroppedmyeyesandstartedatmyfeet,

（為自己感到羞愧）.

6.Shefelttheheatrisingintohercheeks.Shehesitatedforamoment,wonderinghowto

(掩飾尷尬）embarrassedhideherembarrassmentp80embarrassmentembarrassedturningfeelherfaceturningredfeelingashamedofmyselfpara2.Aftertheygothome,Adamwenttohisroomandregrettedhavingdonethat.所見：所聞：所思（畫面、想法、感受）：所說：所做：兒子：向媽媽認錯，承認再也不偷東西想法：偷東西是不對的；

買東西也要考慮是否真的需求回憶畫面：父母很愛他，總是滿足他的要求媽媽（教育，原諒）兒子whyregret?感受：后悔，愧疚懊悔、后悔的表達

regret（后悔）-regretful(后悔的）regretdoingsth.后悔做過某事toone’sregret

令某人后悔的是be/feel

regretfulaboutsth.對...感到后悔beimmersedingreatregret陷入懊悔中后悔的淚水涌出我的眼睛。Tearsofregretwerewellingupinmyeyes.他流下了后悔的眼淚。Heshedtearsofregret.兒子主動承認錯誤，向母親道歉，并從中得到教訓(xùn)。母親原諒兒子。3.兩讀之后定主題和結(jié)局------積極向上正能量范文欣賞para1.“Whathappened？”sheaskedwithconcerns.ThenthesalesmantoldAdam’smotherindetailsaboutwhatthelittleboyhaddone.Adam’smotherwasveryangry

withhim.Adamloweredhisheadinshame.Hismotherquicklytookthetoycarandgiveitbacktothesalesman.Ontheirwaybackhome,Adam’smotherscoldedAdamseriouslyandaskedhimwhyhedidthat.Adamrepliedthatjustbecausehewantedthetoycardesperately.para2.Aftertheygothome,Adamwenttohisroomandregrettedhavingdonethat.

Hestartedtothinkwhyhedidthatjustforatoycar.Hewenttohismotherandsaidsorrytothemforstealingthingsinthestore.HismotherforgavehimandtoldAdamnottodothatagainbecauseitisnotrighttostealanything.Healsolearnedwhathismotherwastryingtoteachhim.

Evenifhisfamilyhadenoughmoneytobuythings,hehadtofindoutwhetherhereallyneededathingorjustwantedit.積累：回憶memorize/recall/recollectV.回憶lookbackupon；reflecton/upon回想起Manypastmemoriescrowdedinuponmymind.過去的回憶涌上心頭。sth.carriedsb.backtoone’s(childhood/schoollife...)某物讓某人回想起...eg.Thetoyscarriedh