2024屆新高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)如何進(jìn)行讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)的構(gòu)思（收養(yǎng)小狗改變一生）

2024屆新高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)

如何進(jìn)行讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)的構(gòu)思

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改變?nèi)松?學(xué)生存在的問(wèn)題讀中：一頭霧水，讀不懂，不會(huì)提取有效信息

不知道如何挖掘原文中的材料為續(xù)寫(xiě)所用寫(xiě)中：缺少銜接與連貫，續(xù)寫(xiě)與原文疏離，寫(xiě)到哪里算哪里？Teachingobjectives:ToguidetheSshowtodeterminethenewplotsandtheendingofthecontinuationwritingproperly.教學(xué)思路一：提取信息要點(diǎn)，摸清主旨內(nèi)涵二：探求邏輯關(guān)系，梳理思維脈絡(luò)三：關(guān)注情感走向，形成合理發(fā)展四：力求首尾呼應(yīng)，確保前后一致第二節(jié)(滿(mǎn)分25分)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

IhadorderedmanygiftsonlinefortheupcomingChristmas.Oneday,whenthedoorbellrang,Iwassuresomeofthepackagesarrived.Iopenedthedoor,butonlytofindabeautifullittledogsittingon,thefloor.Itlookedupatmewithherbig,cuteeyes.Ilookedaround,buttherewasnooneinsight.Itwasobviousthatsomeonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandintentionallyleftheroutsidethedoor.

ThelovelydogwasatimelyChristmasgiftforme,indeed.Theyearmarkedaturningpointinmylife.InSeptember,myhusbandwasofferedanewjobinAfrica.Feelingthat?hadhitacareerbottleneckasaphotographerjournalist,Idecidedtorelocatewithhim.Whilemyhusbandwasbusywithhiswork,Ididn'tknowwhattodoanyway.Ifeltisolated,homesickandlackingpurpose.Welivedinahousenearariverthatcutacrossanexpansivegrassland.Withfewpeoplearound,Iwouldtakemycameraandwanderaround,photographingaimlesslyeveryday.

Soweadoptedtheabandoned.dog.Myhusbandcalledher“ourlittleangel”andInameditaccordingly.Angelseemeatobeveryhappywithusandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanionforme.Alwaysbymyside,sheenjoyedexploringtheshadybushesandmysterioustunnelsalloverthegrassland.Encouragedbyhercuriosity,Idecidedtoexplore,too.

TherewasadeepcavenearourhouseandIhadbeeneagertoexploreit.Theonlywayinwasnarrowandslippery.I-hadpromisedmyhusbandthatIwouldn'tdoitunlesshewasaround.Buthewasalwaysbusy.WithAngelasmycompanion.Ifiguredthatitwastimetostretchtherulealittlebit.

Oneday,Iequippedmyselfwithagoodflashlightandcarefullywalkeddownthedarkcave.Suddenly,Angel,whohadbeenfollowingmeclosely,rushedaheadanddisappearedintothedarkness.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.

Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.第二節(jié)(滿(mǎn)分25分)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

I

hadorderedmanygiftsonlinefortheupcomingChristmas.Oneday,whenthedoorbellrang,Iwassuresomeofthepackagesarrived.Iopenedthedoor,butonlytofind

abeautifullittledogsittingon,thefloor.Itlookedupatmewithherbig,cuteeyes.Ilookedaround,buttherewasnooneinsight.Itwasobviousthatsomeonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandintentionallyleftheroutsidethedoor.

ThelovelydogwasatimelyChristmasgiftforme,indeed.Theyearmarkedaturningpointinmylife.InSeptember,myhusbandwasofferedanewjobinAfrica.FeelingthatI

hadhitacareerbottleneckasaphotographerjournalist,Idecidedtorelocatewithhim.Whilemyhusbandwasbusywithhiswork,Ididn'tknowwhattodoanyway.Ifeltisolated,homesickandlackingpurpose.Welivedinahousenearariverthatcutacrossanexpansivegrassland.Withfewpeoplearound,Iwouldtakemycameraandwanderaround,photographingaimlesslyeveryday.

Soweadoptedtheabandoned

dog.Myhusbandcalledher“ourlittleangel”andInameditaccordingly.Angelseemedtobeveryhappywithusandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanionforme.Alwaysbymyside,sheenjoyedexploringtheshadybushesandmysterioustunnelsalloverthegrassland.Encouragedbyhercuriosity,Idecidedtoexplore,too.

TherewasadeepcavenearourhouseandIhadbeeneagertoexploreit.Theonlywayinwasnarrowandslippery.I

hadpromisedmyhusbandthatIwouldn'tdoitunlesshewasaround.Buthewasalwaysbusy.WithAngelasmycompanion.Ifiguredthatitwastime

tostretchtherulealittlebit.

Oneday,Iequippedmyselfwithagoodflashlightandcarefullywalkeddownthedarkcave.Suddenly,Angel,whohadbeenfollowingmeclosely,rushedaheadanddisappearedintothedarkness.讀材料---找動(dòng)詞ClimaxContinuationpara.1:

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.ConcludingContinuationpara.2:Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.BeginningIfounda______dog.I________theabandoneddoghappy&satisfied分析故事情節(jié)DevelopingI________myselfandcarefully____________thedarkcave.ClimaxContinuationpara.1:

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.ConcludingContinuationpara.2:Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.a________pointa________companionBeginningIfounda______dog.I________theabandoneddogI________myselfandcarefully____________thedarkcave.happy&satisfied

分析故事情節(jié)Idecidedto________,tooa________ChristmasgiftIfiguredthatitwastimeto____________alittlebit.Developing緊記口訣：兩段首句定一框，二框二首正能量。即由續(xù)寫(xiě)的第一段首句與第二段首句確定第一段的框架；第二段的框架，由第二段首句與正能量結(jié)尾來(lái)確定。構(gòu)思框架兩段首句定一框para.1:

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.para.2:Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.鳥(niǎo)怎么了？recoveryteeth；late；wings；

injured；betightlyshut;heartbreaking;immediately;

cautiously/carefully;

place;acardboardbox（紙板盒）;

towels;warm;care;recover;regainenergypara.1參考詞匯小試牛刀Onepossibleversion:(para.1)Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.Itriedtofreethebirdfromitsteeth.Butitwastoolate.WhenIgotitout,oneofitswingswasseriouslyinjuredanditseyesweretightlyshut.Thesightwasheartbreaking.Ireturnedhomeimmediatelyandcautiouslyplaceditinacardboardboxwithtowelstokeepitwarm.Withmyconstantcare,thelittlebirdseemedtoberecoveringfastandwasregainingenergy.para.1:

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.para.2:Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.hitacareer________;feltisolated,______andlacking_________2.正能量構(gòu)思框架(para.2)--------二框二首正能量1.二首?post;online;receive;like;beauty;encourage;tomysurprise;restartmycareer;awildlifephotographer;introduce;thewonderfulanimals;world;findbackmylife;

nolonger;isolated;homesick.para.2參考詞匯小試牛刀Onepossibleversion:(para.2)Duringtherecoveringprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.Ipostedsomeofthebestonesonline.Tomysurprise,Ireceivedmillionsoflikesforitsvividbeautyafewdayslater.Furthermore,Iwasencouragedto

restartmycareerasawildlifephotographerandintroducethewonderfulanimalsonthiswonderfullandtotheworld.Immediately,Ifoundbackmylifeandnolongerfeltisolated,orhomesick.Thankyou,myAngel!成文：

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.Itriedtofreethebirdfromitsteeth.Butitwastoolate.WhenIgotitout,oneofitswingswasseriouslyinjured