高考英語 概要寫作話題訓(xùn)練8 生活方式課件

【概要寫作話題訓(xùn)練8】

生活方式人與環(huán)境主題語境:生活方式關(guān)鍵詞:overweight語篇類型:現(xiàn)象說明短文詞數(shù):266語篇難度:★★★建議時(shí)間:22mins閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要Manypeopleareconcernedaboutthehealthofchildren.Onebigproblemisthatchildrenarebecomingmoreoverweight.Beingoverweightisaproblemthatcostsmoney.Peoplearelessproductivewhentheyweightoomuch.Theyalsohavemorehealthissueswhentheyareoverweight.Onethingthatmakespeopleoverweightiseatingtoomuchjunkfood.Chips,candyandsugarysnacksarecalledjunkfood.Junkfoodisnothealthyforpeople.Itcanmakethemoverweight.Mostjunkfoodcontainstoomuchfatandsugarwhenchildrenhavetoomuchfatandsugarintheirdiets,theycanbecomeoverweightorevenobese.Teenagersandchildreneatalotofjunkfood.Somestudiessaythatteenagersdrinksodaeverydayandeattoomuchfastfood.ThegovernorofCaliforniawantschildrentobehealthier.Heheldaspecialsummitmeetingtotalkabouttheproblem.Heinvitedseveralotherhealthgroups,aswellaschildren.Hetalkedtothechildrenaboutstayinghealthy.Heaskedthemtoexercisemoreandtostayawayfromjunkfoodthegovernoralsotookawalkwiththechildren.Hewantedtoshowthemthatexercisecanbefun.Heaskedthestudentsforacommitmenttostayhealth.Thegovernoralsosignedanewlaw.ItlimitsthesaleofjunkfoodandsodainschoolcafeteriasLawmakershopethatthisnewlawwillstopchildrenfromeatingsomuchjunkfood.Theyhopethiswillhelpmakechildrenhealthierinthestate.語言點(diǎn)津junkfood的說法來自葡萄牙語。大約500年前,在葡萄牙語里有一個(gè)詞junk,意思是“oldpiecesofrope(舊日纜繩)”。時(shí)間一長,這個(gè)詞的意思逐漸演變?yōu)槿魏慰衫玫膹U棄材料。最后,junk用來指價(jià)值不高或根本沒有任何價(jià)值的東西。于是,人們就稱沒有多少營養(yǎng)的食物為junkfood文章來源本文選自英文網(wǎng)站,原文題目為“GovernorWantsKidstoEatHealthily”《州長想讓孩子吃得健康》,作者不詳。語篇解讀本文是一篇說明文,主要說明了孩子的肥胖問題是吃過多垃圾食品而導(dǎo)致的。解決問題的唯一途徑就是遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品并且多運(yùn)動(dòng)。難句解讀原文：Whenchildrenhavetoomuchfatandsugarintheirdiets,theycanbecomeoverweightorevenobese譯文:當(dāng)孩子們的飲食中含有太多的脂肪和糖時(shí),他們就會(huì)變得超重甚至肥胖。分析:When引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句。筆前點(diǎn)睛★審題分析從寫作素材來看,本篇概要必須涉及以下幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)1.孩子們超重成為許多人擔(dān)心的問題。2超重的原因是孩子們吃太多垃圾食品。3.加利福尼亞州州長開峰會(huì)專門討論孩子的健康問題;他本人以身作則,親自帶孩子進(jìn)行鍛煉4州長簽訂新法律來限制垃圾食品。思路點(diǎn)撥本文是一篇說明文。本概要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)先介紹孩子們的健康問題,然后以一般過去時(shí)介紹加利福尼亞州州長為解決孩子們的健康問題而釆取的措施高分范文Thatkidsarebecomingoverweightisabigproblemwhichconcernsmanypeople.(要點(diǎn)1)It‘sknownthateatingtoomuchjunkfoodmakeskidsoverweight.(要點(diǎn)2)Tosolvetheproblem,thegovernorofCaliforniaheldaspecialsummitmeeting,whichheinvitedhealthgroupsandchildrentoattend.Notonlydidheaskkidstostayawayfromjunkfood,buthehadawalkwiththemtoshowthatexercisecanbefun.(要點(diǎn)3)Furthermore，

hesignedanewlawtolimitthesaleofjunkfoodandsodainschools.(要點(diǎn)4)(74words)★高級(jí)語塊重要短語invitesb.todosth.邀請(qǐng)某人做某事stayawayfrom遠(yuǎn)離concerns(vt.)使….擔(dān)心notonly….butalso….不但..而且..高級(jí)語塊★高級(jí)句型Thatkidsarebecomingoverwiehtisabigproblemwhichconcernsmanypeople(That引導(dǎo)主語從句;which引導(dǎo)定語從句)

It'sknownthateatingtoomuchjunkfoodmakeskidoverweight(it是形式主語,that引導(dǎo)的從句作真正的主語)Notonlydidheaskkidstostayawayfromjunkfood,buthehadawalkwiththemtoshowthatexercisecanbefun(notonly位于句首,其后的句子要用倒裝;that引導(dǎo)賓語從精彩點(diǎn)評(píng)全文要點(diǎn)齊全,敘述有條理,思路清晰,主題突出。使用了不同的句式和短語,以及銜接上下句的過渡詞,語言運(yùn)用靈活,功底扎實(shí)。。語境演練Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,itisbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.閱讀短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactionsinahurry,theycannotmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,"Hastemakeswaste.Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesinenjoyingourlife.Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthyconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactionsinahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Beinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Howevermuchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________高分范文Tolivelifeataslowerpaceisbetterthantolivelifeinahurry.Thereare