高考英語 概要寫作話題訓練8 生活方式課件

【概要寫作話題訓練8】

生活方式人與環(huán)境主題語境:生活方式關鍵詞:overweight語篇類型:現(xiàn)象說明短文詞數(shù):266語篇難度:★★★建議時間:22mins閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要Manypeopleareconcernedaboutthehealthofchildren.Onebigproblemisthatchildrenarebecomingmoreoverweight.Beingoverweightisaproblemthatcostsmoney.Peoplearelessproductivewhentheyweightoomuch.Theyalsohavemorehealthissueswhentheyareoverweight.Onethingthatmakespeopleoverweightiseatingtoomuchjunkfood.Chips,candyandsugarysnacksarecalledjunkfood.Junkfoodisnothealthyforpeople.Itcanmakethemoverweight.Mostjunkfoodcontainstoomuchfatandsugarwhenchildrenhavetoomuchfatandsugarintheirdiets,theycanbecomeoverweightorevenobese.Teenagersandchildreneatalotofjunkfood.Somestudiessaythatteenagersdrinksodaeverydayandeattoomuchfastfood.ThegovernorofCaliforniawantschildrentobehealthier.Heheldaspecialsummitmeetingtotalkabouttheproblem.Heinvitedseveralotherhealthgroups,aswellaschildren.Hetalkedtothechildrenaboutstayinghealthy.Heaskedthemtoexercisemoreandtostayawayfromjunkfoodthegovernoralsotookawalkwiththechildren.Hewantedtoshowthemthatexercisecanbefun.Heaskedthestudentsforacommitmenttostayhealth.Thegovernoralsosignedanewlaw.ItlimitsthesaleofjunkfoodandsodainschoolcafeteriasLawmakershopethatthisnewlawwillstopchildrenfromeatingsomuchjunkfood.Theyhopethiswillhelpmakechildrenhealthierinthestate.語言點津junkfood的說法來自葡萄牙語。大約500年前,在葡萄牙語里有一個詞junk,意思是“oldpiecesofrope(舊日纜繩)”。時間一長,這個詞的意思逐漸演變?yōu)槿魏慰衫玫膹U棄材料。最后,junk用來指價值不高或根本沒有任何價值的東西。于是,人們就稱沒有多少營養(yǎng)的食物為junkfood文章來源本文選自英文網(wǎng)站,原文題目為“GovernorWantsKidstoEatHealthily”《州長想讓孩子吃得健康》,作者不詳。語篇解讀本文是一篇說明文,主要說明了孩子的肥胖問題是吃過多垃圾食品而導致的。解決問題的唯一途徑就是遠離垃圾食品并且多運動。難句解讀原文：Whenchildrenhavetoomuchfatandsugarintheirdiets,theycanbecomeoverweightorevenobese譯文:當孩子們的飲食中含有太多的脂肪和糖時,他們就會變得超重甚至肥胖。分析:When引導時間狀語從句。筆前點睛★審題分析從寫作素材來看,本篇概要必須涉及以下幾個要點1.孩子們超重成為許多人擔心的問題。2超重的原因是孩子們吃太多垃圾食品。3.加利福尼亞州州長開峰會專門討論孩子的健康問題;他本人以身作則,親自帶孩子進行鍛煉4州長簽訂新法律來限制垃圾食品。思路點撥本文是一篇說明文。本概要應用一般現(xiàn)在時先介紹孩子們的健康問題,然后以一般過去時介紹加利福尼亞州州長為解決孩子們的健康問題而釆取的措施高分范文Thatkidsarebecomingoverweightisabigproblemwhichconcernsmanypeople.(要點1)It‘sknownthateatingtoomuchjunkfoodmakeskidsoverweight.(要點2)Tosolvetheproblem,thegovernorofCaliforniaheldaspecialsummitmeeting,whichheinvitedhealthgroupsandchildrentoattend.Notonlydidheaskkidstostayawayfromjunkfood,buthehadawalkwiththemtoshowthatexercisecanbefun.(要點3)Furthermore，

hesignedanewlawtolimitthesaleofjunkfoodandsodainschools.(要點4)(74words)★高級語塊重要短語invitesb.todosth.邀請某人做某事stayawayfrom遠離concerns(vt.)使….擔心notonly….butalso….不但..而且..高級語塊★高級句型Thatkidsarebecomingoverwiehtisabigproblemwhichconcernsmanypeople(That引導主語從句;which引導定語從句)

It'sknownthateatingtoomuchjunkfoodmakeskidoverweight(it是形式主語,that引導的從句作真正的主語)Notonlydidheaskkidstostayawayfromjunkfood,buthehadawalkwiththemtoshowthatexercisecanbefun(notonly位于句首,其后的句子要用倒裝;that引導賓語從精彩點評全文要點齊全,敘述有條理,思路清晰,主題突出。使用了不同的句式和短語,以及銜接上下句的過渡詞,語言運用靈活,功底扎實。。語境演練Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,itisbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.閱讀短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactionsinahurry,theycannotmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,"Hastemakeswaste.Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesinenjoyingourlife.Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthyconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactionsinahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Beinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Howevermuchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________高分范文Tolivelifeataslowerpaceisbetterthantolivelifeinahurry.Thereare