高考英語三輪沖刺讀后續(xù)寫愛與責(zé)任類 一個(gè)人和一只德國(guó)牧羊犬的故事 講義

讀后續(xù)寫原題目呈現(xiàn)：閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Magicwasafour-year-oldGermanShepherdabouttobeadoptedattheanimalshelteralongwithhundredsofotherdogs.Thereporterannouncedthatthedogsandcatswouldbeputdownifnoonecamebytheendoftheday.MyfriendRosiefeltworriedabouttheanimalsandaskedmetoaccompanyherthere.Soafterschoolwerushedtothesheltertosavewhoeverwecould.Finally,shegotacatandIwastouchedbythepooranimals,askingtheshelterworkerforthebiggestdogtheyhad.HisnamewasMagic.Actually,Ilivedaloneinanapartment.Ihadtostayincollegeduringtheday.

SoIalwaysstayedoutandtakingcareofadogathomeseemedachallengeforme.Rosiefeltuneasyaboutthedogandadvisedmetoabandonthethoughtofkeepingthedogandsendittoawarmhome.ButIlikedMagicsomuch,soIdidn’tacceptheradviceandbroughtMagichome.AfterlearningIadoptedadog,myneighborbelowshowedworryforIhadn'tkeptananimalbefore.Asitturnedout,therewasn'talotoftrust.Magicwouldtakethefoodoutofhisbowl,bringitinfrontofmeandeatitonebiteatatime.MyfriendRosiewasprettysureIwascrazyandthatkeepingitwouldbeahugemistake.ButslowlyMagicandIgottoknoweachother.Webecamebestfriends.Forthefirsttime，myapartmentfeltlikeahome.WewalkedtogetherthroughCentralParkeverymorningandnight.Evenwhenmyfriendsinvitedmetoparties,IjustwantedtobehomewithMagic.Ourliveswerehappy.Forthefirsttime,Iwascontent.Unfortunately,aproblemappeared.WhenIwasin,hekeptcalm,buthebarkedalotwhenIwasnotin,whichdisturbedmyneighborbelow.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.

_________________________________________________________________Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.____________________________________________________________________________________________主題語境：人與自我主要內(nèi)容：文章是關(guān)于一個(gè)人和一只被拯救的德國(guó)牧羊犬之間的感人故事。故事圍繞著主人對(duì)狗的愛和牧羊犬對(duì)主人的依戀展開。主人通過收養(yǎng)狗，讓他的生活變得更加充實(shí)和快樂，而狗也找到了一個(gè)溫暖的家。然而，隨著牧羊犬因?yàn)楣陋?dú)而頻繁叫喚的問題出現(xiàn)，主人和鄰居之間產(chǎn)生了一些不和諧。這個(gè)故事展現(xiàn)了愛和責(zé)任之間的平衡，以及如何解決問題的重要性。讀的技巧：讀要素1.who---抓主要人物和主要人物的身份，但不要忽略次要人物。

I---acollegestudent

Rosie---myfriend

Magic---theadopteddog

Myneighbor---livingbelow,disturbedbyMagic’sbarking

Thereporter,theshelterworker,theadoptedcat---次要人物2.whathappened---抓主要事件，梳理故事發(fā)展情節(jié)。IadoptedadogwhileRosieadoptedacatattheanimalshelter

→

Rosieadvisedmetoabandonthethoughtofkeepingthedogandsendit

toawarmhome

→

Ididn’tacceptheradviceandbroughtMagichome

→

MyneighborshowedworryforIhadn’tkeptananimalbefore

→

MagicandIgottoknoweachotherandbecamebestfriends

→

MagicbarkedalotwhenIwasnotinanddisturbedmyneighborbelow

→

Myneighborknockedonmydoor…3.how---抓人物情感變化。

I:

worried

→

touched

→

determined

→

happy

→

confused

→…

Rosie:

worried

→

uneasy

→

…

Theneighbor:

worried

→

disturbed

→

…構(gòu)思續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的技巧：三銜接三銜接：1.

續(xù)寫第一段首句后的第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)與上文和首句緊密銜接；2.第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)與續(xù)寫第二段首句緊密銜接形成過渡；3.續(xù)寫第二段首句后的第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)與續(xù)寫第二段首句緊密銜接。一主題：續(xù)寫第二段的第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)點(diǎn)明主題，升華故事寓意，畫龍點(diǎn)睛，體現(xiàn)正能量。方法：

在充分理解兩段續(xù)寫首句的基礎(chǔ)上，結(jié)合前文，尤其是文章的最后一段，合理構(gòu)思每段2個(gè)情節(jié)。注意：構(gòu)思的情節(jié)要與前文關(guān)鍵伏筆相呼應(yīng)。Para1:

由“Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.”以及上文內(nèi)容可構(gòu)思第一段的第1個(gè)情節(jié)為“我的鄰居受到了什么樣的困擾”；由“Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.”可構(gòu)思第一段的第2個(gè)情節(jié)為“我向朋友Rosie求助”Para2:

由“Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.”可構(gòu)思第二段的第1個(gè)情節(jié)為“我解決Magic感到孤獨(dú)這個(gè)問題的過程”；根據(jù)前文大意和情感發(fā)展基調(diào)構(gòu)思第二段的第2個(gè)情節(jié)為“Magic因?yàn)榕惆槎辉俟陋?dú)”。主題升華：愛、友誼、陪伴與責(zé)任。思考：本文的主題是否可以設(shè)置為“呼吁人們保護(hù)動(dòng)物、珍愛生命”？---我認(rèn)為仁者見仁智者見智，關(guān)鍵看怎樣自圓其說。續(xù)寫關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：本文續(xù)寫的關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn)是體現(xiàn)學(xué)生在真實(shí)的生活情境中解決問題的能力?！癏owtosolvetheproblem?”

以下解決途徑是否可??？1.sentMagicbacktotheanimalshelter2.buyanewdogtoaccompanyMagic3.buyatoytoplaywithMagicduringthedaytime4.bringMagictothecollegeduringthedaytime5.decidetostudyathomeandaccompanyMagic6.spendmoretimewalkingtogetherorwithMagic7.tellMagichowIfeelabouthisbarkingandMagicneverbarksagain8.gototheshelterandbringanotherdog/cattokeepMagiccompany9.letRosie’scatplaywithMagicduringthedaytime范文欣賞Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.

Histiredlookandredeyes

convincedmethatthebarkscauseddisturbancetohim.He

explainedtomethat

heworkedatnightsandduringthedaytimeheusedtosleepinthehouse.

However,

theconstantbarksofthedogkepthimawake.Feelingsorry,Iapologizedtohimandpromisedtocomeupwithasolutionwithoutdelay.

ButthethoughtthatIcouldn'tcontinuekeepinghimhurtmealot.Finally,I

wenttomyfriendRosieforanidea.Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.So

thebestsolutiontotheproblemwastofindacompanionforhimwhenIhadtostayout.Andmaybehercat

waslikelyto

beagoodcompanionforthedog.

ThoughIwasworriedMagichadtroublegettingalongwithacat,Ihadnootherchoice.

Surprisingly,

themomentMagicsawthecat,heshowedhappinessandleanedclosetothecatinnotime.

Inthatmoment,Irealizedthatthefeelingsofanimalsshouldbecaredfor.詞匯與句型積累sorryadj.

慚愧的，歉疚的

lonelyadj.

孤獨(dú)的，寂寞的

worriedadj.

擔(dān)憂的，擔(dān)心的

surprisinglyadv.

令人吃驚地，出人意料的

happinessn.

快樂，幸福apologizetosb.forsth.

因某事向某人道歉

comeupwithasolution

想出一個(gè)解決辦法

gotosb.foranidea

向某人征求意見

thebestsolutiontotheproblemis/wasto…

解決這個(gè)問題最好的辦法是……

findacompanionforsb.

為……找一個(gè)同伴

havetrouble(in)doingsth.

做某事有困難

themoment+從句

一……就

佳作欣賞Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.Onseeinghisimpatientandabitannoyedface,

IknewthatI

wasintrouble

duetoMagic'sbarking."Canyoujust

keepyourdogcalm

and

keephimfrom

barking?

Heissonoisythatwecan'thaveanormallifewhenyouarestayingincollegeduringtheday!

Ifyoucan'tsolvetheproblem,wehavetocallthepolice."

Havingapologizedandclosedthedoor,Iliedonthesofa,

feelingabitconfused.Magicwasjustbesideme,

sittingquietlyandlookingatsomewhereontheroof.Icouldnotimaginehowlouditsvoicewas.IjustwonderedwhyMagicbarkedalotwhileIwasinthecollege.Ithoughtaboutthetrouble

desperately,butnoneofthesolutions

cameuptome.MaybeIshouldaskRosieforheridea.IjumpedoutofsofaandcalledRosie.Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.

Suddenly,I

wasawareoftheproblem.Ididn'tknowifMagicexperiencedsomethingbadbeforeenteringtheanimalshelter.

Ifitdidhappen,itwouldletagreatpaininhisheart.Rosietoldmethatmostoftimesadogbarkedbecauseoffearoranger.Now,Ifoundthesolution.Iwastheonlyperson

thatMagiccouldrelyon,soIhadto

takeontheresponsibility.Icontactedmycollege