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讀后續(xù)寫原題目呈現(xiàn):閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Magicwasafour-year-oldGermanShepherdabouttobeadoptedattheanimalshelteralongwithhundredsofotherdogs.Thereporterannouncedthatthedogsandcatswouldbeputdownifnoonecamebytheendoftheday.MyfriendRosiefeltworriedabouttheanimalsandaskedmetoaccompanyherthere.Soafterschoolwerushedtothesheltertosavewhoeverwecould.Finally,shegotacatandIwastouchedbythepooranimals,askingtheshelterworkerforthebiggestdogtheyhad.HisnamewasMagic.Actually,Ilivedaloneinanapartment.Ihadtostayincollegeduringtheday.
SoIalwaysstayedoutandtakingcareofadogathomeseemedachallengeforme.Rosiefeltuneasyaboutthedogandadvisedmetoabandonthethoughtofkeepingthedogandsendittoawarmhome.ButIlikedMagicsomuch,soIdidn’tacceptheradviceandbroughtMagichome.AfterlearningIadoptedadog,myneighborbelowshowedworryforIhadn'tkeptananimalbefore.Asitturnedout,therewasn'talotoftrust.Magicwouldtakethefoodoutofhisbowl,bringitinfrontofmeandeatitonebiteatatime.MyfriendRosiewasprettysureIwascrazyandthatkeepingitwouldbeahugemistake.ButslowlyMagicandIgottoknoweachother.Webecamebestfriends.Forthefirsttime,myapartmentfeltlikeahome.WewalkedtogetherthroughCentralParkeverymorningandnight.Evenwhenmyfriendsinvitedmetoparties,IjustwantedtobehomewithMagic.Ourliveswerehappy.Forthefirsttime,Iwascontent.Unfortunately,aproblemappeared.WhenIwasin,hekeptcalm,buthebarkedalotwhenIwasnotin,whichdisturbedmyneighborbelow.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.
_________________________________________________________________Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.____________________________________________________________________________________________主題語境:人與自我主要內(nèi)容:文章是關(guān)于一個(gè)人和一只被拯救的德國(guó)牧羊犬之間的感人故事。故事圍繞著主人對(duì)狗的愛和牧羊犬對(duì)主人的依戀展開。主人通過收養(yǎng)狗,讓他的生活變得更加充實(shí)和快樂,而狗也找到了一個(gè)溫暖的家。然而,隨著牧羊犬因?yàn)楣陋?dú)而頻繁叫喚的問題出現(xiàn),主人和鄰居之間產(chǎn)生了一些不和諧。這個(gè)故事展現(xiàn)了愛和責(zé)任之間的平衡,以及如何解決問題的重要性。讀的技巧:讀要素1.who---抓主要人物和主要人物的身份,但不要忽略次要人物。
I---acollegestudent
Rosie---myfriend
Magic---theadopteddog
Myneighbor---livingbelow,disturbedbyMagic’sbarking
Thereporter,theshelterworker,theadoptedcat---次要人物2.whathappened---抓主要事件,梳理故事發(fā)展情節(jié)。IadoptedadogwhileRosieadoptedacatattheanimalshelter
→
Rosieadvisedmetoabandonthethoughtofkeepingthedogandsendit
toawarmhome
→
Ididn’tacceptheradviceandbroughtMagichome
→
MyneighborshowedworryforIhadn’tkeptananimalbefore
→
MagicandIgottoknoweachotherandbecamebestfriends
→
MagicbarkedalotwhenIwasnotinanddisturbedmyneighborbelow
→
Myneighborknockedonmydoor…3.how---抓人物情感變化。
I:
worried
→
touched
→
determined
→
happy
→
confused
→…
Rosie:
worried
→
uneasy
→
…
Theneighbor:
worried
→
disturbed
→
…構(gòu)思續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的技巧:三銜接三銜接:1.
續(xù)寫第一段首句后的第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)與上文和首句緊密銜接;2.第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)與續(xù)寫第二段首句緊密銜接形成過渡;3.續(xù)寫第二段首句后的第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)與續(xù)寫第二段首句緊密銜接。一主題:續(xù)寫第二段的第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)點(diǎn)明主題,升華故事寓意,畫龍點(diǎn)睛,體現(xiàn)正能量。方法:
在充分理解兩段續(xù)寫首句的基礎(chǔ)上,結(jié)合前文,尤其是文章的最后一段,合理構(gòu)思每段2個(gè)情節(jié)。注意:構(gòu)思的情節(jié)要與前文關(guān)鍵伏筆相呼應(yīng)。Para1:
由“Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.”以及上文內(nèi)容可構(gòu)思第一段的第1個(gè)情節(jié)為“我的鄰居受到了什么樣的困擾”;由“Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.”可構(gòu)思第一段的第2個(gè)情節(jié)為“我向朋友Rosie求助”Para2:
由“Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.”可構(gòu)思第二段的第1個(gè)情節(jié)為“我解決Magic感到孤獨(dú)這個(gè)問題的過程”;根據(jù)前文大意和情感發(fā)展基調(diào)構(gòu)思第二段的第2個(gè)情節(jié)為“Magic因?yàn)榕惆槎辉俟陋?dú)”。主題升華:愛、友誼、陪伴與責(zé)任。思考:本文的主題是否可以設(shè)置為“呼吁人們保護(hù)動(dòng)物、珍愛生命”?---我認(rèn)為仁者見仁智者見智,關(guān)鍵看怎樣自圓其說。續(xù)寫關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):本文續(xù)寫的關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn)是體現(xiàn)學(xué)生在真實(shí)的生活情境中解決問題的能力?!癏owtosolvetheproblem?”
以下解決途徑是否可???1.sentMagicbacktotheanimalshelter2.buyanewdogtoaccompanyMagic3.buyatoytoplaywithMagicduringthedaytime4.bringMagictothecollegeduringthedaytime5.decidetostudyathomeandaccompanyMagic6.spendmoretimewalkingtogetherorwithMagic7.tellMagichowIfeelabouthisbarkingandMagicneverbarksagain8.gototheshelterandbringanotherdog/cattokeepMagiccompany9.letRosie’scatplaywithMagicduringthedaytime范文欣賞Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.
Histiredlookandredeyes
convincedmethatthebarkscauseddisturbancetohim.He
explainedtomethat
heworkedatnightsandduringthedaytimeheusedtosleepinthehouse.
However,
theconstantbarksofthedogkepthimawake.Feelingsorry,Iapologizedtohimandpromisedtocomeupwithasolutionwithoutdelay.
ButthethoughtthatIcouldn'tcontinuekeepinghimhurtmealot.Finally,I
wenttomyfriendRosieforanidea.Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.So
thebestsolutiontotheproblemwastofindacompanionforhimwhenIhadtostayout.Andmaybehercat
waslikelyto
beagoodcompanionforthedog.
ThoughIwasworriedMagichadtroublegettingalongwithacat,Ihadnootherchoice.
Surprisingly,
themomentMagicsawthecat,heshowedhappinessandleanedclosetothecatinnotime.
Inthatmoment,Irealizedthatthefeelingsofanimalsshouldbecaredfor.詞匯與句型積累sorryadj.
慚愧的,歉疚的
lonelyadj.
孤獨(dú)的,寂寞的
worriedadj.
擔(dān)憂的,擔(dān)心的
surprisinglyadv.
令人吃驚地,出人意料的
happinessn.
快樂,幸福apologizetosb.forsth.
因某事向某人道歉
comeupwithasolution
想出一個(gè)解決辦法
gotosb.foranidea
向某人征求意見
thebestsolutiontotheproblemis/wasto…
解決這個(gè)問題最好的辦法是……
findacompanionforsb.
為……找一個(gè)同伴
havetrouble(in)doingsth.
做某事有困難
themoment+從句
一……就
佳作欣賞Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.Onseeinghisimpatientandabitannoyedface,
IknewthatI
wasintrouble
duetoMagic'sbarking."Canyoujust
keepyourdogcalm
and
keephimfrom
barking?
Heissonoisythatwecan'thaveanormallifewhenyouarestayingincollegeduringtheday!
Ifyoucan'tsolvetheproblem,wehavetocallthepolice."
Havingapologizedandclosedthedoor,Iliedonthesofa,
feelingabitconfused.Magicwasjustbesideme,
sittingquietlyandlookingatsomewhereontheroof.Icouldnotimaginehowlouditsvoicewas.IjustwonderedwhyMagicbarkedalotwhileIwasinthecollege.Ithoughtaboutthetrouble
desperately,butnoneofthesolutions
cameuptome.MaybeIshouldaskRosieforheridea.IjumpedoutofsofaandcalledRosie.Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.
Suddenly,I
wasawareoftheproblem.Ididn'tknowifMagicexperiencedsomethingbadbeforeenteringtheanimalshelter.
Ifitdidhappen,itwouldletagreatpaininhisheart.Rosietoldmethatmostoftimesadogbarkedbecauseoffearoranger.Now,Ifoundthesolution.Iwastheonlyperson
thatMagiccouldrelyon,soIhadto
takeontheresponsibility.Icontactedmycollege
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