2024年高考英語(yǔ)新課標(biāo)1卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)課件高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)作文專(zhuān)項(xiàng)

2024年高考英語(yǔ)新課標(biāo)I/II卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀材料：抓故事線(xiàn)/情感線(xiàn)第二節(jié)（滿(mǎn)分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.到Vienna，再巴士去Prague開(kāi)會(huì)，但即將遲到抓故事線(xiàn)/情感線(xiàn)——人---事---情---理Tip:WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊(duì)列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealizedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊(duì)列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealizedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.司機(jī)聽(tīng)不懂巴士站名，司機(jī)求助朋友，明了。準(zhǔn)時(shí)到巴士站，再排隊(duì)上車(chē)抓故事線(xiàn)/情感線(xiàn)——人---事---情---理Tip:Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”注意：（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews._______________________________________Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised._______________________________________Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”錢(qián)包沒(méi)錢(qián)，卡刷不了，取錢(qián)機(jī)壞了，大巴車(chē)馬上要開(kāi)走了。抓故事線(xiàn)/情感線(xiàn)——人---事---情---理Tip:前文概述：本文是一篇記敘文。文章講的是作者趕著去坐大巴參加一個(gè)會(huì)議，花了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間打車(chē)去大巴地點(diǎn)，終于抵達(dá)后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢(qián)包里沒(méi)現(xiàn)金，無(wú)法支付給出租車(chē)司機(jī)。作者去提款機(jī)那里取錢(qián)，但是機(jī)器出故障了，于是就跟司機(jī)約定過(guò)幾天再給他。最終，作者如期赴約還錢(qián)。

歌頌善良真誠(chéng)，信任他人，誠(chéng)實(shí)守信和愛(ài)心傳遞的美好品德，從而形成正確的世界觀(guān)、人生觀(guān)和價(jià)值觀(guān)。文章主題：2.設(shè)置問(wèn)題驅(qū)動(dòng)，合理發(fā)展情節(jié)Q1.HowdidIfeelaboutthesituationandexplaintheurgency?Q2.Whatwasmysolutionandpromise?Q3.Howdidgunterreacttomysuggestion?角色的定位是什么？尾端已知情節(jié)是什么？和主要情節(jié)的聯(lián)系是什么？設(shè)置問(wèn)題驅(qū)動(dòng)，合理發(fā)展情節(jié)落腳點(diǎn)是什么？是否和前文有呼應(yīng)？可以擁有驚喜嗎？Para.1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Para.2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Q1.WhatdidIdowhenImetgunter?Q2.HowdidGunterfeel?Q3.WhatdidIlearnfromtheincident?Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.情節(jié)設(shè)計(jì)(十句五定)Gunter反應(yīng)難以置信，問(wèn)怎么辦？我請(qǐng)求延遲支付解釋末班車(chē)&參加會(huì)議

Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.我問(wèn)其電話(huà)號(hào)碼承諾回電和付款Gunter思考同意留電話(huà)號(hào)碼我感動(dòng)沖向巴士Gunter到巴士站接我我感謝他,告知會(huì)議順利在去機(jī)場(chǎng)路上到機(jī)場(chǎng)我付兩次費(fèi)用,給小費(fèi)被拒結(jié)局：我再次被其善意感動(dòng)升華：

傳播善意的決心…事件及過(guò)程發(fā)展類(lèi)寫(xiě)作審題認(rèn)真梳理關(guān)鍵信息已知情節(jié)人物特征思路梳理總結(jié)抓故事線(xiàn)/情感線(xiàn)——人---事---情---理伏筆（暗線(xiàn)）3.激活話(huà)題詞匯，細(xì)化行為情感2.設(shè)置問(wèn)題驅(qū)動(dòng)，合理發(fā)展情節(jié)

2024高考全國(guó)一卷二卷·讀后續(xù)寫(xiě):官方范文Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Flashinghimanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I'llbelatefortheconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan'taffordtomissit!”Iexplained.“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?IwillcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”Iadded,handinghimmywatchaswellasmybusinesscard.Gunteracceptedmybusinesscardbutrejectedmywatch.Hewrotedownhisphonenumberandgaveittome.“Justkeepyourpromise,Sir."AfeelingofgratitudewashedovermeasIheardhiswords.Givinghimafirmhandshake,Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthebus,andjumpedontoitjustbeforeitsdeparture.Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Hepickedmeupatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.Beamingawarmsmileathim,IgavehimabighugthemomentIsawhim.Wechattedhappilyonthewaytotheairport.Itoldhimthatthankstohisgenerosityandtimelyhelp,everythinghadgonesmoothly.Whenhestoppedhistaxioutsidetheairport,Ipaidhimforthe“doublecarride",backandforthfromtheairporttothebusstation,togetherwithageneroustipthatheturneddown.IalsogavehimanattractivesouvenirIhadboughtatPrague,whichheacceptedwithdelight.Webecamegoodfriendsandkeptintouchwitheachotherregularly.Ifeltblessedtohavesuchawarm-heartedfriendlikeGunter.

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Givinghimanotherapologeticsmile,IaskedhimforadelayinpaymentandpromisedtocallhimandpayhimbackthemoneyIowedhim.Tomysurprise,Gunterwrotedownhisphonenumberwithouthesitationandgaveittome.“Justkeepyourpromise,Sir.”Afeelingofgratitudewashedoverme.Igavehimafirmhandshake,jumpedoutofthecarandmadeamaddashforthebusandjumpedontoitjustbeforeitleft.范文1：范文2：

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Iexplainedtohimtheurgencyofcatchingthebus,emphasizingthatotherwiseIwouldbeforcedtostayovernightandbuyanewticketthenextmorning.Ultimately,IsuggestedthatIreturntoViennain4daysandpayhimthen,withanadditional10eurosasagestureofmygratitudeifit‘sOKwithhim.Followinganuncomfortablepause,hesimplynodded,saying,“Iagreeto

thisarrangementandtrustyou."Ithankedhimwiththebiggestsmile,andweexchangedcontactinformationbeforeIgotonthebus.

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Wemetatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore,anduponourarrival,wehuggedeachotherlikelonglostfriends.Itoldhimthatthankstohiskindnessandtimelyhelp,everythinghadgonesmoothly.WhenIgavehimtheextra€101hadpromised.hedidn'taccept."BuymeabeernexttimeyouareinVienna,"hesaidwithawarmsmile.Thenwepartedwayswithafirmhandshakeandapromisetokeepintouch.Gunter'skindnesshadturnedapotentiallydisastrouseveningintoamemorablestoryIwouldcherishforyearstocome.

范文3：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Thoughembarrassedandreluctant,Iforcedmyselftoraiseupmyheadandlookedintohiseyessincerely,“IknowGunterwe'vejustmet,butIamgoingtobebackinViennain4daystime.CoulditbeOKwithyoutopayyouthemoneyafter4days?I'lladdanextra10eurosforyourdelay."ItfollowedanuncomfortablepauseasIanalyzedGunter’sfaceforhisreaction.Thentheimpossiblehappened.Henoddedhisheadsimply.‘It’scool.Iacceptthissolutionandtrustyou.Givemethenameofyourhotelandwecanmeetthere.”Igavehimthenameofmyhotelandweexchangephonenumbers.Iboardedthebusandgavehimabighugewavetomynewestfriend.

Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledG