讀后續(xù)寫+卡門熊的冒險之旅+講義 高三上學期期初學業(yè)質(zhì)量陽光指標調(diào)研英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Afterseeingaprogramontelevisionaboutareporterwhohadhitchhiked(搭順風車)acrossAmerica.Myten-year-olddaughter,Ashleysaid,“IwishIcoulddothat!”Ashleywasdiagnosedwithcancerthreeyearsearlier.Althoughsheiscancer-freenowafterasurgery,numeroustestsandthescaryprocedureoftreatmentshadmadeherunwillingtoriskoutsideherknownworld.SoIwantedtoencouragethatspiritofadventureinher.Ibegantryingtothinkofawayforherto“hitchhike”acrossthecountrywithoutleavinghome.That’showCarmenwasborn.CarmenisateddybearAshleyhadreceivedwhileshewasinthehospital.WedecidedtosendCarmeninAshley’splace.SowepurchasedanotebookasatraveljournalandabagforCarmentotravelin,togetherwithaletterwrittenbyAshley:MynameisAshleyandIamtenyearsold.

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homesafely.ThankyoufortakingcareofCarmen,andthankyoufortakingthetimetowriteinhernotebook.Yournewfriends,CarmenandAshley注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer(巡警).__________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲_____________________________________ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-expectedpackagewithCarmeninsidefinallyarrived._________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲_____________________________________文章大意這篇文章講述了一個十歲女孩阿什利，她曾因癌癥接受治療，現(xiàn)在雖然康復但對外界充滿戒備。為了鼓勵她冒險探索的精神，她的父親想出了一個計劃：讓阿什利的泰迪熊卡門代替她進行一次虛擬的全國旅行。他們?yōu)榭ㄩT準備了旅行日記和背包，并附上阿什利寫的信，請求遇到卡門的人幫助她旅行，并在日記中記錄下他們的故事?？ㄩT的第一次旅行是由他們的朋友菲爾，一位公路巡警開始的。九月的一天，卡門帶著滿是故事的日記和照片回到了家，阿什利通過這些記錄體驗了一次心靈的旅行，感受到了人們的溫暖和世界的廣闊。這個簡單的想法不僅為阿什利帶來了快樂，也觸動了那些參與其中的人們的心。在原文中，作者設置了幾處伏筆，這些伏筆在續(xù)寫中得到了回應：1.伏筆：阿什利的愿望和她的健康狀況。回應：父親為了鼓勵阿什利的冒險精神，設計了卡門熊的旅行計劃，這直接回應了阿什利想要冒險的愿望，同時也考慮到了她的健康狀況。2.伏筆：卡門熊的旅行日記和背包?；貞涸诶m(xù)寫中，卡門熊的旅行日記被用來記錄她遇到的人們和經(jīng)歷的故事，背包則用于攜帶她的物品和日記，這些都是原文中提到的物品在故事中的使用。3.伏筆：卡門熊的旅行計劃和目標?；貞豪m(xù)寫中詳細描述了卡門熊的旅行經(jīng)歷，包括她訪問的地方和遇到的人，這些都是對原文中提到的旅行計劃的具體展開。4.伏筆：阿什利的信中提到的九月回家。回應：續(xù)寫中提到了卡門熊在九月如期返回，這與阿什利信中的預期相呼應。5.伏筆：卡門熊的旅行對阿什利的意義?；貞豪m(xù)寫中強調(diào)了卡門熊的旅行如何讓阿什利體驗到冒險，并通過卡門熊的眼睛看到世界，這回應了原文中提到的阿什利對外界的戒備和對冒險的渴望。6.伏筆：卡門熊旅行的社交互動?；貞豪m(xù)寫中描述了卡門熊如何與不同的人互動，包括巡警、消防員、農(nóng)民等，這些都是對原文中提到的社交互動的進一步發(fā)展。7.伏筆：卡門熊旅行的結(jié)束和回家?；貞豪m(xù)寫中描述了卡門熊的回家，以及阿什利和父親對旅行日記的反應，這為整個故事提供了一個圓滿的結(jié)局。這些伏筆和回應共同構(gòu)成了一個連貫的故事，展示了卡門熊的旅行如何影響了阿什利以及那些參與其中的人們。參考答案WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer(巡警).HeofferedtolaunchCarmenonherjourneybytakingheronhisrouteforaday.Thatafternoon,whenhestoppedadriverwhowasnotusingaseatbelt,heurgedhertowearthebelt.HethenintroducedCarmenandaskedthedriverifshewouldliketotakeCarmenonthenextpartofherjourney.Naturally,sheagreed.ThatkickedoffCarmen’sUSAtour.Meanwhile,forAshley,thefollowingsummerwasamixofanxietyandanticipation,asshecheckeddailyforherpackage,onlytobetold“Nottoday,”eachtime.ThenonedayinSeptember,thelong-expectedpackagewithCarmenfinallyarrived.

Eagerly,weopenedtheboxtoexplorethetracesofCarmen’sadventures.TherewerepostcardsfromtheGrandCanyon,ashellfromaFloridabeach,andatinyreplicaoftheStatueofLiberty.Forus,eachsouvenirwasasnapshotofthekindnessandgenerosityAshleyhadencounteredthroughCarmen.ThenotesinthejournalpaintedavividpictureofthepeoplewhohadtakenCarmenintotheirhearts.Itwasaheartwarminggiftthatourfamilytreasured,inspiringusasAshleybravelyfacedherpathtohealth.下水文1WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer.HewasthefirsttoembarkonCarmen'sjourney,takingheralonghisdailyroutesandintroducinghertothepeopleheencountered.Phil'scolleagues,intriguedbyCarmen'smission,eagerlywroteinherjournal,sharingtheirstoriesandexperiences.EachentrywasatestamenttothekindnessandcuriosityofthosewhometCarmen,makingherjourneyallthemoreenriching.ThenonedayinSeptember,thepackagecontainingCarmenarrivedaspromised.Ashley'seyessparkledwithexcitementassheunwrappedtheparcel.Inside,Carmenwasnestledwithajournalbrimmingwithtalesfromhertravelsandacollectionofphotosthatcapturedtheessenceofheradventures.ThefinalentrywasfromPhil,whohadseenCarmenoffonherwayhome.HiswordsexpressedthejoyandfulfillmenthefeltfromparticipatinginCarmen'sjourney,andherequestedtobeinformedofhersafereturn.AshleyandIweretouchedbytheheartfeltmessagesandthecommunitythathadformedaroundCarmen'smission,provingthateveninchallengingtimes,thespiritofexplorationandthebondsofhumanitycaninspireandupliftusall.下水文2WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer.HewasmorethanhappytobeCarmen'sfirststoponhercross-countryadventure.PhiltookCarmenonhisdailypatrols,introducinghertothediverseindividualshemetalongtheway.Fromfellowofficerstopassingmotorists,everyonewascharmedbyCarmen'smissionandwillinglycontributedtohertraveljournal.Eachpersontookamomenttoshareabitabouttheirlife,theirdreams,andtheirhopes,creatingarichtapestryofstoriesthatCarmenwouldcarrywithher.ThenonedayinSeptember,thepackagewithCarmeninside