單元主題寫作

單元主題寫作Unit3Familyties一、主題分析本單元的話題為“家庭”，通過介紹自己的家庭，探究家庭的意義及家人之間的和諧友愛。本單元的書面表達圍繞此話題展開。二、素材積累(一)常用詞匯：care//hug//kiss//growth//seldom//touching//strict//silent//alive//harmony//solve//relationship//parent//finish//serious//disease//pull//move//inreturn//notonly...butalso//takegoodcareof//lookafter//fallill//alldayandallnight//Father’sDay//Mother’sDay//birthday//humorous//kind//inhospital//better//deeply//healthy//happy//forever(二)常用句型：開頭句1.Heishumorous,kindandoutgoing.2.Inmanyotherpeople’seyes,heseemstobeveryordinary.Butheisquite...tome.中間句1.WhenIwasyoung,I...2.OnceIwasseriouslyillinhospital,he...3.I...withhisgreatcare.4.Iwasmoveddeeplyby...結尾句1.Ihopehe’llbe...forever.2.Hisloveisthesuninwinter,whichkeepsmewarmandhelpsmegrowuphappily.3.Hehelpsmeovercomedifficultiesandteachesmehowtolove.三、以讀促寫6月15日是父親節(jié)。請你以“MyFather”為題，寫一篇短文。從性格、愛好等方面簡略介紹一下你的父親，重點寫一個曾經發(fā)生在你們之間的令人感動的故事，并簡要說明你將如何回報這如山的父愛。寫作要求：1.短文詳略得當，條理清楚，行文連貫，邏輯性強，書寫規(guī)范；2.短文中不能出現真實的人名和地名；3.詞數：60左右。參考詞匯：movev.感動recoverv.恢復inreturn回報____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作指導1.一描二敘三表達——從性格、愛好描述父親，敘述曾發(fā)生的感人故事，表達對父親的愛；2.人稱：第一人稱；3.主題：人與社會——社會服務與人際溝通；子主題——和諧家庭；4.時態(tài)：一般現在時和一般過去時。寫作提綱描寫父親感人故事表達父愛Myfatherisa...Heis...Henotonly...,butalso...Father’sDayis...Ihope...AndI’ll...WhenIwasyoung,I...OnceIwas...He...After...,I...Iwas...范文賞析Myfatherisateacher.Heishumorous,kindandoutgoing.Henotonlytakesgoodcareofme,butalsohelpsmebeabetterperson.WhenIwasyoung,Ioftenfellill.OnceIwasseriouslyillinhospital.Helookedaftermealldayandallnightwithoutanyrest.After10days,Irecoveredwithhisgreatcare,buthefellill.Iwasmoveddeeplybyhisgreatlove.Father'sDayiscoming.Ihopehe'llbehealthyandhappyforever.AndI'llmakegreaterprogressinreturn.名師點評作者運用“一描二敘三表達法”介紹父親的偉大，結構清晰，行文流暢。添彩點：亮點詞匯：notonly...butalso...不但……而且……；takegoodcareof好好照顧；once曾經；fallill生病；alldayandallnight整日整夜精彩句式：Iwasmoveddeeplybyhisgreatlove.(運用了被動語態(tài)這樣的高級句型)；Ihopehe'llbehealthyandhappyforever.(運用了賓語從句)四、遷移寫作請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英文寫一篇周記。記敘爸爸出差期間，媽媽生病，你照顧她的過程。注意：1.可適當發(fā)揮，增加細節(jié)；2.詞數：不少于60。參考詞匯：goonabusinesstrip出差；immediately立即；medicine藥_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihaveahappyfamily.Myparentsarekindandtheylovemesomuch.Ilovethemdeeplyandalwayswanttodosomethinginreturn.LastMonday,myfathersaidgoodbyetomymotherandmeandwentonabusinesstrip.Hewouldbeawayforthreedays.Justthenextmorning,Ifoundmymotherwasn’tfeelingwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Shehadacold.Iimmediatelywenttogethersomemedicineandthenmadeab