Unit11HowwasyourschooltripSectionBWriting課件人教版英語七年級下冊

Mydreamistotravelaroundtheworld.Unit11Howwasyourschooltrip?SectionBWritingMySchooltripLead-inIsthesongabout"Atrip"?

歌詞：泰國新加坡印度尼西亞咖喱肉骨茶印尼九層塔做Spa放煙花蒸桑拿CocoPineappleMangoMango沙巴芭提雅陽光熱辣辣香瓜啤酒花風景美如畫夜市下海鮮架泳池趴嘟嘟嘟嘟干嘛干嘛呀咖喱咖喱輕輕一加咖喱咖喱辣咖喱咖喱香蕉木瓜榴蓮臭臭配香茶咖喱咖喱摩托皮卡咖喱咖喱辣咖喱咖喱夜市酒吧熱情奔放火辣辣LastyearIwenttoGuizhou.Task1.Sharemytrip.Ihadahappytrip.LastyearIwentto

.Itwas

.Iwentthere

with

.IwenttoHuanguoshuWaterFalland

.AndI

inagiftshop.Ialso

inateahouse.Fordinner,we

.Itwas

.Intheevening,Iwentbacktothehotel.IfeltalittletiredbutreallyhappyAllinall,___________.July20thGuizhousunnybycarmyfamilytookquitealotofphotoswentshoppingdrankteaandenjoyedshowshadhot-pot(火鍋)

delicious

Whatagreattrip!Ihadagoodtime.人稱?時態(tài)？whenWhendidIgo?WheredidIgo?Howwastheweather?HowdidIgo?WhodidIgowith?WhatdidIdo?Howwasmytrip?Howwasmytrip?BeginningMainbodyEndingMytripDiaryMytripBeginningMainbodyEndingtimeplacesfoodweatheractivitiesfeelingspre-writingmindmappersontransportationLastyear...Iwentto...Itwassunny...Iate...Iwenttherewith...Iwenttherebycar/...Itook/went/drank/...ttIfelt/Iwas/Ihad...Whatagreattrip.ttTask2.Talkaboutyourtrip.Doyouhaveahappytrip

?Task3.Group-workMakeastory

請以“MySchooltrip

"為主題寫一篇你自己的學校旅行日記。Task4.Writing

話題要求：1.內(nèi)容包括：旅行時間,旅行地點,交通方式,同行人員，旅行中的主要活動以及個人感受，內(nèi)容符合邏輯，可適當拓展。2.80字左右。

Outline

Adjectives(形容詞)：delicious,nice,terribleexpensive,cheaphappy,excited,relaxed,tired.......Writeyourowntrip.whatactivitieswenttoafarmandsawmanyanimalsfedchickenspickedsomepearswentfishingcampedbythelakeatefishsoup...IItwasnice/happy/exciting...Nowit'syourturn!

Youmayfollowthisprocesses:1.Drafting起草2.Revising修改3.Editing編寫4.Publishing出稿While-writingTask5.ShowTime評價項目 評價內(nèi)容 要點：?齊全?不齊全（差要點_________________________）結構：?完整?不完整(?開頭?主體?結尾)條理：?清晰?不清晰(?連接詞 ?順序) 語法：?正確?錯誤(?人稱?時態(tài)?句子結構)拼寫：?正確?錯誤(?少 ?多) 書寫：?規(guī)范?不規(guī)范(?大小寫?標點符號?字跡)WritingAssessment(寫作評價）自評/互評（填寫要求：請勾選相應的評價內(nèi)容）Task6.Post-writing四檔（0-2分）：內(nèi)容不完整，語言表述錯誤很多，不能完整地表達思想。三檔（3-5分）：內(nèi)容完整，重點描述合理，但表述不充分，層次結構不合理，語言不夠流暢，字跡不夠工整，5-6處語法或拼寫錯誤;字數(shù)不足。二檔（6-8分）：內(nèi)容完整，重點描述比較充分，層次結構比較清晰，語言比較流暢，字跡工整，有3-4處語法或拼寫錯誤;字數(shù)符合要求。一檔（9-10分）:內(nèi)容完整，重點描述清楚、合理，表達充分，層次結構清晰，字跡工整，可讀性強，語言流暢，僅有1-2處語法或拼寫錯誤;字數(shù)符合要求。評分標準1.Memorizethepasttenseofregularverbsa