續(xù)寫范文精講寫作練習(xí)課件高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

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Teachingaims

1.Masterthestructure

ofthiskindofwriting

2.Writeanopentopiccomposition

Itwasarathercrowdeddayatthesubwaystation.Seeingthebusypassers-bystoppedbyhisperformance,Eric,amusicloverwhojustgraduatedfromcollege,woreabigsmileonhisface.Withdeeppassionformusic,heshowedupinthestationinhissparetime,singingandplayingtheguitartopeopletravellingtoandfromthesubwaystation.

Withthemelodious(悅耳的)songcomingtoanend,heartyapplauseburstout.Asusual,Ericexpressedhisgratitude,noddinghisheadwithasmile.“Man，awesome!Anoutstandingperformance!"Approachedaman,holdingthehandofalittlegirlinaponytail(馬尾辮)，agedaboutfour.

“Park，aproducerofarecordcompany."Themanintroducedhimself,holdingouthishand.“Wouldyouliketogiveitatryinmycompany?"Outofpoliteness,Ericshookhandswithhiminamazement.

“Ihaven'tseensomebodythisgoodinalongtime!Youareabeautifulsceneryofthiscity,withsuchabeautifulvoice!”Parkadmired.Suddenly,aphonecallinterruptedtheirconversation.ParkbrieflyinvitedErictomeetlaterinthesameplaceandwalkedawaytoanswerthecall.SeeingParkoff,Ericdidrealizewhathadhappened,withwarmcurrentflowingfromhisheadtotoe.Itwasthefirsttimethathehadearnedsuchkindofrecognition,whichwastotallyoutofhisexpectation.“Abeautifulsceneryofthecity,withabeautifulvoice!”Ericrepeatedthewords,cleaninghisguitarandpreparingforthenextperformance.Atthattime,hecaughtsightofalittlegirlinaponytailstandinginacorner,weepingandlookingaround.Carryinghisguitar,Ericapproachedherandsquatted(蹲)down,“What'swrongwithyou,honey?”

“Ican’tfindmydaddy.”Thegirlburstoutcrying.

ThegirlcalmeddowninEric’ssongwhenamanrushedintotheofficeofthesubwaystation.

Pre-writing新課導(dǎo)入While-writing1.她站在那里,眼淚順著面頰流了下來(lái)。

2.女孩抬起頭來(lái)，盯著我的眼睛。

3.“你可以幫我去找我爸爸嗎?”她低聲問(wèn)道。

4.“我可能會(huì)錯(cuò)過(guò)和Park的會(huì)面（meeting）”Eric搖搖頭。

5.他在地鐵站來(lái)回踱步，最終決定帶女孩去地鐵站的辦公室。

6.女孩滿眼憂傷。

7.Eric沉思，他腦子里閃過(guò)一個(gè)念頭，我可以唱歌來(lái)讓她開(kāi)心。

8.開(kāi)心的眼淚順著臉頰淌下，她緊緊地?fù)肀陌职帧?/p>

9.當(dāng)Park看到女兒的時(shí)候，他的臉上露出了燦爛的笑容。

10.Eric看到這個(gè)令人滿意的結(jié)果后,一種喜悅和幸福的感覺(jué)涌上心頭。

1..她站在那里,眼淚順著面頰流了下來(lái)。。

2.女孩抬起頭來(lái)，盯著我的眼睛。

3.“你可以幫我去找我爸爸嗎?”她低聲問(wèn)道。

Shestoodthere,tearsrollingdownhercheeks.

Thegirllookedupandfixedhereyesonmine.“Canyouhelpmefindmydad?”,sheaskedinawhisper.

4.“我可能會(huì)錯(cuò)過(guò)和Park的會(huì)面（meeting）”Eric搖搖頭。

5.他在地鐵站來(lái)回踱步，最終決定帶女孩去地鐵站的辦公室。

6.女孩滿眼憂傷。

“ImaymissthemeetingwithPark”,Ericshookhishead.Hepacedupanddowninthesubwaystation.Finally.hedecidedtotakethegirltotheofficeofthesubwaystation.Greatsorrowcloudedthegirl’seyes.

7.Eric沉思，他腦子里閃過(guò)一個(gè)念頭，“我可以唱歌來(lái)讓她開(kāi)心”。

8.開(kāi)心的眼淚順著臉頰淌下，她緊緊地?fù)肀陌职帧?/p>

9.當(dāng)Park看到女兒的時(shí)候，他的臉上露出了燦爛的笑容。

Ericwasdeepinthought.Anideaflashedacrosshismind,“Icansingasongtomakeherhappy.”Withtearsofhappinessrollingdownhercheeks,shehuggedherdadtightly.Abigsmileappearedon