讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)專題第8章如何寫(xiě)出銜接順暢的文章

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)連接詞八大類.時(shí)空轉(zhuǎn)換●銜接流暢讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)連接詞合集1.時(shí)間連接詞:(時(shí)空轉(zhuǎn)換/場(chǎng)景轉(zhuǎn)換)同時(shí):..While/When/As/themomentsb1dosth,sb2dosth.接續(xù):Shortly/Swiftly/Soonafterwards,.../Subsequently/notlongbefore當(dāng)下:Atthatvery/criticalmoment,sb.../Foroneagonizingmoment...最后:Eventually/Atlength/Ultimately2、邏輯連接詞:(銜接流暢)強(qiáng)調(diào):Actually/Indeed/Truly.../Obviouly.../Particularly...轉(zhuǎn)折:Instead/Nevertheless/Unfortunately/Alternatively,..結(jié)果:Consequently/Accordingly/turnout/prove/endupdoing推測(cè):Itisverylikelytha.../Itishighlypossiblethat...perhaps/probably解析連接詞1:時(shí)間連接詞(同時(shí)/接續(xù)/當(dāng)下/最后/過(guò)去)同時(shí):(同時(shí)空人/物,分工/互動(dòng);豐富畫(huà)面/場(chǎng)景)①While/When/As/themomentsb/sth...sb2dosth.(當(dāng)..時(shí)/那刻,某人做某事)②Meanwhile,../Inthemeantime,...(同...)◆連接思路1:主語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ).畫(huà)面分離(動(dòng)作/地點(diǎn))句式:原sbdosth->改Whensth...sbdosth[例子1]:原句:“登直升機(jī)”:Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.改寫(xiě):“當(dāng)直升機(jī)降落時(shí)，我們登直升機(jī)，既興奮又松了一口氣”->Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.【例子2】:原句:“登直升機(jī)->我發(fā)現(xiàn)..”:Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.Ifoundthat....改寫(xiě):“登直升機(jī)->當(dāng)我們?cè)诳罩邪踩俗鄙龣C(jī)時(shí),我發(fā)現(xiàn)熊...”->Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.場(chǎng)景轉(zhuǎn)換:主語(yǔ)/賓語(yǔ)分鏡頭我們登直升機(jī)’->當(dāng)直升機(jī)..時(shí)，我們登直升機(jī).(登直升機(jī))“我發(fā)現(xiàn)熊沖向食物”->當(dāng)我們?cè)诳罩邪踩俗鄙龣C(jī)時(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)熊沖向食物◆連接思路2:加五感，句式:原sbdosth->改Whensbsaw/thought....sbdosth[例子1]:原句:“我們登直升機(jī)”:Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.改寫(xiě):“當(dāng)我們看到直升機(jī)降落時(shí)，我們馬上沖過(guò)去登機(jī)”->Aswesawthehelicopterlanding,wedashedtoitandgotonboardfast.[例子2]:原句:“登直升機(jī)->我發(fā)現(xiàn)熊..”.:Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.Ifoundthat...改寫(xiě):“登直升機(jī)->當(dāng)我俯瞰營(yíng)地時(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)..->Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.When(Iwas)lookingdownatthecampsite,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.◆可用句式，創(chuàng)造性模仿:(片段練習(xí),中間可加其他句子)*While/When/Assbwasthinking,sbcaughtsightofsth...(在思考時(shí),突然看到)*Whensbsawsth,sbdosth...(看到.時(shí),某人做某事)*Sbgotdowntodoingsthwhen/as/whilesthcameintosb'seyes.(正要..時(shí),sth映入眼簾)◆連接思路3:加情緒句式:原sbdosth->改情緒/無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句子+as/themomentsbdosth[例子]:原句:“我得知壞消息”:Iheardthebadnews...改寫(xiě):“得知壞消息，我很懊悔↓..”:Remorsewashedovermethemoment/asIheardthebadnews.小結(jié)連接詞1:時(shí)間連接詞(同時(shí)/接續(xù)/當(dāng)下/最后/過(guò)去)時(shí)空轉(zhuǎn)換連接思路1:主賓.分離(動(dòng)作/地點(diǎn)):Whensth....sbdosth.連接思路2:加五感:Whensbsaw/though...,.sbdosth連接思路3:加情緒:情緒/無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句子+as/themomentsbdosth◆可組合(常組“思路1+思路2”)(2021某測(cè)試)P2:Maryopenedtheenvelopandfoundaletter.P1結(jié)尾句思路:Mary發(fā)現(xiàn)/看到/拿到信封(原句:Suddenly,Maryfoundanenvelop)WhileMarywasthinking,shecaughtsightofanitemonthetable.Shewalkedtowardsitandfoundanenvelope.瑪麗在思考時(shí)，突然看到桌子上有件物品。她走過(guò)去，找到一個(gè)信封。Shegotdowntotidyingupthesofawhenanenveloplyingonitcameintohereyes.她正準(zhǔn)備收拾沙發(fā)時(shí)，沙發(fā)上的一個(gè)信封映入了她的眼簾。連接詞1:時(shí)間連接詞(同時(shí)/接續(xù)/當(dāng)下/最后/過(guò)去)同時(shí):(同時(shí)空人/物,分工/互動(dòng);豐富畫(huà)面/場(chǎng)景)①While/When/As/themomentsb/t...sb2dosth.(...時(shí)/那刻，某人做某事)②Meanwhile.../Inthemeantime,...（同時(shí)...）◆寫(xiě)法&句式(可創(chuàng)造性模仿):●連接思路1:主語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ).畫(huà)面分離(動(dòng)作/地點(diǎn)):Whensth....sbdosth●連接思路2:加五感:Whensbsaw/thought/found/heard....sbdosthWhile/When/Assbwasthinking,sbcaughtsightofsth...(在思考時(shí),突然看到)Sbgotdowntodoingsthwhen/as/whilesthcameintosb'seyes.(...時(shí),sth映入眼簾)●連接思路3:加情緒:情緒/無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句子+as/themomentsbdosth連接詞1:時(shí)間連接詞(同時(shí)/接續(xù)/當(dāng)下/最后/過(guò)去)接續(xù):(“很快/接著...”:引出下個(gè)動(dòng)作/情節(jié)/畫(huà)面;使得節(jié)奏緊湊/緊張)Shortly/Swiftly/Soonafterwards,...Seconds/Minutes/Hourslater,...(前可加Afew/several)Followingthat,...(“在那之后”)Subsequently,...(“隨后”)Gradually.../Stepbystep,...(逐漸地)Afterashorttim...ometimelate.r.../Onthefollowingday,..[句式]:否定搭配:Itwasnotlongbefor..../Itdidn'ttakelongforsbtodo...(不久后..）獨(dú)立主格:Afewminutespassing(goingby;slippingaway),sb...(過(guò)了一會(huì),某人..）獨(dú)句/比喻:Acoupleofminutespassedswiftlylikeflowingwater.(如流水般飛快地過(guò)去)連接詞1:時(shí)間連接詞(同時(shí)/接續(xù)/當(dāng)下/最后/過(guò)去）當(dāng)下:(在某一刻)①Atthatvery/criticalmoment,sb...(在那關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻)②Foroneagonizingmoment,..(在令人忐忑不安的瞬間)③presently/currently/forthemoment(暫時(shí)/目前)例句:Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Eligrabbedandthrewthegarlicbreadoverthefence.小結(jié)連接詞1:時(shí)間連接詞匯總(同時(shí)/接續(xù)/當(dāng)下/最后)同時(shí):①...While/When/As/themomentsb1dosth,sb2dosth.②Meanwhile/Inthemeantime,...Atthatvery/criticalmoment,sb....接續(xù):1Shortly/Swiftly/Soonafterwards,...2Seconds/Minutes/Hourslater,...3Followingthat,...(在那之后)4Subsequently,...(隨后)5Itwasnotlongbefore.../Itdidn'ttakelongforsbtodo...(不久...）當(dāng)下：1Atthatvery/criticalmoment,sb...(在那關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻)2Foroneagonizingmoment,...(在令人忐忑不安的瞬間)3presently/currently/forthemoment(暫時(shí)/目前)最后：Eventually/Atlength(最后)/Ultimately/Atlast/Lastly/Finally其他時(shí)間連接詞總結(jié)Oneday某一天Earlyinthemorning一大早OneFridaynight某個(gè)星期五下午theotherday=afewdaysago幾天前Fromthenon/Sincethen,..從那以后Itwasthenthatsb....在那時(shí)...Foronefrozenmoment,...有一瞬間Onarrivingatschool,..一回到學(xué)校Thenext/followingday第二天Justthen正在那時(shí)Afterthat/Lateron然后Afterashortwhile一會(huì)兒以后Roughlyanhourlater.,..大約1小時(shí)后Afterseveralattempts,...經(jīng)過(guò)幾次嘗試Afterseeminglyalongtime,似乎很久后Afterwhatseemedages，過(guò)了似乎幾年連接詞1:時(shí)間連接詞(寫(xiě)法模仿)思維:畫(huà)面/場(chǎng)景/時(shí)空轉(zhuǎn)換①2020年1月浙江卷Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Hehadbeenmissinghisparentsandthedogsinceitwasthefirsttimethathehadbeenawayfromhomeforsuchalongtime.WhentheboycaughtsightofPoppy,hewentrushingtowardthedogandbentdowntogiveherabighug.Suddenly,theboynoticedthelittledog.“Ohmygod,whoisthis?”Hisparentslaughedatthelookofsurpriseonhisface.“It'sPoppysnewcompanion.”saidMom..◆時(shí)間連接詞、創(chuàng)造性模仿:(片段練習(xí)，中間可加其他句子)Acoupleofweeks/days/hours/minuteslater,sb...(“接續(xù)”)When/While/As/Onc....sb...(“同時(shí)”)Suddenly/Allofasudden,sbnoticed/notedsth...(突然注意到/發(fā)現(xiàn)sth)②2016年g月浙江卷:(造“當(dāng)...時(shí)”，)她開(kāi)始擔(dān)心如何能...WhenJanecaughtsightofthedarkskyandfelttherowlingwind,shestartedtoworryabouthowshecouldgothroughthenightwithoutfoodandshelter.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.She...andthen...,hopingto...Shewalkedandwalked,.Suddenly,shespottedahugeflatrock.Shemanagedtoclimbontoitandwaitedwithpatience.Themomentthehelicopterappearedagain,theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterdidn'tmissJanethistime.Asitlandednearthebigrockslowly,...時(shí)間連接詞、創(chuàng)造性模仿:(片段練習(xí)，中間可加其他句子)1Itwasatthatverymomentthatsbrealizedsth...2sbdidsthandthendidsth,hopingto...3Suddenly,sbspotted/noticed/notedsth/that...4Themoment/Assth..,sbdidsth①直到那一刻sb才意識(shí)到;②sb做了某事和某事，希望...③sb突然發(fā)現(xiàn);④當(dāng)某事物...時(shí),sb...連接詞2:邏輯連接詞(強(qiáng)調(diào)/轉(zhuǎn)折/因果/遞進(jìn)/條件/推測(cè))強(qiáng)調(diào):(適合:含關(guān)鍵動(dòng)作/情節(jié)、結(jié)尾升華的句子)連接詞2:邏輯連接詞(強(qiáng)調(diào))強(qiáng)調(diào):(適合:含關(guān)鍵動(dòng)作/情節(jié)、結(jié)尾升華的句子)Afterall,..(畢竟)(注:解釋和支持前一句話)Infact/Actually/Indeed,...(實(shí)際上)(While)Thetruthisthat.../Truly,..(然而)事實(shí)是/實(shí)際是/確實(shí)Obviously/Apparently,..(顯然地/顯而易見(jiàn)地/明顯地)Undoubtedly/Withoutdoubts/Withnodoubts,...(毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)地)Inparticular/Particularly/(most)Notably/Especilly,..(尤其是)Aboveall,..(最重要的是;尤其是)Significantly,.(值得注意的是.../意味深長(zhǎng)的是..)Afterall,lifeischokedwithchores,andthatiswhysettingprioritiesmatter.[2022廣州一模:畢竟,生活充滿了雜務(wù)和令人分心的事,這就是為什么設(shè)定優(yōu)先事項(xiàng)很重要]Infact/Actually/Indeed,whatIhadbeendoinginthepastweekwaslessurgentandcouldbepostponed.[2022廣州-模:實(shí),過(guò)去一周我一直在做的事情并不緊急，可以推遲]Obviously/Apparently/Undoubtedly,ifIhadarrangedmyscheduleinamorereasonablemanner,Iwouldnothavebeentrappedinsuchadilemma.[2022廣州一模:顯然，如果我更合理地安排日程，就不會(huì)陷入這種困境]Particularly/Notably,thelaterIacted,themoreanxiousIfelt.[2022廣州-模:特別的是/值得注意的是，我越遲開(kāi)始行動(dòng)，就會(huì)越焦慮]轉(zhuǎn)折:Whereas/Instead/Nevertheless/Conversely/Alternatively,...(然而/取而代之)(And)still/yet(然而)despite/inspiteof(盡管)(But)evenso,...(即便如此,...）Unfortunately,..(然而)不幸的是...bycontrast/incontrast(to)/onthecontrary(相反)Alternatively...Instead,...(取而代之)Differingfrom...(與....不同)結(jié)果:句首:Consequently/Accordingly/Asaresult(ofsth)...(因此/作為某事的結(jié)果,..）Underthesecircumstances/Undertheseconditions,...(在這些情況下，...)句中:turnout(tobe)+形容詞/turnoutthat:“(結(jié)果)是怎樣的”(可取代be動(dòng)詞)prove(tobe)+形容詞/名詞:“證明是”(有時(shí)可取代be動(dòng)詞)endupdoing:“最終..”ItturnedoutthatIgainedthelowestscoreIhadeverreceived.Thebreakfastproved(tobe)asweetsurprise,judgingfrommother'sresponse.從母親的反應(yīng)來(lái)看，這早餐被證明是-個(gè)甜蜜的驚喜Distractedbytheentertainments,Iendedupcompletingtheprojectinarush.被那些娛樂(lè)分散了注意力，我最終匆忙完成了這個(gè)項(xiàng)目并列/遞進(jìn):Equallyimportant,