第07章 我周圍的人和事-2024年初中英語中考話題作文高分訓(xùn)練

2024年初中英語中考話題作文高分訓(xùn)練第七章我周圍的人和事學(xué)校、父母、老師、同學(xué)都在我們的成長過限中有著非常重要的影響.我們的喜怒哀樂與他們緊密相述:學(xué)校給我們提供良好的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境,我們在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)知識,學(xué)會做人;父母基孩子的啟蒙老師,父母的言行無時無刻不在影響孩子,對孩子今后的成功有著深遠(yuǎn)的意義;老師傳遞知識、播批希望,把孩子們培育成一片樹林、為世界帶來一片春色;同學(xué)們共同經(jīng)歷痛苦與快樂交織的歲月,共同成長、度過了難忘的快樂時光.話題一我的學(xué)校一、話題解讀一審主題學(xué)校是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活的場所,是學(xué)生獲取知識的地方.和諧的校園環(huán)境伴隨著我們成長,它能給我們留下美好的回憶.介紹學(xué)?？梢詮膶W(xué)校的地理位置、課外活動情況、學(xué)校的環(huán)境、師生的精神面貌等方面介紹.談及地理位置和環(huán)境時,先介紹地理位置和外部大環(huán)境,然后介紹校園內(nèi)部的設(shè)施和小環(huán)境;師生的精神面貌包括學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度、老師的教學(xué)態(tài)度、師生關(guān)系等內(nèi)容.范文欣賞Ourschoolislocatedinthecentreofthecity.Itcoversanareaofabout1),000squaremetreswithahistoryof70years.Atpresentthereare100teachersandover1,000students.Wehaveabiggym,manycomputerroomsandlabs,allequippedwithmodernteachingequipment.Thenumberofthestudentsisusually20to30ineachclassinourschool.Weusuallyspendeighthoursatschool.Ourschoollifeisbusy.Inthepast,wehadendlesshomework(tofinishandsomanyarticlestoreadorrecite.Nowwehavemoreextra-classactivities,whichenrichesourschoollife.Ourteachersinourschoolareverykindandknowledgeable.Myclassmatesarefriendly,andwegetalongwellwitheachotherlikebrothersandsisters.Ilovemyschoolverymuch.二、話題框架-列提綱Step1:介紹學(xué)校的地理位置、占地面積、歷史、環(huán)境等.Step2:介紹學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)狀況、課外活動狀況.Step3:對學(xué)校的評價等.三、話題短語和亮點句型-加內(nèi)容A.話題短語1.ontheleft/right在左/右邊2.oneithersideoftheroad在路的兩邊3.onthefourthflooroftheteachingbuilding在教學(xué)樓的第四層4.inthesouthofthegym在體育館的南部5.coveranareaof700squaremetres占地700平方米6.thenumberofstudents學(xué)生的數(shù)量7.withalotofsportsfacilities有很多體育設(shè)備8.amodernteachingbuilding一座現(xiàn)代化的教學(xué)樓9.agardenschool花園式學(xué)校10.akeymiddleschoolinthedistrict/city區(qū)/市重點中學(xué)11.acampuswithexcellentequipment學(xué)校設(shè)施優(yōu)良12.elective/supplementarycourses選修/拓展課程13.bereadytohelpstudents樂意幫助學(xué)生14.bewelleducated受過良好教育的15.getalong(well)withclassmates與同學(xué)相處(得好)16.knowledgeableandexperiencedteachers知識淵博且經(jīng)驗豐富的老師17.greentreesallyearround樹木四季常青18.a400-metrestandardtrack一條400米標(biāo)準(zhǔn)跑道B.亮點句型1.Ourschoolhasahistoryof70years.我們學(xué)校有70年歷史.2.Therearemanybeautifultreesoneithersideofthepath.在小道兩邊有很多漂亮的樹.3.Ourschoolislocated/liesinthecentreofthecity.我們學(xué)校位于市中心.4.Thisisamapofourschool.這是一張我們學(xué)校的示意圖.5.Therelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisharmoniousinourschool.在我們學(xué)校師生關(guān)系融洽.6.Ithinkweareluckytohavesuchagoodstudyingenvironment.我想我們很幸運有如此好的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境.7.Ourschoolisasbeautifulasagardenwithlotsofgreentreesallyearround.我們的學(xué)校十分美麗,就像花園一樣,樹木四季常青.8.Theschooloffersmanyelectivecoursesandsupplementarycourses.學(xué)校開設(shè)了許多選修課和拓展課.9.Schoolisaplacetohelpstudentsbroadentheirhorizonsandcultivatetalents.學(xué)校是一個幫助學(xué)生開闊視野、培養(yǎng)人才的地方.10.Thereisabigflowerbedattheschoolgate.在校門口有一個大的花壇.11.Youcanhearthebirdssingingsweetlyinourschool.在學(xué)校你可以聽到鳥兒甜美的歌聲.四、寫前訓(xùn)練－備詞句I.詞句操練A.根據(jù)括號中的漢語意思完成句子.It'smypleasuretointroducemyschool.Ourschoolis(1)____________(位于市東南部).Ithas(2)____________(悠久的歷史).Theschoolis(3)____________(就像花園一樣十分美麗,樹木四季常青).Ourschoolispraisedasagardenschool.Ourschoolhas(4)____________(四層樓的教學(xué)樓).Onthefourthflooroftheteachingbuilding,thereisacleanandtidyreadingroomandamoderncomputerroom.(5)____________(在教學(xué)樓前面),therearesixlarge(6)____________(籃球場),afootballfieldwith(7)____________(一條400米標(biāo)準(zhǔn)跑道),aswellasabeautifulgym.Studentsoftenplaybasketballandfootballafterschool.Ourschoolhas(8)____________(設(shè)施優(yōu)良)and(9)____________(經(jīng)驗豐富的老師).Theyarewelleducated.Ithinkweareluckyenoughtohave(10)____________(如此好的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境).答案(1)locatedinthesoutheastofthecity(2)alonghistory(3)asbeautifulasagardenwithlotsofgreentreesallyearround(4)afour-floorteachingbuilding(5)Infrontoftheteachingbuilding(6)basketballcourts(7)a400-metrestandardtrack(8)excellentequipment;(9)experiencedteachers(10)suchagoodstudyingenvironmentB.將下列句子翻譯成英語.1.這是我們學(xué)校的教學(xué)樓,是老師、學(xué)生工作和學(xué)習(xí)的地方.__________________________________________________________________________________2.校園里有上千的樹木和花草,環(huán)境優(yōu)美,被稱為花園學(xué)校.__________________________________________________________________________________3.在學(xué)校的對面有一所區(qū)圖書館,同學(xué)們喜歡在放學(xué)后在圖書館安靜的環(huán)境中查找學(xué)習(xí)資料、做作業(yè).__________________________________________________________________________________4.學(xué)校有體育館、足球場等體育設(shè)施,給同學(xué)們提供了良好的鍛煉環(huán)境.__________________________________________________________________________________5.為了培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的各種能力,學(xué)校開設(shè)了許多選修課和拓展課.__________________________________________________________________________________6.我們學(xué)校是一個擁有五十年歷史的區(qū)重點中學(xué).__________________________________________________________________________________7.我們學(xué)校的教師都受過良好教育,知識淵博,是同學(xué)們的良師益友.__________________________________________________________________________________8.教學(xué)樓的四樓有會議室、閱覽室、電腦房.__________________________________________________________________________________9.學(xué)校設(shè)施優(yōu)良,環(huán)境優(yōu)美,學(xué)習(xí)氛圍濃厚,是孩子們學(xué)習(xí)生活的樂園.__________________________________________________________________________________10.當(dāng)你走進校門,你就可以看到兩幢紅色的四層教學(xué)樓.__________________________________________________________________________________答案1.Thisistheteachingbuildinginourschool,whereteachersandstudentsworkandstudy.2.Therearethousandsoftreesandflowersinthecampus.Theenvironmentisbeautiful,anditispraisedasagardenschool.3.Thereisadistrictlibraryoppositetheschool.Studentsliketosearchforlearningmaterialsanddohomeworkinthequietlibrary.4.Theschoolhasagym,afootballfield,andothersportsfacilities,providingstudentswithapleasantexerciseenvironment.5.Theschoolhasopenedmanyelectivecoursesandsupplementarycoursesinordertocultivatestudents'abilities.6.Ourschoolisakeymiddleschoolinthedistrictwithahistoryof50years.7.Theteachersarewelleducatedandknowledgeable.Theyarenotjustteachersbutfriendsofstudents.8.Thereisameetingroom,areadingroomandacomputerroomonthefourthflooroftheteachingbuilding.9.Thecampushasexcellentequipment,abeautifulenvironmentandagoodlearningatmosphere,Itistheparadiseforstudentstostudyinandlivein.10.Whenyouwalkthroughtheschoolgate,youcanseetworedfour-storeyteachingbuildings.II.段落操練將下列句子排成一篇文理通順的短文.1.Whenyouenterthisschool,youwillseealargeandbeautifulcampuswithtreesandflowershereandthere.2.I'dliketointroducemyschool.Myschoolisagardenschool.3.Inthisschool,wearelivinglikeabigfamily.4.Teachershereareaskindasourparents,andclassmatesarefriendlyandwegetalongwellwitheachotherlikebrothersandsisters.5.Theschoolalsooffersusmanyelectivecoursesanddevelopmentcourses.6.Wheninclass,wearefreetochoosewhatweareinterestedinandaregivenalotoftimetopractise.7.Ilovemyschoolverymuch.Itistheparadiseformetostudyinandlivein.8.Afterclass,wecanjoindifferentkindsofclubsanddowhateversportswelikeinsteadofdoingmuchhomework.排序后的正確順序是:_______________________________________________________________答案2-1-3-4-6-5-8-7五、篇章實戰(zhàn)－寫短文A.在家長開放日當(dāng)天,你向家長介紹學(xué)校情況.請根據(jù)以下提示,以“MySchool”為題用英語寫一篇短文.要點提示:1.位于市中心,有七十年的歷史,是一座市重點學(xué)校.2.綠樹成蔭,環(huán)境優(yōu)美,是一所花園式的學(xué)校.3.教學(xué)設(shè)施先進,教學(xué)水平優(yōu)良,學(xué)生熱愛學(xué)習(xí),教師熱愛教育,師生關(guān)系融洽.MySchoolLadiesandgentlemen,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwillloveourschool!Thankyouverymuch.答案Welcometoourschool.Iamgladtointroduceourschooltoyou.Ourschoolislocatedinthecentreofourcity,andyoucaneasilygetherebypublictransportation.Theschoolhasahistoryofover70years,andiscurrentlyoneofthekeyschoolsinourcity.Ourschoolispraisedasagardenschoolbecauseofitsbeautifulenvironment.Therearemanytreesandflowersatourschool.Therearesixstandardbasketballcourts,twovolleyballcourtsandafootballplaygroundatourschool.Webelievethesearenecessaryforstudents'development.Therearetwofour-storeyteachingbuildingsandamodernlabbuilding,allequippedwithadvancedteachingfacilities.Eachterm,wewillopenmanyelectivecoursesandsupplementarycoursesinordertogivestudentsamore“well-rounded”education.Atpresent,therearemorethan1,000studentsstudyingintheschool.Wehave100teachers,andallofthemarewelleducatedandexperienced.Studentsstudyhard,andtherelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisharmonious.Ibelievethisisanidealschoolforstudentswhoareeagertogetgoodgrades.B.某英語雜志正在舉行以“我的校園生活”為主題的征文活動.請你寫一篇參賽文章,介紹你們豐富多彩的學(xué)校生活,并表達對學(xué)校未來的希望.要點如下:1.我的學(xué)校是一所男女混合學(xué)校(amixedschool).學(xué)校生活豐富多彩,也很有趣.2.從早上8:00至下午3:30,我們上不同的課程,每天只有一個小時的作業(yè),因此有許多時間進行課外活動來保持健康.3.學(xué)校有不同的俱樂部,學(xué)生可以選修自己感興趣的課程發(fā)展自己的愛好.4.希望學(xué)校的明天更好.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案Myschoolisamixedschool.Itcoversanareaofabout50,000squaremetres.Thereisalargefootballfield,twobasketballcourts,andabigwonderfulgarden.Ithasbeautifulviewswithmanytreesoneithersideofthepath.Actually,youcanhearthebird'ssweetvoiceeverywhere.Luckily,wedon'tneedtogetupearlyinthemorning.Classesbeginat8:00a.m.andareoverat3:30p.m.Inthisway,wewillhaveenoughsleepandenergytostudy.Wedon'thavetoomuchhomeworktodo.Mostofuscanfinishourhomeworkwithinonehoureveryday.Sowehavemoretimetohaveafter-schoolactivities.Accordingtoourinterests,wecanjoinclubssuchasbasketballclub,runningclub,singingclub,etc.Themodernfacilitiesinourschoolhelpusstudymoreeffectively.Teachershereareexperiencedandknowledgeable.Itistheparadiseformetostudyinandlivein.Ibelieveourschoolwillbebetterandbetter.話題二我的父母一、話題解讀－審主題在成長過程當(dāng)中、父母一直陪伴著我們.父母是孩子的第一任老師,他們的言傳身教對孩子的一生都起著至關(guān)重要的作用.以“我的父母”為主題的寫作通常通過敘述一件事情,來表達“我”從這件事中受到的教育或表達對父母的感激之情.范文欣賞Intheprocessofourgrowth,ourparentsalwaysaccompanyusthroughonedifficultyafteranother.Myfatherisanordinaryworker.Heisakidandgenerousmanwhoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Helikesplayingchessandlisteningtomusicwhenheisfree.Hehasdonealotofadmirablethings.Heisaheroinmyheart.Inmydailylife,hehasalwaysbeensupportive.Hetriestodowhateverhecantohelpmewithmystudyandmylife.Lastyear,Itookpartintherelayraceheldbyourschool.IgotsotiredafterhalfoftheracethatIevenwantedtogiveup.Myfather,thoughover50yearsold,notonlyranwithmebutalsocheeredmeuntilIreachedthefinishline,whichmovedmealot.Hetriestodowhathecantohelpmewithmystudyandmylife.Inreturnforhislove,Iwillstudyhardandmakegreatprogresssothatonedayhecanbeproudofme.二、話題框架－列提綱Step1:介紹父親或母親是怎樣的人.Step2:具體敘述一件特殊的事情或平時經(jīng)常發(fā)生的事情.Step3:描述從中所受的啟發(fā)或感想等.三、話題短語和亮點句型－加內(nèi)容A.話題短語1.akindandeasy-goingwoman一位善良且隨和的婦女2.ofaverageheight中等身高3.wearapairofglasses戴著一副眼鏡4.beintrouble在困境中5.encouragemetocheerup鼓勵我振作起來6.thedailylife日常生活7.spareone'stimetoaccompanyme抽時間陪伴我8.learntobeindependent學(xué)會獨立自主9.solveaproblem解決問題10.bethankfulforyourhelp感謝你的幫助11.growuphealthily健康成長12.facedifficultiesbravely勇敢地面對困難13.overcomeadifficulty克服困難14.smileatlife笑對人生15.feelworried感到擔(dān)心16.receiveabettereducation接受更好的教育17.sickinbed臥病在床18.liveabetterlife生活得更好19.slimandelegantwithlongcurlyhair苗條而優(yōu)雅,留著長長的卷發(fā)20.ahandsomemanwithastrongandtallfigure一個身材高大的英俊的男人21.inreturnfortheirlove為了回報他們的愛22.befascinatedbyherbeauty被她的美貌迷住了23.bycomingupwithgoodsolutions通過想出好的解決辦法B.亮點句型1.HetriestodowhateverhecantohelpmesolveproblemsImeet.他盡其所能幫助我解決我所遇到的問題.2.Withoutmymother,Icannotgrowuphealthily.沒有媽媽,我就不可能健康地成長.3.Myfatherregardsmeastheappleofhiseye.我爸爸視我為掌上明珠.4.Whenwefacedifficulties,weshouldfirsttrytosolvetheproblembyourselvesratherthanaskothersforhelp.當(dāng)我們面對困難時,我們應(yīng)首先想辦法自己解決而非尋求他人的幫助.5.Youalwayssupportmydecisions.Thanksforyourdeeplove.你總是支持我做的所有決定.感謝你對我的愛.6.Thankmyparentsforallthattheyhavedoneforme.感謝父母為我做的一切.7.Ihopemyparentswillbehealthyandhappyforever!希望父母永遠(yuǎn)健康、快樂！8.Youworkhardaroundtheclock.你夜以繼日地工作.9.Youarereadytohelppeopleinneed.你總是樂于助人.10.Itisyouwhoteachmetobeakindperson.是你教我要做一個善良的人.11.Mymotherisakindandeasy-goingwoman.Sheisofaverageheight,andshealwayswearsapairofglasses.我媽媽善良并隨和,中等身高,戴著一副眼鏡.12.Mymotheralwaystellsmetobeindiscipline,behaveingoodmannersandunderstandmyresponsibilitiesathome.媽媽總是告訴我要遵守紀(jì)律,舉止得體,明白在家里的責(zé)任.13.It'sagreatpleasuretochatwithherwhenIgetintrouble.當(dāng)我遇到麻煩時,和她聊天是件開心的事.14.Iwanttotakethischancetoexpressmygratitudetomyfather'shardworking.我想利用這次機會來感謝父親的辛苦付出.四、寫前訓(xùn)練－備詞匯I.詞句操練A.根據(jù)括號中的漢語意思完成句子.MymotherisanexcellentEnglishteacher.Sheis(1)____________(苗條而優(yōu)雅,留著長長的卷發(fā))andhasapairofbigeyes.Shealways(2)____________(工作努力負(fù)責(zé)).Herclassesare(3)____________(生動、有趣,深受同學(xué)喜愛)．Mymotheriskindandfriendly.SheoftenhelpsotherchildrenandmewithourEnglish.WhenIfailexams,mymother(4)____________(鼓勵我要自信)andkeeptrying.WhenI(5)____________(在生活中有麻煩),shealwaystellsmetobebraveand(6)____________(微笑面對生活).(7)____________(在我心里),mymotherisnotonlymybelovedmotherbutalsomygoodfriend.I(8)____________(向媽媽學(xué)到了很多).Iloveherverymuch.Ihopemymotherwillbe(9)____________(永遠(yuǎn)健康快樂)！答案(1)slimandelegantwithlongcurlyhair(2)workshardandtakesherresponsibility(3)lively,interestinganddeeplylovedbyherstudents(4)encouragesmetobeconfident(5)havetroubleinlife(6)smileatlife(7)Inmyheart(8)havelearnedalotfrommymother(9)healthyandhappyforeverB.將下列句子翻譯成英語.1.自從我出生以來,我爸爸就視我為掌上明珠.__________________________________________________________________________________2.我的媽媽在生活學(xué)習(xí)中非常關(guān)心我.__________________________________________________________________________________3.在我考試不及格時,她總是鼓勵我克服困難,不斷努力.__________________________________________________________________________________4.在我的成長過程中,如果沒有媽媽的關(guān)愛,我就不可能健康快樂地成長.__________________________________________________________________________________5.感謝爸爸媽媽給了我更好的教育和更好的生活.__________________________________________________________________________________6.我爸爸是一個身材高大的英俊男人,是我心目中的超人.__________________________________________________________________________________7.我會努力學(xué)習(xí),回報父母為我做的一切.__________________________________________________________________________________8.在我的成長過程中,我媽媽對我有很大的影響.__________________________________________________________________________________9.當(dāng)我有問題時,他總能給我提出有用的建議而且和我一起解決,這使我很感動.__________________________________________________________________________________答案1.SinceIwasborn,Ihavebeentheappleofmyfather'seye.2.Mymothercaresmuchaboutmeinmylifeandstudy.3.WhenIfailmyexam,shealwaysencouragesmetoovercomedifficultiesandkeeptrying.4.Intheprocessofmygrowth,withoutthecareofmymother,Icouldn'tgrowuphealthilyandhappily.5.Thankstomyparentsforgivingmeabetterlifeandbettereducation.6.Myfatherisahandsomemanwithatallfigure.Heisasupermaninmyheart.7.Iwillstudyhardinreturnforwhatmyparentshavedoneforme.8.Mymotherinfluencedmealotintheprocessofmygrowth.9.WhenIhaveproblems,healwaysgivesmeusefuladviceandsolvesproblemswithme,whichmovesmealot.II.段落操練將下列句子排成一篇文理通順的短文.1.Myfatherisaninterestingperson.Heiseasy-goingandlooksalittlechubby.2.Besides,healwaysgivesmeusefuladvicewhenImeetproblems.3.Healwaystalkswithmeaboutdramasandtriestohelpmeunderstandthecharactersandtheplotsintheseplays.4.Heisfondofallkindsofdramas.5.WhenImakesomeprogress,healwaystellsmenottoshowoff.6.Inordertoletmeunderstandhisadvice,healwaystellsmehisexperience.7.Healsoteachesmetodosomecookinginmysparetime.8.Thisismyfather.Welaughtogether,readtogetherandlearntogether.排序后的正確順序是:_______________________________________________________________答案1-4-3-2-6-5-7-8五、篇章實戰(zhàn)－寫短文A.在你的學(xué)習(xí)生活中,爸爸媽媽對你的影響非常大.母親節(jié)即將來臨,學(xué)校開展了以“MyMotherinMyMind”為題的征文活動.請以此為題,用英語寫一篇短文.MyMotherinMyMind______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案Formanypeople,thereisnodoubtthatmotheristhemostimportantpersonintheirlife.Mothersnotonlygivebirthtotheirchildren,butalsobringthemupwithdevotion.Mymotherisoneofthesegreatmothers.Mymotherisakind,easy-goingwomanwithbrighteyes.Sheoftensmileslovely.Althoughsheisverybusywithherjob,shestillmanagestotakegoodcareofourfamily.Shedevotesmostofherleisuretimeonme.Mymotherisalsostrictwithme.SheaskedmetobehonestandberesponsiblewhenIwaslittle.Sheispatientandtreatsmelikeafriend.It'sgreatpleasuretochatwithherwheneverIgetintroubleormeetwithdifficulties.Shecanalwayscheermeupbycomingupwithgoodsolutions.Withherlove,Ifeellikeafishswimminghappilyinabeautifulsea.IwillstudyhardsothatIcanrepaymymotherforherloveinthefuture.B.請以“MyFather”為題,用英語寫一篇短文.從性格、愛好、外表等方面介紹一下父親,重點寫一個曾經(jīng)發(fā)生在你們之間令人感動的故事,并簡要說明你將如何回報偉大的父愛.要求:1.短文應(yīng)包括所有要點,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.2.語句通順、意思連貫.MyFather______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案Myfatherisa40-year-oldhandsomemanwithastrongandtallfigure.Heisveryniceandoutgoing.Hishobbyisreadingandheisgoodatplayingbasketball.Iusedtobeabasketballfan.Myfatherspentalotoftimeinhelpingmeimprovemyskills.WealsodiscussedsuperstarslikeMichaelJordanandKobeBryant,fromwhomIlearntmuchaboutpersistence,teamworkandhonour.Once,IlostagameandIfeltsosadthatIwantedtogiveupplayingbasketball.Myfathersatwithmewithoutsayingaword.Thenextmorning,Ifoundapieceofpaperwiththesewords,“Nevergiveup.I'mproudofyou!”Iwasdeeplymovedbywhatmyfatherwrote.WhenIgrowup,inreturnformyfather,IwilldowhatIcantomakemyfatherhappy.IwillfindagoodjobafterIgraduatefromuniversity.I'lltakehimtoseethewonderfu1viewsaroundChina.Mostimportantly,IwillplaybasketballwithhimwhenIhavefreetime.Ithinkthisiswhathewantsmost.話題三我的老師一、話題解讀－審主題在成長的過程中,我們會遇到很多老師,有的幽默風(fēng)趣,有的不茍言笑.學(xué)生的每一次進步與老師的關(guān)心、愛護、幫助是分不開的.以“我的老師”為主題的書面表達在介紹老師時,要對老師所教科目、老師的教學(xué)方法及對待學(xué)生的態(tài)度等進行介紹,通常采用敘議結(jié)合的手法進行寫作,通過敘述一件事情,陳述從這件事情中得到的教育并表達對老師的感激之情.范文欣賞MyfavouriteteacherismyChemistryteacher.Sheiselegantandoutgoing.Sheisabout30.WhenIfirstmether,Iwasfascinatedbyher.Iwasalsodeeplyimpressedbyherdevotiontoteaching.Herlessonswerealwayswell-preparedandclearlydelivered.Herteachingstyleislively,soeveryonecouldbenefitalotfromherclass.Shehasagoodsenseofhumour,andisabletomakelearningmoreenjoyable.Besides,sheisverykindtous.WheneverIencountereddifficulties,shealwayscheeredmeupwithhertenderlook.Sheisarespectableteacheraswellasawarm-heartedfriendwhomIwillkeepinmymindforever.二、話題框架－列提綱Step1:對老師所教學(xué)科、年齡、性格等做介紹.Step2:介紹老師的教學(xué)態(tài)度及特點.Step3:對老師做評價或表達對老師的感謝之情.三、話題短語和亮點句型－加內(nèi)容A.話題短語1.bepatientwitheverystudent對每個學(xué)生都很耐心2.befullofenergy精力充沛3.befamiliarwithlessons對課程很熟悉4.putforwardquestions提出問題5.maketheclasseslivelyandinteresting把課上得生動有趣6.speakEnglishfluently英語講得流暢7.bestrictwithstudents對學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格8.givemesomegoodadvice給我提一些好建議9.makefullpreparationsforthelessons備課充分10.treateverystudentfairly公平對待每一位學(xué)生11.thinkbyoneself獨立思考12.abelovedexperiencedteacher一位可愛的經(jīng)驗豐富的老師13.withhishelp在他的幫助下14.catchupwithotherstudents趕上其他同學(xué)15.agoodteacherandhelpfulfriend良師益友16.thehappyjuniorschoollife愉快的初中生活17.compare...withothersubjects與其他學(xué)科相比較18.astrongdesireforknowledge強烈的求知欲19.showgreatlovetoherstudents對她的學(xué)生表現(xiàn)出強烈的愛20.teachinanunusualway用一種不尋常的方式教書21.cheermeupwithhertenderlook讓我振作起來,表情溫柔22.sharejoysandsorrowswithme與我分享喜怒哀樂23.withasmilingface面帶微笑B.亮點句型1.Heisstrictwithstudents,sothestudentsloveandfearhim.他對學(xué)生很嚴(yán)格,所以學(xué)生們既愛他又怕他.2.Ihavesomanywordstosay.我有許多話要說.3.Iwassodeeplyimpressedbyherdevotiontoteaching.她專注教學(xué)的精神給我留下了深刻的印象.4.Iwillneverforgethercharmingimage.我將永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記她迷人的樣子.5.OneofthereasonswhyIlikeheristhatsheisverysincere.我喜歡她的原因之一是她很真誠.6.Thankyouforbelievingme.YoumademefeelgoodaboutmyselfandshowedmethatIcouldmakeadifference.謝謝你信任我.你讓我對自己有信心,讓我知道我可以有所作為.7.Themoreyouencouragedme,thefasterIimproved.你越鼓勵我,我進步得越快.8.IlikemyEnglishteacherandherlessons.我既喜歡我的英語老師,又喜歡她的課.9.IadmiremyEnglishteacherforwhatshehasdoneforus.我因英語老師為我們所做的一切而欽佩她.10.Heisaniceteacherwithagoodsenseofhumour.他是一位很幽默的好老師.11.OfalltheteachersIhaveevermet,heisthemostknowledgeableone.他是我遇到的所有老師中最有學(xué)問的一個.12.Icaughtupwiththeotherstudentsandbecamethetopstudentinmyclass.我趕上了其他同學(xué),成了班里的優(yōu)等生.四、寫前訓(xùn)練－備詞句I.詞句操練A.根據(jù)括號中的漢語意思完成句子.Mr.Smith,oneofmyteachers(1)____________(30歲),isalovelymanwho(2)____________(給·····深刻的印象)me.(3)____________(與······相比較)otherteachers,Mr.Smith(4)____________(對······更加注意)hiswayofteaching,tryingvariouswaystomakehisclass(5)____________(生動、有趣).Inhisopinion,weshouldnotonlyknow“what”,butalsounderstand“why".Soinsteadofgivingusanswersimmediately,heencouragesus(6)____________(獨立思考)wheneverhe(7)____________(提出問題).(8)____________(在他的幫助下),wehavelearnedhowtostudyandsolveproblems.Heissuchalearnedpersonthatweall(9)____________(欽佩和尊重)verymuch.答案(1)aged30(2)leavesadeepimpressionon(3)Comparedwith(4)paysmoreattentionto;(5)vividandinteresting(6)tothinkbyourselves(7)putsforwarquestions(8)Withhishelp;(9)admireandrespectB.將下列句子翻譯成英語.1.為確保我理解每一個問題,她對我總是很耐心.__________________________________________________________________________________2.她總是備課充分,講得清楚,很容易理解.__________________________________________________________________________________3.老師的愛和支持將永遠(yuǎn)陪伴著我.__________________________________________________________________________________4.張老師是一個精力充沛,教學(xué)經(jīng)驗豐富的老師.__________________________________________________________________________________5.沒有老師的幫助,我們就不會取得這么好的成績.__________________________________________________________________________________6.他能公平地對待每一位學(xué)生,關(guān)愛每一位學(xué)生,是同學(xué)們的良師益友.__________________________________________________________________________________7.在你的教育下,我成了一個樂于助人的人,幫助那些需要幫助的人.__________________________________________________________________________________8.老師不僅總是耐心地幫助我,而且與我分享喜怒哀樂.__________________________________________________________________________________9.在她的幫助下,我有了足夠的勇氣去面對困難,在英語上取得了更大的進步.__________________________________________________________________________________10.更重要的是我比以前更有信心了,我非常感謝老師對我所做的一切.__________________________________________________________________________________答案1.SheisalwayspatientwithmetomakesureIworkouteveryproblem.2.Herlessonsarealwayswell-prepared,clearlydeliveredandeasytobeunderstood.3.Theloveandsupportfrommyteacherswillbewithmeforever.4.Mr.Zhangisanexperiencedteacherwhoisfullofenergy.5.Withoutteacher'shelp,wewouldnothaveachievedsuchagoodresult.6.Hecantreateverystudentfairlyandcareforeverystudent.Heisnotjustateacherbutafriendforstudents.7.Withyoureducation,Ihavegrownuptobeamanwhoisreadytohelpthoseinneed.8.Theteacherisnotonlyalwayspatienttohelpme,butshealsosharesjoysandsorrowswithme.9.Withherhelp,I'vehadenoughcouragetofacedifficultiesandmadegreatprogressinEnglish.10.What'smoreimportantisthatIammoreconfidentthanbefore.Iamthankfultomyteacherforwhathehasdoneforme.II.段落操練將下列句子排成一篇文理通順的短文.1.IcanstillrememberwhenIfailedanexamination,youencouragedmetokeeptrying.2.Becauseofyourinterestingandvividlessons,wearemoreandmoreinterestedinmathsandhavemademuchprogress.3.Youarereallyagoodteacherandagoodfriendforus.4.Iwouldliketothankyoufirstforyourhardwork.5.WhenIhadtroubleinlife,youtoldmetobebrave.6.Mylovelyjuniorschoollifeiscomingtoanend.7.You'renotonlystrictwithusinstudybutalsopatientwithuswhenwemeetdifficulties.8.Ihavesomanywordsfrommyhearttotellmymathsteacher.9.I'dalsoliketotellyouthatIwon'tforgethowinterestingyourlessonsare.10.Nowtherelationshipbetweenyouandourclassmatesisveryharmonious.排序后的正確順序是:______________________________________________________________答案6-8-4-7-1-5-9-2-10-3五、篇章實戰(zhàn)－寫短文A.在學(xué)習(xí)的旅途中,你遇過很多位語文老師.你理想中的語文老師是什么樣的?請以“MyIdealChineseTeacherinMyHeart”為題,用英語寫一篇短文.注意:因為是理想中的老師,所以本文需要用虛擬語氣.MyIdealChineseTeacherinMyHeart________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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