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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasakid,mydadtookmybrotherandmetogoshoppingforschoolclothes.Itwasduringthefinancialcrisis(危機(jī))andhehadbeenoutofworkandwasstrugglingtofindajob.Mymommanagedafastfoodrestaurantsowehadsomeine,butnotenough.Wewerelivingahardlife.EventhoughIwasyoung,Irealizedthatweweren’tthebestoffwhenitcametomoney.Myparentswerealwaysstrugglingtofindsomewherecheaperforustostay.Goingshoppingwithmydadandbrotherseemedquitestrangewhilewewerealreadystrugglingforlivingandhousing,butweneedednewclothesforthestartoftheschoolyear.Weeachchosetwocoatsandonepairofshoes.MybrotheralsowantedapairofbasketballshortsandDadagreed.ButIcouldseeDadlookedworriedandsad.Whilewewerecheckingout,IrememberDadwatchedthepricegoupandupatthecheckoutcounterandthatheseemedtobemoreandmoreworried.Onceeverythingwasincludedandthetotalwas$55,Dadrealizedhedidn’thaveenoughmoneyforeverything.Heaskedthecashiertotakeofftheextrashortsmybrotherhadaskedfor,buthestilldidn’thaveenoughmoneytopay.Soheapologizedtothemanbehinduswhilehetriedtofigureoutwhatclothestotakeofffromthebill.Itoldmydadtotakeoffmypairofshoesandoneofmycoat.Icouldlivewithmyoldclothessomybrothercouldhavenewclothes.Mydadalmostcriedwhenhetoldthecashiertotakethemoff.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。BeforeDadcouldpay,themanbehindussteppedforward._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thisman’sgenerousbehaviorisreallyatimelyhelp.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意這篇文章講述了作者童年時(shí)期家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)困難的一個(gè)經(jīng)歷。在金融危機(jī)期間,作者的父親失業(yè),全家依靠母親在快餐店的收入勉強(qiáng)維持生計(jì)。盡管生活拮據(jù),父親還是決定帶作者和弟弟去購(gòu)買新衣服迎接新學(xué)年。在商店里,盡管他們只挑選了最基本的衣物,但結(jié)賬時(shí)父親發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的錢不夠支付。在父親準(zhǔn)備放棄一些衣物時(shí),排在他們后面的一位陌生男士主動(dòng)提出幫助,支付了剩余的費(fèi)用。這位男士的善舉不僅解決了他們的燃眉之急,也給作者留下了深刻的印象,教會(huì)了他們同情和幫助他人的重要性。這件事成為了家庭中經(jīng)?;貞浀墓适拢?lì)著他們?cè)诔砷L(zhǎng)過程中也去幫助那些需要幫助的人。在原文中,有幾處伏筆為續(xù)寫部分提供了基礎(chǔ):1.家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)困難:文章開頭提到了家庭在金融危機(jī)期間的經(jīng)濟(jì)困難,這為續(xù)寫中父親在結(jié)賬時(shí)的焦慮和擔(dān)憂埋下了伏筆。2.父親的擔(dān)*:在購(gòu)物過程中,父親對(duì)價(jià)格的擔(dān)憂和悲傷的表情,預(yù)示了結(jié)賬時(shí)可能發(fā)生的問題。3.孩子的犧牲:作者提出放棄自己的衣物以幫助家庭節(jié)省開支,這顯示了孩子的懂事和愿意為家庭做出犧牲,為續(xù)寫中可能出現(xiàn)的解決方案提供了線索。4.社會(huì)援助的暗示:文章中提到了母親在快餐店工作和家庭的住房問題,這暗示了社會(huì)環(huán)境和他人援助的可能性。在續(xù)寫的部分,這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng):1.父親的焦慮得到解決:續(xù)寫中,陌生男士的出現(xiàn)解決了父親的焦慮,他支付了剩余的費(fèi)用,回應(yīng)了原文中父親在結(jié)賬時(shí)的擔(dān)憂。2.孩子的犧牲得到認(rèn)可:續(xù)寫中,陌生男士的慷慨行為不僅認(rèn)可了作者愿意犧牲的精神,還確保了作者和弟弟都能得到新衣服。3.社會(huì)援助的實(shí)現(xiàn):續(xù)寫中,陌生男士的善舉體現(xiàn)了社會(huì)援助的實(shí)現(xiàn),回應(yīng)了原文中對(duì)外部幫助的暗示。4.情感的轉(zhuǎn)變:續(xù)寫中,從父親的擔(dān)憂到感激,再到作者和弟弟的感激和未來(lái)的回報(bào),情感的轉(zhuǎn)變回應(yīng)了原文中的情感基調(diào)。這些伏筆和回應(yīng)不僅增強(qiáng)了故事的連貫性,也深化了主題,即在困難時(shí)期,人們的善意和幫助可以帶來(lái)巨大的變化。Onepossibleversion:NoticeOurschoolwillorganizeavisittothePorcelainMuseumthisweekend.TheeventisscheduledonSaturday,startingat9a.m.andendingaround3p.m.ThemuseumhasmanycollectionsofChineseporcelain.Therefore,it’sagreatopportunitytoappreciateChinesetraditionalartsandcrafts.PleasebringyourstudentIDforadmission.Remembertowearfortableshoesandbringawaterbottle.Wehopeyoucanjoinusforthisrewardingexperience!Lookingforwardtoyourparticipation.TheStudentUnionOnepossibleversion:BeforeDadcouldpay,themanbehindussteppedforward.Heaskedthecashiertoincludealltheitemsinthebill,makingDadconfused.Thenthemangavethecashiera$100noteandtoldhertogivethechangetoDad.Dadsaidhecouldn’ttakehismoney.ThemaninsistedandDadstartedcrying.Mydadaskedforhisphonenumbersohecouldpayhimback,butthemanjusttoldmydadtohelpsomeoneelsewhowouldneeditinthefuture.Thisman’sgenerousbehaviorisreallyatimelyhelp.Thankstohisbehavior,mybrotherandIhadnewclothesfortheschoolyear.Icouldn’timaginewhatourlifewouldbelikewithoutthestrangerwhosawwewerestrugglinganddecidedtohelp,purelyoutofthekindheart.Inhonorofhim,mybrotherandImadeupourmindstohelpanyoneinneedwhenwegrewup.Sonow,wheneverIseepeoplestruggling,Itrytoreachoutahelpinghand.Afteryou’reyourhelp,howeversmallitmayseemtoyou,meansalottotheonewhoreceivesit.下水文1BeforeDadcouldpay,themanbehindussteppedforward.Henoticedthesituationandkindlyofferedtocovertheremainingbalance.Hiseyeswerefilledwithempathyashetoldmydadnottoworryaboutit,thateverychilddeservesnewclothesfortheschoolyear.MybrotherandIlookedateachother,surprisedandgrateful.Theman'ssimpleactofkindnessbroughtasenseofrelieftoourfamily,andmydad,withamixofemotions,thankedhimprofusely.Itwasamomentthattaughtmethetruemeaningofpassionandthepowerofahelpinghandintimesofneed.Thisman’sgenerousbehaviorisreallyatimelyhelp.Itnotonlyallowedustoleavethestorewiththeclothesweneededbutalsoleftanindelibleimpressiononmyyoungmind.Theincidentbecameafamilystorythatweoftenrecalled,areminderofthekindnessofstrangersandtheimportanceofpayingitforward.AsIgrewolder,ImadeitapointtohelpotherswheneverIcould,inspiredbythatman'sselflessness.Hisactofkindnesswasabeaconofhopeduringadifficulttime,anditcontinuestoinspireactsofgenerosityinourfamilytothisday.It'satestamenttohowasmallactcanhaveaprofoundandlastingimpactonothers,shapingnotjustamoment,butalegacyofkindness.下水文2BeforeDadcouldpay,themanbehindussteppedforward.Hewasamiddleagedgentlemanwithawarmsmile,whohadbeenquietlyobservingourpredicament.Withagentlevoice,heofferedtopayfortheitemswewereabouttoleavebehind.Mydad,takenaback,triedtorefuse,butthemaninsisted,sayingthathehadbeeninasimilarsituationonceandknewhowitfelt.Hehandedthecashiersomebills,ensuringthatwecouldkeeptheclotheswehadchosen.Theman'sunexpectedgenerositybroughttearstomydad'seyes,andweallstoodthere,speechless,asthecashierpletedthetransaction.Thisman’sgenerousbehaviorisreallyatimelyhelp.Itwasmorethanjustafinancialreli
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