讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+意外的圣誕禮物+講義 高二上學(xué)期第一次月考英語(yǔ)試題

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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Thefirsttimeweseteyesonthebeautifuldress“bigRed.”father,motherandIwerewalkingslowlythroughthefreshlyfallensnowonourwaytoHubble'sHardwarestoreonMainStreet.Thecolorfullydecoratedwindowdisplayheldthebesttoyseverandsomeotherthings.AndheywereallplacedpleasantlybeneaththebreathtakingdressofBigRed.Mother’s

eyesweregluedtothemassiveflameofredsatin(綢緞)，dottedwithtwinklingstars.“Mygoodness,"shemanagedtosayindreamlikewonder."Wouldyoujustlookatthatdress!"Then,totallyoutofcharacter,motherunexpectedlydancedontheslipperysidewalk.Beneaththeheavy,greywoolcoatthatshehadwormeverywinterforaslongasIcouldremember,motherlostherbalanceandfellclumsily.Fatherquicklycaughther.Hercheeksredderthanusual,motherblameddadforlaughing."Oh,stopthat!"sheordered,asmyfathersweptthesnowfromhercoat."WhatasillydresstobedisplayedthereinthewindowofEaton's!"sheshookherheadindisbelief."Whoonearthwouldwantsuchabrightly-coloreddress?Itistooexpensive."Aswecontinuedtowalkdownthestreet,motherturnedbackforonemorelook."Mygoodness!You'dthinkthey'ddisplaysomethingthatapersoncoulduse!”Christmaswasaroundthecornerandthereddresswassoonforgotten.Motherwasnottheonetowishfor,orspendmoneyon,thingsthatwerenotpractical."Therearethingsweneedmorethanthis,"she'dalwayssay,or,"Therearethingsweneedmorethanthat."Father,ontheotherhand,likedtobuythingswheneverthebudgetallowed.Ofcourse,he'dgetascoldingforhisoccasionalspendinglikethis,butitwasalldonewiththebestintention.OnourlasttriptotownbeforeChristmas,weweredrivingupMainStreetwhenmothersuddenlyexclaimedinsurprise,“Wouldyoujustlookatthat!"ShepointedexcitedlyasDaddrovepastEaton's."Thatbigreddressisgone,”shesaidindisbelief.“It'sactuallygone."注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dadlookedquicklyandsmiled,"Yes,itisnotthere!”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'llneverforgetthatChristmasmorningwhenfatherhandedmotherabox.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：文章講述了一個(gè)家庭在圣誕節(jié)前的一個(gè)溫馨故事。一家三口在前往五金店的路上，被一家商店櫥窗里展示的一件名為“大紅”的美麗紅裙所吸引。母親雖然表面上批評(píng)這件裙子不實(shí)用且昂貴，但實(shí)際上她被這件裙子深深吸引。圣誕節(jié)臨近時(shí)，這件紅裙似乎被遺忘了，因?yàn)槟赣H總是強(qiáng)調(diào)要把錢(qián)花在更實(shí)用的東西上。然而，父親有時(shí)會(huì)在預(yù)算允許的情況下購(gòu)買(mǎi)一些非必需品。在圣誕節(jié)前最后一次去鎮(zhèn)上的旅行中，母親驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)那件紅裙不見(jiàn)了，這讓她感到非常驚訝。幾處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)：1.伏筆：母親對(duì)紅裙的著迷，盡管她表面上批評(píng)它?；貞?yīng)：父親秘密購(gòu)買(mǎi)了紅裙作為圣誕禮物。2.伏筆：父親愿意在預(yù)算允許的情況下購(gòu)買(mǎi)非必需品?；貞?yīng)：父親用這個(gè)特點(diǎn)來(lái)給母親一個(gè)驚喜。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（分兩段）：第一段：-描述父親如何秘密購(gòu)買(mǎi)紅裙作為圣誕禮物。-可以提及父親在購(gòu)買(mǎi)過(guò)程中的一些小困難或趣事。第二段：-描述圣誕節(jié)早晨母親收到紅裙作為禮物的情景。-強(qiáng)調(diào)母親對(duì)這個(gè)意外禮物的反應(yīng)，以及它如何觸動(dòng)了她的心。主要矛盾以及解決方法：主要矛盾是母親對(duì)紅裙的渴望與她對(duì)實(shí)用性的堅(jiān)持之間的沖突。解決方法是父親理解了母親的內(nèi)心愿望，并在圣誕節(jié)給了她一個(gè)驚喜，這不僅解決了矛盾，也加深了家庭成員之間的情感聯(lián)系。主旨升華句1."Sometimes,themostcherishedgiftsaretheonesthatspeaktotheheart,notthewallet."2."Asurprisecanturnanordinarydayintoamemorythatlastsalifetime."3."Intheeyesoflove,eventhemostpracticalpersoncanfindjoyintheimpractical."4."Thetruevalueofagiftliesnotinitsprice,butintheloveitcarries."5."Behindeverypracticalperson,there'sadreamwaitingtoberealized."參考范文一：Dadlookedquicklyandsmiled,"Yes,itisnotthere!"Hehadsecretlyboughtthedressthedaybefore,knowinghowmuchitmeanttomomdespiteherprotests.Hehadtoreturnitforasmallersize,ashewasn'tsureaboutthefit,buttheshopkeeper,understandingthesituation,hadgivenhimaChristmaspromisetokeepitaside.Thatnight,underthetree,thebigredboxwasastarkcontrasttotheusualpracticalgifts.I'llneverforgetthatChristmasmorningwhenfatherhandedmotherabox.Hereyeswidenedindisbeliefassheunwrappedthedressshehadonlydaredtodreamabout.Sheblushed,hercheeksmatchingthehueofthesatin."Howdidyou...?"shebegan,hervoicetrailingoffasshewaslostinthewonderofthemoment.Dadjustsmiled,"MerryChristmas,mydear.Sometimes,eventhemostpracticalofusneedalittleimpracticalityinourlives."參考范文二：Dadlookedquicklyandsmiled,"Yes,itisnotthere!"Hehadbeenplanningthisforweeks,eversincehesawthelookinmom'seyesthatday.Hehadsavedup,makingsmallsacrificeshereandthere,andfinally,thedresswashis.Hehaditgift-wrapped,abigredbowontop,theverypictureoffestivejoy.I'llneverforgetthatChristmasmorningwhenfatherhandedmotherabox.Herhandstrembledslightlyassheopenedit,revealingthedressshehadadmiredfromafar.Theroomwassilentassheheldthedressagainsther,theredastarkcontrasttothemutedcolorsofwinter."It's...it'sbeautiful,"shewhispered,hereyesshiningwithtears.Dad'sgiftwasmorethanjustadress;itwasasymboloflovethattranscendedpracticality,areminderthatsometimes,dreamsdocometrue.【答案】

Dadlookedquicklyandsmiled,“Yes,itisnothere!”“Butwhowouldliketobuythatsillydress,whichisneitherpracticalnorcheap?”Mommarveled,butmeanwhilebothfatherandIcoulddiscernaninexplicablebutconspicuousdisappointmentcreptoverherface.“Someromantic,reservedlovingmanmightbuythatfortheirwife.”Fatherwinkedslylyatmomandme