2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit2MoralsandVirtuesSectionⅣ寫作指導(dǎo)學(xué)案含解析新人教版必修第三冊

PAGEUnit2MoralsandVirtuesSectionⅣ寫作指導(dǎo)寫作方法指導(dǎo)人物描寫寫作指導(dǎo)人物描寫是記敘文的一種。是對人物外貌、特性以及主要事跡和貢獻(xiàn)進(jìn)行描述。寫好人物描寫記敘文，應(yīng)留意以下幾點：首先，應(yīng)對此人進(jìn)行簡要的介紹，比如生平、事跡、職業(yè)等；其次，選擇出此人一生中比較重要的事跡進(jìn)行描寫，要盡可能具體，因為這影響到人們對他/她的整體評價；最終，對此人進(jìn)行客觀地評價，包括其人格、貢獻(xiàn)以及閃光點的評價。【常用表達(dá)】1．介紹人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征(1)Hehadfairhairandblueeyes.(2)AbrahamLincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.(3)Sheistallandslimwithbigeyesandcurlyhair.(4)Suewasayoungwomanwhowasstudyingart.(5)Heisagood-lookingandkind-heartedman.2．介紹人物的影響及人們對此人的評價(1)Hebecamefamousforhisnewtheory.(2)Thepeoplehadcometolovehimasaninspiringleader.(3)Weregardhimasourmodel.(4)LeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.精品展示請你依據(jù)表格里的內(nèi)容，用英語介紹簡·古道爾。姓名簡·古道爾(JaneGoodall)博士探討領(lǐng)域聞名的野生動物探討專家，尤其在探討黑猩猩方面性格虛心、坦誠、考慮周到成長過程1.童年時代，碰巧看到一本名叫《泰山和杜拉德博士》的書。受到極大鼓舞，準(zhǔn)備探討動物2．在那個時代，婦女受到卑視，但媽媽支持她3．20世紀(jì)60年頭，簡動身去非洲探討黑猩猩，用了25年多的時間視察和記錄黑猩猩的日?；顒?，完全弄懂了它們的行為成就1.成立了幾個組織，發(fā)起了一項愛護(hù)動物的運動2．在世界各地演講，呼吁年輕一代參與“根與芽”活動3．被授予了多個獎項參考詞匯：《泰山和杜拉德博士》TarzanandDrDoolittle；“根與芽”“ShootandRoot”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題謀篇】第一步明確要求1．確定體裁：本文為__記敘文__2．確定人稱：以第__三__人稱為主3．確定時態(tài)：以__一般現(xiàn)在時__和__一般過去時__為主4．話題：記敘女科學(xué)家在動物方面的探討其次步提煉要點1．成長過程2．成就3．總結(jié)第三步句式升級1．童年時代，她碰巧看到一本名叫《泰山和杜拉德博士》的書。(一般表達(dá))Whenshewasachild,shehappenedtoreadabookofTarzanandDrDoolittle.(高級表達(dá))Inherchildhood,she__cameacross__abookwhichiscalledTarzanandDrDoolittle__bychance__.2．她受到了極大的鼓舞，準(zhǔn)備將來探討動物。(一般表達(dá))Shewasencouragedandplannedtostudyanimalsinthefuture.(高級表達(dá))Greatlyinspiredbyit,Jane__intendedtostudy__animalsoneday.3．20世紀(jì)60年頭，簡動身去非洲探討黑猩猩，在那里她用了25年多的時間視察和記錄黑猩猩的日常活動。(一般表達(dá))Inthe1960s,JanewenttoAfricatostudychimps,andthereshespentover25yearsobservingandrecordingtheirdailyactivities.(高級表達(dá))Inthe1960s,Jane__movedoff__toAfricatostudychimps,__where__shespentover25yearsobservingandrecordingtheirdailyactivities.參考范文：DrJaneGoodall,afamousspecialist,studieswildanimals,especiallyinchimps.Sheisamodest,outspokenandconsideratewoman.Inherchildhood,shecameacrossabookwhichiscalledTarzanandDrDoolittlebychance.Greatlyinspiredbyit,Janeintendedtostudyanimalsoneday.Atthattime,womenwereoftenlookeddownonandonlyhermothersupportedherdecision.Inthe1960s,JanemovedofftoAfricatostudychimps,whereshespentover25yearsobservingandrecordingtheirdailyactivitiesandfullyunderstoodchimps’behaviour.Settingupseveralorganizationsandlaunchingacampaigntoprotectanimalshavemadeherfamousallovertheworld.Inrecentyears,Janehasdeliveredspeechesallovertheworldtocallonyoungergenerationstotakepartinherproject“ShootandRoot”．ManyprizeshavebeenawardedtoJaneGoodalltohonorhergreatachievements.亮點點評：本文行文流暢，描寫到位。諸如modest,outspoken，considerate，lookdownon和support等高級詞匯運用得當(dāng)。高級句式例如“Greatlyinspiredbyit”為過去分詞短語作狀語；“Settingupseveralorganizationsandlaunchingacampaigntoprotectanimals”是動名詞短語作主語，這些都運用得很好。eq\o(\s\up0(),\s\do0(J))即學(xué)即練2012年10月9日，巴基斯坦十五歲的女孩馬拉拉在放學(xué)回家途中遭到塔利班暗殺，頭部中槍?？祻?fù)后，馬拉拉不畏威逼，主動為巴基斯坦女童爭取受教化的權(quán)利。聯(lián)合國將每年的7月12日(她的生日)定為“馬拉拉日”(MalalaDay)。請依據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：1．簡述馬拉拉的故事；2．說明教化的重要性(至少兩點)；3．談?wù)剬W(xué)校教化對你的影響(至少兩點)。留意：詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。OnOctober9,2012，Malala,a15-year-oldPakistanigirl,wasshotintheheadbytheTalibanonherwayhomefromschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文：OnOctober9,2012，Malala,a15-year-oldPakistanigirl,wasshotintheheadbytheTalibanonherwayhomefromschool.However,theTalibanfailedtosilenceher.Afteramiraculousrecovery,shewascommittedtofightingforgirls’righttoeducation.Inhonorofherbraveryanddevotion,theUNdeclaredJuly12(herbirthday)asMalalaDay.DeeplyinspiredbythestoryofMalala,Ifirmlybelieveinthesignificanceofeducation.Educationenablespeopletoraisetheirvoicesforrightsandchangetheworldbycallingformoreequality.WhenIreflectonmyown