Unit 7 Will people have robots？-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年八年級上冊英語單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版）（學(xué)生版）

Unit7Willpeoplehaverobots？單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度科技發(fā)明了解未來的機器人科技，描述未來的生活本單元的話題是“未來的生活”，主要談?wù)搶ξ磥淼目捶ê痛蛩愕?。在寫作過程中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點：1.在描寫未來的生活時，要重點描述與現(xiàn)在相比發(fā)生的變化以及這些變化給生活帶來的影響；2.注意正確使用一般將來時，合理展開想象；能描述未來的生活1.能用“will"描述未來的生活，內(nèi)容包括居住環(huán)境、職業(yè)情況、生活水平、出行方式、日常飲食、科技發(fā)明等;2.能使用because，however,but,so,sothat等連詞拓展句子;3.能正確使用“therewill(not)be”句型對未來的生活進行預(yù)測;4.能正確使用more/less/fewer和其他形容詞的比較級描述將來的變化;5.寫作微技能:善用連詞，使文章邏輯清晰,思路流暢。第一段可以提出論點第二段可以進行細(xì)節(jié)描寫，圍繞題干要點進行展開和敘述。第三段可以進行適當(dāng)總結(jié)和展望，并結(jié)尾。【詞匯積累】1.prediction預(yù)言;預(yù)測2.future未來3.pollution污染 4.environment環(huán)境5.impossible不可能的6.playapart/role(in)參與；發(fā)揮作用7.falldown跌倒;倒塌8.overandoveragain多次；反復(fù)地9.hundredsof許多;大量10.lookfor尋找；尋求11.ingreatdanger處于極大的危險之中12.ontheearth在地球上13.worldpeace世界和平14.liveonaspacestation住在太空站上15.falldown突然倒下；跌倒；倒塌16.stayathomeoncomputers在家電腦上學(xué)習(xí)17.dothesamejobaspeople和人們做一樣的工作18.buildmoretallbuildings建更多的高樓19.flyrocketstothemoon乘火箭飛往月球三、句型積累1.Iwillbeapilotbythen.到那時我將會成為一名飛行員。2.Therewillbearobotinmyhousethathelpsmedohousework.在我家里將會有一個機器人幫我做家務(wù)。3.Infiftyyears,therewillbelotsofpeoplelivinginunderwaterhouses.4.Peoplewilllivetobe200yearsold.人們將活到200歲。5.Citieswillbemorecrowdedandpolluted.城市將來加擁擠，污染會更多。6.Wecanuselesswaterandplantmoretrees.我們可以少用水，多種樹。7.What’smore,thereisnoneedforchildrentogotoschooleverydayandtheywilllearnathome.8.Yourhousecanturnintoaflyingmachinewhenyouwanttotravel.9.Inthefuture,peoplewilltraveleverywherebyspaceship.10.Therearealreadyrobotsworkinginfactories.已經(jīng)有機器人在工廠里工作了。11.Theenvironmentwillbeingreatdanger.環(huán)境將處于極大的危險中。12.Everyoneshouldplayapartinsavingtheearth.每個人都應(yīng)該參與拯救地球?！糸_頭句①Whatwillourearthbelikein50years?②In2035，mylifewillbedifferentfromnow.③Whatdoyouthinkofthelifewillbelikeinthefuture?④I'dliketotalkaboutwhattheworldinthefuturewillbelikewithyou.◆中間句①Robotscancookdeliciousfoodanddoeverythingcarefully.②Therewillalsobemoretreesandthetreeswillevenbeonthebuildings.③What'smore，studentswillhavelessonsonlineeverydayinthefuture.④Therewillbelesspollutionin20years.⑤Peoplewillhaverobotsintheirhomes.◆結(jié)尾句①Instead，weneedtoworkhardtomakeourdreamscometrue.②Ibelievemylifein10yearswillbemuchbetterthannow.③Inaword，ourlifewillbebetterandbetter.【諺語積累】1．Youthisourfutureandourhope.青少年是我們的未來，是我們的希望。2．Ifwintercomes，canspringbefarbehind？冬天來了，春天還會遠嗎？【萬能寫作模板】說明利弊型介紹一種社會現(xiàn)象并引出論點Nowadays,_____________liketo_____________（社會現(xiàn)象）.Aboutthisdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.介紹一種社會現(xiàn)象并引出論點總結(jié)自己的觀點闡述缺點并論證闡述優(yōu)點并論證Ontheonehand,somepeoplethink_____________（優(yōu)點一）.Moreover_____________（優(yōu)點二）.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Firstly,_____________（缺點一）.Besides,_____________（缺點二）.總結(jié)自己的觀點闡述缺點并論證闡述優(yōu)點并論證Ithink_____________（我的觀點）.你們學(xué)校將舉辦英語寫作比賽。請你以“MyLifein2035”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文參賽，描述你對未來的憧憬?！簟魧忣}指導(dǎo)1．文體：說明文；2．時態(tài)：以一般將來時為主；3．注意事項：注意段落布局并恰當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句或連接詞來增加得分點。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點撥】【組句成篇】MyLifein2035In2035，mylifewillbedifferentfromnow.Peoplewillhaverobotsintheirhomes.Therobotswillhelpustodoalotofhousework.Theycancookdeliciousfoodanddoeverythingcarefully.Theroadwillbecleanandtheairwillbefresh.Therewillalsobemoretreesandthetreeswillevenbeonthebuildings.In2035，IthinkIwillbeanartist.Robotswilldoallthehousework.Sopeoplewillhavemorefreetime.Theywilllookforbeautifulartworksmoreoften，soIwillbetheonewhomakesartworks.However，wecan'tjustkeepdreaming.Instead，weneedtoworkhardtomakeourdreamscometrue.一、詞匯積累1.空閑時間________________2.免費的_________________3.活到200歲________________4.在未來__________________________5.關(guān)于未來的預(yù)言_____________________6.處于極度危險之中_________________7.一百年之后_____________________8.世界和平____________________9.在海里_______________________10.看到藍天______________________11.更多的污染_____________________12.更少的自由時間__________________13.更少的樹_______________________14.我希望如此。______________________15.50年后_______________________16.和人類做同樣的工作_____________________17.一起度過時光___________________________18.這條街對面_______________________________19.在公寓里___________________________20.編程人員__________________________21.乘火箭飛往月球__________________22.住在太空站______________________23.乘火車去上學(xué)______________________24.人類的仆人______________________25.幫忙做家務(wù)_________________________26.制造汽車_____________________________27.反復(fù)地______________________28.感到厭煩_____________________29.看起來像人類_____________________30.比如_________________________31.不同意某人_____________________32.幾百年_________________________33.倒塌，落下___________________________34.似乎不可能_____________________________35.從某方面來說_____________________________36.作為一名記者_____________________________37.不適合養(yǎng)寵物________________________38.在工作日______________________________39.穿戴整潔______________________________40.業(yè)余活動__________________________二、句子積累1.人人都應(yīng)該貢獻自己的一份力量來拯救地球。______________________________________________________2.未來是什么樣子？_______________________________________________________3.我認(rèn)為會有更多的污染。_________________________________________________________4.他們幫助做家務(wù)并且做一些像在骯臟或危險的地方干活之類的工作。___________________________________________________________5.現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)有在工廠里工作的機器人了。______________________________________________________________6.科學(xué)家們正在努力使機器人更像人類并且能做與我們一樣的事情。______________________________________________________________7.然而，他們承認(rèn)這可能會花費數(shù)百年時間。______________________________________________________________8.如果里面有人的建筑物突然倒塌，這些蛇形機器人就能幫助尋找建筑物下的人。_______________________________________________________________________9.20年后，我想我將成為一名報社記者。__________________________________________________________10.我認(rèn)為學(xué)生們不再需要字典因為機器人會告訴他們單詞的含義。_________________________________________________________11.你也應(yīng)當(dāng)記住生活中既會有好事也會有壞事。____________________________________________________三、以讀促寫根據(jù)所給漢語或首字母提示，寫出空白處所缺單詞的正確形式。每空限填一詞。完成后請找出文中的比較級并思考其在文中的用法。Lifeinthef______1____isdifferentfromnow.Forexample，therewon'tbe___2_____(紙)moneyanymore.PeoplewillshopontheInternet.AndtheInter-netwillplayanimportantp____3_____inourdailylife.Ofcoursethenet______4_____(環(huán)境)willnever:be____5_____(危險的).Asforeducation,there____6_____(甚至)won'tbeanyschoolsonthe_____7___(地球).Studentswillhavelessonsathomeoncomputer._____8____(很可能，大概)teacherswillteachthemandgiveouthomeworkontheInternet.ChildrenhandintheirhomeworkandtheycanalsocheckitbythemselvesontheNet.Todaythereare___9_______(已經(jīng))robotsworkingindifferent____10_____(工廠)doingsimplejobsalldayandallnight.We____11_______(相信)therewillbemoremachinesinourfuturelife.Robotswilldoalltheboringandtiringhouseworkfor_____12____(人類).Parentswon'tcookorwashclothes.Acookingr___13_____willkbreakfastandaservantrobotwillwakeusupandservebreakfasttous.Thankstorobots,it's____14_____(可能的)thatpeoplewillbemuchfreer.Therewillbemore_____15_____(假期).Familieswillbeabletospendmoretimestayingtogether.___16________(在…期間)theirholidays,peoplewillgosightseeingortravelingaroundtheworldmoreoften.【參考答案】一、詞匯積累1.freetime2.befree3.livetobe200yearsold4.inthefuture5.thepredictionaboutthefuture6.beingreatdanger7.in100years8.worldpeace9.inthesea10.seeblueskies11.morepollution12.lessfreetime13.fewertrees14.Ihopeso.15.in50years16.dothesamejobsaspeople17.spendtimetogether18.acrossthestreet19.inanapartment20.computerprogrammer21.flyrocketstothemoon22.liveonaspacestation23.takethetraintoschool24.humanservants25.helpwiththehousework26.buildcars27.overandoveragain28.getbored29.looklikehumans30.forexample31.disagreewithsb32.hundredsofyears33.falldown34.seemimpossible35.atsomepoint36.asareporter37.benogoodforpets38.duringtheweek39.wearsmartclothes40.freetimeactivities二、句子積累1.Everyoneshouldplayapartinsavingtheearth.2.Whatwillthefuturebelike?3.Ithinktherewillbemorepollution.4.Theyhelpwiththehouseworkanddojobslikeworkingindirtyordangerousplaces.5.Todaytherearealreadyrobotsworkinginfactories．6.Scientistsarenowtryingtomakerobotslooklikehumansanddothesamethingsaswedo.7.However,theyagreeitmaytakehundredsofyears.8.Ifbuildingsfalldownwithpeopleinside,thesesnakerobotscanhelplookforpeopleunderthebuildings.9.In20years,IthinkI'llbeanewspaperreporter.10.Ithinkstudentswon'tneeddictionariesbecausearobotwilltellthemthemeaningsofwords.11.Youshouldalsorememberthattherewillbebothgoodandbadthingsinlife.三、以讀促寫1.future2.paper3.part4.environment5.dangerous6.even7.earth8.Probably9.already10.factories11.believe12.humans13.robot14.possible15.holidays16.During（一）你們班下周將召開一次班會，主題是“2050年的生活”。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示寫一份發(fā)言稿。提示：①人口迅速增長；②工作時間縮短，娛樂和旅游的時間將更加充裕；③機器人做大量工作，很多人面臨失業(yè)。要求：80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))，短文要包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Lifein2050Lifein2050willbedifferentfromnow,becausechanges_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解題思路】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點。【寫作步驟】第一步，補充所給內(nèi)容，引出變化；第二步，具體闡述2050年生活，包括提示的三個要點?！緷M分作文】Lifein2050Lifein2050willbedifferentfromnow,becausechangeswilltakeplace.Butwhatwillthechangesbe?Thepopulationisgrowingfast.Therewillbemoreandmorepeopleintheworldandmostofthemwilllivelongerthannow.Peoplewillworkfewerhoursthantheydonow,andtheywillhavemorefreetimeforsports,watchingTVandtraveling.Manypeoplewillgotoothercountriesforholidays.Workinthefuturewillbedifferent,too.Lotsofdangerousandhardworkwillbedonebyrobots.Becauseofthis,manypeoplewillnothaveenoughworktodo.Thiswillbeaproblem.【亮點詞匯】①mostof大多數(shù)②lotsof大量的③becauseof因為【高分句型】①Therewillbemoreandmorepeopleintheworldandmostofthemwilllivelongerthannow.（比較級句型）②Lotsofdangerousandhardworkwillbedonebyrobots.（被動語態(tài)）（二）請以“MyLifein20Years”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。寫作要求：1.語言流暢，層次清晰。書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。2.詞數(shù)80-100詞。3.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生本人的學(xué)校名稱和姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解題思路】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，引出本文主題；第二步，介紹20年之后的生活；第三步，總結(jié)概括?！緷M分作文】MyLifein20YearsI’malwaysworkinghardforabrightfuture.Iimaginewhatmylifein20yearswillbelike.In20years,Iwillplayanimportantroleinmyfamily.Iwilltakegoodcareofmyparents.Inmyfreetime,Iwillgettogetherwithmyfriendstoenjoylife.What’smore,Iwillhaveajobandtakeonnewchallenges.Iwillbeadoctorandhelppatients.Lastbutnotleast,maybeIwillgetarobottohelpmeinmydailylife.Inaword,Ihopemylifein20yearswillbebetterandbetter.【亮點詞匯】①playanimportantrolein在……中起重要作用②takegoodcareof好好照顧③inmyfreetime在我的閑暇時間【高分句型】Iimaginewhatmylifein20yearswillbelike.（what引導(dǎo)賓語從句）（三）請以“MyLifeinTenYears”為題，根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。提示短文須包含下列要點：1.Whatdoyouwanttobeintenyears?Andwhy?2.Wherewillyouliveintenyears?Andwhy?3.Saysomethingaboutyourfamilyoryourfreetimeactivitiesintenyears.4.Whatshouldyoudotoachieveyourdreams?注意：短文中，不得出現(xiàn)任何與考生本人有關(guān)的真實人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。MyLifeinTenYears________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解題思路】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中關(guān)于“未來的職業(yè)及原因、居住地及原因、十年后你的家庭或業(yè)余時間的活動和怎么去實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)”的要點，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“MyLifeinTenYears”這個題目直接來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體描述寫作內(nèi)容。從“未來的職業(yè)及原因、居住地及原因、十年后你的家庭或業(yè)余時間的活動和怎么去實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)”幾個方面重點介紹十年后我的生活；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達“十年后我的生活會越來越好”的愿望?！緷M分作文】MyLifeinTenYearsIntenyears,IthinkI’llbeareporter.IwillliveinanapartmentwithmysisterbecauseIdon’tlikelivingalone.AndIcanplaywithherinmyapartment.Sointenyears,Iwillbeagoodreporter.IwillmeetalotofinterestingandfamouspeopleandIwillgotoanotherplaceonbusiness.Intenyears,Iwillhavemanydifferentpets.MaybeIwillkeepapetturtle.IthinkIwillgoshoppingwithmysisteraslongasIhavetime.AndIwillgotoLondononmyvacation.So,I’llworkhardtoachievemydream.I’msuremylifeintenyearswillbebetterandbetter!.【亮點詞匯】①intenyears十年后②playwith和……玩③aslongas只要④betterandbetter越來越好【高分句型】①Intenyears,IthinkI’llbeareporter.（intenyears十年后，用于將來時句型；Ithink+賓語從句）②IthinkIwillgoshoppingwithmysisteraslongasIhavetime.（復(fù)合句：as……as引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句句型）（四）科技改變未來，學(xué)校正在開展主題為《暢想未來》的征文活動。請根據(jù)以下圖示寫一篇英語短文，進行投稿，談?wù)勀銓ξ磥砩畹臅诚?。注意?.詞數(shù)80-120個左右（文章開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)，請根據(jù)要點提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）；2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,lifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferent.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解題思路】本文采用一般將來時，人稱以第三人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段敘述環(huán)境、科技和太空方面未來的情況；最后一段表達自己的希望。寫作時做到無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤?！緷M分作文】Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,lifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferent.Ourenvironmentwillbemuchbetter.Therewillbenomorepollutionbecausemoregreenenergieswillbedeveloped.Newkindsofplantsandflowerswillbegrowntomaketheearthmorebeautiful.Besides,higherandnewertechnologywillcomealongtomakeourlifemorecomfortable.Robotswillbecommonlyusedinallfields.Withmovinghouses,peopledon’thavetostayinhotelsevenwhentravelling.Theexplorationofspacewillbeanotherbigprogress.Ourdreamtotravelinspacefreelyandlearnmoreaboutotherplanetswillcometrue.Moreexcitingly,makingfriendswithalienswillalsobepossible.Lifeinthefuturewillbefantastic.HowIwishitwouldcomesoon!（五）隨著科技的發(fā)展，未來人們的生活將會發(fā)生很大的變化。ShenzhenDaily正開展以“OurFutureLife”為主題的征文活動，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文投稿，內(nèi)容包含以下要點：1.交通不再擁擠，因為人們擁有可以飛的摩托車；2.越來越多的人去月球度假；3.越來越多的機器人為我們服務(wù)，例如：①……；②……；4.為了未來的美好生活，你會做些什么準(zhǔn)備。（至少2點）要求：1.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；4.標(biāo)點正確，書面整潔。提示詞：擁擠的heavy；摩托車motorbikeOurFutureLifeWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解題思路】本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來描述未來生活；時態(tài)采用一般將來時；要包含所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫出自己的準(zhǔn)備內(nèi)容，同時各要點間要保證條理清晰。【滿分作文】OurFutureLifeWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.People’sliveswillchangealotinthefuture.Inthefuture,therewillbeintheworld.Sotheremaynotbeenoughfoodandwaterforsomanypeople.Butthetrafficwillnotbeheavyanymorebecausepeoplecangobyflyingmotorbikes.AndmoreandmorepeoplewillgoonavacationtotheMoonbyspaceship.Houses,hospitals,schoolswillbebuiltonotherplanets,too.Peoplewilldolessworkinthefuture,too.Robotswilldothedangerousandhardworkforpeople.Tohaveabetterinthefuture,I’mgoingtostudyhardertohavemoreknowledge.Atthesametime,Ialsowanttohavemoretimeforsportstohaveahealthierbody.Ibelieveourlifewillbebetterandbetter.1.（2023·江蘇徐州·中考真題）假定你是李華。你班交換留學(xué)生Simon即將返校，他對“校園科技周”非常感興趣，他寫了一封郵件向你詢問相關(guān)信息，請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容和所給提示寫封回信。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.郵件需包括所給要點，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容完整通順；3.郵件中不得泄露個人信息；4.請按照如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。HiSimon,I’mveryhappytotellyouaboutourSchoolTechnologyWeek.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’msureyouwillenjoytheTechnologyWeek.LiHua【解題思路】①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點。【寫作步驟】第一步，根據(jù)開頭，介紹科技周開始的時間；第二步，根據(jù)Simon的問題提示，介紹科技周的活動；第三步，介紹Simon感興趣的機器人活動?！緷M分作文】HiSimon,I’mveryhappytotellyouaboutourSchoolTechnologyWeek.ItwillbeheldintheNo.2buildingintwoweeks.TherearemanydifferentkindsofactivitiesintheWeek.First,youcanwatchsciencefictionfilmslikeTheWanderingEarth.Second,somestudentswilltellstoriesaboutscientistslikeDengJiaxian.What’smore,ourschoolwillsharethelatestnewsabouttechnologyandshowcreativeideasaboutrobots.Youarecrazyaboutrobots,right?Great,therearesomesmartrobotshowsyoucantakepartinhere.Thenyoucanseeandexperiencehowexcellenttheyare.I’msureyouwillenjoytheTechnologyWeek.LiHua【亮點詞匯】①differentkindsof不同種類的②takepartin參加【高分句型】The