【讀后續(xù)寫】 2021年6月全國新高考卷Ⅰ讀后續(xù)寫講評 名師課件-吳俊峰

2021年6月全國新高考Ⅰ卷

基于“沖突-危機-解決模式”敘事元素和結(jié)構(gòu)的讀后續(xù)寫講評AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE浙江省常山一中吳俊峰2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）1.基于敘事特征，深度解讀語篇2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）高考真題第二節(jié)(滿分25分)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,

theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）敘事元素和結(jié)構(gòu)

Narrativeelementsandstructure首尾呼應(yīng)inclusio懸念suspense人物性格

personalcharacter故事背景

setting鋪墊foreshadowing沖突

conflict“沖突-危機-解決模式”敘事元素和結(jié)構(gòu)AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）Readandanalyze

thematerialWhenWhoWhat故事背景

settingMother'sDay;at6amMomwasasleepthetwins(Jeff-aboy,Jenna-agirl)plannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridgetopleaseMother技巧點撥Setting

Settinginvolvestime,place,weather,andsurroundings,allhelpingtocreateaspecificmoodoratmosphere.Torevealtheseelements,writersdependondescriptivewriting,callingonallthesensestoconveyanimagetothereader.Gooddescriptionwillinvolveasmanyofthe5sensesaspossible.AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）Jeff

JennaMother人物性格

personalcharacterlovethechildrenandbeproudofthemsmart,funny,childish,imitative,lovetheirMotherstaycalmReadandanalyze

thematerialAMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）理順敘事元素，讀懂伏筆語言順理協(xié)同成章，呼應(yīng)對應(yīng)情節(jié)AMother'sDaySurprise(Titleofthetext)

HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbe

鋪墊/伏筆/暗示foreshadowingReadandanalyze

thematerialWouldthetwinsgiveMomabigsurprise?HowdidMotherfeelintheend?2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）Foreshadowing技巧點撥

伏筆(暗示/鋪墊)是一個作者的暗示或線索表明事件發(fā)生后的故事。并非所有的鋪墊都是顯而易見的。通常情況下，未來事件只是通過對話、描述或人物的態(tài)度和反應(yīng)來暗示。

伏筆通常有兩個目的。它通過提出問題來營造懸念，鼓勵讀者繼續(xù)下去，找到更多關(guān)于即將發(fā)生的事件的信息。伏筆也是一種讓故事更加可信的方法，它可以讓讀者對接下來發(fā)生的事件有所準(zhǔn)備。伏筆/鋪墊通常用于引導(dǎo)讀者向正確的方向;

然而，為了有一個出人意料的結(jié)局，有時也會給出一些提示讓讀者遠離實際的結(jié)論。

Foreshadowingisanauthor‘suseofhintsorcluestosuggesteventsthatwilloccurlaterin

thestory.

Notallforeshadowingisobvious.

Frequently,futureeventsaremerelyhintedatthroughdialogue,description,ortheattitudesandreactionsofthecharacters.

Foreshadowingfrequentlyservestwopurposes.Itbuildssuspensebyraisingquestionsthatencouragethereadertogoonandfindoutmoreabouttheeventthatisbeingforeshadowed.Foreshadowingisalsoameansofmakinganarrativemorebelievablebypartiallypreparingthereaderforeventswhicharetofollow.

Foreshadowingisusuallyusedtoleadthereaderintherightdirection;however,

hintsaresometimesgiventoleadthereaderawayfromtheactualconclusioninordertohaveasurpriseending.AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.suspensethebreadturnedblackconflicttheporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.

touchedthehotburnerconflict沖突和懸念

conflictandsuspenseReadandanalyze

thematerial2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）敘事元素和結(jié)構(gòu)

Narrativeelementsandstructure首尾呼應(yīng)inclusio懸念suspense人物性格

personalcharacter故事背景

setting鋪墊foreshadowing沖突

conflictMother'sDay;ThetwinsplannedtomakebreakfasttopleaseMothersmart,funny,childish,imitative,lovetheirMotherAMother'sDaySurpriseTherewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.thebreadturnedblack;theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire;touchedthehotburnerHowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbe.“沖突-危機-解決模式”敘事元素和結(jié)構(gòu)2.設(shè)置問題驅(qū)動，合理發(fā)展情節(jié)AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①

②...EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

①Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,

theirfatherappeared.

②Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）

Q1.WhatwasFather’sfirstinstinctwhenfacingthemess?Q2.Howdidthetwinsexplaintheirplantotheirfather?Q3.WhatdidFatherdotohelpthetwinstomakedeliciousFrenchtoastandchickenporridge?

設(shè)置問題驅(qū)動

合理發(fā)展情節(jié)AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

①Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,

theirfatherappeared.

②Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）Q1.WhatwasMother’sfirstinstinctwhenwakingup?Q2.WouldthetwinsgiveMomabigsurprise?Q3.HowdidMotherfeel?Howcanyoudesigntheendingmoreappealingandmeaningful?

設(shè)置問題驅(qū)動

合理發(fā)展情節(jié)3.激活話題詞匯，細化行為情感AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

①Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,

theirfatherappeared.

②Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Storymountain

letthe

emotionschangelogicallyexcitementpleasedandproudindisappointmentpanickedacryofpainexcitementgoingsmoothlygoingsmoothlypanickedacryofpainindisappointmentsurprised,pleasedandproudencouragedandinspiredfatherappearedsurpriseAMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

①Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,

theirfatherappeared.

2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

①Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,

theirfatherappeared.

Seeingtheblackbreadandthespilledporridge,heknewwhattheywereupto.“Don’tbepanicked!”calmandmollified,hehandedeachoneawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessquickly.Afterfiguringouttheirsecret,Father,surprisingly,joinedthetwinsinpreparingtheMother’sDaysurprise.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadmadeFrenchtoastandcookedchickenporridge.Thenhesneakedbacktobed.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addingacardtheyhadmade,andthencarriedthetray,

tiptoeingupstairstotheirparents’bedroom.激活話題詞匯

細化“恐慌”行為和情緒AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

①Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,

theirfatherappeared.

2021年6月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新高考Ⅰ卷）

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairs

quietly

tothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

①Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,

theirfatherappeared.

Seeingtheblackbreadandthespilledporridge,heknewwhattheywereupto.“Don’tbepanicked!”calmandmollified,hehandedeachoneawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessquickly.Afterfiguringouttheirsecret,Father,surprisingly,joinedthetwinsinpreparingtheMother’sDaysurprise.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadmadeFrenchtoastandcookedchickenporridge.Thenhesneakedbacktobed.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addingacardtheyhadmade,andthencarriedthetray,

tiptoeing

upstairstotheirparents’bedroom.激活話題詞匯

細化“驚喜”行為和情緒AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

②

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturned