2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit1TeenagelifeSectionⅦReadingforWriting-建議信學(xué)案新人教版必修第一冊

PAGEPAGE1SectionⅦReadingforWriting——建議信本單元的寫作任務(wù)是讀一封建議信，了解建議信的結(jié)構(gòu)和語言特征，然后再寫一封建議信。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowriteafterthemodel10September，2024DearWorriedFriend，Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend，ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou，sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Allthebest，SusanLuo(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①recommendvt.建議②unhealthyadj.不健康的③encouragevt.激勵④usefuladj.有用的⑤advicevt.忠告，建議⑥inone’ssparetime閑暇⑦lookforwardto盼望，期望⑧beworriedabout對……擔(dān)憂⑨beattractedto寵愛⑩beaddictedto對……上癮?concentrateon集中精力于?begoodfor/dogoodto對……有好處?makefriends交摯友?hearfrom收到……的來信?enjoyoneself/havefun玩得開心Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李華，你的好摯友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請依據(jù)下面提示給她寫一封建議信。1.要交摯友首先要做一個摯友；2.要和摯友同甘共苦；患難之中的摯友才是真正的摯友；3.友情須要時間和投入(effort)。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：thepurposeoftheletterParagraph2：thesuggestionsthatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’shopeStep2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①tip/advice/suggestionn.建議②situationn.狀況③makefriends交摯友④havetrouble/difficultyindoing...做……有困難⑤takeone’sadvice接受某人的建議⑥sharehappinessandsorrowwith...和……同甘共苦⑦callfor須要⑧putone’sheartinto一心一意2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很愧疚。(havetroublein...)Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.②假如你接受我的建議，變更這種狀況是很簡潔的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.③要交摯友為什么不先做一個摯友呢？(whynot)Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?④你和摯友同甘共苦莫非不是一個好辦法嗎？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?⑤正如一句諺語說的，患難之中的摯友才是真正的摯友。(asasayinggoes)Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition，lastbutnotleast15Sept，2024DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest.Yours，LiHuaⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?□3.Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasytoread?篇章結(jié)構(gòu)Thefirstpart：thebeginning(dateandgreeting)oftheletterThesecondpart：thebody(fact-stating，youropinionandhope)oftheletterThethirdpart：theend(wishesandsignature)oftheletter亮點表達(dá)1.建議信開頭常用句式①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人溝通方面有些麻煩，你也可能常常感到孤獨。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很興奮收到你就……征求建議的來信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.這里有幫助你的一些建議。2.表達(dá)建議常用句式①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，為什么不參與一個俱樂部？假如你這樣做的話，就會交到摯友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你應(yīng)當(dāng)盡力與人交談。這樣，你會感覺好點。③Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，假如你看書或聽音樂將會是個不錯的辦法。通過這樣做，你會使自己安靜下來。④Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最終但同等重要的是，你應(yīng)當(dāng)先和她談一談。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看來，你們應(yīng)當(dāng)相互幫助。3.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你會發(fā)覺這些方法有用。②Astimegoeson，peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheaboveadvice.假如你遵從以上建議，隨著時間的推移，人們會更加了解你，會情愿和你交摯友的。③Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice，you’llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我信任，假如你聽從我的建議，你會和同學(xué)們相處好的。寫作技巧連句成篇，行