初中英語人教版八年級(jí)上冊(cè)Grade 8 Writing(寫作訓(xùn)練課一) .ppt

1、八年級(jí) 寫作訓(xùn)練課（一） Writing,Dongfang Foreign Language Experimental School - By Rebecca（張則）,Listen to their own introductions and guesswho he or she is in our class.,1,2,3,4,Lead-in: Guessing Game,朱聰鎮(zhèn),敖天厚,龐水瑩,陳婷婷,Task 1,Can you introduce yourself ?,外貌特征：I am(tall/thin/heavy/short). I have long/short hair. /

2、 I wear glasses.,擅長(zhǎng)/愛好：I am good at(English/math/ Chinese). I do well in.I am good at playing I like/love /enjoy (swimming /singing/ dancing/shopping). ,性格：I _outgoing /quiet /friendly. 品質(zhì)：I _(be) ready to help others.,自我評(píng)價(jià)：I think I,形容詞前加 相應(yīng)的be,實(shí)義動(dòng)詞原形前不能加be,am,am,Personal Flash Show 閃秀,Introduce yo

3、ur friend,Task 2:,假如Lily 是你最好的朋友，請(qǐng)你從以下幾個(gè)方面向大家介紹她： 1.和你一樣高；大眼睛黑頭發(fā)。 2.與你愛好相同，都喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)；身體很健康，每周鍛煉兩三次；有時(shí)上網(wǎng)；喜歡看英文電影。 3.樂于助人，幫我學(xué)數(shù)學(xué)。 4.聰明，成績(jī)好。在校學(xué)習(xí)努力，應(yīng)向她學(xué)習(xí)。,思路點(diǎn)撥,第一步：審 題 人稱 時(shí)態(tài),第二步：列 提綱,第一段 介紹她，開篇點(diǎn)題。,第二段 描述她的外貌，愛好等情況。,第三段 總結(jié)全文，畫龍點(diǎn)睛談感受。,列出相關(guān)的詞匯或句型：,第三人稱 （she）,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)(動(dòng)詞用三單),第二步：列出相關(guān)的詞匯或短語：,1.最好的朋友,2.一樣高,3.有相同愛好,4.

4、愛運(yùn)動(dòng),5.每周鍛煉三次,6.上網(wǎng),7.樂于助人,8.幫我數(shù)學(xué),9.成績(jī)好,10.在校學(xué)習(xí)刻苦,11.喜歡看英語電影,12.向她學(xué)習(xí),best friend,as tall as,have the same hobby,love/like/enjoy doing sports,exercise three times a week,use the Internet,/ go online,be ready to help others,help me with math,get / have good grades,work/study hard at school,enjoy/like wa

5、tching English movies,learn from her,第三步：加 主語及修飾語等，寫出完整句子。 第四步：連 運(yùn)用and, so, however, though/although, not onlybut also,first, then等連接詞將以上要點(diǎn)句子連成文章，并注意句型多樣化。,范文如下: My best friend,第五步：美 檢查美化(書寫工整，拼寫錯(cuò)誤，大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)),Lily is my best friend. I like her very much. She is as tall as me. She has big eyes and black

6、 hair. We have the same hobby and love doing sports. She also likes watching English movies. She exercises twice or three times a week. S0 she is very healthy.,She is not only friendly but also ready to help others. And she often helps me with math. She is smart and she studies hard at school . Thou

7、gh she sometimes goes online，she always gets good grades. I should learn from her.,常見錯(cuò)誤：,一、主謂不一致,My favorite sports is running and swimming .,are,二、缺少動(dòng)詞,I happy if I can visit the Great Wall .,三、缺介少冠,Because heavy rain, we cant play soccer.,the,of,When you across the street, you should be careful.,c

8、ome,will be,四、詞性誤用,She often by bus to school.,takes the/a,五、代詞混淆,I mother and I went shopping yesterday.,My,六、句序混亂,We every day at school do sports.,We do sports at school every day.,Task 3 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)你的生活情況寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：,1.你的生活方式是否健康；,2.你有哪些好的和不好的生活習(xí)慣；,3.你在平常都做些什么；,4.談?wù)勀銓?duì)自己生活方式的看法。,寫作要求：,1.不能抄襲原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校

9、的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名； 2.語句連貫，注意分段，80詞左右。,思路點(diǎn)撥,第一步：審題 人稱 時(shí)態(tài),第二步：列提綱,第一段 介紹自己，開篇點(diǎn)題。,第二段 描述生活習(xí)慣以及平常的活動(dòng)。,第三段 總結(jié)全文，畫龍點(diǎn)睛談感受。,第二步：列出相關(guān)的詞匯或句型：,第一人稱（I）,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)（動(dòng)詞原形）,第二步：列出相關(guān)的詞匯或句型：,1.健康的生活方式,2.早睡早起,3.上網(wǎng),8.看電視,5.花時(shí)間和朋友一起,4.熬夜,6.吃垃圾食品,7.幫助做家務(wù),9.至少,10.對(duì)有好處,11.,這有益于身心健康,healthy lifestyle,go on the Internet; go online,wa

10、tch TV,spend time with friends,stay up late,eat junk food,help with housework,at least,be good for,It is healthy for the mind and body.,go to bed early and get up early,第四步：連 運(yùn)用and, so, or, however, though/although, not onlybut also,first, then等連接詞將以上要點(diǎn)連成文章，并注意句型多樣化。,第五步：美 檢查美化,第三步：加 主語及修飾詞等,寫出完整句子。

11、,Im a 14-year-old middle school student. I will tell you something about my habits. I always go to bed early，so I am never late for class. I sleep eight hours every night. I do sports at least three times a week. I often help my mother with housework. However, I have some bad habits. I eat lots of j

12、unk food. Its bad for my health. I think I should eat it less. Everyone should pay attention to our health.,同桌互評(píng)作文： 作文等級(jí)： A 13-15分 B 10-12分 C 7-9分 D 4-6分 E 0-3分,評(píng)改項(xiàng)目：書寫、 扣題、 要點(diǎn)、 時(shí)態(tài)、 人稱、 單復(fù)數(shù)、 習(xí)慣用法、 語序等,突破方法：,1.認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁，人稱，時(shí)態(tài) 研讀所給的中英文文字，圖畫或圖表。,2.緊扣主題，組織要點(diǎn) 逐個(gè)、無缺地列出要點(diǎn)，確定句型。,3.選詞造句，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確 正確使用詞匯、短語、句型以及時(shí)態(tài)

13、、語態(tài)，避免詞法,句法,拼寫錯(cuò)誤。,4.連句成文，行文連貫 統(tǒng)籌安排，恰當(dāng)使用并列，轉(zhuǎn)折，遞進(jìn)或因果等的連接詞。,5.通讀全文， 檢查修正。要點(diǎn)是否遺漏，詞法句法，單詞拼寫，大小寫，詞數(shù)。,新的一年就要來臨了，你準(zhǔn)備好了嗎?請(qǐng)你以 新年決心為題寫一篇文章。 內(nèi)容包括： 1.你有什么樣的新年決心？ 2.你打算如何去實(shí)現(xiàn)它們？ 寫作要求： 1.不能抄襲原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。 2.語句連貫，注意分段，80詞左右。,Homework,思路點(diǎn)撥：,第一步：審題 人稱 第一人稱（I） 時(shí)態(tài) 一般將來時(shí),第二步：列提綱,第一段 開篇點(diǎn)題，告知新年的決心。,如：1) New Y

14、ear is coming. 2)Im going to makeresolutions. 3)Im going to do a lot of things next year.,第二段 針對(duì)不同決心描述不同的實(shí)現(xiàn)方式。,如：1）First， I want to do 2)So I am going to do 3)The first resolution is about,第三段 談?wù)剬?duì)自己的期望 如：I hopewill come true.,第二步：列出主要的單詞，短語或句型。,1.學(xué)習(xí)彈鋼琴 2.提高英語 3.和談話 4.做運(yùn)動(dòng) 5.取得好成績(jī) 6.吃更健康的食物 7.練習(xí)跳舞 8.加入舞蹈俱樂部,learn to play the violin,improve my English,talk with,do sports,get good grades,eat more health