建議信的寫作模式

1、A VISIT TO THE DOCTORListen to the text.(D=Doctor L=Li Yue)D: Hello, Li Yue. What can I do for you today?L: Well, Ive been getting a lot of _ lately.D: Mmm?Listen again and fill in the blanks.headachesL: And I feel _ all the time. The problem is that Ive got so much _ to do, but my head aches and I

2、keep wanting to go to _.D: I see. Are you sleeping _?L: No, not really.tiredworksleepwellD: Mmmm. Now lets see. Youre _ the College Entrance Exams, arent you?L: Yes, thats right. Ive got so much to do _ I cant do it when Im feeling so _.D: Well. Dont get _. Well sort it out.L: I hope so.preparingbut

3、illupsetD: OK. Well, I have to do some _ to rule out anything _, but I really think the problem is _.L: Stress?D: Yes. How much time do you _ each day?L: I dont know. As _ as I can. D: And how much time do you take to _? testsphysicalstressstudymuchrelaxL: None at all. I dont have _ time.D: I know i

4、ts difficult. I remember when I was studying for _, study seemed more _ than anything else. But you will actually do better in your exams if you _ study with some relaxation.L: Really?relaxingexamsimportantbalanceD: Yes. Look, how about this? Let me do these tests and then you come back in a few day

5、s for the _. If the problem is stress, we can talk about _ to relax and still get your schoolwork done.L: Thatll be good. Thanks.D: Not at all. And in the _, relax a bit.L: Ill try.resultswaysmeantimeListen to Part 1.LI YUES TALK TO THE STUDENTSPart 1 Good morning, teachers and _, and thank you for

6、coming to listen to me. I know this is a very _ time for you now that you are preparing for the College Entrance Examinations. So I want to tell you about what _ to me last year, and hope you dont make theListen again and fill in the blanks.busyhappenedstudents_ I made. Are some of you worried about

7、 your exams? Well, I am here today to tell you that its OK to worry a little, but be _ about worrying too much. You see, what I did was to worry so much that all I did was study from _ to _. I never _ properly and in the end Imistakecarefulmorningnightrelaxedbecame ill. I started to have _, I didnt

8、sleep well, I didnt feel like _ and I was tired all the time. In the end I couldnt study any more _ my head hurt so badly that I kept _ asleep in class. Finally I went to the _ and thats how I learned about stress.headacheseatingbecausefallingdoctorListen to Part 2.Part 2 The doctor _ to me that to

9、do well in your exams you should keep _ balance in your life. If you dont take time out to relax and _ yourself, you may become ill. You must balance work with _. You need to have fun. You need to keep in _ with your friendsand do some _ every day. Listen again and fill in the blanks.explainedaenjoy

10、resttouchexerciseYou may be _ to find how much better you feel after even a small _. So, my advice to you today is to think carefully about your _ and _ health. Just take _ minutes a day to get some fresh air, do some exercise or meet friends. That will make all the _. surprisedbreakphysicalmental30

11、differenceDont feel _ if you see a film, go riding in the country or go _ once a week. I promise you it will _ your schoolwork. Thank you for listening to me and I hope you find my advice _. (sound of audience clapping)guiltyhikinghelpusefulThe symptoms of stress I was tired all the time have headac

12、hes I didnt sleep well I didnt feel like eatingThe cause of Li Yues problemShe worried too muchStudy seemed more important than anything else.All she did was study from day to night. She never relaxed properlyShe is preparing for the College Entrance ExaminationsShe has suffered too much pressure./

13、she is loaded with too much pressure.A summary of the advice given by Li Yue balance work with rest / study with entertainment / relaxation. have funEg: see a film; go riding in the country;go hiking once a week keep in touch with your friends /meet friends do some exercise regularly Eg: take 30 min

14、utes a day to get some fresh air19Have a try1.whom to write toWrite the beginning of the letter and make it acceptable.(two or three sentences)Dear Tom:1. I am sorry to know that 2. I know you have trouble in .假設(shè)你的朋友李華正在讀高三，他來信說最近學(xué)習(xí)太緊假設(shè)你的朋友李華正在讀高三，他來信說最近學(xué)習(xí)太緊張，睡不好，吃不好。請你根據(jù)所給情況給他寫一封建張，睡不好，吃不好。請你根據(jù)所給情況

15、給他寫一封建議信。議信。Part 1:Beginningfeel stressed outend up with bad sleep and bad appetiteshow your understanding show your feelings 20Have a try 2. what to write for (purpose)Write the purpose of the letter and make it acceptable.Dear Tom:(Beginning) I am sorry to know that I am writing to share some advi

16、ce with you I am writing to you for the purpose of 假設(shè)你的朋友李華正在讀高三，他來信說最近學(xué)習(xí)太緊假設(shè)你的朋友李華正在讀高三，他來信說最近學(xué)習(xí)太緊張，睡不好，吃不好。請你根據(jù)所給情況給他寫一封建張，睡不好，吃不好。請你根據(jù)所給情況給他寫一封建議信。議信。21Have a trywhat to write Part 2:BodyDear Tom: Beginning Body I think it would be more beneficial if you Firstly, secondly, lastly Your Sincerelyha

17、rmful effects + adviceuse some linking words 假設(shè)你的朋友李華正在讀高三，他來信假設(shè)你的朋友李華正在讀高三，他來信說最近學(xué)習(xí)太緊張，睡不好，吃不好。說最近學(xué)習(xí)太緊張，睡不好，吃不好。請你根據(jù)所給情況給他寫一封建議信。請你根據(jù)所給情況給他寫一封建議信。22Dear Tom: Beginning Body Ending1.I hope you will take my advice into account 2.I hope you will find these suggestions/ proposals useful/helpful/practic

18、al 3.I will be more than happy to see the improvements Your SincerelyPart 3 Endingyour hope23Have a try1.whom to write toWrite the beginning of the letter and make it acceptable.(two or three sentences)Dear Tom:1. I am sorry to know that 2. I know you have trouble in .假設(shè)你的朋友假設(shè)你的朋友Tom沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，請你沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，請你根據(jù)所給情況給他寫一封勸誡信。根據(jù)所給情況給他寫一封勸誡信。Part 1:Beginningbe addicted to, spare time, show your understanding show your feelings 24Have a try 2. what to write for (purpose)Write the purpose of the letter and make it acceptable.Dear Tom:(Beginning) I am sorry to know that I am writing