高考書面表達練與評

1、高考書面表達練與評高考書面表達練與評在我國，交通事故頻頻發(fā)生。你在我國，交通事故頻頻發(fā)生。你班就這個話題展開了討論。班就這個話題展開了討論。請你請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇短文。根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇短文。字數(shù)：字數(shù)：100左右。左右。事故后果事故后果：財產(chǎn)損失、人員傷：財產(chǎn)損失、人員傷亡亡事故原因事故原因：違反交通法規(guī)，超速：違反交通法規(guī)，超速駕駛、酒后駕車駕駛、酒后駕車措施或建議措施或建議：加強教育，增強安：加強教育，增強安全意識全意識 題目分析：題目分析：一、審題：一、審題：此篇作文是一篇典型的指導(dǎo)性作文，此篇作文是一篇典型的指導(dǎo)性作文，文章要點明確，包括：文章要點明確，包括：1、后果、后

2、果 2、原因、原因 3、措、措施或建議。前提有兩點，施或建議。前提有兩點，1、中國的交通事故發(fā)、中國的交通事故發(fā)生頻繁。生頻繁。2、在班級內(nèi)討論此問題。根據(jù)要點，、在班級內(nèi)討論此問題。根據(jù)要點，這篇文章可分為三段。第一段提出話題，第二段這篇文章可分為三段。第一段提出話題，第二段陳述后果和原因，第三段談措施或建議?；緯r陳述后果和原因，第三段談措施或建議?；緯r態(tài)應(yīng)是一般現(xiàn)在時。態(tài)應(yīng)是一般現(xiàn)在時。二、根據(jù)要點初步確定本文可能涉及詞語：二、根據(jù)要點初步確定本文可能涉及詞語：property, death, injury, break law and regulations, speeding, d

3、riving after drinking, raise, awareness of safety, 等。等。 習(xí)作評析習(xí)作評析習(xí)作習(xí)作1In China, traffic accidents happen frequently，which have a bad effect on the whole society.Traffic accidents not only get a great many people injured or killed, but also result in property loss.The breaking of traffic law and regul

4、ations is cited as major factors causing the increasing number of traffic accidents, such as speeding and driving after drinking alcohol.The key to traffic safety is education. If we improve our safety awareness and enlarge our knowledge of traffic law and regulations, Im firmly convinced that traff

5、ic accidents could be reduced and avoided.In China, traffic accidents happen frequently，which have a bad effect on the whole society.have應(yīng)改為應(yīng)改為has。因為。因為which指代的是指代的是前面的整個句子前面的整個句子 The breaking of traffic law and regulations is cited as major factors causing the increasing number of traffic accidents

6、, such as speeding and driving after drinking alcohol. Traffic accidents are increasing as more people break the traffic law and regulation. Speeding and driving after drinking are major problems.習(xí)作習(xí)作 2 Traffic accidents in China are todays most frequent killer, so far as the public are concerned. M

7、any families suffer endless pain because their family members are disabled or even killed in accidents. The great loss in property and spirit will last a long time as their nightmares. Careless drivers are to blame for most traffic accidents. They always break the traffic law and regulations,driving

8、 too fast or after drinking alcohol.In order to avoid traffic accidents, people should get a good knowledge of traffic regulations and build up a sense of self-protection. Only then will we be able to enjoy a safer life.The great loss in property and spirit will last a long time as their nightmares.

9、The financial and spiritual loss involved can become a real nightmare.習(xí)作習(xí)作 3 Traffic accidents have become as familiar as the common cold in China. So we held a heated discussion on it. We all share the opinion that the cause of accidents is mainly due to careless drivers, who dont follow the traffi

10、c laws as they ought to. Could you imagine what will be waiting for a heavy drinker if he drives his car on the road? The injuries and possible deaths will teach him an unforgetful lesson, let alone the compensation to be paid. It is obvious to us that crowded roads and people ignoring traffic rules

11、 lead to traffic accidents as well. In conclusion, we suggest that people should make sense of traffic law and regulations and strengthen their sense of safety in order to allow both traffic and their lives to move smoothly and safely.The injuries and possible deaths will teach him an unforgetful le

12、sson.unforgetful這個詞不存在，應(yīng)改成這個詞不存在，應(yīng)改成unforgettable 練練你班將要舉辦一次主題為你班將要舉辦一次主題為What can we do for the Olympics?的英語演講比賽。請寫一的英語演講比賽。請寫一篇英語演講稿，從以下四個話題中任選一至二篇英語演講稿，從以下四個話題中任選一至二個闡述，說明。個闡述，說明。1. 舉止文明舉止文明2. 學(xué)好英語學(xué)好英語3. 當(dāng)奧運志愿者當(dāng)奧運志愿者4. 向向國際友人宣傳中國文化國際友人宣傳中國文化詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：150詞左右詞左右【寫作指導(dǎo)】【寫作指導(dǎo)】動筆之前要首先動筆之前要首先審題審題，如本命題要求說明為奧

13、，如本命題要求說明為奧運會做些什么，重點應(yīng)該闡述我們應(yīng)該做什么運會做些什么，重點應(yīng)該闡述我們應(yīng)該做什么以及理由。命題中給出了四個話題，有的同學(xué)以及理由。命題中給出了四個話題，有的同學(xué)常常把命題要求翻譯一遍就完了，這樣是不可常常把命題要求翻譯一遍就完了，這樣是不可取的。寫作時，應(yīng)該取的。寫作時，應(yīng)該有輕有重有輕有重，要突出的部分，要突出的部分多寫，次要的內(nèi)容捎帶而過。面面俱到，反而多寫，次要的內(nèi)容捎帶而過。面面俱到，反而使文章像流水帳，顯得沒有層次，沒有重點。使文章像流水帳，顯得沒有層次，沒有重點。布局結(jié)構(gòu)推薦布局結(jié)構(gòu)推薦：闡述、說明主題；對主題進行：闡述、說明主題；對主題進行詳細介紹和說明；總

14、結(jié)歸納。詳細介紹和說明；總結(jié)歸納。注意：以注意：以一般現(xiàn)在時一般現(xiàn)在時為主。一定要有為主。一定要有條理性條理性，并合理使用過渡詞，適當(dāng)使用高級詞匯和表達并合理使用過渡詞，適當(dāng)使用高級詞匯和表達法。法?！緦W(xué)生習(xí)作】【學(xué)生習(xí)作】Dear classmates, the Beijing 2008 Olympics will be held in about 200 days. Every Chinese wants to do something for them. We can indeed do many things for it, but I think the English study

15、and the behavior are the most important of all. As an old saying goes, Without communication there is no understanding. It is true. This is why we should study English well, so we can communicate with foreign visitors easily when they come to China.One persons behavior indicates his quality, thus th

16、e Chinese behavior has a great influence on impression which in foreigners hearts. Today, some abroad students dont behave well, leading other countries to think badly of our country. In order to change this prejudice, we should behave wherever we are. If we follow these rules, I believe the Beijing

17、 2008 Olympics will be the best in history! , but I think the English study and the behavior are the most important of all. One persons behavior indicates his quality, thus the Chinese behavior has a great influence on impression which in foreigners hearts. 修改：修改：but I think studying English and lea

18、rning manners are the most important of all.修改：修改： The way a person behaves shows his character, thus the way we behave will show the visitors the kinds of people we are. Today, some abroad studentsdont behave well. In order to change this prejudice, we should behave wherever we are. abroad不做定語，應(yīng)該說不

19、做定語，應(yīng)該說students abroad，要，要表達在國外留學(xué)的留學(xué)生，看看這樣說是不是意表達在國外留學(xué)的留學(xué)生，看看這樣說是不是意思更清楚呢？思更清楚呢？students who study overseas/abroad。 用用behave properly就能表達得很清楚明白了。就能表達得很清楚明白了。 In order to change this prejudice, we should behave properly. 【參考范文】【參考范文】 Dear classmates, the Beijing 2008 Olympics will be held in about 20

20、0 days. Every Chinese wants to do something for it. Of course there are many things we can do, but in my opinion, we should start with studying English well and making sure we behave politely.Language is a bridge to connect people of different countries. Thats why we should study English, especially

21、 oral English, so when foreign visitors come to China, we can not only communicate with them, but help them as well.At the same time, we need to behave politely because we represent China in foreigners eyes. In order to prove to foreigners that China is a great nation with a high civilization, we sh

22、ould make sure we are polite. We should avoid speaking loudly in public places and spitting and littering.If we follow these rules, I believe the Beijing 2008 Olympics will be the best in history!人類僅有一個地球，這是我們賴以生存人類僅有一個地球，這是我們賴以生存的地方，所以保護環(huán)境是我們義不容辭的地方，所以保護環(huán)境是我們義不容辭的責(zé)任。那么我們應(yīng)該怎樣從身邊的小的責(zé)任。那么我們應(yīng)該怎樣從身邊的小事做

23、起，來保護我們的環(huán)境，拯救地球事做起，來保護我們的環(huán)境，拯救地球呢？請根據(jù)提示詞寫一篇呢？請根據(jù)提示詞寫一篇100字左右的字左右的倡議書倡議書。 Tips：倡議書倡議書往往要針對某一現(xiàn)象發(fā)往往要針對某一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的觀點，要以理服人，有熱情表自己的觀點，要以理服人，有熱情才能打動人。才能打動人。 keepclean / tidy, spit in public, throw litter, turn off the lights, shower, ride a bike, recycle paper, plant trees / flowers What should we do to pro

24、tect our environment? We have only one earth. Its our duty to protect the environment. Perhaps some of you think that you yourself are not responsible for any of the damage. But think about it. Can you honestly say that you never drop litter? Do you always bother to recycle paper? There are plenty o

25、f things we can do to protect the environment. When you go to bed at night or leave a room, turn off the light! Take a shower rather than run a bath to save water. And why not plant a new tree so that people in the future will have a little more green nature? Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our vill

26、age! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teachin

27、g buildinghas 4 storeys and it is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our village! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used

28、 to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here have/live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very smalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.But now it has been rebuilta

29、nd the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more/Also, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you.Homework假設(shè)你班改選班委會，你想競選班長，請你參考假設(shè)你班改選班委會，你想競選班長，請你參考下面表格中的資料，寫一份發(fā)言稿，來說明自己下面表格中的資料，寫一份