【學(xué)案】高中英語續(xù)后續(xù)寫之環(huán)湖賽跑

1、續(xù)寫之比賽第二節(jié) （滿分 25 分） 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。For me, it was normal to feel lost at the inter-camp track. Four camps of kids were ready to lead their teams to a blue ribbon and win the day. Not me. I was too little to be the leader and too skinny to be an athlete. I knew this by the time I

2、 was twelve, because my camp counselors（輔導(dǎo)員）and the other kids reminded me of it every chance they got. So when our camp needed a fourth runner in the two-mile race around the lake, I knew I was no ones first choice. I hid in the shade of a maple tree as they called the names of the runners, my body

3、 tensed as I heard a counselor call, “Fred! Where is Fred! He is in this race!” It was Barry. He spotted me under the tree. “Fred! We need a 12-year-old who hasnt been in other events to run the two-mile!” He gave me a push towards the starting line. Having no confidence and trying to save myself fr

4、om the shame of taking the last place as four camps watched, I pleaded with him. “But I dont know the way around the lake!” “Youre in. Just follow Bill!” Barry smiled. Bill was my friend and the fastest runner in our camp. And then Barry said, “When you make it to the last stretch（最后一程）on the field,

5、 just throw your head back and run.” At the starting line, I stood next to Bill and trembled. “On your mark Get set.” The gun cracked and sixteen of us took off. I stayed close on Bills heels, a little too close for Bill, I guess. He shouted at me, “Back off!” I did. Two guys passed me, but I kept m

6、y eyes on Bill. It was tiring. The distance was widening between Bill and me. We made the turn from the dusty road onto the muddy, wooded trail that would go around the lake back to the field. Through the trees, I saw Bill trip over a tree root and fall. A runner from another camp passed him. 注意： 1.

7、 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右 2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。In a moment, Bill was up again and running. _I didnt know when I crossed the finish line. _n 原文語言學(xué)習(xí)乞求 v._起跑線 _ 終點線 _絆倒 _ 槍響了。_win the day _ throw ones head back _ my body tensed_ give sb a push _wooded trail _ stay close on ones heels _n 比賽中受激勵Ø 來自比爾的感動1. 一看到

8、比爾跌跌撞撞地前行著，膝蓋仍在流血，我無比動容。（on +doing 一.就.）_2. Despite the huge pain I could tell from his extremely pale face, Bill didnt stop. _ (正是他鋼鐵般的堅持和堅定的決心給了我額外的能量。強(qiáng)調(diào)句)Ø 來自巴里的提醒、激勵 我突然想起巴里的話。 Then Barrys words_.(閃過我腦袋) Then Barrys words _.(在我腦袋回響)n 比賽中堅持和努力Ø 加速1. 快速跑 v. _ 我們還可以用以下的動詞表示加速跑:2. 加速 _( vt

9、) _(短語) 3. 我全速往前沖。 I dashed forward _.4. 我以驚人的速度向終點沖去。 I charged towards the finish line _.5. 我以閃電般的速度向終點沖去。(比喻) I darted toward the finish line _. I ._(像箭般) I._(像正在加速的火車般)6. I ran as fast as my legs could carry me. _Ø 堅持與努力1. 咬緊牙關(guān) _(短語) 2. 拼盡全力 _(短語)3. 鼓起勇氣 _(短語) 4. 不遺余力做_(短語)5. My throat was

10、dry, chest was burning, and I was _ (喘氣) but I didn't stop.6. Tough _(氣喘吁吁), I pushed on.(非謂語)7. The last few miles was a blur. But _(倒裝) 最后幾公里我感覺一片模糊，但我一直跑著。8. 我深吸一口氣，大喊一聲，往前沖去。(三連動) I _, _ and _.9. 環(huán)境+身體的阻力也沒使我放棄The scorching sun (炙熱的太陽) _ my face, and beads of sweats _ my vision, I was nearly

11、 _, yet I ploughed on.n 比賽后的如釋重負(fù)1. 我如釋重負(fù)地舒了一口氣。_ 用無靈主語表示：_ n 比賽后的喜悅1. 鼓掌 v. _ n. _2. 拍肩膀_(短語)3. The whole team was _(非常高興) , especially Bill.4. The whole place _ . (爆發(fā)出掌聲和歡呼聲 )5. The field _. (爆發(fā)出難以置信的歡呼)6. Then came Bill, who slightly quivered _ (高興地), took unsteady steps forward and _(熱情地?fù)肀? n 比賽

12、后內(nèi)心反思1. 沒有想到 _ did I ever expect myself to complete the whole race as a runner.2. 要不是比爾我不可能完成兩公里的繞湖賽并且找到我的勇氣的。(虛擬語氣) _ _3. 突然意識到 _that there is always strength and confidence inside us, and as long as we persevere, maintain hope and push forward, we can finally reach them. One possible version: In a

13、 moment, he was up again and running. He yelled to me, “Watch the roots!” Struggling to keep my legs moving, I looked down and saw the tree root. I puffed (喘氣)over it. Two hundred metres later, I scrambled up the hill, ready to see the rest of the pack (人群)crossing the finish line when I saw not the

14、 fifteen guys, but three. The crowd was roaring (歡呼), but I could hear Barry over the rest of them, yelling “Run!” I threw my head back and told my legs to go and I knew I was winning. I didn't know when I crossed the finish line. Barry caught me and I collapsed(癱坐下). “You flew! You flew, man! Second! You passed two guys!” There was a crowd of kids around me, patting me on the back, giving me high fives(擊掌). I had come in second. B