（整理版高中英語）例談高考英語作文“六步法”

1、例談高考英語作文“六步法新編英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和考試說明都對英語的書面表達(dá)能力有根本的要求。要求學(xué)生根據(jù)情景寫出百字左右的短文，其形式各異。根據(jù)以上的要求我們在平時的教學(xué)中采用了六步法的寫作模式，收到了良好的效果。 例三請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇介紹香港的短文，詞數(shù)100字左右。 香港位于中國的東南部，面積1045平方公里，人口600多萬，被稱為明珠。1842年鴉片戰(zhàn)爭后，當(dāng)時的中國政府被迫將香港割讓給英國。現(xiàn)在她已經(jīng)回到祖國的懷抱，而且前景會更加美好。   2理清要點：       1位

2、置、面積和人口 2鴉片戰(zhàn)爭后香港的處境 397年后回到祖國懷抱 4其前景美好 生詞：明珠 pearl 鴉片 opium     3譯寫單句      a) hongkong lies in the southeast of china. her area is 1045km2. her population is more than 6 million. b) she was given up to britain after the 1842

3、opium war. c)in 1997 she returned to motherland. d)her future is very beautiful.  4連句成篇 hongkong lies in the southeast of china. her area is 1045km2 and population is more than 6 million. she was given up to britain after the 1842 opium war. in 1997 she returned to moth

4、erland, and her future is very beautiful.  5 潤色或文 hongkong lies in the southeast of china. she has an area of 1045km2 and has a population of more than 6 million. she is well-known as the pearl of the east. in 1842, she was given up to britain by the then chinese government after

5、 the opium war, and the people of hongkong lived a hard life. in 1997, she returned to motherland, and the people of hongkong are and will be working hard to make her more beautiful.    6) 定稿謄寫 hongkong lies in the southeast of china. she has an area of 1045km2 and a populat

6、ion of more than 6 million and is well-known as the pearl of the east. in 1842 the then chinese government was forced to give up hongkong to britain after the opium war, and the people of hongkong suffered a lot. after the return of hongkong to china in 1997, the people of hongkong are uni

7、ted more with the chinese people in mainland china, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.(89 words) 例四假設(shè)你叫張明。從日報看到某公司招聘一名英語秘書。根據(jù)啟事請你用英語寫封簡短的應(yīng)聘書寄往：1378信箱，說明你的履歷。主要內(nèi)容如下：   張明 年齡 25歲 學(xué)歷 南開大學(xué)畢業(yè) 工作經(jīng)歷 從教英語3年 愛好和興趣 英語口語、書面語和文秘 通

8、訊處 南開大學(xué)101信箱 寫信時間 2002年10月29日        2理清要點：   1貴公司招聘一名英語秘書。   2大學(xué)畢業(yè)后從教三年。   3對秘書工作感興趣。   4英語口語、書面語都不錯。   5希望貴公司能錄用。 3譯詞單句 a)your company wants an english secretary. b)i work as an

9、english teacher after i graduated from the university. c)i am interested in the job of secretary. d)i speak and write english very well. e)i hope your company can employ me. 4)連句成篇    your company wants an english secretary. i work as an english teacher after i gra

10、duated from the university. i am interested in the job of secretary. i speak and write english very well. i hope your company can employ me. 5)潤色或文     an english secretary is wanted in your company. i want to take this job. my name is zhang ming, a girl of twenty-five. i ha

11、ve been teaching english for 3 years since i graduated from the english department of nankai university. i think i will be interested in the job of secretary. i can speak and write english very well. i hope i want very much to be accepted by your company. 6)定稿謄寫 p. o. box. 101 ti

12、anjin october 29,  p. o. box 1378 shijiazhuang dear sir, i have recently learned from tianjin daily that an english secretary is wanted in your company. i beg to take this job. my name is zhang ming, a girl of twenty-five. i have been an english teacher for 3 years since i g

13、raduated from the english department of nankai university. i think i will be interested in the job of secretary. i can speak and write english very well. it is hoped that i will be accepted by your company. would you please reply to me once you have admitted me? and in future i will make more m

14、oney for this company. thank you very much.(106 words)                                          

15、;                                    yours,             

16、0;                                        zhang ming  例五請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一份書面通知以便你在你校校園播送中宣讀  

17、 題目 颶風(fēng)及其危害 主講人  地點 306教室 時間 11月4日上午十點 注意 事項 1.請自帶鋼筆、筆記本喧嘩。   4.11月5日下午三點討論    2理清要點： (1)   (2)   11月4日上午十點在306教室舉行 (3)   帶上必要的用具。不要喧嘩。請準(zhǔn)時參加。會后看電影。第二天討論 3譯詞單句

18、60;   a)hurricane and its damage is given by geography teacher mr. shen.    b)it is held in classroom 306 of no. 2 middle school at 10:00, november 4.    c)please bring your necessary things there. dont talk there. please be there on time. after the meeting th

19、ere will be a discussion about that next week. 4) 連句成篇    hurricane and its damage is given by geography teacher, mr. shen and it is held in classroom 306 of no. 2 middle school at 10:00, november 4. please bring your necessary things there. dont talk there and be there on time.

20、after the meeting there will be a film to be shown. there is a discussion about that next week. 5)潤色或文    a lecture on hurricane and its damage will be given by geography teacher, mr. shen and it is held in classroom 306 of no. 2 middle school at 10:00, november 4. when you are t

21、here please bring your pens and notebooks and dont talk to each other, and go there on time. after the meeting a film will be shown. the next day please talk about that. 6)定稿謄寫 all students: a lecture on hurricane and its damage will be given by geography teacher, mr. shen , and it is

22、 held at classroom 306 of no. 2 middle school at 10:00, november 4. after the meeting a good film about the long march will be shown, and a discussion about the lecture will take place at 3 p.m. tomorrow. when you are there, please bring your pens and notebooks and attend it on time. dont talk

23、to each other during the lecture.(81 words)                                           

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26、ovember 3,  例六根據(jù)以下要求寫一篇口頭通知： 歡送您乘坐波音747飛機。本次航班8點起飛，下午1點到達(dá) 市。請于7：40登機。乘客們在飛行期間請勿吸煙，系好平安帶，甚至不要打 。飛機平穩(wěn)著陸前方可走動。謝謝合作。 生詞：波音 boeing   urumuqi   登機 board  2理清提要 1歡送您乘坐波音747飛機 2本次航班的登機時間以及起降時間 3飛行期間請注意乘機的有關(guān)規(guī)定。 3譯詞單句  a)you are welcom

27、e on the boeing 747 plane.  b)please board the plane at 7:40. the plane takes off at 8:00 and arrives at 1 p.m. in urumuqi, xinjiang.  c)during the flight dont smoke, and fasten your seat belt, and even dont make a mobile phone call to anyone else. but dont move around until the

28、plane lands safe. 4)連句成篇 you are welcome on the boeing 747 plane. please board the plane at 7:40. the plane takes off at 8 and arrives at 1 p.m. in urumuqi, xinjiang. during the flight dont smoke, and fasten your seat belt and even dont make a mobile phone call to anyone else. but don

29、t move around until the plane lands safe. 5)潤色或文 you are welcome on the boeing 747 plane. please board the plane at 7:40. it takes off at 8 and arrives at 1p.m. in urumuqi, xinjiang. during the flight please dont smoke, and fasten your seat belt and even dont make a mobile phone call

30、to anyone else. dont move around until the plane lands safe. 6定稿謄寫 ladies and gentlemen: you are welcome on the boeing 747 plane. please board the plane at 7:40. it takes off at 8 a.m. and arrives at 1 p.m. in urumuqi, xinjiang in the northwest of china. during the flight you mus

31、t follow its rules and the conductors instructions. for example, please dont smoke in the plane, and fasten your seat belts and even dont make a mobile phone call to anyone else. dont move around until the plane lands safe. thank you very much (81 words) 例七改寫    假定你剛從澳洲訪問歸來。

32、以下的對話是你在澳洲的一段經(jīng)歷。請你用第一人稱把這個對話改寫成一篇短文。    a: excuse me, i was wondering if you could help me.    b: certainly. i will be glad to try. what do you need?    a: could you tell me when the next bus leaves for sydney? im not sure how to read this timetable. 

33、;   b: h-m-m. it looks like one leaves at 12:25.    a: thank you very much. i couldnt figure it out. what time do you have by your watch now?    b: 11:20. you have much time.    a: oh, good. do you know where i could get a cup of coffee? &#

34、160;  b: theres a machine over there.    a: im sorry to keep bothering you but can you show me how it works?    b: sure. put a plastic cup under the spout. put your money in here at the top. select the kind of coffee you want and push the button next to it. the cof

35、fee will pour into your cup.    生詞：figure out 搞清    bother 打攪     spout 噴口  2理清要點：  1在汽車站等車。  2有一位婦女坐在我旁邊。  3問下一班公交車幾時發(fā)以及對方的時間。  4因為時間充足，要咖啡喝。  5不知道怎樣使用機器，所以對方告訴了使用方法。 3譯詞單句  a) i wait for a bus at a bus station.  b) a woman sits next to me.  c)i ask her when the next bus leaves and she tells me it is leaving at 12:25.  d)because the time is enough i want a cup of coffee to d