2017屆高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)循序?qū)懽髅恐芤痪?步步登高第十五周提綱作文新人教版

1、學(xué)審題謀篇 第十五周提綱作文 （2016 濰坊市高考模擬）假定你是李華，正在新西蘭學(xué)習(xí)。你計(jì)劃寒假期間去當(dāng)?shù)芈?行，請(qǐng)用英文寫一封 e-mail 向旅行社詢問(wèn)相關(guān)的旅行信息。要點(diǎn)如下： 1 旅行信息（如景點(diǎn)等）；2.當(dāng)?shù)靥厣ㄈ缡称返龋?.注意事項(xiàng)。 注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右； 2開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Dear Sir or Madam , I m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I m writing to Si ncerely Yours , Li Hua 1. 審

2、題 提綱作文的關(guān)鍵就是審好題，審題時(shí)應(yīng)做到三定：定體裁；定人稱；定時(shí)態(tài)。 如本文為書信，是高考經(jīng)?？疾榈念愋?， 屬于應(yīng)用文；人稱以第一人稱為主；時(shí)態(tài)主要 用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 2. 謀篇 提綱作文雖然有簡(jiǎn)要的提綱，但只是對(duì)文章的提示和概括，我們?cè)谥\篇時(shí)要仔細(xì)研讀題 目信息，對(duì)提綱進(jìn)行歸納整合，并適度拓展。 如本文首先要作自我介紹， 并說(shuō)明寫信的目的；然后向旅行社詳細(xì)詢問(wèn)相關(guān)的旅行信息； 最后希望對(duì)方能早日答復(fù)。 學(xué)增分亮點(diǎn) 滿分范文 Dear Sir or Madam , I m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I m writ

3、ing to ask for in formati on about your age ncy s NewZeala nd s travel for the coming win ter vacati on. My friend and I plan to travel in the country. Could you tell methe departure time and traveli 學(xué)審題謀篇 ng routes? As we know, New Zeala nd is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest

4、 and I want to know more details about these. Besides, I am interested in the local foo d there. How much do I have to pay for the travel?3 At len gth, are there other thi ngs I should be aware of? I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience. Si ncerely Yours , Li Hua 滿分緣由 1

5、結(jié)構(gòu)布局 本文可分為三段： 第一段：首先作自我介紹，并說(shuō)明寫信的目的是詢問(wèn)在新西蘭旅行的信息； 第二段：向旅行社詳細(xì)詢問(wèn)相關(guān)的旅行信息，如旅游景點(diǎn)和當(dāng)?shù)靥厣称返龋?第三段：希望對(duì)方早日回信。 2亮點(diǎn)詞匯 ask for, be famous for, places of interest, be interested in, at length, grateful, at one s earliest convenience 3. 亮點(diǎn)句式 第句包含現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)； 第句包含 as 引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句； 第句包含定語(yǔ)從句，且引導(dǎo)詞 that 省略。 句式改寫 1用 it 作形式主語(yǔ)改寫句 l

6、t_is_known_to_us_all_thatNew_Zealand_is_famous_for_its_beautiful_ _ and places of interest and I want to know more details about these. _ 2. 用 I d appreciate it if . 改寫句 I d appreciate it if you can give me a reply at your earliest convenience. 寫滿分作文 （2016 洛陽(yáng)高三一模）假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友 Jack 來(lái)信說(shuō)，他暑假后將到北京 大學(xué)留學(xué)

7、。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫一封回信，告知相關(guān)情況。 1. 簡(jiǎn)單介紹北京大學(xué)； 2. 生活便利，居民友善； 3. 留學(xué)期間愿意提供任何幫助。 注意：詞數(shù) 100 左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 要求 請(qǐng)用定語(yǔ)從句、分詞短語(yǔ)、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、不定式、狀語(yǔ)從句、 it 作形式主語(yǔ)、省略完成 4 作文。 Dear Jack , I glad to know that you will come to China for further study. Now let me tell you what you are concerned with. I m looking forward to meeti

8、ng you in Beijing. Yours sincerely , Li Hua 參考范文： Dear Jack, I m glad to know that you will come to China for further study. Nowlet metell you what you are concerned with. As is known to us, Beijing Uni versity is one of the top uni versities in China, which is famous for its excelle nt teach ing in

9、 art and culture. Study ing there, you are sure to get improved in every aspect. This is the first time for you to live in a foreign country alone, but yon don t need to worry about the life there, because it is located in the bus in ess cen ter of Beiji ng. Therefore, it is extremely convenient for you to live there. Besides, most people in Beijing are both kind and hospitable to foreig ners. I d lik