大學英語第四學期期末作文

1、1. Luxurious Buildings On Campus1. 近年來，一些大學建起豪華樓舍來提升形象；2. 有人贊同，有人反對；3. 談談你的觀點。【范文】With a view to improving their image and comprehensive strength, many universities are rushing to build luxurious constructions. Some people are in favor of this trend, because the considerably more comfortable environ

2、ment could let students apply themselves to academic studies. The others who hold the opposite opinion think it not only wastes money but also disturbs the normal teaching activities. Generally speaking, newly-built blocks help to meet the increasingly demanding requirements of the modern students.

3、But with the breakdown of heaps of age-old buildings, their original historic significances would disappear. Most importantly, the trend towards luxury shows the commercialization of college education, which gives negative influence on students. Therefore, I strongly hope universities could attach m

4、ore attention to the construction of specialties and improvement of their cultural connotation, attracting students by their excellent teaching qualities and research achievements. 【點評】 首段直接點題，說明現(xiàn)象；第二段分述人們對此現(xiàn)象各持己見；第三段陳述自己的觀點，并提出建議。 范文首段提出大學樓舍“豪華風”這一普遍現(xiàn)象；第二段指出贊同者認為舒適的環(huán)境能讓學生更好地投入學業(yè)中，反對者認為這不僅浪費錢，而且擾亂了正

5、常教學活動；第三段給出自己的觀點-舊樓的拆除破壞了校園原有的歷史意義；奢華的趨勢使得大學教育商業(yè)化，給大學生帶來負面影響。最后提出建議，希望大學能注重提高自身的文化內(nèi)涵，加強學科建設。 第一段中With a view to意為“為了”，后面接v.-ing；第二段中apply themselves to academic studies意為“全身心投入學業(yè)”；第三段中construction of specialties 意為“專業(yè)隊伍的建設”，improvement of their cultural connotation意為“提高自身文化內(nèi)涵”。2. On Buying Graduatio

6、n Thesis1. 畢業(yè)論文買賣成風；2. 有人認為本科生沒必要寫畢業(yè)論文，有人認為有必要；3. 你的看法?！痉段摹縎ince graduation thesis serves as a role of evaluation, college students are required to write academic essays focusing on their major before graduation. Afraid of not getting their degree, buying graduation thesis has become a prevailing pr

7、actice. Consequently, heated discussion on the issue has been arisen. Some don't think it is necessary to write the graduation essay while the others support the current educational system.However, the main argument for scrapping essays is because most of them are of such a low quality. As this

8、work is usually assigned in the last term, exactly when they are starting to hunt for jobs, it is no wonder that they are not fully focused on the task. Furthermore, the communication between student and tutor is far from adequate. Nevertheless, I still believe that thesises are something from which

9、 students can gain a lot if they put their heart into the task.【點評】 文章首段通過畢業(yè)論文的用途引出社會現(xiàn)象-買賣論文成風；第二段指出不同的人對此持有不同意見；第三段結合自身觀點，分析現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因：畢業(yè)論文一般是最后一學期完成，而學生忙于找工作導致論文質(zhì)量低，另外學生和導師的溝通不夠，最后給出自己的觀點-畢業(yè)論文對于學生而言很重要，如果用心去做，學生可以從中學到很多。 第一段中serves as a role of evaluation意為“起著評估的作用”；第二段中Consequently意為“隨之產(chǎn)生，因此”；第三段中ar

10、e of such a low quality意為“質(zhì)量低”，fully focused on意為“集中精力關注于”。3. The Spirit of Lei Feng1. 雷鋒精神學了半個世紀，雷鋒卻越來越少；2. 當下我們該如何弘揚雷鋒精神？【范文】Lei Feng, a heroic model in China who was known for his altruism and devotion to the country, has been taken as a role model over past 50 years. But in recent years, some pe

11、ople have abandoned their long-held ways of learning from Lei Feng and become too selfish to helping people in need.In today's diverse society, where individual interests are given more emphasis, the image of Lei Feng seems to have lost its appeal to some people, and is even met with cynicism. B

12、ut everybody can do the basics: show more compassion, have a stronger sense of obligation and try to do good, no matter how small it is. Furthermore, governments should pay more attention to morality construction, raise people's willingness to help others, let them realize that altruism is alway

13、s necessary for a harmonious society and provide fuel to the flame so it can burn more brightly.【點評】 文章第一段通過介紹雷鋒，說明雷鋒精神，引出社會現(xiàn)象：有些人變得自私，不愿幫助那些需要幫助的人；第二段指出過分強調(diào)個人利益使得雷鋒形象失去原有魅力，為弘揚雷鋒精神，個人應該有強烈的責任感，勿以善小而不為，政府應該加強道德建設，提高人們助人為樂的意識。 文章第一段中altruism意為“無私，利他主義”，devotion意為“奉獻”； taken as a role model意為“作為榜樣”；第二

14、段第一句中涉及where引導的定語從句，修飾先行詞society，cynicism意為“冷嘲熱諷，玩世不恭”，sense of obligation意為“義務感，使命感”；Furthermore表示遞進。4. Influence of Digital Products on College Students1. 數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品種類多，更新快，大學生人均擁有數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品的數(shù)量越來越多；2. 這種現(xiàn)象對大學生來說是有益還是有害？3. 你的看法?！痉段摹緾urrently, college students are unavoidably exposed to all kinds of digital pro

15、ducts, such as digital cameras, laptops, cell phones and so on, which grow in an increasing categories and quantities. Many students continuously update their "equipments" to meet their over-growing needs. Meanwhile people show great concerns about the influence of those products. There is

16、 no doubt that digital products make things more convenient for college students. For instance, computers and Internet enable students to collect information with greatly improved work efficiency. What's more, digital items widen students' scope of eyesight and make their life more colorful.

17、 Although these items also cause negative effects, as they may waste their precious time and cultivate a generation more isolated from the real life. Neverthless, I cherish a belief that with the help of digital products, college students can benefit a lot and the world will have a wonderful future.

18、【點評】文章第一段指出現(xiàn)在的大學生不可避免的接觸各種數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品，并且根據(jù)需求不斷更換產(chǎn)品，這一現(xiàn)象引起人們關注于產(chǎn)品給大學生帶來的影響。第二段首先指出數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品的優(yōu)勢，并列舉一種產(chǎn)品進行說明；之后分析了產(chǎn)品帶來的負面影響，并給出作者自己的觀點。第一段中unavoidably意為“不可避免地”；are exposed to意為“接觸”；in an increasing categories and quantities 意為“種類和數(shù)量不斷增加”。第二段中There is no doubt that 意為“毫無疑問”；For instance表示列舉；cultivate a generation m

19、ore isolated from the real life意為“培養(yǎng)出與現(xiàn)實生活脫節(jié)的一代人”。5. Free Blood Donation1. 無償獻血的意義；2. 作為一名大學生，你認為該如何做？【范文】Free blood donation refers to healthy donators voluntarily giving a small amount of blood. It doesn't harm the donators' health as their bodies could make quick adjustment. It is a kind

20、of way by which people can make contribution to society and realize self-value. However, some people are still unwilling to donate blood.As a college student, I think effective measures should be taken to encourage people to join in the team of blood donation. First of all, a nation-wide campaign sh

21、ould be launched to educate people scientific knowledge about blood donation as well as the prevention and control of diseases spread via blood. Second, activities should be carried out to raise public awareness about its benefits and safety, letting them abandon their concerns. Last but not the lea

22、st, government at all levels should cooperate to create a harmonious and healthy society, and improve peoples current spiritual civilization.【點評】文章第一段從獻血的定義入手，提及獻血對人體的影響以及獻血的意義，最后一句指出問題所在-有部分人不愿加入獻血的隊伍。第二段從自己作為大學生的角度，提出自己的意見：首先需要開展運動，向人們傳授獻血方面的科學知識以及血液疾病預防知識；其次，開展提高公共意識的活動；最后各級政府部門應該創(chuàng)建和諧健康的社會。第一段中 m

23、ake quick adjustment 意為“快速調(diào)整”；make contribution to society 意為“”為社會做貢獻”；realize self-value意為“實現(xiàn)自身價值”。第二段中多次使用被動語態(tài)，measures與動詞take搭配，campaign與動詞 launch搭配，activities 與動詞 carry out搭配；表示列舉，F(xiàn)irst of all“首先”，Last but not the least“最后但并非最不重要”。6.The Pursuit of Foreign Diplomas1. 現(xiàn)在越來越多的大學生熱衷于國外文憑；2. 你對此事的看法。

24、【范文】Since the education quality of foreign developed countries is thought to be better than that in China, an increasing number of college students are keen on studying abroad. College students believe that with foreign diplomas they may be considered more competitive than others, and can get more j

25、ob opportunities or higher salaries. Undoubtedly, studying abroad offers college students chances of learning more advanced knowledge, experiencing different cultures, broadening their views and gaining good command of foreign languages. But the blind pursuit of foreign diplomas may cause a consider

26、able number of students to neglect the pursuit of knowledge, and forget about the huge amount of money they need to prepare. What's more, concentrating on the diploma itself may lead to students who aren't expert at academic studies directly buy fake foreign diplomas.All in all, I think coll

27、ege students should consider clearly what they really want to gain at foreign schools, for an inflated reputation or knowledge. Besides, they should make decisions after careful consideration on the familys payment ability.【點評】文章由人們對國外發(fā)達國家的教育質(zhì)量的觀點引出社會現(xiàn)象-大學生熱衷追求國外文憑。第二段介紹了出國留學的幾點優(yōu)勢，并指出對文憑的盲目追求會使得大學生忽

28、視對知識的追求。最后一段結合自己的觀點給出建議-大學生應該仔細考慮自身需求，并結合考慮家庭的支付能力。第一段中 be keen on doing sth.意為“熱衷于做某事”；be considered more competitive意為“被認為更有競爭力”。第二段中Undoubtedly意為“毫無疑問，毋庸置疑”， blind pursuit of foreign diplomas意為“盲目追求國外文憑”；lead to意為“導致”，所在句涉及who引導的定語從句。第三段中All in all意為“總之”， familys payment ability意為“家庭支付能力”。7.Campu

29、s Security4. 近年來，大學校園安全問題頻發(fā)；5. 象牙塔如何能給學生一個安全健康的學習環(huán)境？【范文】According to recent reports, an increasing number of crimes have taken place on campus. Universities around the world are facing security problems such as theft, fraud, violence, sexual harassment, fire disaster and traffic accident etc., which

30、 seriously affect students' school lives and make students live in fear. Therefore, it is high time that we should take actions to improve its current situation. First, related departments, including administrative personnel, teachers and students, should know clearly about their own responsibil

31、ities and cooperate to solve the problems. Second, equipments such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible. Most importantly, we might have to nip something in the bud before it becomes a problem. We should strengthen college students' ideological and

32、 political education, pay attention to their mentality health and give timely help if they need. With our endeavor, campus security will be improved greatly, and universities will be holy places where one can enjoy peaceful and harmonious atmosphere again. 【點評】文章第一段指出問題-校園安全問題頻發(fā)，大學生的學習生活受到嚴重影響。第二段提出

33、需要解決問題，并給出解決問題的建議：首先相關部門應該弄清自己的職責，共同努力解決問題；其次在校園中安裝監(jiān)控設備，盡早發(fā)現(xiàn)犯罪；最后，加強大學生的思想政治教育，防范于未然。第一段中affect students' school lives意為“影響學生學校生活”；make students live in fear意為“使學生生活在恐慌中”。第二段中to nip something in the bud 意為“防范于未然”；ideological and political education意為“思想品德教育”。8. Working in Grassroots Areas4. 大學畢業(yè)

34、時有人出國留學，有人就職外企以及國企，而有人卻選擇偏遠的農(nóng)村，將人生扎根于奉獻基層群眾里，體現(xiàn)了難能可貴的思想覺悟和責任擔當；5. 談談你的看法。College students vary their choices after graduation. Some choose to go abroad for further education, some are willing to work in foreign companies or state-owned enterprises, but there still others choose to work in rural area

35、s, and they hope to realize self-value by working in grassroots communities. As far as I am concerned, I absolutely in favor of this choice of working in grassroots. It is helpful for the development of rural countries.On one hand, college graduates can put into practice what they have learn during

36、academic years, which can promote economic growth of rural countries. On the other hand, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside, speed the cultural development of rural areas, and bridge the gap between the city and the countryside. What's more, it helps to ease the pressure of job m

37、arkets in big cities. In conclusion, it is a win-win choice to both college students and society, so more preferential policies should be made in order to encourage college students to work in the countryside. 【點評】 文章第一段通過陳述大學生在畢業(yè)時不同的選擇，引出話題-有的人選擇在偏遠的農(nóng)村工作，之后簡單提及了在農(nóng)村工作的意義。第二段結合作者自己的見解，說明這種選擇的積極意義-促進農(nóng)

38、村的經(jīng)濟發(fā)展；大學生引入新的思想，促進農(nóng)村文化發(fā)展，縮短城市農(nóng)村間的差距；緩解城市就業(yè)壓力。最后一段給出結論：對大學生和社會來說，這是一個雙贏的選擇。第一段中realize self-value 意為“實現(xiàn)自身價值”，grassroots communities 意為“基層社區(qū)”。第二段中absolutely in favor of意為“絕對支持”，On one hand,On the other hand意為“一方面另一方面”，bridge the gap 意為“縮減差距”。第三段中a win-win choice意為“雙贏的選擇”。9.Job-hopping1. 現(xiàn)在越來越多學生畢業(yè)后經(jīng)常

39、換工作；2. 有人表示支持，有人表示反對，人們對此看法不一；3. 你的看法。【范文】Frequent "job hopping" is common among graduates.More and more graduates take changing new jobs as a way of seeking higher salary or getting promotion. People have different attitudes towards job-hopping. Some think that one should stick to one occ

40、upation since one can never do his work well unless he is devoted to only one job in his lifetime. On the contrary, the others support job-hopping as it can offer one more chances of realizing self-value. Before talking about whether it's right or not, I think graduates should ponder over the fo

41、llowing basic questions: Why do you want to find a new job? What kind of jobs do you really like? One shouldn't blindly follow other people in job-hopping, and needn't expect to climb the corporate ladder by job-hopping. Eternal moves can be an effective way of getting a promotion or higher

42、pay, but frequent moves suggest a lack of loyalty. What's more, the perfect job should be a combination of interest and work. So make out your plans for career development, think beforehand all those things related with job-hopping, and you will have a brighter life. 【點評】文章第一段指出越來越多大學生不斷更換工作，人們對此各持己見，然后給出了贊成者和反對者的觀點。文章第二段作者指出，大學生在更換工作之前需仔細考慮清楚，防止盲目跟風。雖然跳槽可能會獲得升職加薪的機會，但是也會造成雇主對“忠誠度”的懷疑。另外，在跳槽之前應該做好個人職業(yè)發(fā)展計劃。第一段中as a way of seeking higher salary or getting promotion意為“作為一種升職加薪的途徑”，is devoted to意為“致力于，奉獻于”；第二段中frequent moves suggest a lack of loyalty意為“頻繁的跳槽暗示著缺乏忠誠”，think beforehand意為“提前考慮”。