定語從句與寫作公開課

1、Grammar and writingLead-inEnjoy the song-the one you loveI know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone, but youd

2、 call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you loveI know you need a friendSomeone you can talk

3、toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone, but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you reme

4、mber those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you love Someones gonna cry when they learn theyve lost youSomeones gonna thank the stars abovePractice of the Attributive clause1.Aplaneisamachine_canfly.

5、2.Thecar_myuncleboughtlastweekwasstolen.3.Theman_iswalkingontheplaygroundismyoldfriend.4.Thewoman_yousawintheparkisourEnglishteacher.which/that(which/that)who/that(who/that)5.Isawawoman_bagwasstolen.6.Thereason_hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.7.Istillremembertheday_IfirstcametoBeijing.8.Itisanimportantd

6、ay_Iwillneverforget.9.Thepark_theypaidavisittoisbeautiful.whosewhywhenWhich/thatWhich/that定語從句在寫作中的應(yīng)用定語從句在寫作中的應(yīng)用Part1: 高考滿分作文中的定語從句欣賞：高考滿分作文中的定語從句欣賞：1. 2013年全國高考新課標(biāo)年全國高考新課標(biāo)你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的你居住的城市參加一個會議。城市參加一個會議。You know, my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an in

7、ternational meeting.我讓叔叔帶去我讓叔叔帶去你想要的你想要的中國畫。中國畫。Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting you have asked for before.2. 2013 年廣東高考年廣東高考那些那些做普通簡單工作的做普通簡單工作的人也在推動著社會的發(fā)展。人也在推動著社會的發(fā)展。Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.正如我們都知道的那樣，正如我們都知道的那樣，掃

8、大街是最為困難的工作掃大街是最為困難的工作之一。之一。As we all know, cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.Part 2: 寫作中定語從句的主要作用寫作中定語從句的主要作用1. 增加詞數(shù)增加詞數(shù)2. 可以連接兩個包含同一事物的句子，可以連接兩個包含同一事物的句子， 避免單避免單詞的重復(fù)和句式單一。詞的重復(fù)和句式單一。3. 補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)，以豐富文章內(nèi)容。補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)，以豐富文章內(nèi)容。Part 3: 如何寫出定語從句如何寫出定語從句1. 題干中出現(xiàn)兩句涉及同一事物的簡單句。題干中出現(xiàn)兩句涉及同一事物的簡單句。Solution: 1找出這兩個

9、簡單句中都出現(xiàn)了的同一個事物。找出這兩個簡單句中都出現(xiàn)了的同一個事物。 2將其中一個簡單句改成從句，去修飾另外將其中一個簡單句改成從句，去修飾另外一個句子中那個相同的事物（注意關(guān)系詞的選用）一個句子中那個相同的事物（注意關(guān)系詞的選用）For example:我們班是一個我們班是一個大家庭。大家庭。這個大家庭這個大家庭包括包括17個男生和個男生和7個女生。個女生。 Our class is a big family.The family consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.Our class is a big family, which consists of 17

10、boys and 7 girls.Practice: 把下面各題中的句子合并為一個含有定語從句的主從復(fù)合句把下面各題中的句子合并為一個含有定語從句的主從復(fù)合句 1a. Seeing these changes, we cannot forget them. b. They gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble. _答案：答案：Seeing these changes, we cannot forget those who gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble.2a. I feel g

11、reatly honored to host the contest. b. The contest is sponsored by the Students Union. _答案：答案：I feel greatly honored to host the contest, which is sponsored by the Students Union.3a. They sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.b. The elderly always feel lonely.

12、 _答案：答案：They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.4a. The library is not far from here. b. The writer often does some reading there._答案：答案：The library where the writer often does some reading is not far from here. 5a. Ive always longed

13、for the days. b. I will be able to be independent then._答案：答案：Ive always longed for the days when I will be able to be independent. Practice:1. 我最好的朋友是李明，他的外號叫河馬。我最好的朋友是李明，他的外號叫河馬。2. 我不喜歡他的外號，原因是它深深地傷害了他。我不喜歡他的外號，原因是它深深地傷害了他。3. 他居住在開封，在這里人們可以游覽很多美麗的景點(diǎn)。他居住在開封，在這里人們可以游覽很多美麗的景點(diǎn)。4. 我們過去常常在一起上美術(shù)課，我不會忘記那段

14、日子。我們過去常常在一起上美術(shù)課，我不會忘記那段日子。我最好的朋友是李明，他的外號叫河馬。我最好的朋友是李明，他的外號叫河馬。My best friend is Li Ming.His nickname is hippo.My best friend is Li Ming, whose nickname is hippo.I dont like his nickname.The reason is that it deeply hurts him.The reason why I dont like his nickname is that it deeply hurts him.我不喜歡他的

15、外號，原因是它深深地傷害了他。我不喜歡他的外號，原因是它深深地傷害了他。她居住在開封，在這里人們可以游覽很多美麗的她居住在開封，在這里人們可以游覽很多美麗的景點(diǎn)。景點(diǎn)。He lives in Kai Feng.People can visit lots of scenic spots here.He lives in Kai Feng, where people can visit lots of scenic spots.(注意此處不再有注意此處不再有here)我們過去常常在一起上美術(shù)課，我不會忘記那段日子。我們過去常常在一起上美術(shù)課，我不會忘記那段日子。We used to attend

16、painting class together.I will never forget the days .I will never forget the days when we used to attend painting class together.2. 題干中只有一個孤立的簡單句題干中只有一個孤立的簡單句Solution: 找到這個簡單句中的中心詞，用定語從句將其豐富。找到這個簡單句中的中心詞，用定語從句將其豐富。For example: 開封是一個歷史名城。開封是一個歷史名城。Kai Feng is a famous historic city.Kai Feng is a fam

17、ous historic city, which has a long history of more than 2700 years and large numbers of historic spots, such as the Iron Pagoda, Longting Park and so on.有多久的歷史？因何出名？有多久的歷史？因何出名？Practice:1. 即將到來的端午節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。即將到來的端午節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。2. 李明是一個熱心腸的人。李明是一個熱心腸的人。The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese trad

18、itional festival.The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival, which is celebrated to honor our national hero, Qu Yuan.( (節(jié)日的目的節(jié)日的目的) )李明是一個熱心腸的人。李明是一個熱心腸的人。Li Ming is a warm-hearted man .Li Ming is a warm-hearted man, who always lends a hand to others.( (具體化具體化) )直擊高考直擊高考（201

19、3年高考山東卷）年高考山東卷）描述你的假期打算描述你的假期打算 （包括兼職，旅游，志愿者等）（包括兼職，旅游，志愿者等）（用定語從句增添做這些事情的原因）（用定語從句增添做這些事情的原因）I would like to do a part- time job,which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich my life and broaden my horizen.I would like to do volunta

20、ry work,which will make a great contribution to the society.Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,Translate the following English proverbs into Chinese and then pick out the

21、 attributive clauses.1. God help those who help themselves . 2. He who laughs last laughs best . 3. He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true man .4. He who is content (滿足滿足) is always happy.根據(jù)下列句子，完成短文。根據(jù)下列句子，完成短文。 眾所周知，北京已經(jīng)成功地舉辦了眾所周知，北京已經(jīng)成功地舉辦了2008年奧運(yùn)會。通年奧運(yùn)會。通過本屆奧運(yùn)會，中國完美地向世界展現(xiàn)了自己。英語作過本屆奧運(yùn)會，

22、中國完美地向世界展現(xiàn)了自己。英語作為一種國際語言，在和外國人的交流中起著重要作用。為一種國際語言，在和外國人的交流中起著重要作用。本屆奧運(yùn)會上友好的志愿者們很好地利用了這個語言工本屆奧運(yùn)會上友好的志愿者們很好地利用了這個語言工具為各國運(yùn)動員及客人服務(wù)，給他們留下了深刻印象。具為各國運(yùn)動員及客人服務(wù)，給他們留下了深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名傳播中國燦爛文化的志愿者，所我渴望有一天能做一名傳播中國燦爛文化的志愿者，所以我現(xiàn)在應(yīng)該努力學(xué)好英語。只有這樣，才能為國家貢以我現(xiàn)在應(yīng)該努力學(xué)好英語。只有這樣，才能為國家貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量。獻(xiàn)自己的力量。注意：要使用定語從句注意：要使用定語從句. .play apart/ role in, seize the opportunity,make contributions to As is known to us all, Beijing has successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games. Thr