全國2019年高考英語真題分類匯編：專題21-短文改錯(寫作)(含答案解析)

1、1專題二十一短文改錯1.12015 陜西】短文改錯（共 10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請彳修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anythin

2、g special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the f

3、loor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire ag ain next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter

4、!【答案】76 .去掉in77 .anything 改為 something78 .better 改成 best79 .decide 改成 decided80 .step 改為 steps81 .well 改成 good82 .after 改成 when/while83 .a 改為 the84 .just 后加 to85 .enjoy 改為 enjoying【解析】試題分析：文章介紹作者的教練退休了，在退休聚會上作者送給教練自己親手烘焙的餅干。教練非常蒿興。76.句意工我的足球教練上個星期退休了。1對4比k前面不加介詞，去掉id3一句意；我想在他退休聚會上為他做些特別的事情?？隙ň溆脀mEth

5、mg。7&句意：我媽媽做的是世界上最好的餅干。用最高級，better改成加*為句意；所以我決定向她求肋這篇文章使用一般過去時，dm北改成deided，狗句意：媽媽教我一些基本的烘焙的步驟。址P是可數(shù)名詞,用復數(shù)浪P&L句意：我認為這些餅干很好。做表語用形容詞,科加改成gQDd。以句意:我唯一的錯誤是在我將它們打包的時候將它們掉在地上口出江改成whmtThik底這里是特指第一段提到的退休聚會. a改為Ihd巾句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多這樣的餅干，用不定式做目的狀語后加to*85.句意：我最喜歡的照片是我和我的教練在聚會上開心地享受餅干. Qf后面接動名詞j my math an

6、d me是 邏輯主語，mjcy改為例cyingq【考點定位】考查短文改錯【名師點睛】這篇短文改錯是記敘文，短文的內(nèi)容和學生的日常生活有關。錯誤之處的設置都是平常學生容易錯的地方?？疾辄c比較全面，各種詞性都考查到了，也涉及到一些語法知識的考查，如：非謂語動詞，時態(tài)等。2.12015 四川】短文改錯（共 10小題；每小題1.5分，共15分）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（？），并在其下面寫出該加的詞；刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 .每句不超過兩個錯誤；2 .每處錯誤

7、及其修改均僅限一次；3 . 3.只允許修改10出，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Hi, Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. Wehang out together during lunch and after school. Weve been spendin

8、g a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs memany. And I started to see this as a time wasting activity! In fact ,I don t like to go anymore, so I m afraid I ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Pleas

9、e help with me and give me some advice.Grace【答案】61. 加上to62. tell-told63. friend-friends64.sing-singing65. many-much66.so-but67. How-What68. are-were69. him-them70. 去掉 with【解析】試題分析：文章主要通過一封求助信，寫出了寫信人的困擾。作者交了三個新朋友，經(jīng)常一 起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其實作者并不喜歡這樣，他想知道自己該怎么做才不會失去這段友誼。61 .加上to考查動詞want的用法，want用不定式擔當狀語，故加上 to。句意為

10、：我真地很 想和你分享一下我經(jīng)歷的問題。62 . tell -told 考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)時間狀語last time可知，此句需要用一般過去時，故把tell改成told 。句意為正如我上次告訴你的那樣。2163 . friend friends 考查名詞的復數(shù)。名詞 friend 為可數(shù)名詞，其前有 three修飾，需要 用復數(shù)形式，故把friend 改成friends 。句意為：我在這兒交了三個新朋友。64 .sing singing 考查動名詞擔當賓語。本句考查句型spend（in ） doing sth 結構，故赳！ sing 改成 singing 。65. many much考查代詞。根據(jù)

11、句意，指的是花費很多錢，故用 much而非many。句意為： 那真的花費很多。66.so-but考查連詞。上一分句意為：我不想再去；下一分句意為：我怕失去他們的友誼，兩個分句之間有轉折關系，故把so改成but。67. How- What考查疑問詞的選擇。本句中do之后缺少賓語，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大寫。68. are were考查虛擬語氣。根據(jù)句子可知，此處為虛擬語氣，與現(xiàn)在事實不相符，故把are改成were。句意為：如果你是我，。69. himthem考查代詞。根據(jù)上文可知，作者交了三個朋友，故用 them而非him。句意為： 你會和他們說嗎？70. 去掉with考

12、查動詞。動詞help為及物動詞，其后接賓語時無需加介詞，故去掉 with 。 句意為：請幫幫我，給我一些建議?！究键c定位】考查短文糾錯【名師點睛】本篇文章考查學生的短文糾錯能力。短文糾錯能力考查的范圍較廣，如各類詞類用法和各種語法知識。本篇文章中既考查了詞類用法如：61、63、65、66、69、70題，也考查了學生的語法知識如：62、64、67、68,涉及多種語法知識。要求考生要通讀全文，把握大意，還要逐讀各句才能找出錯誤所在。3.12015 浙江】短文改錯（共 10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號

13、（A）,并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spentA weekend with you. LuckilytheI was completely free then, so I ll to say yes . I ll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m.amin Friday evening.OnMy old classroom was interes

14、ting because three side of the classroom were madefrom glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. Onthe left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splen

15、did.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Fartherin the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right sideof the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry inthe morning. The position of the classroom with its

16、 view made me felt like I wasdreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.【答案】side-sidesfrom-tosit-sittingeasy-easily is-was them-it not刪除 in hurry- in a hurry felt-feelIf-Although/Though【解析】試題分析：這是一篇介紹教室的文章。side-sides考查名詞的單復數(shù)。根據(jù)前面的three ,此處應該使用復數(shù)形式from-to

17、 考查介詞搭配 make of 與make from兩者都常用在被動語態(tài)中,表示“某物由 構成的”.make of的原材料是看的到的 ，即平常我們說的物理現(xiàn)象，比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是有木頭彳物式的。而 make from的原材料是看不到的，比如Paper is made from the trees. 紙張是由木材做成的.是一種化學變化，從紙上是看不出一棵樹滴.sit-sitting考查動名詞動詞enjoy后接ing 形式。easy-easily 考查副詞 此處的副詞彳飾動詞 seeis-was考查動詞的謂語時態(tài)根據(jù)前后句的謂語時態(tài)都是使用過去的，所以這

18、里面也需要用過去時態(tài)。them-it考查代詞 此處的it指代的是學校。刪除not 考查意思是否表否定該句的意思應該是表達肯定而不是否定所以要刪除notin hurry- in a hurry考查冠詞in a hurry 意為立刻”，也是一個固定搭配felt-feel考查使役動詞的法。Make sb do sth,是使役動詞的用法。If-Although/Though考查連詞的用法，根據(jù)句意“盡管在我讀書的時候我是一個小孩，但我不會忘記它”表達讓步，而不是條件。而且翻譯為如果意思上也不通。【考點定位】短文改錯【名師點睛】這種題目對語法的要求很高，要求注意上下文的，以及單詞的用法，以及特殊 用法、

19、固定搭配等。其實這一些錯誤很有可能是在寫作中會出現(xiàn)，所以，加強寫作的練習對 于這一種題目，也是有幫助的。另外，這種題目也可以改編一下，成為語法填空的題目。4.12015 新課標全國II 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞作斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；One day , little

20、 Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked intothe shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where hisparents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woma

21、n saw him drying andtelling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. Tony promised herthat this would never happen again.【答案】71. parent 改為 parents72. on 改為 in73. very 去掉74. looks 改為 looking75. where改為that

22、或者去掉where76. begun 改為 began77. telling 改為 told78. a 改為 the79. saw 后加 his80. terrible 改為 terribly21【解析】試題分析：本文講述了小男孩TQ可和父母上街購物，街上人多J TQ畤沒有告訴父母就獨自進了一家商店, 結果和父母走散，后來在街上又得以相見的故事。7L paist改為parwntw看下文可知，是父母兩個,所以用pa代皿。72, on改為in Tq可走進商店，說明玩具在櫥窗里面j用由。73、y去掉這里是仃如此喜滋以至于”的意思1t應該是：1次somuchthd74 looks改為looking a

23、fter之后跟從句或v-ing形式，故100ks改為looking 。75. where改為that或者去掉whet foimd后面的宜語從句是陳述句？故v-here改為that或者去掉v.hete*70 begun改為began and前后的謂語動詞時態(tài)要一致,故begun改為began o77. telling改為told and前后的謂語動詞時態(tài)要一致，和長口是并列渭語,故telling改為7& 3改為the由上下文可知，此處shop是第二次出現(xiàn)，應該用定冠詞，故a改為th會7女沮叫后加him由上下文可知，他看到的是他的父母事故電火后加hin80, terrible 改為 terribl

24、y 修飾形容詞 worried 要用副詞,故 terrible 改為 terribly*【考點定位】語法填空。【名師點睛】通過短短的 100多個詞，使考生能正確運用各類詞和固定搭配，如動詞、名詞、副詞、代詞和連詞，辨別并改正錯誤。總的說來，本題都是學生平時書面表達中常見的錯誤。多讀多練習就能找出問題所在，也能對寫作有幫助。5.12015 新課標全國I】第一節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之問交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并

25、在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. NowI am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean orthe mountains are green. Unfortun

26、ately, on the development of industrialization, theenvironment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warminghas already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect yourenvironment. If we fail to do so ,we ll live to regret it .【答案】76. think - thought77. countryside 前力口 the78. or and79. on w