任務(wù)型寫作指導(dǎo)(廣東)（課堂PPT）

1、1 summary?WritingHow to write a 2IV. 寫作寫作(共兩節(jié),滿分40分)第一節(jié)第一節(jié): 基礎(chǔ)寫作基礎(chǔ)寫作 第二節(jié)第二節(jié):讀寫任務(wù)讀寫任務(wù)(共1小題,滿分25分)請根據(jù)以下的任務(wù)說明和寫作要求,寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文.任務(wù)說明 請認真閱讀下面的短文,然后完成以下的任務(wù):1 )概括短文的內(nèi)容要點概括短文的內(nèi)容要點,該部分的詞數(shù)大約該部分的詞數(shù)大約 30-50字左右字左右;)Leading in3Summary is a short passage giving the main points of an original article.摘要Warming u

2、p4Preparation for writing a summaryFind key wordsFind key sentencesFind the main ideaWarming up5任務(wù)型寫作任務(wù)型寫作-歸納大意的寫作歸納大意的寫作仔細閱讀所給的文段仔細閱讀所給的文段.找出每一個段落的主題句找出每一個段落的主題句(topic sentence), 并用下劃并用下劃線劃出。注意首句和首段原則。線劃出。注意首句和首段原則。根據(jù)題目的詳細要求，審清要寫的短文的題材和體根據(jù)題目的詳細要求，審清要寫的短文的題材和體裁如裁如“發(fā)言發(fā)言/演講稿演講稿”、書信、日記、通知、記敘文、書信、日記、通知、

3、記敘文、說明文或議論文（說明文或議論文（比較少是議論文比較少是議論文）等等。從整體）等等。從整體上把握好文章的格式和結(jié)構(gòu)。上把握好文章的格式和結(jié)構(gòu)。根據(jù)要求和主題以及自己要表達的觀點，確立好根據(jù)要求和主題以及自己要表達的觀點，確立好標標題題1. 根據(jù)找出的每一個段落的主題句，用同義詞、短語根據(jù)找出的每一個段落的主題句，用同義詞、短語或句子，通過恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或過渡詞串寫成個句子?；蚓渥?，通過恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或過渡詞串寫成個句子。（30詞）詞）6Passage I How to choose a career1.At fifteen,students should be told what caree

4、r to pursue based on their school performance. 2. Most students are confused about what career to choose. 3. They need to be told what to do. 4. When students choose a career themselves, they usually pick one they dont know much about. 5. When they get a job, they discover they dont like it, then al

5、l their education and training is wasted. 6. If careers were assigned instead of chosen, society would always have the right number of workers. 7. Unemployment would decrease and job satisfaction would be higher. 8. And taxpayers would know that money going to education was being well spent.7 How to

6、 choose a career1.At fifteen,students should be told what career to pursue based on their school performance. 2. Most students are confused about what career to choose. 3. They need to be told what to do. 4. When students choose a career themselves, they usually pick one they dont know much about. 5

7、. When they get a job, they discover they dont like it, then all their education and training is wasted. 6. If careers were assigned instead of chosen, society would always have the right number of workers. 7. Unemployment would decrease and job satisfaction would be higher. 8. And taxpayers would k

8、now that money going to education was being well spent.8Task Summary At fifteen,students should know what career they will have in the future based on their school performance. They need instructions. Society pays when young people choose the wrong career. (30 words)9Task : Write a summary of passag

9、e Lets have a try!Read the passage and write a summary10Task Two Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. And the money spent on space e

10、xploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. On the other hand, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to sol

11、ve the problem of energy shortages on the earth. Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. 11Task Two 1 Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. 2 30% of us think space exploratio

12、n is not worthwhile. 3 They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. 4 And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. 5 On the other hand, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. 6

13、We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. 7 Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.8 Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. 12Task TwoPart:

14、Part:Part: Three parts:How many parts can we group the passage into?Sentence OneSentences Two-FourSentences Five-Eight13section: Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring.section: 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is

15、 too far away from us and our daily life. And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. WhatA survey on whether(Result ) DisagreementTask TwoWhat does the writer want to tell us in each part?14Task Twosection: On the other hand, 70

16、% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth. Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the

17、 population problem by moving to other planets one day. (Result) Agreement15Task TwoOutline because and . While because and .A survey on whether space is worth exploring What: Disagreement: Agreement :not worthwhile ; too far awayour daily life; a waste of money.worth; benefit a lot; solve problem o

18、f communication , weather forecast, energy shortages, even the population.16Task Two A survey, whether space is worth exploring, of our class, shows 30% of the students think it unnecessary, because the exploring has little to do with our daily life and it will be a waste of money. While 70% think i

19、t worthwhile because it brings us benefit and helps to solve the problem of communication, weather report , energy shortage, and even population problem. (64words)Summary17Task Two A survey, whether space is worth exploring, of our class, shows 30% of the students think it unnecessary, because the e

20、xploring which wastes money has little to do with our daily life . While 70% think it worthwhile because it brings us benefit . (42words)Summary18What should you pay attention to when writing a summary? Focus on main ideas and omit(省去省去) examples, specific details, and minor supports.2. Mainly use t

21、he words and phrases in the original passage. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use our own words.(主要引主要引用原文的詞句用原文的詞句,不能添加自己的見解不能添加自己的見解，但是要用自己的，但是要用自己的語言概括）語言概括）3. Write it in the third person .（第三人稱）（第三人稱）suggestions19 Change unnecessary clauses into phrases2. Change useless phrases

22、into single words 3.Change the sentence structure(結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu))4.Change the voice(語態(tài)語態(tài)) of the sentence5.Use the synonyms(同義詞同義詞)About the language20讀寫任務(wù)型寫作模板讀寫任務(wù)型寫作模板 標題標題第一段第一段: :第二段第二段: :第三段第三段: : 概括所給短文內(nèi)容要點概括所給短文內(nèi)容要點約約30字字過渡詞引出主題句過渡詞引出主題句-自己的觀點自己的觀點-理由理由 約約105字字總結(jié)句總結(jié)句 約約15字字21 標題標題 標題是段落中心思想的精練表達形式。根據(jù)所寫

23、短文的標題是段落中心思想的精練表達形式。根據(jù)所寫短文的內(nèi)容，概括出中心思想然后加以提煉，擬定標題；（如內(nèi)容，概括出中心思想然后加以提煉，擬定標題；（如果沒有要求，可以不寫）果沒有要求，可以不寫） Is time more valuable than money？ On Smoking How to make friends？ Happiness Is watching TV a good thing? My view of money / time / pollution My attitude toward building a car factory 22第一段：概括所給短文內(nèi)容要點第一段

24、：概括所給短文內(nèi)容要點注意：利用原文中所給的語言材料，用自己的話來寫；概括后的文章意思要通順，注意：利用原文中所給的語言材料，用自己的話來寫；概括后的文章意思要通順，行文要連貫。行文要連貫。寫作具體方法和要求寫作具體方法和要求:第一段概括要做到第一段概括要做到開門見山開門見山: 例如例如: According to the passage, we knowThis article is mainly aboutThe writer states that2. 第一段要做到第一段要做到有層次感有層次感: 必要時概括段中運用必要時概括段中運用 firstly,secondly,lastly, 或或

25、but, so等來列出原文作者觀點或內(nèi)容。等來列出原文作者觀點或內(nèi)容。3. 第一段概括要第一段概括要抓住要點抓住要點,語言精練語言精練: 23 The writer tells us that the parents should also do something about education. To start with, parents should provide friendly atmosphere. Next, parents should help their children become more independent and responsible. Parents

26、Help Is ImportantParents Help Is Important24 第二段第二段:過渡詞引出主題句過渡詞引出主題句-自己的觀點自己的觀點-理由理由 開頭用語：開頭用語： I do agree with the author In some way, I agree with , but Every coin has two sides. It is right in that, but This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. It is definitely not like that. As a matter

27、 of fact, In my opinion, From my personal point of view As far as Im concerned 25 第三段第三段最后一段最后一段 : 總結(jié)句開頭用語：總結(jié)句開頭用語： In conclusion, In short, In general, In a word, In belief, On the whole, All in all, 26 Examples: 1) All in all, the development of children is not only the responsibility of their par

28、ents, but also the responsibility of the whole society. 2) In a word, smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors, so it should be strictly forbidden. 3) In conclusion, we value money but cant put money above everything else.27讀寫任務(wù)型讀寫任務(wù)型寫作方法寫作方法總結(jié)28寫作具體方法和要求寫作具體方法和要求:第一段概括要做到開門見山第一段概括要做到開門見山: 例如例如: According to the passage, we knowThis article is mainly aboutThe writer states that29 2. 做到整體語篇和概括段層次感要強,如: 1) 整體語篇用連接詞等引出每一段整體語篇用連接詞等引出每一段 第一段第一段: According to 約約30詞詞