高中英語寫作(概要寫作范文答案與解析)

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上- 閱讀短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。 's life has been changed through the China's “NewThe way of Chinese people Four Great Inventions”.What are “New Four Great Inventions”？ They are High-speed rail, Shared bike, Online shopping and AliPay. bring to usWhat did the ChinaNew Four Great Inve

2、ntions“'s？” High-speed rail Modern transportation makes everybody neighbors. The invention of the high-speed railway makes it easy to thousands of miles a day. Today the Chinaaverage of 4, 000s daily''s rail transit technology isthe best,China trains, sending about 4.6 million passengers

3、. Shared bike Short walks become more convenient and faster, and carbon missions are reduced, which is friendly to the environment. You can download the APP about shared bikes, pay some money, then you can use bicycles everywhere in the street. The Chinese shared bicycle programs have been becoming

4、more and more popular. Online shoppingng. Onlinet need to go out to find the needs for livi'Don shopping, as the name implies, is to pay money online. Purchases( 購買物 ) can be sent home. China has 751 million internet users, 724 million mobile phone users; total transactions (December 12 hit a re

5、cordhighevery year. ) on November 11 and銷售額 OnlineshoppingChinese internetusers enjoycarnivallets”shopping every day.“ AlipayA software which can replace cash payment. With intelligence phones' popularization, AliPay has become an indispensable (不可或缺的 ) APP. Through scanning thewants to realizet

6、he ambitionofcashreplacing“QR code”, AliPay payments” gradually. On 11 November 2018, both the mobile payment account and the transaction reached 213.5 billion. There isno doubt thatChina has alreadyused itsown power of“New Four Great country,technologicalshowing the powerpowerful to become the grea

7、t Inventio ns” of China once again. _ _ _ _ - - _ _ _ _ High-speed rail, Shared bike,Four Great Inventions“【答案】 China's new” Online shopping and AliPay have changed Chinese people 's life. High -speed rail makes trips faster than before. Meanwhile, Shared bike lets the short walks become fas

8、ter, more convenient and environmentally friendly. Online shopping creates many business opportunities on the internet and Alipay will gradually replace cash payment. Without doubt, new four inventions contribute to a great and powerful technological China. 【解析】 【分析】 這是一篇概要寫作應(yīng)用文。 【詳解】如何提取要點(diǎn)，注意事項(xiàng)。 本文

9、是一篇說明文。 主要介紹了中國新的“四大發(fā)明”：高速鐵路，共享單車，網(wǎng)上購物和 支付寶。文章結(jié)構(gòu)為總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。 第一、二段總起全文，介紹了中國新的“四大發(fā)明”，因此圍繞這一句話可以展開概述。 第三、四、五和第六段詳細(xì)介紹新的“四大發(fā)明”。第四段介紹高速鐵路，其中“The ”invention of the high-speed railway makes it easy to thousands of miles a day. 指出高速鐵路的發(fā)明使得交通更加快速，故可根據(jù)本句進(jìn)行概述為High-speed rail makes Short；第五段介紹共享單車“than before. walk

10、s become more convenienttrips faster to the environment. ”friendlyand carbon missions are reduced, which isand faster, 指出共享單車使短途行走變得更加方便快捷，減少了碳排放任務(wù)，對環(huán)境友好。 故可根據(jù)本 句進(jìn)行概述為Shared bike lets the short walks become faster, more convenient and environmentally friendly.total transactions (銷售；第五段介紹了網(wǎng)上購物，指出“ 額) on November 11 and December 12 hit a record high every year.”高額的銷售額意 A softwarewhich can replace cash payment. ”味著更多的商業(yè)機(jī)會；第六段介紹支付寶“ cash payme