英語記敘文寫作

1、英語記敘文寫作一、記敘文的特點(diǎn)記敘文是以敘述、描寫為主要表達(dá)手段來記人、敘事、寫景、狀物的一種文 體。通常分為三類:1（以人物為主的記敘文，即以人物為中心組織材料，圍繞這個(gè)人物來寫一件或 兩件事。2（以事件為主的記敘文，即以事件為中心組織材料，圍繞中心事件，可以寫一 個(gè)人或幾個(gè)人。3（以寫景狀物為主的記敘文。但是“人以事顯，事由人生”，人和事是密不可 分的。也就是說，在一篇記敘文中，記人、寫景、敘事往往是交織在一起的，不可 硬性分開，但各有側(cè)重。 二、記敘文的寫作技巧在寫記敘文時(shí)通常應(yīng)遵循以下幾點(diǎn):1（確定文章內(nèi)容和中心。定內(nèi)容時(shí)，選材要注意新穎和真實(shí)。因?yàn)樾路f的題材 才能吸引讀者的興趣，真實(shí)

2、的內(nèi)容才能流露出真情實(shí)感。選材時(shí)不一定總是要寫驚 天動(dòng)地的大事，也可以寫日常生活中的小事，通過“以小見大”的點(diǎn)滴小事更能反 映出一個(gè)人的性格特征和精神風(fēng)貌，更能打動(dòng)讀者。定中心時(shí)要注意文章中心思想 的明確和集中。要抓住文章要表現(xiàn)的精神，讓讀者一目了然。而且文章主旨要集 中，不能太分散。2（要交待要素，即時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果。在行文的過 程中交待要素時(shí)，不能呆板，要根據(jù)情況靈活把握。3.記敘文一定要有清楚的線索。雖然觀察的角度、記述的方式可以不同，但 每一篇文章都應(yīng)當(dāng)有一條關(guān)聯(lián)材料、統(tǒng)貫全篇的中心線索，否則文章就會(huì)松散。4（要力求內(nèi)容具體。有了具體的內(nèi)容，文章才能顯得生動(dòng)，才

3、能使人受到感染 并留下深刻的印象。要做到這一點(diǎn)，必須善于在敘事過程中對(duì)最能體現(xiàn)人物思想、 性格特征的肖像、語言、行動(dòng)和心理等進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)孛鑼憽?（記敘文通常是按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序來表達(dá)內(nèi)容的，而且要根據(jù)文章的中 心確定詳略并且要得當(dāng)。6（對(duì)于寫景狀物類的文章，要注意寫出被描寫事物的形和神，做到形神兼俱， 更重要的是一定要寫出作者的思想感情，表達(dá)出作者的人生態(tài)度和追求等。這類文 章我們可以采用“借景抒情”“托物言志”的寫作方法。7（寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)和人稱。一般用第一人稱寫本人的經(jīng)歷和耳聞目睹的事 情，用第三人稱寫他人經(jīng)歷的事情，記敘文所記的一般是過去發(fā)生的事情，所以原則上通常 用過去時(shí)態(tài)來寫。三

4、（記敘文寫作模板:,架構(gòu)階段,第一段:開篇句:about _ oclock one evening in _, _ .擴(kuò)展句:_ . （展開描述一下事件）第二段:主題句:without hesitation, _. it wasnt long before _.擴(kuò)展句:1、one _ .2、another _ .3、our teacher _ .第三段:結(jié)尾句:is _? who can tell ? but _.擴(kuò)展句:1、when _ , people showed _ spirit regardless of _.2、this kind of care between persons i

5、s the very kind giving, unselfish andpriceless devotion or sacrifice.3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy lifeand a beautiful world.,填充階段,第一段:開篇句:about nine oclock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed,trembling with cold and having a cough

6、.擴(kuò)展句:his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt veryhot. we took his temperature. it was 38?. （展開描述一下事件）第二段:主題句:without hesitation, i dialed 120. it wasnt long before an ambulance arrived.擴(kuò)展句:1、one roommate brought a blanket for him.2、another supported him in the ambul

7、ance.3、our teacher insisted on giving him some money.第三段:結(jié)尾句:is he a suspected sars patient? who can tell ? but we didnt retreat.擴(kuò)展句:1、when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spiritregardless ofdangers to their own health.2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving

8、, unselfish and pricelessdevotion or sacrifice.3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life anda beautiful world.記敘文佳作欣賞about nine oclock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed,trembling withcold and having a cough.his head was aching so intens

9、ely that he kept groaning. hisforehead feltvery hot. we took his temperature. it was 38?.without hesitation, i dialed 120. it wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. oneroommatebrought a blanket for him. another supported him in the ambulance. our teacherinsisted on givinghim some money.is he a susp

10、ected sars patient? who can tell ? but we didnt retreat. when the savagesars wasspreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their ownhealth.this kind of carebetween persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion orsacrifice.and it is justbecause of this care

11、that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautifulworld.How to write a picture storyStep1: Watch the pictures from the first one to the last one and get the main idea ofthe wholestory.Step2: Choose the correct main point or phrase for each picture. clock didnt ringwoke up lateCook in gbur

12、ned my handran outmissed the busran three miles to the schoolarrived therefo und that it was Sun dayStep3: Put each group of words into a senten ce. (Pay atte nti on tothe correct verb form.)I bur ned my hand whe n I was cook ing breakfast.I ran out of the house to catch the bus. I missed it.I had t

13、o run three miles to the school.(I had to go to school on foot.)Whe n I arrived there , I found that it was Sun day.Step4: Choose correct conn ectives to join the senten ces into a passageMay 18th cloudyIn the morning, my alarm clock did nt ring so I woke up an hour late.I was in such a hurry that I

14、 bur nt my hand when I was cook ing breakfast.Then I ran out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I missed it.I was very un happy because I knew my teacher got angry if anyone was late forclass. So I ran three miles to the school. But when I arrived there in the en d, I found thatit was

15、 Sun day.My FatherMy father is a tall man with a pair of glasses( Everyone says he isa kind,hearted man( Heoften helps our neighbors and some strangers whom he doesnt know at all( Hehas really done a lotfor others( I dont like him to do so because I think it has takenhim too much time( When Idiscour

16、age him，he always says with a smile，“The world needswarm hearts(”My father loves our family，and loves his work even better( In thecompany，he is called“workaholic”( He spends most of his time working，and he oftenforgets to have meals or to go tobed( As a result，he doesnt enjoy good health(My father l

17、ikes reading in his spare time( He told me reading wasvery interesting( I becameinterested in reading little by little( I like books，because theyhelp me in many ways( My father has a bad habithe likes smoking verymuch( I hate it( Look，the house is full ofsmoke( I know its bad forhis health as well a

18、s mine and my mothers( I advise him to give upsmoking(Im sure he willfollow my advice some day(Such is my father( I love him very much( I am proud of having sogood a father(評(píng)析】本文是很好地運(yùn)用了首括句的方法，使我們對(duì)作者父親的特點(diǎn)一目了然。一位嚴(yán)格自律，工作認(rèn)真，樂于助人，熱愛家庭的慈父躍然紙上。同時(shí)，我們從文中也 感受到濃濃的父女深情。A Visit to Qinhuang IslandLast summer the

19、weather was hotter than usual( Everything was done but peoplecouldnt make themselves comfortable( The summer holidays came，and my familydecided to go to Qinhuang Island to spend a few days there( On the first day of our trip，we climbed up the hill calledXifeng，which is near the coast( You cant imagi

20、ne how wonderful theview is from the top ofXifeng( Here was an overall picture of the small town( We saw lots of whitebuildings with red roofs among big green trees( There is the vast sea with many littlegreen islands on it(The next day we got up early and went excitedly to the beach near the hotel

21、towatch the sunrising( We looked to the east( The clouds were reddish and then turned brightred( Soon the sun slowly showed half of her face( The sky around the sun was verybright and suddenly the sun had aleap from the sea and her full face appeared with golden rays setting out( The sealooked as if it was covered with red silk( The sight was so beautiful that we would neverforget it(Not only is the scenery beautiful therevery friendly( We also bought many things thereshells and a lot of sea,food(To our disappointment，we had to leave the island( But wellalways remember this trip and thepeopl