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1、四級寫作四級寫作(xizu)評分標準評分標準第一頁,共20頁。一一 。 評分評分(png fn)原則原則1。 CET-4作文題采用總體評分方法作文題采用總體評分方法(fngf). 閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分.而不是按語言點的錯誤數(shù)目扣分而不是按語言點的錯誤數(shù)目扣分2。 從內(nèi)容到語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判從內(nèi)容到語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判. 要考慮作文是否切題,是否充分表達思想。也要要考慮作文是否切題,是否充分表達思想。也要 考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解(lji)上的障礙,上的障礙, 用詞和造句是否清楚而確切的表達思想。用詞和造句
2、是否清楚而確切的表達思想。二。二。 評分標準評分標準1。 本題滿分為15分。 2。 閱卷標準共分五等:2分, 5分, 8分, 11分, 14分。 2分-條理不清.思路紊亂.語言支離破碎.大部分句子有錯誤。且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。 5分-基本切題,表達思想不夠清楚, 連貫性差,有較多嚴重的語言錯誤。8分-基本切題,表達思想比較清楚,文章尚連貫,但語言錯誤較多,11分-切題,表達思想清楚,文字連貫, 但有少量語言錯誤。14分- 切題,表達思想清楚,文字通順,連貫性較好,基本上無語言錯誤。3。 評分標準第1頁/共20頁第二頁,共20頁。4。 字數(shù)字數(shù)(z sh)不足者應酌情扣分。不足者應酌情扣分。累計(l
3、i j)字數(shù)在 81-89之間. 扣1分。 71-80之間.扣2分。 61-70之間.扣3分。 51-60之間.扣4分。 50字以下.最多給5分。100-119扣1分;90-99扣3分;80-89扣4分;70-79扣5分;60-69扣6分;50-59扣7分;不足50扣9分。 5。 只寫一段者:0-4分, 只寫兩段者:0-9分,第2頁/共20頁第三頁,共20頁。第3頁/共20頁第四頁,共20頁。分析(fnx)樣卷1 A Letter to a Schoolmate You cant imagine how happy I was when I heard that you would come
4、to visit me. We havent seen each other for a long time, so I am counting the days. I have arranged a schedule for our holiday. You havent been to Shanghai before. When you see it, you will be hard to believe your eyes. Shanghai is very modern. First, we will go out for shopping, and then go some sig
5、ht-seeings, such as Yu Yuan Garden and People square. If you like, we can go to see some old friends. I bet they will be as happy as I am when seeing you. Do you like the suggestion I made above? If there is something unsuitable, we will talk about them when you arrive. OK? Oh, please remember to br
6、ing your winter clothes with you, because Shanghai is a little bit colder than siChuan. Remember me to your parents. have arranged a schedule you will be hard to believe your eye go out for shopping go some sight-seeings, such asPeople square.Oh第4頁/共20頁第五頁,共20頁。修改(xigi)分析樣卷1 A Letter to a Schoolmate
7、 You cant imagine how happy I was when I heard that you would come to visit me. We havent seen each other for a long time, so I am counting the days. I have arranged a schedule for our holiday.(have draw up a schedule for your holiday.). (As you)You havent been to Shanghai before. (I guess the first
8、 thing youd like to do is make a tour of the city.You will find it hard to believe your eyes when you see it, for it is very modern now.)When you see it, you will be hard to believe your eyes. Shanghai is very modern. First, we will go out for shopping, and then go some sight-seeings,( So first, we
9、will go sightseeing, such as ( visiting)Yu Yuan Garden and ( the )People(s) square. ( Then we will do some shopping.)If you like, we can go( and) to see some old friends. I bet they will be as happy as I am ( to) when seeing you. ( What do you think of )Do you like the suggestion I made above? If th
10、ere is something unsuitable, we will talk about ( it )them when you arrive. OK? 第5頁/共20頁第六頁,共20頁。( By the way, dont forget to bring )Oh, please remember to bring your winter clothes with you, because Shanghai is a little bit colder than SiChuan. (Remember to give my regards) Remember me to your pare
11、nts.第6頁/共20頁第七頁,共20頁。評析:11分優(yōu)點: 內(nèi)容切題(qit),提綱要求的三個方面都寫到了,文字簡潔, 層次清楚,語言錯誤比較少。不足之處: 1 文章的組織不夠嚴密。 2 句子結(jié)構(gòu)和詞語搭配上都有一些(yxi)錯誤。第7頁/共20頁第八頁,共20頁。 A Letter to a Schoolmate分析(fnx)樣卷2 Im very glad that you will come to see me during the week-long holiday. We have not seen each other for two years. So this time we
12、 can spend the holiday together will make me so happy. Since you left Shanghai two years ago, Shanghai has changed a lot. The city is more beautiful and buildings are higher. You will surely superise the changes. I have helped you to make some arrangments during the holiday. We can go shopping in Na
13、njing Road which is the best road of Shanghai. We can go to peoples square and history museum to visit. We can also visit the jingMao Building which is the highest building of China. Shanghai has many new and good place we can visit. The time table of visit we can make when you come.What do you thin
14、k of my advice. By the way, you should telephone me when you come to Shanghai, I will meet you in the railway station. Im waiting for your come.第8頁/共20頁第九頁,共20頁。 A Letter to a Schoolmate分析分析(fnx)樣卷樣卷2 Im very glad that you will come to see me during the week-long holiday. We have not seen each other
15、 for two years. So this time we can spend the holiday together will make me so happy. Since you left Shanghai two years ago, Shanghai has changed a lot. The city is more beautiful and buildings are higher. You will surely superise the changes. I have helped you to make some arrangments during the ho
16、liday. We can go shopping in Nanjing Road which is the best road of Shanghai. We can go to peoples square and history museum to visit. We can also visit the jingMao Building which is the highest building of China. Shanghai has many new and good place we can visit. The time table of visit we can make
17、 when you come.What do you think of my advice. By the way, you should telephone me when you come to Shanghai, I will meet you in the railway station. Im waiting for your come.第9頁/共20頁第十頁,共20頁。第10頁/共20頁第十一頁,共20頁。 By the way, you should telephone me when you come to Shanghai, I will meet you (at)in th
18、e railway station. Im waiting for your come.(Im looking forward to your arrival.)第11頁/共20頁第十二頁,共20頁。評析:8分優(yōu)點: 內(nèi)容切題,條理基本清楚,前后(qinhu)也還連貫,作者基本上能 表達自己的意思,讀者也基本上能看懂。不足之處:該考生對英語語法和詞匯的掌握還需要進一步提高,文章(wnzhng) 中句子結(jié)構(gòu)上的嚴重錯誤較多,有明顯的按中文語序造句 的痕跡。第12頁/共20頁第十三頁,共20頁。分析(fnx)樣卷3 A Letter to a Schoolmate I am delighted t
19、o learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday. My parents will also be happy to see you again. I am sure you will enjoy every minute here. I know you are fond of swimming. A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there. I think it would be very pleasant and ref
20、reshing to swim in such hot summer days. In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner, we can watch TV, play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home. A mountain. about two miles away from here there is beautiful and it is worth touring. We can go there on foot. When we climb to the t
21、op of the mountain,we can have a wonderful bird-eye view of the whole village. Just phone me before you set off. There is no need for you to take anything. Ill prepare everything for you. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.第13頁/共20頁第十四頁,共20頁。 修改(xigi)分析樣卷3 A Letter to a Schoolmate I am delighte
22、d to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday. My parents will also be happy to see you again. I am sure you will enjoy every minute here. I know you are fond of swimming. A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there. I think it would be very pleasant and
23、refreshing to swim in such hot summer days. ( Besides)In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner, we can watch TV, play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home. A mountain. about two miles away from here there is beautiful and it is worth touring.( About two miles away from here th
24、ere is a beautiful mountain and it is worth climbing.). We can go there on foot. When we climb to the top of the mountain(reach its top.),we can have a wonderful bird-eye(birds-eye) view of the whole village. 第14頁/共20頁第十五頁,共20頁。 Just phone me before you set off. There is no need for you to take anyt
25、hing. Ill prepare everything for you. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.第15頁/共20頁第十六頁,共20頁。評析:14分優(yōu)點: 內(nèi)容切題,提綱(tgng)要求的三個方面都寫到了,文字簡潔 流暢,連貫性較好,其文體亦是個人書信常用的口語體。 該考生語法概念清楚,句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確,詞語搭配基本符 合英美人的習慣。不足之處: 1. touring 應為 climbing. 2. Bird-eye view 應為 birds-eye view. 3 第2段第4句和第5句之間的連接需加一個(y )轉(zhuǎn)折詞。如: beside
26、s,in addition, in the meantime.第16頁/共20頁第十七頁,共20頁。分析(fnx)樣卷4 A Letter to a Schoolmate I have know you will come to Shanghai. Three years ago, you went to the England. From then, we havent meet with each other. I welcome that you can return your country. From your letter, I have known you have a week
27、-long holiday. Thereis a great change in Shanghai. I think you must be feel suprised with what you see. So I advise you vist some place,that we often went ago. And you can visit some old-classmates. They also mise you very much. If you dont want to hotel, you can live in my home.Youd better buy a map. Im afraid you will be at a lost. But even if you cant find bus stop, you still can go to anywhere by taxi. I hop
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