（精心整理）高二英語(yǔ)5.13的續(xù)寫新

1、 高二英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫（5.13）一、品讀這篇文章，構(gòu)思寫作思路。（可以動(dòng)手寫個(gè)草稿，對(duì)比一下所給范文） 閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 I was touched through experiences, memories, books, stories, animals, angels, and most of all other people. People have moved me and molded（對(duì)影響重大）me with moments of love and examples of kindness. One time on the day be

2、fore Christmas many years ago when I was a minimum wage mill（工廠）worker, I found myself with very little money and very little time to buy my small children a few simple toys. I knew that they would have to be cheap ones and I hoped my children would like them. I hated not having enough to give them

3、more. I hated being poor. And I hated feeling bad at Christmas rather than happy. I pulled into a store parking lot and counted my money again. It wasnt much but maybe I could get something small with it. As I was getting out of the car I noticed the Salvation Army（救世軍）bell ringer at the entrance. I

4、 felt bad again because I didnt feel I could spare anything to give him. I started walking towards the entrance when two cars pulled into empty parking spots in front of me. The first was a shiny, new Cadillac and I felt a twinge of jealousy when I saw it. “How nice,” I thought, “Would it be to have

5、 enough money to buy a car like that.” The second car, though, was an ancient sedan（轎車）more beat-up and rusty than the one I was driving.A man hopped（沖）out of the Cadillac and hurried into the store right past the bell ringer without a second glance. Out of the old sedan came a young mother with thr

6、ee small children in tow（緊隨著）. Her clothes looked as worn out as her car, yet she stopped in front of the bell ringer, smiled, opened her purse, and dropped a bill in his red kettle（錢罐）.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ);3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。 Paragraph 1: I stood

7、there for a minute in astonishment. _ _ Paragraph 2:In that second a warmth touched me, my jealousy and hatred（憎恨）left me, and all the love and joy that are Christmas filled me. _ _文本解讀：本文為夾敘夾議文。作者是一位收入很低的母親，當(dāng)圣誕節(jié)來臨時(shí)，她很為孩子們的禮物犯愁。在商店外面時(shí)，她看到兩輛對(duì)比鮮明的轎車，一輛是凱迪拉克豪車(Cadillac)，另一輛是破舊的轎車?？墒亲屗@訝的是，豪車車主對(duì)救世軍撞鐘人的募

8、捐活動(dòng)熟視無睹，倒是那位舊車車主慷慨解囊。續(xù)寫提示：由續(xù)寫第一段出現(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞in astonishment可知，續(xù)寫此段時(shí)需注意作者的內(nèi)心變化，下文應(yīng)試著向令作者感到驚訝的方面寫。在作者的描述中，從羨慕豪車的主人到最后看到他和開舊車的女士對(duì)待愛心捐助的不同行為之后，作者對(duì)他們的不同舉動(dòng)的思考，以及在她內(nèi)心中對(duì)這兩位人物所給予的評(píng)價(jià)，都可以算是作者的內(nèi)心的起伏變化。由續(xù)寫第二段段首語(yǔ)可知，此段仍要繼續(xù)圍繞作者自己內(nèi)心的感受來寫，但比第一段更具體化了。分析上下文以及所出現(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞all the love and joy可推斷，續(xù)寫此段應(yīng)往圣誕節(jié)的精神給予和奉獻(xiàn)這個(gè)角度貼近。那么，作者勢(shì)必要向那位開

9、舊車的女士學(xué)習(xí)，為窮人獻(xiàn)愛心，因此所續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容要體現(xiàn)出作者自己是如何獻(xiàn)愛心的，然后再承接前文講的為孩子買禮物犯愁的事【范文展示】One possible version:Paragraph 1:I stood there for a minute in astonishment. “Maybe,” I thought to myself, “its better to be rich on the inside instead of the outside.” That rich man should have done something to help the poor, but he d

10、idnt. Sometimes it was really wrong to judge a person by his or her appearance. I really had respect for the poor mother from the bottom of my heart. She set a good example for her children to follow.Paragraph 2:In that second a warmth touched me, my jealousy and hatred（憎恨）left me, and all the love

11、and joy that are Christmas filled me. I fished a bill out of my own purse, dropped it in the Salvation Army kettle, and wished the bell ringer a merry Christmas. I found a few fun things to give my kids and drove home with my heart singing. I knew it was going to be a wonderful Christmas. I could ha

12、rdly wait to see my children enjoying the presents bought for them, including a special giftlove for those in need.二、今天的寫作任務(wù)（建議用時(shí)25分鐘）閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Mei Mei frowned as she helped her mother and father set out the cooking supplies in the shiny steel kitchen. Her family had just moved h

13、ere from San Francisco having bought a small restaurant, which was set to open in the next few days. "Moving here was a stupid idea. I have lost all my friends in San Francisco. What should I do now?" MeiMei grumbled, mostly to herself. " What's that? "Her mother asked, openi

14、ng a box and lifting out several pots (陶罐)and a work. "Nothing," MeiMei mumbled. The girl had been complaining about the move, but her parents had made the decision and were now too busy getting ready for the grand opening to listen to her complaints. The first few days at her new school h

15、adn't been easy, either. She found it hard to talk to people she didn't know, and it seemed like the students hadn't even noticed her. Mei Mei sighed and got back to washing dishes. On the day of the grand opening, Mei Mei's parents were all smiles. welcoming customers into the resta

16、urant, brightly decorated in gold and red. Even Mei Mei was in a good mood as she rushed around, seating guests, handing out menus, and pouring tall glasses of water. This was a big day for her family. At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Mei Meis age. As she filled their glasses, Mei Mei realized the twins were in her class. Mei Mei ducked her head down so her long hair covered her face, and she turned away from the table. Mei Meis mother found her soon after, in the kitchen loading the dishwasher. "Honey, what are you doing back here? We need you o