一份很牛很牛的重點高中英語應(yīng)用文寫作指南(超級實用)

1、一份很牛很牛的高中英語應(yīng)用文寫作指南（超級實用）一、邀請函特別注意：1 .邀請的語氣和口吻2 .時間和地點的表達(dá)（通常從小寫到大）3 .慎用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型和 first,second等關(guān)聯(lián)詞邀請信/函的一些句式表達(dá)：（一）開頭：1.I ' mwriting（thisletter）toinviteyoutodosth.（giveusstudentsalectureonEnglishliterature.）2.Wewouldliketoinviteyouto+sth.（thepresentationofournewproduct.）3.I ' mvery/greatlyhonoredto

2、inviteyoutodosth.（二）關(guān)于活動：（也適用于通知類應(yīng)用文）總起句I.Duringthe .,therew川beinterestingactivities.2.Avarietyofwell-organizedactivitiesarewaitingforyou.總起句后，按活動順序逐一介紹，加些表示時間的關(guān)聯(lián)詞。如 ：1.Thepartyw川begin/startwithabigdinner,afterwhichwewillplaygamesandappreciateperformancestogether.2.Wewillfirstexpressoursincerethanks

3、tohim,closelyfollowedbysendinggifts.3.Attheendoftheparty,therewillcome themostexcitingpart:地點和時間的表達(dá)：從小到大表述在學(xué)校餐廳:at/intheschoolcanteen/dininghall 在操場：ontheplayground在校園里：oncampus 在晚會期間：at/duringtheparty 在才艮告廳：inthelecturehall英國倫敦橡樹街100 號：atNo.100OakStreet,London,England周六下午：onSaturdayafternoon 周日下午 5

4、 點：at5p.m.thisSunday/at5thisSundayafternoon2016 年 9 月 26 日上午 8 點開始：startoi8a.m.onSeptember26th/26,2016常用句型：1. Wewilldo +時間和地點例：Wewillgatherontheschoolplaygroundat4p.m.onOctober13th,2016tomakeavow.（宣誓）2. sth.willbedone時血和地點（被動語態(tài)）例：Thepartywillbeheld3. Sth.isscheduledtobedone日寸iW口地點（被動語態(tài)）例：Thespeechis

5、scheduledtobegivenonApril,28attheSchoolhall.表達(dá)活動的目的：1.Inorderto ，wewill （三）結(jié)尾：1.Ibelieveyouwillbeinterestedin asitwillhelpyou 2 .Thepartywon ' tbecompletewithoutyou.Docomealongandenjoyyourself.3 .Don ' tmissthisopportunitytohavefun!Lookforwardtoyourearliestreply.4 .We' dlovetohaveyuherei

6、fyoucanmakeit.Pleaseinformusatyourearliestconvenience.5.Wewouldbegreatlyhonoredbyyourpresence.6.We/Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucould樣例1：假定你是李明。你所在的班級將舉行畢業(yè)告別派對（graduationfarewellparty）,請你給外教Mr.Robinson寫一封邀請信，內(nèi)容包括：1 .時間：周日下午 5點2 .地點：學(xué)校餐廳3 .活動安排：享用晚餐，觀看演出，分享美好回憶等等。參考范文：DearMr.Robinson,deliciousmeals

7、,playinterestinggamesandappreciatevariousperformancestogether.Thentherewillcomethemo stimportantpartoftheparty:sharingtheunforgettablemomentsinthepastthreeyears.Wewouldbegreatlyhonoredbyyourpresence.Ifyouacceptoursincereinvitation,pleaseinformusatyourearliestc onvenience,enablingustomakesomenecessar

8、ypreparations.YoursSincerely,LiMing樣例2:假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，想邀請來你們家鄉(xiāng)參加淘寶網(wǎng)當(dāng)?shù)仞^開館一周年慶?；顒?的阿里巴巴首席執(zhí)行官馬云來你校做一次成人禮的演講，請你給馬云首席寫一封邀請信。內(nèi)容包 括：1. 說明寫信的目的2. 說明演講的具體安排一時間：4月28日，地點：學(xué)校禮堂；主題：怎樣通過個人奮斗實現(xiàn)人生理想3. 表達(dá)感謝與祝福參考范文：DearMaYun,CEOofAlibaba,I 'mLiHua,aSenior3studentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.MayIhavethehonortoinviteyouto

9、giveusanadultcerem onyspeechonbehalfofalltheteachersandstudentsofourschoolThespeechisscheduledtobegivenonApril28attheSch oolhall,thethemeofwhichishowtorealizeourdreamthroughpersonalefforts.Weareeagertohearyoutalkaboutyouro wnexperienceanduniqueviews.Isincerelyhopeyoucantakeyourtimefromyourbusyschedu

10、le,andwewouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldc ome.Thankyouinadvanceandwishyouallthebest.Iamlookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.YoursSincerely,LiHua二、道歉信道歉信（三步走）：1.表示歉意2.說明具體原因，提出補救辦法3.再次致歉，希望得到理解。（一）開頭句型：1. Iamwritingtoapologizetoyouformyfailingtogotoyourhomeand discusswithyou

11、.2. Iamwritingtomakeanapologytoyouformybeingunablet。.3. lamwritingtoapologizetoyouformyabsencefromourappointment.4. Iamterribly/truly sorrythatIdidn ' tshowupatyourhometodiscuss thecomingEnglishspeechcontestasplanned.5. Ireallyregretthat /Itisashamethat （二）結(jié)尾句型：1. Pleaseallowmetosaysorrytoyouaga

12、in./ Pleaseallowmetoapologizetoyouagain.2. Manyapologies againforalltheinconvenienceI' vecausedyou.3. Hopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapologies./Pleaseacceptmysincerestapologies.（三）常用短語：1 .給某人添麻煩：causesb.somuchtrouble/inconvenience2 . 不能出席 can ' tattend/takepartin/joinin3 . 缺席:beab

13、sentfrom動畫短語）/myabsencefrom（名詞短語）4 .給某人添麻煩：causesb.somuchtrouble/inconvenience5 .食言，失信 breakone ' sword/promise6 .遵守諾言，守信用 keepone' swd/promise7 .如果方便的話 ifitisconvenientfor/toyou8 .不是有意的 Ididn ' tmeantodoso.或 Ididn ' tdothatonpurpose/deliberately.9 .我非常理解這會 山nderstanditwillcertainly

14、（putyouinaverybadmood/causeyoumuchtrouble）10 .答應(yīng)愿意賠償 IpromiseIwillcoveralltherelevantcosts./Iwillpayfor（makeupfor）your10ss.特別注意：1 .禮貌用語（道歉信的開頭和結(jié)尾、約定時間時的語氣） 不恰當(dāng)：IthinkwecandiscussthecontestnextSunday.禮貌說法： Wouldyoupleasetellmewhenyouareavailablesothatwecandiscussthecontestlater2 .敘述事件用一般過去時態(tài)，情節(jié)設(shè)計要合理樣

15、例1:你是李華，與同學(xué)王明約好到他家討論將要舉行的英語演講比賽，但是在路上目睹一起交通事故，并把傷者送往醫(yī)院，沒能赴約。請給他寫一封道歉信，新的內(nèi)容如下：1 .向李華表示歉意2 .解釋未能赴約的原因3 .約定時間以便再作討論參考范文：DearWangMing,Iamterribly sorrythatIdidn ' tshowupatyourhometodiscussthecomingEnglishspeechcontest asplanned.Pleaseexcusemeformyabsence.Onthewaytoyourhome,Icameacrossacaraccident.S

16、eeingthemanseriouslyinj ured,Isoonrushedhimtohospitalinataxiandstayedthereuntilhewasproperlytreated.Everythinghappenedsounexpec tedlythatIdidn ' thavetimetoinformyou.Pleaseacceptmysincereapology.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldkindlytellmewhenyouareavailablesothatwewilldis cussthecontestlater.Sincer

17、elyyours,LiHua.樣區(qū)J 2:假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的英國朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件：1. 表達(dá)歉意2.解釋原因3.另約時間參考范文：DearTom,Iknowwehavemadeanarra ngementtogoonatriptoBeijingtogethernextweekend,butI' msorrythatIcan ' tgcyouthistime.Yesterday,mymotherhadheranklesprained.Shewasadvisedbythedoctortol

18、ieinbedandrestforatleasta week,soIhavetolookaftermymotherduringthattime.Anyway,wewillhavemanymorechancestovisitBeijing.ShallwemakeitonJuly14thand15th ,whenIwillhavesomemoretimeavailableI ' mtrulysorry.Thankyouforyourunderstanding.Yourstruly,LiHua樣例3：假設(shè)你是李華，作為交換生( anexchangestudent)正在英國 windmillC

19、ollege 學(xué)習(xí)。今天早晨你騎車上學(xué)時不小心刮擦到了一輛停在路邊的汽車。由于急著上學(xué)，你無法在原地等候車主。請留一張便條，內(nèi)容包括：1.表明身份；2.簡述事情經(jīng)過；3.道歉并表示愿意賠償；4.聯(lián)系方式(Tel:5893671 )。表達(dá)歉意2.解釋原因3.另約口寸間參考范文：DearSir/Madam, I Bestregards! LiHua 學(xué)生習(xí)作： DearSir/Madam,I ' mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChinawhoisnowstudyinginWindmillCollege.Thismorning,asIwasheadi ngforsc

20、hool,mybikescratchedyourcarbyaccident,makingpartofitslightlydamaged.Timelimited,itisimpossiblefor metomeetyouinthefleshandthusIleaveyouthenote.Wordsarenotcapableofexpressingmyheart- feltregret.I ' msorrya ndwillcoveryourloss.I ' malwaysavailablethroughphoneoaitlistedbelow:Tel:5893671E-mail:

21、LiHua 三、祝賀信一、常用短語：祝賀某人某事congratulatesb.onsth./congratulations(to)sb.onsth.二、開頭句型：1.1 amveryhappytohearthat+ 句子(youhavewonthefirstprizein )2.Iammuchdelightedtolearnthat+ 句子3.Ihavelearnedwithdelightthat+ 句子4.Itisreallyexcitingtoknow/tobeinformedthat5.Iamwritingtoofferyoumysincerestcongratulationsonsth

22、.(yourwinningtheprize.)6 .Hearingthenewsthatyou ，IwasunabOMainmyexcitement.7 .Congratulationsonyourexamresults!/Congratulateyouon8 .Congratulations!Weareallproudofyourremarkableachievements.三、正文部分(對其成功進(jìn)行積極的評價)1 .興趣與天賦Thereisnodoubtthat/Undoubtedly,youareparticularlyinterestedinplayingtennis.Thereisn

23、odenyingthatyoursuccesspartlyliesinyourtalentfortennis.Itwasyourinterestandtalentthatpushedyouhard(totraineveryday.)Youarereallytalentedinplayingtennis.2 .自身的努力Thepast3monthssaw/witnessedyoureffortWhatdistinguishedyoufromotherswasyoureffort,whichpaidoffeventually.Noonecandenyyoureffortinthepastdays,

24、whichmadeitpossibleforyoutoDespiteagreatchallenge,yousparednoefforttotrainyourselfhard.Itwaspersistenceanddeterminationthatledyou,stepbystep,toyoursuccess.Itisnotthesuccessbutyoureffortthatmattersmuch.Youcouldn ' thavemadesuchremarkableachievementswithoutyourcontinuouseffort.Yoursuccessismainlyd

25、uetoyourhardworkandeverydaypractice.Youwerealwaysthefirsttoarriveatthegymandthelasttoleave.3 .比賽的表現(xiàn)及總結(jié)Youshowedpersistenceinthecompetition,whichcontributedtoyourfinalsuccess.Yourexcellentperformancesprovedyourpowerandstrength.Youdeservedtheprize/towinthecompetitionduetothefaith,effortandcourageyoush

26、owed.Youwereboundtobesuccessfulbecauseof inspiteofthehardships.Itisquiteinspiring,asnoonefromourschoolhaseverwonthecontestbefore.Undoubtedly,yoursuccessisagreathono rforbothyouandourschool.Weareproudofyou.四、結(jié)尾句型：1.Again,I ' dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmyheartfeltcongratulationsandbestwish

27、estoyou.Iwishyougreaters uccessinthefuture.2.Mybestwishesforyourfuturesuccess.樣例：假設(shè)你是校體育部部長周曉，你校英國交換生Ivan在全市網(wǎng)球比賽中獲得了第一名。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語給Ivan寫一封信，向他表示祝賀。要點提示：1.表明得知Ivan獲獎的消息；2.對Ivan的成功進(jìn)行積極評價；3.表達(dá)衷心的祝賀。3.Bestwishesforyourevengreater/betterprogressinthefuture.DearIvan,lammuchdelightedtolearnth atyougott

28、hefirstplaceinthecity' stenniscontest.Iamwritingtoofferyoumysincerestcongratulations. Asweknow,youarereallytalentedinplayingtennis,butundoubtedly,youcouldn' thavemadesuchremarkableachicmentswithoutyourcontinuouseffort.Moreimportantly,youshowedpersistenceinthecompetition,whichcontributed toyo

29、urfinalsuccess.Weareallproudthatyouhavewongloryforourschool. Again,I ' dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmyheartfeltcongratulationsandbestwishestoyou.Iwishyougreatersu ccessinthefuture. Yourssincerely, ZhouXiao 四、慰問信 一、開頭句型： 1.Iwas（awfully）sorrytohearthat+ 句子（yourteamlostthegame.） 2.Iwasshocked

30、tohearof+sth.（yourfailureintheexam.） 3.I 'mwritingtotellyouhowsorryIamtohearaboutsth.（yourloss ） 4.Knowingyoursituation,Ifeelterriblysorryabout sth. 二、結(jié)尾句型： 1.Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,don 'thesitatetoletmeknow. 2.IfIcandoanythingforyou,doletmeknow. 3.Remember,wewon 'tbefarawayifyou

31、needanyhelp! 4.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes. 樣例：假如你是李華，你的美國筆友 Mike來信說他現(xiàn)在心情很不好，因為在上周結(jié)束的?；@球比 賽中，他所在的班級籃球隊以一分之差輸了。請你寫一封信安慰他。 DearMike,Iwasverysorrytohearthatyourteamlostthebasketballmatchlastweekend.It 'sunderstandableforyoutobeinabad mood.However,ifyoucanadoptdifferentperspecti

32、ves,thelossmaybeablessing. First,it 'snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,foryoucaneitherwinorlose.Ifyou'vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritsto faceupto （直面）theresultAnyway,theessenceofcompetitionliesnotinvictorybutinparticipation.Besides,youcanalsobenefitfromyo urlossbyfiguringoutyourstrengthsa

33、ndweaknesses.Therefore,ifyourteamendeavorsto riseabove （克服、戰(zhàn)勝） thedisadvantages,youwillwinsoonerorlater. Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes. Yours, LiHua 五、感謝信 （一）常用短語：因而感激某人1.thanksb 3.appreciatesth. /one ' sdoing4.expressmythanks/gratitudetosb.forsth. （二）開頭句型：表達(dá)感謝之情并說明原因； 1.Iamwr

34、itingthislettertothankyoufor2.Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerethanksfor3.1 wouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfelt（adj. 衷心的）thankstoyoufor （三）細(xì)述并贊賞對方給與的幫助；1.Itwasnice/kind/thoughtful/considerate（adj.考慮周到的）ofyouto 2.Thankyouverymuchforyourkindhospitality（n. 好客，熱,'青招待）andthehonoryoushowedmeduringmyvi

35、sit.3.ItwaswithyourhelpthatImadesuchrapidprogressinEnglish.（ 強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）4.Ifithadnotbeenforyour（help/guidance/assistance）,Iwouldn' t施Ve（WOntheprize）5.Butfor/Withoutyour（help /guidance/assistance）,Iwouldn' thave（wontheprze）（四）結(jié)尾句型：再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)回報愿望。1 .Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.2 .Mytruegratitudeis

36、beyondthewords' description.3 .Wordsfailtoexpressmygratitudedeepinmyheart.4 .Pleaseacceptmysincerethanksforyourhelp,whichIw川neverforget.5 .Nothingcouldeverreturnthefavoryougaveme.6 .PleasedonothesitatetoletmeknowifthereisanythingIcoulddotopayyouback.樣區(qū)J 1 :假如你是一名失學(xué)兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到在中國工作的Mr.Brown的資助，

37、可以重返校園。你給 Mr.Brown寫了一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1. 收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激；2. 在老師的幫助下，學(xué)習(xí)有了很大的進(jìn)步，受到老師的表揚和鼓勵；3. 決心更加努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得更大的進(jìn)步；4. 盼望見到Mr.Brown。DearMr.Brown ,IhavebeenworkinghardsinceIwentbacktoschool.Withthehelpofmyteacherswhooftenpraisemeandencourageme,I havemadegreatprogressinmystudies.NowIamdeterminedtostudyharderandmakeg

38、reaterprogress.HowareyougettingonwithyourlifeandworkIamlookingforwardtomeetingyouonedaytoexpressmyheartfeltth anksforyourgeneroushelpfacetoface.樣例2：假設(shè)你是李華，今年 6月外教Grace就要完成她在你校一年的教學(xué)，啟程返美。請你給她寫一封電子郵件，表示對她的感謝。郵件包含以下要點：1 .感謝Grace這一年來的教學(xué)和幫助；2 .回憶去年感恩節(jié)一起做火雞（turkey）、開派對的情景；3 .希望可以得到回復(fù)并繼續(xù)保持聯(lián)系。DearGrace,Look

39、ingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua補充：表示回憶的句型Icanwellremember/recall+sth./ 句子How wellIrecall Sth.或名詞性從句（如 thememory）alwaysremainsfreshinmymind.Sth.或名詞性從句（如 theexperienceof）willneverfade.Sth.或名詞性從句 leftadeepimpressiononme.Whatimpressedmemostis+sth./that 從句 Thetimewhen willbemylifelongtreasure. 續(xù)寫范文：Par

40、a.1: However,oneFridaynighttheeveningannouncersuddenlycollapsedwithappendicitisandwas rushedtohospital.EveryonedisappearedandIwascompletelyaloneatthestation!Inspiteofthefact thatIwasreallynervouswithsweatinghands,Igatheredthecouragetotakethehost.Inaflash,I rememberedallthethingsmymentorhadtaughtme.E

41、nteringthestudio,Isatinthe announcer 'chair and,asscheduled,wentstraightintoreadingthereport.Ididn' tmakeonemistake.Nextwerethecommercials.Easy!NewstimecameandIbroughtintherelayeffortlessly,totallyinmypower. Para.2: Afterthat,thingshappenedswiftly.WithinafortnightIhadmyownafternoonprogram,Mu

42、sic oftheMasters.ThedreamIhadbeenpursuingforsomanyyearsfinallycametrue.NotonlywasIpart ofthestaff,butalsoIdistinguishedmyselfwiththeexcellentperformancesandfeatsamongsomany malecolleagues.Followingmysuccess,themanagerhiredmorewomen.YoucouldsayIwasapioneer inthecountryradio,openingthedoorsforotheryou

43、ngfemaleannouncers.Istayedatthestudiofor nearlysixyearsandmymemoriesatthestationaresomeofmyfondestandthatwillneverfade. 六、咨詢信一、文章開頭1 .表明目的（計劃去英國學(xué)習(xí)，為期六周。）Iplan/intendtogotoBritain/UKtoattend/takeasummercourseforsixweeksduringthevacation.IamgoingtoBritain/UKforasix-weekcourseduringthesummerholiday.2 .

44、看到廣告，表示很感興趣，詢問相關(guān)情況。I ' veseen/readyouradvertisement,andI' dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboweyoiEsgdishcourse.Seeingyourad,I ' mquiteinterestedintheseekEnglishcourseandwritingtoaskfordetailedinformationabouti t. Havinganinterestinyoursix-weekEnglishcourse,Iamwritingtoenquireaboutmoreinformatio

45、n.二、表示詢問的句式（注意正確使用語序和標(biāo)點：特殊疑問句用疑問句的語序，賓語從句用陳述句語序）Wouldyoutellme 陳述語序） Iwonder+句子（陳述語序） I ' dliketoknow句子（陳述語序） 直接用特殊疑問句（疑問語序）I.StartdatesWhen willthecoursestartWouldyoutellmewhen thecoursewillstart I ' dliketoknowwhenhecoursewillstart . Iwonderwhen thecoursewillstart. I ' dliketoknowabout

46、heexactstartdateforthesix weekcourse.2.ClasssizeHowmanystudents arethere inaclass/Willtherebe manystudentsinaclass Wouldyoutellmehowmanystudents thereare inaclassI ' dliketoknow/Iwonderhowmanystudentsthereare inaclass.3.HoursperweekHowmanyclasshours arethere perweek/Howmanyhours willwespend oncl

47、assesperweekWouldyoutellmehowmanyhours wewillspend onthecourseperweekI ' dliketoknow/Iwonderhowmanyhourswewillspendonclassesperweek.4.HowmuchHowmuch shouldIpay forthecourse/ Whatisthefee forthecourse/Howmuch doyouchargeforthecourseWouldyoutellmehowmuch Ishouldpay forthecourseI ' dliketoknow/

48、Iwondewhatthefeeforthecourse isI ' dliketoknow/Iwondehowmuchyouchargeforthecourse.5.TypeofaccommodationIsaccommodationincludedWouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitoryWouldyoutellmewhattypeofaccommodation youprovide樣區(qū)J 1 :假定你是李華，計劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意, 請給該校寫封信，詢問有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。Iwonderwh

49、etheraccommodation isincluded.DearSir/Madam,IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.I' veseenyouraement,andI ' dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyours-weekEnglishcourse.First,whenwillthecoursestartandhow manyclasshoursarethereperweekBesides,wouldyoutellmehowm

50、any studentsthereareinaclassI ' dalsoliketoknowh owmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.Wouldtherebeahostfamilyoruniversityd ormitory Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua樣快J 2：假定你是中國高中生李華，今年暑假期間將去澳大利亞悉尼南部Kogarah的一所綜合性學(xué)校KogarahHighSchool學(xué)習(xí)一個月，并將寄宿在當(dāng)?shù)氐木用馭i

51、lvia 家中。請給 Silvia 寫一封電子郵件，詢問一些將在 Kogarah生活的有關(guān)情況。具體詢問內(nèi)容如下：1.住宿是否可以有單間；2.房間是否有網(wǎng)絡(luò)；3.是否可以自己煮飯 4.是否有便利的交通DearSilvia,GreetingsfromChina!IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudentinChina.Duringthesummervacation,IKogara ' llstudyinhHighSchoolforamo nth.HowhappyIamtolearnthatyourfamilywillbemyhostfamily!I' dliketok

52、nowmoreaboutmystaythere.First,mayIhavemyownroomAnditwouldbegreatifIcouldhaveaccesstotheInternetinmyroom.ThoughI nterestedinAustralianfood,I' mwonderingifIcouldcooksomeChinesedishesincaseI' mnotusedtoit.Besides,Ioknowifthereisabusrouteonthewaytoschool. Lookingforwardtoyourreply. Bestwishes! Y

53、ourssincerely, LiHua 七、投訴信 一、投訴信基本步驟：1 .寫信投訴2.陳述要投訴的問題（可表達(dá)不愉快的心情）3.提出要求或補救的建議二、文章開頭（寫信投訴）：Iamwritingtocomplainaboutapairofshoes（I）bought/purchased/orderedfromyourwebsite.Iamwritingtomakeacomplaintabout Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfaction/disappointmentaboutIamwritingtodrawyourattentiontotheawfulfac

54、tthat+ 句子.Iamsorrytosendthislettertoyoutoexpressmydisappointment.三、陳述要投訴的問題Iamtotally/completelydisappointedtofindthat+ 句子（如：yousentmeapairofshoesofwrongsize.）Therearesomeseriousproblemsthatdeserveyourcloseattention.Foronething,；foranother, Therearesomeproblemswi th thatIwishtobringtoyourattention.F

55、irst, /Inaddition, /Worsestill,四、表達(dá)心情Icanhardlyputupwith/bear/tolerateitanylonger.Iamreallyannoyedaboutit.Iamreallydisappointedbythequalityofthe.Iammostreluctant（不情愿的）tocomplain,butthisreallybothersme. 五、提出要求或補救建議Iwouldliketogetmymoneyback. 或 Ihavetoaskfor/demand/claima（full）refund. 要求（全額）退款I(lǐng)nviewoftheinconveniencethatthishascaused,IfeelyoushouldToimprovethesituation,itisadvisableforyoutotakethefollowingmeasures.Tosolvetheproblem,Idemand/requestthat （should+do）Toremedy（ 1 卜救）thematter,Isuggestmakingthefollowingchanges. 六、文章結(jié)尾Itrustyouw川takemycomplaintsseriouslyandsolvetheproblemas