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1、Welcome to Mr. Gaos ClassWelcome to Mr. Xiongs Welcome to Mr. Xiongs Class!Class!2008.3.14 書面表達(dá)系列講練書面表達(dá)系列講練 之之 贏取高分策略贏取高分策略 巍山一中巍山一中 熊發(fā)鑫熊發(fā)鑫 要求考生根據(jù)所給情景，用英要求考生根據(jù)所給情景，用英語寫一篇語寫一篇100個(gè)單詞左右的短文個(gè)單詞左右的短文 情景包括目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地情景包括目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等；提供情景的形式有點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等；提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱等。圖畫、圖表、提綱等。 本部分滿分本部分滿分25-30分，所需時(shí)分，所需時(shí)間約為間

2、約為30分鐘。分鐘。1、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步步確定檔次確定檔次,研究研究評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。第五檔第五檔. 2530分分第四檔第四檔. 2025分分第三檔第三檔. 1520分分第二檔第二檔1015分分第一檔第一檔 510分分 差差 05分分內(nèi) 容語 言準(zhǔn)確率 1語法 2拼寫 3用詞 4標(biāo)點(diǎn)主 題無遺漏 （9分）通順流暢 （9分）無錯(cuò)或一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤 （9分）明確 （3分）個(gè)別遺漏 （7分）較通順流暢（7分）2-4個(gè)錯(cuò)誤 （7分）較明確 （2分）兩處以上遺漏 （4分）不夠流暢 （4分）5個(gè)以上錯(cuò)誤 （3-4分）不明確或文不對(duì)題 （0分） 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：語言地道，語言地道，規(guī)范

3、規(guī)范覆蓋所有內(nèi)覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)容要點(diǎn)2、主要內(nèi)容：、主要內(nèi)容： 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 詞匯和語法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性；詞匯和語法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性； 上下文的連貫；上下文的連貫； 語言的得體性語言的得體性應(yīng)用了較多應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯和詞匯有效地使有效地使用了語句用了語句間的連接間的連接成分成分3、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語言是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考際的影響程度予以考慮。慮。4、詞數(shù)、詞數(shù)少于少于80和和多于多于120的，從總分中減去的，從總分中減去2分。分。5、如、如書寫較差書寫較差，以至影，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低

4、一響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。個(gè)檔次。詞匯詞匯,句型句型 （高級(jí)）和（高級(jí)）和語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜） 1.覆蓋了所有的覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語句間的有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊要要點(diǎn)點(diǎn)全全連連接接詞詞書面表達(dá)如何寫？書面表達(dá)如何寫？五個(gè)步驟1、審題、審題文字信息文字信息圖畫信息圖畫信息題材、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、要點(diǎn)題材、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、要點(diǎn)2、以詞及點(diǎn)：用一兩個(gè)單詞或短語寫出每句、以詞及點(diǎn)：用一兩個(gè)單詞或短語寫出每句 話的細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)。話的細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)。3、聯(lián)詞成句：用聯(lián)詞成句的

5、方法將上述要點(diǎn)、聯(lián)詞成句：用聯(lián)詞成句的方法將上述要點(diǎn) 的詞語擴(kuò)展成句子。的詞語擴(kuò)展成句子。4 聯(lián)句成文：聯(lián)句成文：注意：注意：主語和謂語主語和謂語背景（適當(dāng)增加時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)條件等）背景（適當(dāng)增加時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)條件等）邏輯關(guān)系邏輯關(guān)系開頭與結(jié)尾開頭與結(jié)尾語篇銜接語篇銜接5、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分整體三部分1.Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心記述部分；層次分明3. Ending 小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題 技技 巧巧1. 使用較高級(jí)的詞匯使用較高級(jí)的詞匯3. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識(shí)

6、貯存量的詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有篇有“英語味英語味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。自然、緊湊。2. 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a grea

7、t man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級(jí)的詞匯一、怎樣使用較高級(jí)的詞匯We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me

8、. / A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.10.You can find my house

9、easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house. 豐富的句式：豐富的句式：( (常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)）常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)） 利用不同的句型來表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思， 能增加文章

10、的文采。1. 感嘆句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.3、 倒裝句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly ha

11、d they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.5、 with短語 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、 定語從句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find

12、much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各種名詞性從句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.8、 各種狀語從句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got

13、 down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2. To his surprise,

14、 the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises hi

15、m is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式怎樣使用較豐富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many studen

16、ts followed her. (使用過去分詞)7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語從句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing

17、 than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.高考大綱中常用的高考大綱中常用的連接詞連接詞1. 表示遞進(jìn)表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 另外，還有：what is more; besides; also; more

18、over; in addition2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.3. 表示因果關(guān)系表示因果關(guān)系 因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關(guān)系表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or else 5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 當(dāng) 的時(shí)候 :

19、 when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recently 自從 :since 從那時(shí)起: from then on6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end7. 換一種方法表述換一種方法表述 換句話說: in other words; that is to say; 8. 進(jìn)

20、行舉例說明進(jìn)行舉例說明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9. 用于陳述事實(shí)用于陳述事實(shí) 實(shí)際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實(shí)話 : to tell you the truth10. 對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié)對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié) 總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word11. 其它常用到的副詞其它常用到的副詞 Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthe

21、rmore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally; On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. (NMET1999 范文)As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NM

22、ET2001 范文)Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. (NMET2001 范文)三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞PracticePractice 1 1 請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝芯渥又校ㄩg）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語。1. Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west .3. It was not long _ the po

23、lice came .4. _he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.whenin order thatbeforeAs soon as 5. Do you agree with my arrangement ? _ , do write to me soon.6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7. I shared the cost of the

24、 gas with my friends ._, I saved $80.8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhats worse 聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡(jiǎn)要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：的形式簡(jiǎn)要介紹這個(gè)村的情況： 1)大小：近大?。航?00戶人家，約戶人家，約500口人?？谌?。 2)變化：過去很窮，

25、變化：過去很窮，78年后變年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?；艽蟆Ｈ藗兩畋纫郧昂枚嗔恕，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。 3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。 注意：注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。2）詞數(shù)：）詞數(shù)：100- -120之間。之間。Practice 書面表達(dá)：書面表達(dá)：Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school.This village is

26、 very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is

27、 the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.

28、It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developin

29、g very fast. People here live a much better life than before . 書面表達(dá)：書面表達(dá)：Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age child

30、ren can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. What

31、s more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor.

32、However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built

33、teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 20012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信，談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。 I wil

34、l tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspa

35、pers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.1717分分高考滿分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of home

36、work to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up

37、 late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.書面表達(dá)常用語句書面表達(dá)常用語句1.1.書信書信 Thanks for your last letter. I am writing just to inform you In reply to your last letter, I am writing to explain the two questions as follows: 開 頭 Looking forward to your re

38、ply/hearing from you! Thanks for your consideration. Do remember me to your parents! 結(jié) 尾2. 2. 敘事敘事 It is quite obvious/clear that ( 很顯然) There is no doubt that (毫無疑問) Take as an example. (以為例） On one hand, on the other hand (一方面，另一方面) Only in this way shall we (只有這樣我們才能) As far asis concerned, I pre

39、fer(就而言，我更) Measures/Action should be taken to(必須采取措施去) For the reasons given above, I feel that(鑒于以上原因，我覺得 What these people fail to consider is that(這些人沒有想到的是.) Undoubtedly there is a long way to go before(毫無疑問要 還有很長(zhǎng)的路要走） Therefore, I strongly recommend that (因此， 我強(qiáng)烈建議All the facts show that（所有的事實(shí)

40、顯示) I like not only because but also because(我喜歡 不僅因?yàn)槎乙驗(yàn)? I am writing to you to inquire about(我寫信給你想詢問) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at(我給你 寫信表示我對(duì)的不滿） I apologize to you for(我為向你道歉） I am grateful to you for(我為向你表示感謝） Mr. Green, my best friend, is teaching Mr. Green, a favorite t

41、eacher from the USA, is teachingLetter writingA LetterNov 5, 2001Wuzheng Middle SchoolZhejiang P.R.C.JackTongxiang High SchoolDear Mary,BodyYours,Jack 親人、家屬：Yours lovingly ; Yours affectionately 朋友、平輩：Sincerely yours Yours sincerely 上級(jí)、長(zhǎng)者：Yours respectfully Respectfully yours 單位、部門：Yours sincerely Yours faithfully 結(jié)束語Closing信封正面StampAirmail信封背面 June 5th , 2000 Dear Mr. Zhao, I am sorry that I am unable to attend school during the following week because of the Sports Meet. The school expects me to play an important part in it . And I will be back to class in a week . I hope you will excuse