四川省成都市2014高考英語 書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（9）

1、成都市2014高考英語書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（9）附參考范文【寫作要求】 根據(jù)提示的情景，用英文寫一篇80-100詞的短文。不必根據(jù)中文逐字逐句翻譯。 我們的學(xué)校歷史悠久。畢業(yè)學(xué)生中不少已成為各自領(lǐng)域中的專家。近年來，我們的學(xué)校發(fā)生了很大的變化。我們?yōu)樽约旱膶W(xué)校感到自豪。 【學(xué)生實(shí)作】 Our school has a long history. It is told that it dated from one hundred years ago. From it was founded on, there were more and more students in it. And the fo

2、rmer students all did well in their studying. Some of them are outstanding. Because of their good studies and hard work, many of the schoolleavers have become experts in different fields. These years our school has changed great, it becomes more and more beautiful. Besides, the teachers' teachin

3、g methods are more advanced than before. At the same time, the students study very hard, and we are determined to make great contribution to our school. We like our school very much! We are proud of it! 【評(píng)析】 1 第2句：is told 應(yīng)為is said。（以下錯(cuò)誤均在第一段） 2 第2句：dated應(yīng)改為dates。 3 第3句：from.on不能表示從過去的某個(gè)時(shí)間一直到現(xiàn)在的情況，因

4、此這里用since較好。另外，from.on中間應(yīng)是名詞，而不能是從句。 4 第3句：主句中應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，表示從過去一直到現(xiàn)在的情況。把there were改為there have been。 5 第4句：studying最好改為studies，指"學(xué)業(yè)"。 6 第5句：本句應(yīng)是說以前的學(xué)生的情況，are應(yīng)改為were。 7 第7句：great應(yīng)改為greatly。修飾動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用副詞形式。 8 第7句：our school has changed greatly是一個(gè)完整的句子，其后也是一個(gè)完整的句子，而兩個(gè)完整的句子沒有連詞時(shí)是不能并列的。最好中間用句號(hào)，使各自獨(dú)立成句

5、。 9 第9句：study改為are studying更為生動(dòng)。 10 第9句：very hard最好改為even harder，以對(duì)應(yīng)前面的比較級(jí)。 【總評(píng)】 優(yōu)點(diǎn) ： 1 基本寫出了題目要求的幾方面的內(nèi)容。 2 這是一篇半開放的寫作。習(xí)作者適當(dāng)?shù)卦鲅a(bǔ)細(xì)節(jié)對(duì)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了展開，使內(nèi)容較為全面、豐富。 3 語句表達(dá)較為連貫。 不足： 1 有一處句與句之間沒有連詞連接的情況，這是不符合英語習(xí)慣的。 2 謂語動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)有幾處運(yùn)用不當(dāng)。 【修改之后】 Our school has a long history. It is said that it dates from one hundred year

6、s ago. Since it was founded, there have been more and more students in it. And the former students all did well in their studies. Some of them were outstanding. Because of their good studies and hard work, many of the schoolleavers have become experts in different fields. These years our school has

7、changed greatly. It becomes more and more beautiful. Besides, the teachers' teaching methods are more advanced than before. At the same time, the students are studying even harder, and we are determined to make great contribution to our school. We like our school very much! We are proud of it!*結(jié)

8、束高考英語書面表達(dá)講義：環(huán)境資源話題作文例1：近日你所在的學(xué)校開展了“為建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì)獻(xiàn)一計(jì)”主題活動(dòng)，同學(xué)們提出了許多建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇短文向English Horizons雜志編輯部投稿：有人建議你的建議1、不浪費(fèi)糧食和紙張2、盡量不使用方便筷、塑料袋3、畢業(yè)生將書贈(zèng)給低年級(jí)同學(xué)循環(huán)使用?注意：1、不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);2、詞數(shù)：120字左右，開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3、參考詞匯：方便筷disposable chopsticksRecently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an ene

9、rgy-saving society” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.Some students suggest that we shouldn't waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to

10、 refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to ta

11、ke buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.例2：假如你上周末參加了某旅行社組織的所謂生態(tài)游，你覺得名不副實(shí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容把自己經(jīng)歷的這次生態(tài)游和對(duì)真正生態(tài)游的看法寫出來。所謂的生態(tài)游欣賞風(fēng)景，享受新鮮空氣有人摘花、捉鳥、亂扔垃圾真正的生態(tài)游享受自然，同時(shí)也是一種責(zé)任要保護(hù)自然，保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物帶走美好回憶，留下青山綠水Last weekend I went on an eco-travel

12、with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing. Some even tried to catch the birds they saw. What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there. The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there.I don't

13、think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be l

14、ike this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.*結(jié)束(一)高考英語作文議論文常用句型：段首句1.關(guān)于人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。一些人認(rèn)為There are different opinions among people as toSome people suggest that_.2.俗話說(常言道)，它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場(chǎng)合仍然適用。There is an old saying Its the

15、 experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many case seven today.3.現(xiàn)在，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，；其次，。更為糟糕的是Today，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First，Second，.What makes things worse is that.4.現(xiàn)在，很普遍，許多人喜歡，因?yàn)?，另?而且)。Nowadays，it is common to ,Many people like because.Besi

16、des，.5.任何事物都是有兩面性，也不例外。Every coins has two sides and is not an exception.6.關(guān)于人們的觀點(diǎn)各不相同，一些人認(rèn)為(說)，在他們看來，Peoples opinions about vary from person to person. Some people say that,To them，.7.人類正面臨著一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問題，這個(gè)問題變得越來越嚴(yán)重。Man is now facing a big problemwhich is becoming more and more serious.8. 已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門話題 ，特

17、別是在年青人當(dāng)中，將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9. 在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用，它給我們帶來了許多好處，但同時(shí)也引發(fā)一些嚴(yán)重的問題。has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some

18、 serious problems as well.10.根據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出。很顯然，但是為什么呢？According to the figure/number/statistics/percentagesinthe/chart/bargraph/line/graph，It can be seen that while .Obviously，but why？中間段落句1.相反，有一些人贊成，他們相信，而且，他們認(rèn)為。On the contrary，there are some people in favor of .At the same t

19、ime，they say.2.但是，我認(rèn)為這不是解決的好方法，比如。最糟糕的是。But I dont think it is a very good way to solve .For example，.Worst of all，.3.首先，。而且，最重要的是First，.Whats more，.Most important of all，.4.面臨，我們應(yīng)該采取一系列行之有效的方法來。一方面，另一方面，Confronted with，we should take a series of effective measures to .For one thing，F(xiàn)or another，5.早就

20、應(yīng)該拿出行動(dòng)了。比如說，另外。所有這些方法肯定會(huì)。It is high time that something was done about it. For example .In addition. .Allthe measures will certainly.6.然而，正如任何事物都有好壞兩個(gè)方面一樣，也有它的不利的一面，象。However，just like everything has both its good and bad sides，also has its own disadvantages，such as.7.盡管如此，我相信更有利。Nonetheless，I belie

21、ve thatis more advantageous.8.完全同意這種觀點(diǎn)(陳述)，主要理由如下：I fully agree with the statement thatbecause.(三)高考英語作文議論文常用句型：結(jié)尾句1.至于我，在某種程度上我同意后面的觀點(diǎn)，我認(rèn)為As far as I am concerned，I agree with the latter opinion to some extent .I think that2.總而言之，整個(gè)社會(huì)應(yīng)該密切關(guān)注這個(gè)問題。只有這樣，我們才能在將來。In a word，the whole society should pay cl

22、ose attention to the problem ofOnly in this way canin the future.3.但是，和都有它們各自的優(yōu)勢(shì)(好處)。例如，而。然而，把這兩者相比較，我更傾向于Butandhave her own advantages .For example，whileComparing this with that，however，I prefer to4.就我個(gè)人而言，我相信，因此，我堅(jiān)信美好的未來正等著我們。因?yàn)镻ersonally，I believe thatConsequently，Im confident that a bright futur

23、e is awaiting us because5.隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，。因此，迫切需要。如果每個(gè)人都愿為社會(huì)貢獻(xiàn)自己的一份力量，這個(gè)社會(huì)將要變得越來越好。With the development of society， necessary toIf every member is willing to contribute himself to the society，it will be better and better.6.至于我(對(duì)我來說，就我而言)，我認(rèn)為更合理。只有這樣，我們才能For my part，I think it reasonable toOnly in this way

24、can you7.在總體上很難說是好還是壞，因?yàn)樗诤艽蟪潭壬先Q于的形勢(shì)。然而，就我個(gè)人而言，我發(fā)現(xiàn)。It is difficult to say whetheris good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of.however，from a personal point of view find8.綜上所述，我們可以清楚地得出結(jié)論From what has been discussed above，we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that9.如果我們

25、不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了這種趨勢(shì)，就會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我們應(yīng)該做的是If we can not take useful means，we may not control this trend，and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly，so what we should do is*結(jié)束高考英語作文精選范文-應(yīng)用文類5. 假如你是一名大學(xué)生叫李華，對(duì)近年來大學(xué)畢業(yè)生就業(yè)情況頗有已見，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的信息向報(bào)社寫信談?wù)勀愕目捶?。字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。開頭已給出 。學(xué)生心態(tài)向往城市，不愿下鄉(xiāng)。就業(yè)現(xiàn)狀城市人才過剩；

26、農(nóng)村渴求人才。就業(yè)前景農(nóng)村天地廣闊，可施展才華。Dear editor, I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to sat

27、isfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and youll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.Theref

28、ore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.Yours, Li Hua*結(jié)束高考英語作文精選范文-應(yīng)用文類6. 假如你叫王東，你的叔叔三十年前離開家鄉(xiāng)去了美國。不久前，他觀看China Report節(jié)目，得知中國決定加大建設(shè)社會(huì)主義新農(nóng)村的力度，感慨萬分，于是發(fā)了一份e-mail給你，詢問近來家鄉(xiāng)的變化情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)email內(nèi)容和提示要點(diǎn)，給你叔叔做簡要回復(fù)。E-mail開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。 日期：20-03-2006 發(fā)件人：Wangguifu usa 收件人：Wang

29、dong_88 主題：T0 XiaodongDear Xiao Dong How are you doing?The other day when 1 was watching China Report CCTV at home, I was excited to learn that the Chinese government is calling on her people to speed up the reconstruction of their countryside. The report at once took my thoughts back to the small v

30、illage I once lived in. The houses were old and low. The roads were muddy and narrow. Villagers had to go a long way on foot or by bike in order to do some shopping or see a doctor in town. Because of very small income, villagers lived quite a plain life, even without TV sets or telephones. How time flies!. It is 30 years since I left my home village. It must have changed a lot. Would you please write and tell me something about its