10.2022屆高三二輪專題卷 英語（十）應(yīng)用文寫作（感謝信、道歉信與邀請信）附答案解析

1、好教育云平臺教育因你我而變應(yīng)用文（感謝信、道歉信與邀請信）XXXXXXXXX專題十【范文解析】(2019·全國卷)假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括：1. 時間；2. 活動安排；3. 歡迎他表演節(jié)目。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_寫作思維模板Step 1 三審定題：審體裁、人稱、時態(tài)體裁人稱時態(tài)邀請信(格式與套用語，三段論)第一人稱為主，第二人稱為輔一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時Step 2 列明要點(diǎn)1文字?jǐn)⑹霾糠郑旱谝粋€要點(diǎn)(文章第一段)2活動的時間、地點(diǎn)第二段3具體的內(nèi)容安排4對Allen的希望5最后一

2、段：結(jié)束套語Step 3 斟詞酌句：列關(guān)鍵詞、重點(diǎn)短語和重要句型詞匯coming/approaching, hold/take place, fancy/enjoy, include/contain, welcome/expect, perform短語take interest in, invite sb. to do sth. , take part in/join in/participate in, be absorbed in, more than, share with句型被動語態(tài)，倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)，三大從句Step 4 銜接過渡：銜接詞firstly/first of all, addi

3、tionally/besides/whats more, moreover, furthermore過渡句according to the plan/as scheduled, as far as Im concerned, We/I would be. if you could.Step 5 潤色升級: 仔細(xì)推敲, 用詞升級詞匯提升(普通高級)1. coming_2. have_3. be interested in_4. take part in _5. arrange _6. very_句子整合(簡單復(fù)雜，主動被動，陳述倒裝，動詞/形容詞抽象名詞，分詞短語從句)1. We will ha

4、ve a Music Festival in our school. A Music Festival _in our school. (主被動轉(zhuǎn)換更符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣) 2. Its arranged that. As (is) scheduled, .(定語從句代替)3. We can sit on the grass/playground to enjoy A and B._, we can happily enjoy the delicious food and wonderful performances. (分詞短語作狀語)Step 6 完美成篇：認(rèn)真工整, 謄寫在卷Dea

5、r Allen,You must have heard of the good news that a Music Festival is going to be held in our school. Since you take much interest in music, I am writing to invite you to participate in the festival with me.As scheduled, it will be held on the playground from 5 pm to 8 pm next Sunday. At that time,

6、seated on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we will be fully absorbed in the fascinating performances. Furthermore, we also expect to see you on the stage. And Id be more than delighted if you could come and share this joyful moment with me.Hopefully you can take

7、 this invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Step 5 潤色升級詞匯提升1. approaching/upcoming 2. hold 3. take interest in 4. participate in5. schedule 6. more than句子整合1. will be held 2. Sitting/Seated on the ground【寫作模板】感謝信模板與套用句式Dear _,How is everything g

8、oing? Im writing to extend/express/deliver my sincere gratitude for _(感謝的原因).Everyone agrees that it was you who _(給出細(xì)節(jié)). Owing to your help with _, Ive made great progress in my work. If it had not been for your assistance in _(對方給予的具體幫助), I fear that I would have been _(沒有對方幫助時的后果).Thank you again

9、 for what youve done. Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Hua道歉信模板與套用句式Dear _,How are you doing with your _? I am terribly sorry to tell you that _(道歉的原因).The reason is that _(介紹事由)._(進(jìn)一步闡述理由). I hope that you can forgive me for my not keeping a promise. Can we make it another time when it

10、s convenient to both of us? How about _(具體時間).Once again, sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely,Li Hua邀請信模板與套用句式Dear _,A _(具體活動名稱) will be held at/in _(地點(diǎn)) on _(時間). I am writing to invite you to be a part of the members in t

11、his activity.The activity will start at _(具體時間與詳細(xì)地址). Present at the activity are _(其他人員介紹). The details include _. It will be followed by a _(進(jìn)一步的安排).We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. /Well be more than delighted if you could take this invitation.Looking forward to

12、 your earliest reply.Yours,Li Hua【模擬演練】1畢業(yè)季也是感恩季，來自澳大利亞的Feinstein在她的網(wǎng)站上發(fā)起感謝信接力的活動。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請寫一封感謝信參加接力，內(nèi)容包括：1. 感謝的人或事物；2. 感謝的原因；3. 你的美好愿望。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右字。2.不得透露個人信息及感謝人信息Dear _,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Samantha,I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher. From day on

13、e, I enjoyed each and every class of yours. You could always make your lessons informative, educational and enjoyable all at the same time. Every day I looked forward to your class, which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English. It was you who awakened my interest in English and

14、restored my confidence in myself. I enjoyed everything you taught us, from the English language to American culture. The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds, and it simply makes my mouth water.You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fon

15、d memories. You are a great inspiration to us all! A big and warm “Thank you!” from your beloved student! May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：本文為提綱類作文。首先，學(xué)生要仔細(xì)閱讀提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。其次，要注意提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。最后，要根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)

16、容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。本文是一封感謝信，按照內(nèi)容要求可以確定文章的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，三段式。第一段寫需要感謝的人或事情；第二段寫原因，也是本文的主體部分；第三段寫自己的個人感想及美好愿望。寫作時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運(yùn)用高級句子。賓語從句的使用：I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher.非限

17、制性定語從句中繼續(xù)使用定語從句：，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的使用：It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself.2你是李華，父親節(jié)即將來臨，在父親節(jié)這天，需要說哪些話語來感謝自己的父親呢？請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英文給父親寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容包括：1. 感謝養(yǎng)育之恩；2. 感謝父親在你遇到挫折時給你鼓勵和安慰；3. 感謝父親在你成功時以你為榮；4.愛父親。注意：1. 詞

18、數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。Dear Father,With Fathers Day approaching,_【答案】Dear Father,With Fathers Day approaching, I want to express my gratitude to you for bringing me up from the bottom of my heart.(要點(diǎn)一) Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave to me whenever I was faced wit

19、h difficulties(要點(diǎn)二) and the pride in your eyes when I achieved my goals(要點(diǎn)三). Without you, I would not go further confidently and bravely.Your love can never be repaid but I am determined to work hard and never make you disappointed. I love you, Father(要點(diǎn)四)!Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生在父親節(jié)這天給父親寫

20、一封信。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一封書信：你是李華，父親節(jié)即將來臨，在父親節(jié)這天，需要說哪些話語來感謝自己的父親呢？請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英文給父親寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容包括：1. 感謝養(yǎng)育之恩；2. 感謝父親在你遇到挫折時給你鼓勵和安慰；3. 感謝父親在你成功時以你為榮；4. 愛父親。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：bringing sb up, be faced with, achieve ones goal, be determined to do sth等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡

21、，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！痉段狞c(diǎn)評】本篇范文語言優(yōu)美，情真意切。其中使用了一些高級句型讓人眼前一亮。如：“Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave to me whenever I was faced with difficulties”否定詞位于句首的倒裝句，增強(qiáng)語氣。“Without you, I would not go further confidently and bravely.”虛擬語氣，渲染氣氛。這些句型是使用大大增強(qiáng)了本文的感染力，可供大家借鑒。3假設(shè)你是李

22、明，你因生病沒能按時上交李老師安排的作業(yè)。請你用英語給他寫一封道歉信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 向他道歉2. 解釋原因3. 保證盡快補(bǔ)交作業(yè)。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但是不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear Mr.Li,_Your,Li Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Li,I am one of your students in Class Two, Grade Three. I m writing to apologize for not handing in my homework on timeI am one of the student

23、s who enjoy your class a lot. And I like doing my homework which is always very interesting as well as practical. However, I caught a bad cold and had a high fever, which made me have a headache and sleep all day. So bad did I feel that I couldnt do my homework in time. Thus, I didnt finish itI am r

24、eally sorry for giving you so much trouble. I am feeling better now and I will finish my homework as soon as possible.Your，Li Ming【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；你因生病沒能按時上交李老師安排的作業(yè)。請你用英語給他寫一封道歉信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 向他道歉；2. 解釋原因；3. 保證盡快補(bǔ)交作業(yè)。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：apologize for（為某事道歉），on time（按時），interesting as

25、 well as practical（有趣又實(shí)用），have a high fever（發(fā)高燒），have a headache（頭痛），in time（及時），as soon as possible（盡快）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。【范文點(diǎn)評】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如“And

26、 I like doing my homework which is always very interesting as well as practical.”運(yùn)用定語從句修飾先行詞homework；So bad did I feel that I couldnt do my homework in time.運(yùn)用了倒裝句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。4假定你是李華，你打算國慶節(jié)期間去海南三亞市旅游。請你給來自德國的交換生Terry發(fā)郵件邀請他與你同游。內(nèi)容主要包括：1. 邀請Terry與你同游；2.

27、你的旅游計(jì)劃；3. 邀請理由。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_【答案】Dear Terry,How are you? I intend to travel to Sanya in Hainan province during the National holiday. I am writing to invite you to join me.According to my plan, I will stay Sanya for five days. In addition to enjoying the beautiful scenery, I will

28、take part in some activities on the water. Not only can we taste various local snacks, but also we will experience the local life and art.As far as I know, you greatly enjoy traveling to seaside cities. It will be pleasant to travel with you. Moreover, my spoken English is not very good, so you can

29、help me a lot while we are travelling.Please take my suggestion into account. Whatever your decision is, please let me know. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封邀請信。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封邀請信；假定你是李華，你打算國慶節(jié)期間去海南三亞市旅游。請你給來自德國的交換生Terry發(fā)郵件邀請他與你同游。內(nèi)容主要包括：1. 邀請Terry與你同游；2. 你的旅游計(jì)劃

30、；3. 邀請理由。人稱使用第一、二人稱。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：the National holiday（國慶節(jié)），invite you to join me（邀請你和我同游），plan（計(jì)劃）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！痉段狞c(diǎn)評】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如not onlybut also結(jié)構(gòu)Not only can we tas

31、te various local snacks, but also we will experience the local life and art.；非謂語動詞It will be pleasant to travel with you.；時間狀語從句Moreover, my spoken English is not very good, so you can help me a lot while we are travelling.；讓步狀語從句Whatever your decision is, please let me know.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語

32、的能力。另外，過渡詞及短語according to, in addition to, moreover等的使用，使得文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。5假定你是李華，你校打算成立Fans英語俱樂部，想邀請外教Smith參加，請你給Smith寫封邀請函，內(nèi)容包括：1. 成立俱樂部的目的；2. 活動時間、地點(diǎn)及安排；3. 邀請加入。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_【答案】Dear Smith,I'm Li Hua, a student in Class 1 Grade 3. To arouse our interest in Eng

33、lish learning and provide a platform for us to practice English, our grade has decided to set up Fans English Club.Well gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon, when various activities will be organized and performed, like singing English songs and having debates in English.Im

34、 very honored to invite you to join us representing our grade. I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us all to become more interested in English and therefore work harder at English.Hoping to see you every Friday afternoon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本文要求給外教Smi

35、th老師寫封邀請函，邀請他參加你校打算成立的Fans英語俱樂部。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全。完整說明題干中給的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。根據(jù)題目要求我們在邀請信中寫出的內(nèi)容以及我們上面提到的注意點(diǎn)，列出提綱：第一部分：介紹自己以及成立俱樂部的目的（激發(fā)英語學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，提供練習(xí)英語的平臺）；第二段：活動時間、地點(diǎn)及安排（讓被邀請人清楚的了解活動的基本信息。）；第三段：邀請Smith老師加入（您的出現(xiàn)能激勵我們更努力的學(xué)習(xí)英語）。【亮點(diǎn)說明】1

36、. 使用高級句型：非限制性定語從句和將來時的被動語態(tài)We'll gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon, when various activities will be organized and performed；同位語從句的使用I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us。2. 使用了過渡詞語：therefore等。3. 使用了重要短語：set up建立；be honored t

37、o感到很榮幸；become interested in對感興趣。6假設(shè)你是李華，你從朋友Mike處借的一本書不慎遺失?，F(xiàn)在，請用英文給他寫道歉信，請求原諒。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；2. 信的開頭與結(jié)束語已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Im sorry to tell you that Ive lost your book that I borrowed from you. Now Im expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.Actually, I put t

38、he book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday. But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home. I tried to get it back but failed. How angry and guilty I felt!This morning, I went to buy the same book in some bookstores but it was very expensive. However, I promise that Ill tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month. Please forgive me again and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes!Yours,Li H