短文改錯公開課

1、短文改短文改錯專題錯專題泉州實驗中學(xué)高二泉州實驗中學(xué)高二(1)(1)班班 王秋怡王秋怡Have you found anything wrong?Have you found anything wrong with the signs?Have you found anything wrong with the compositions?高考短文改錯體裁和話題高考短文改錯體裁和話題年份年份卷別卷別體裁體裁話題話題20172017年年全國卷全國卷記敘文記敘文我在暑期考駕照我在暑期考駕照全國卷全國卷記敘文記敘文張先生夫婦的日常工作和生活張先生夫婦的日常工作和生活全國卷全國卷記敘文記敘文回憶我的高中

2、往事回憶我的高中往事20162016年年全國卷全國卷記敘文記敘文我的叔叔我的叔叔全國卷全國卷記敘文記敘文我和同學(xué)討論暑期計劃我和同學(xué)討論暑期計劃20152015年年全國卷全國卷議論文議論文環(huán)境保護環(huán)境保護全國卷全國卷記敘文記敘文孩子和父母走散后重聚孩子和父母走散后重聚20142014年年全國卷全國卷記敘文記敘文我和姐姐種圣女果我和姐姐種圣女果全國卷全國卷說明文說明文我夢想中的學(xué)校我夢想中的學(xué)校以記敘文為主，詞數(shù)：以記敘文為主，詞數(shù)：100100詞詞左右左右 題目要求：題目要求： 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以

3、下作文。文中共有桌寫的以下作文。文中共有1010處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ ）, ,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：注意：1.1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 2.只允許修改只允許修改1010處，多者（從第

4、處，多者（從第1111處起）不計分。處起）不計分。四不改四不改: :標點符號不改。標點符號不改。大小寫不改。大小寫不改。詞序錯誤不改。詞序錯誤不改。單詞拼寫不改。單詞拼寫不改。四原則四原則：1.1.以保持原意不變?yōu)樵瓌t以保持原意不變?yōu)樵瓌t2.2.以單詞形式變化最小為原則以單詞形式變化最小為原則3.3.以多以多“改正改正”少少“添刪添刪”為原則為原則4.4.一對一原則一對一原則短文改錯主要考察：短文改錯主要考察：_詞法詞法：1_詞詞 2_詞詞 3_詞詞 4_詞詞 5_詞詞 6_詞詞 7_詞詞 8_詞詞 9_詞詞 10_詞法、句法、行文邏輯詞法、句法、行文邏輯 冠冠 介介連連代代 數(shù)數(shù)形容形容 副

5、副名名動動謂語謂語非謂語非謂語構(gòu)詞法構(gòu)詞法句法：句法：1_1_2_2_3 3_4_4_5 5_6_6_7 7_并列句并列句名詞性從句名詞性從句定語從句定語從句狀語從句狀語從句特殊句式特殊句式虛擬語氣虛擬語氣 主主謂一致謂一致主語從句主語從句賓語從句賓語從句表語從句表語從句同位語從句同位語從句倒裝句倒裝句強調(diào)句強調(diào)句1-1 About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.1-2 W

6、e can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening to music.1-3 Since then for all these years we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.1-4 Suddenly the arrows were flying down at us from the sky-they were looked like rain!1-5 The instructor kept repeating the words,

7、 “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” 1-6 My dream school look like a big garden.becamesithaveTurnlooks1-7 We can choose between staying at home and take a trip. 1-8 Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking.1-9 One evening at sunset, we sat by the

8、fire, have our barbecue.1-10 When summer comes, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables.1-11 Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. 動詞動詞考點：考點：時態(tài)時態(tài)、語態(tài)、非謂語動詞、情態(tài)動詞、助動詞、語態(tài)、非謂語動詞、情態(tài)動詞、助動詞 、主謂一致等、主謂一致等takingusedhaving在在pick前面加前面加to把把can去掉或者把去掉或者把can改為改為should2-1

9、Besides, they often get some useful informations from the Internet.2-2 Mum taught me some basic step of baking.2-3 For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and .2-4 When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years later. 2-5 My uncle tells me

10、 that the key to his success is honest.名名詞考點：詞考點：常見的不可數(shù)名詞：常見的不可數(shù)名詞：money, air, homework, housework, information, news, advice, help, progress, equipment, furniture, traffic, fun, attention, knowledge, rubbish/ garbage/junk可數(shù)可數(shù)/不可數(shù)：不可數(shù)：exercise, experience, success, failure, change, word, time可數(shù)名詞（單復(fù)

11、數(shù)）和不可數(shù)名詞、詞性轉(zhuǎn)換可數(shù)名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)）和不可數(shù)名詞、詞性轉(zhuǎn)換informationstepshourschildhonesty3-1 It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road.3-2 Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.3-3 Mom was grateful and moving.3-4 Much rare animals are dying out.3-5 A few minutes late , the

12、 instructor asked me to stop the car.3-6 I enjoyed studying different kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music and collecting the late music albums.形形容詞、副詞考點：容詞、副詞考點： 詞性轉(zhuǎn)換、比較級與最高級、現(xiàn)在分詞詞性轉(zhuǎn)換、比較級與最高級、現(xiàn)在分詞與過去分詞作為形容詞的區(qū)別與過去分詞作為形容詞的區(qū)別suddensteadilymovedManylaterlatest4-1 In the summer holiday following

13、my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. 4-2 Two third of the earth is covered with water.數(shù)數(shù)詞考點：詞考點：5-1 If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and.5-2 At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.5-3 I wanted to do anything special for him at his retire

14、ment party.5-4 Neither of the arrows hit the target.5-5 Now, I fully understand how hard is to earn money.代代詞考點：詞考點：基數(shù)詞、序數(shù)詞、分數(shù)等基數(shù)詞、序數(shù)詞、分數(shù)等代詞的格和數(shù)、不定代詞的格和數(shù)、不定代詞及代詞及itit作形式主語的用法作形式主語的用法eighteenththirdsourmyselfsomethingNoneis 前面加前面加it6-1 I still remember how hard first day was. 6-2 They live far from t

15、he school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.6-3 As result, the plants are growing somewhere.冠冠詞詞考點：考點：7-1 They have also bought for some gardening tools.7-2 My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time.7-3 Unfortunately, on the developme

16、nt of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.介介詞考點：詞考點：a, an, the的的用法用法, 固定固定搭配搭配介詞短語以及介詞和其他詞的搭配介詞短語以及介詞和其他詞的搭配 first前面加前面加thean在在result前面加前面加awithbecoming 前面加前面加of8-1 Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are used for cooking.8-2 If we stay at home, it is c

17、omfortable but there is no need to spend money.8-3 Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the housework.8-4 I have grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. 8-5 Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any d

18、isease or insect attack problems. 連連詞考點：詞考點：并列連詞，從屬連詞，固定搭配，行文邏輯；并列連詞，從屬連詞，固定搭配，行文邏輯；although和和but不共存不共存, because和和so不共存不共存andandbutbut去掉去掉but或者把或者把but改為改為yet9-1 In their spare time, they are interested in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house.9-2 My uncle is the

19、owner of a restaurant close to that I live.9-3 My only mistake was that I dropped some(biscuits) on the floor after I was packing them up.9-4 If you notice that when someone is missing or hurt, tell your teacher immediately.主主從復(fù)合句考點：從復(fù)合句考點： 三大類從句及其引導(dǎo)詞，主謂一致三大類從句及其引導(dǎo)詞，主謂一致,行文邏輯等行文邏輯等whichwhereafter改為改

20、為while或者或者when10-1 It was not until he arrived home when he realized he forgot to post the letters. 10-2 Not only he treat his students equally, but also he was willing to be their friend.特殊句型考點：特殊句型考點：that在在he前面加前面加did強調(diào)句、倒裝句、主謂一致強調(diào)句、倒裝句、主謂一致解題策略解題策略1. 1. 通讀全文通讀全文, , 理解理解文章。文章。 2. 2. 先先易易后難后難, , 找出

21、明找出明錯。錯。3. 3. 對照對照考點考點, , 逐詞逐詞排除。排除。4 4. . 認真認真復(fù)查復(fù)查，規(guī)范規(guī)范答題。答題。Find the mistakes in the compositions and correct them In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instruc

22、tors orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked m

23、e to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.eighteenth, 數(shù)詞數(shù)詞 the， 冠詞冠詞 but，連詞，連詞 went, 謂語動詞謂語動詞Turn，謂語動詞，謂語動詞 later，形容詞，形容詞/副詞比較級副詞比較級 sudden，形容詞，形容詞/副詞副詞 of，介詞，介詞 words， 名詞復(fù)數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形容詞形容詞/副詞，固定副詞，固定句型句型Boys and girls, Our club aims to helping the Sen

24、ior 2 students learn to take a positive attitude towards the problems you were faced with. There will be colorful activity on Saturday afternoons. Firstly, we will regular invite experts give lectures on psychological problems . You can turn to the experts for advice on what to reduce anxiety. Secondly, the number of discussions will be held, in which you can share you learning experience