高考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作的潤(rùn)色與提高

1、高考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作的潤(rùn)色與提高專(zhuān)題一：優(yōu)秀作文的基本特征優(yōu)秀高考英語(yǔ)作文的六個(gè)基本特征1、層次不亂2、句式多變3、亮點(diǎn)若干3、巧妙串聯(lián)4、蠢錯(cuò)不犯6、整潔卷面 層次不亂開(kāi)頭：引出話題 （第一段）主體：陳述觀點(diǎn)或給出建議 （第二段）結(jié)尾：呼應(yīng)、總結(jié)（第三段）題目：假設(shè)你是李華，你的朋友Liz剛剛進(jìn)入高中，在交友上面存在一些問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)如下提示，幫她度過(guò)難關(guān)。要交朋友首先要做一個(gè)朋友。要和朋友同甘共苦；患難之中的朋友才是真的朋友。友誼需要時(shí)間和投入(effort).Dear Liz, _ Yours, Li Hua層次不亂開(kāi)頭：引入話題主體：陳述觀點(diǎn)或給出建議結(jié)尾：呼應(yīng)、總結(jié)通常只需要2-3句話。

2、提出話題，并說(shuō)明你有建議。第一段：引出話題通常只需要2-3句話。Im sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends. As far as im concerned/For my part/In my opinion, there are some ways to solve this problem. 層次不亂開(kāi)頭：引入話題主體：陳述觀點(diǎn)或給出建議結(jié)尾：呼應(yīng)、總結(jié)通常只需要2-3句話。提出話題，并說(shuō)明你有建議。每一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)或建議之間要保持層次清晰，加上適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)。第二段：陳述觀點(diǎn)或建議To begin with, you shou

3、ld be a friend. Then, you need.Lastly, it is also important to do.First and foremost, you should be a friend. Secondly, you need. Last but not least, it is also important to do.層次不亂開(kāi)頭：引入話題主體：陳述觀點(diǎn)或給出建議結(jié)尾：呼應(yīng)、總結(jié)通常只需要2-3句話。每一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)或建議之間要保持層次清晰，加上適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)?？偨Y(jié)，并提出美好愿景。第三段：呼應(yīng)、總結(jié)，或者表達(dá)愿景。 All in all/ In short/ In

4、 conclusion/ In a word, you can improve your present situation. And i believe , with your trying, you can overcome.Dear Liz, Im sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends. As far as im concerned/For my part/In my opinion, there are some ways to . First and foremost/ To begin with, you sho

5、uld be a friend. Secondly, you need. Last but not least, it is also important to do. All in all/ In short/ In conclusion/ In a word, you can improve your present situation. And I believe , with your trying, you can overcome. Yours, Li Hua句式多變長(zhǎng)短變化主、被動(dòng)變化主語(yǔ)變化同義詞變化同功能句型變化橫向比較變化亮點(diǎn)若干高中詞匯高中常見(jiàn)短語(yǔ)高級(jí)句型各種復(fù)合句倒裝句

6、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型虛擬語(yǔ)氣句型非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)巧妙串聯(lián)起：first of all, to begin with, above all.承：in addition, besides.轉(zhuǎn)：however, on the other hand.合：in my opinion, all in all, in a word.蠢錯(cuò)不犯：初中二年級(jí)學(xué)生就應(yīng)該掌握的基本語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。1. I very like the book. 2. He was very angrily. 3. There have many student in the classroom. 4. The car is yellow color

7、. 整潔卷面英文書(shū)寫(xiě)大方、圓潤(rùn)、自然；詞與詞間距適當(dāng)字母大小適當(dāng)無(wú)大面積涂改不影響交際專(zhuān)題二肅清基礎(chǔ)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中常見(jiàn)的14種語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤：1.主謂不一致My father and I likes going fishing by the lake. Large quantities of soil has been washed away. 2.時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)混用Last night, I had enjoyed a party. The painting on the wall damaged seriously. was3.句子成分殘缺I stood up and saw there

8、a boy. The young man running in the street. waswas4.習(xí)慣搭配誤用I once heard from the animal like this.We passed away the building. ofby5.名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)不分I made many friend in the summer c. We can get some informations from the Internet. 6.動(dòng)詞單、復(fù)數(shù)不分Our teacher often say that success lie in hard work.Mr. Smith, tog

9、ether with some students, are coming to our school. 7.贅詞現(xiàn)象多發(fā)I hope you can return back to our school soon. Well hold a party on next Sunday. 8.近義詞的誤用The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform. I quarreled with my teacher about my grades. 9.基本詞匯拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤I flied to New York di

10、rectly from Beijing. This will be done immediatly. 10.前后人稱(chēng)不一致The boy was born in a poor family but she works hard. We watched a few movies and we loved it. 11.動(dòng)詞原形作主語(yǔ)/賓語(yǔ)Take a walk after dinner is very good for you. At that moment, I didnt feel like take a walk. 12.邏輯主語(yǔ)與主句主語(yǔ)不一致Preparing dinner, the

11、doorbell rang. Walking in the street, a car hit an old man. 13.一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)There was no work to do, he went back home. I received your email, I was very excited. beingWhenand14.中式英語(yǔ)Next week have a party. I sorry you I cant with you go Beijing. 有則改之，無(wú)則加勉；用心則易，無(wú)心則難。專(zhuān)題三：第一反應(yīng)與克制第一反應(yīng)他是個(gè)好人。第一反應(yīng)測(cè)試：He is a

12、good man. generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable, easy-going, devoted, open-minded, modest, friendly 對(duì)不起，我不能和你一起去北京了。Im sorry that I cant go to Beijing with you. Would you accept my heartfelt apology that I cant make it to Beijing with you as we have planned? I sorr

13、y you I cant with you go Beijing. 存點(diǎn)錢(qián)是很重要的。There is no denying/ It is beyond any dispute that depositing some money in the bank is crucial. Sometimes, whether you have money at hand means the difference of life or death for a loved one. 專(zhuān)題四：打動(dòng)人心的句型 和 打翻人胃的句型 審題： “十年后的我” - “感性的、充滿想象的”切忌：套用了太多所謂的“萬(wàn)能句式

14、” ，破壞了這種“感性”，使之變得“太理性”、“太剛”了： （1）運(yùn)用了大量的表示順序的詞句(太過(guò)理性)： Firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally; To start with；Last but not least; My future life is as follows.審題： “十年后的我” - “感性的、充滿想象的”切忌：套用了太多所謂的“萬(wàn)能句式” ，破壞了這種“感性”，使之變得“太理性”、“太剛”了： （1）運(yùn)用了大量的表示順序的詞句(太過(guò)理性)： Firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally; To start with；

15、Last but not least; My future life is as follows.（2）運(yùn)用了大量的表達(dá)強(qiáng)烈觀點(diǎn)句式（語(yǔ)氣太剛）： I hold the point of view that There is no doubt that I strongly believe that I am firmly convinced that (there will be exciting and wonderful changes in /it gives me a strong body) It goes without saying that What I want to st

16、ress is that (health is very important to us)（3）運(yùn)用了大量的總結(jié)、轉(zhuǎn)換、強(qiáng)調(diào)、轉(zhuǎn)折等語(yǔ)氣、句式，不夠得體。 All in all, / Generally speaking, As a matter of fact, As for my spare time, As far as I am concerned, I hope become a doctor. When it comes to my own family, it occurs to me that I will have 2 children. It is known to us

17、that family is the most important thing in our life. On the one hand, on the other hand注意：在結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，邏輯通順的基礎(chǔ)上，要注意句型的多變，句子的優(yōu)美。（1）運(yùn)用大量的強(qiáng)調(diào)句和倒裝句，給人非常生澀的感覺(jué)。 In my spare time, so active am I that I will go fishing with my family. It is after ten years that（2）在同一篇短文里，堆砌了大量同樣的句式： Its I that want to be a teacher;

18、 It is I that am fond on children. It is I that like making a lot of friends. It is famous city that Ill go to（3）中式英語(yǔ)，意思相差較大,或完全不達(dá)意。 Lover Organize a family I hope my will be little speak English.那些能稍微充滿想象的句子，就顯得難能可貴：My two sons surrounding me smile like sunshine.On weekends, I will take my family t

19、o the beach to have a rest, enjoying the sun rises. go out for a picnic, hugging the nature and strengthening our emotionclever and optimistic, my daughter is going to be the sort of girl who spread sunshine to others through her smile.Love can add delightful color to life. My Chinese Dream To make

20、our motherland become more and more powerful, teenagers should play a role in realizing Chinese dream. Recently, our class has held a meeting about this. There I will discuss how I understand Chinese dream. Maybe everyone has a dream, whatever it is. Dream is like water, which can water our heart; dream is like sunshine, which can melt the snow; dream is like wind, which can blow away fog in front of our eyes. When I was a child, I wanted to be a doctor, who can save the dying people. And now I want to ma