外研版九年級(jí)下冊(cè)課件 Module 6 寫作素養(yǎng)提升練

1、 外研版九年級(jí)下寫作素養(yǎng)提升練 Module 6Eating together 外研版九年級(jí)下本模塊的核心話題是“飲食”。課文中準(zhǔn)備聚會(huì)的對(duì)話及介紹西方人的用餐習(xí)慣，能幫助學(xué)生了解西方的飲食文化和用餐習(xí)俗，同時(shí)加深學(xué)生對(duì)中國(guó)飲食文化的認(rèn)識(shí)與理解。heat, knife, fork, spoon, cheeseburger, serve,similar, Western單 詞： Western food, in the West, a traditional dish, heat up, be made with, finger food, at the start of, serve ones

2、elf, help yourself to, the dinner table, the last dish, finish doing sth., long after短 語(yǔ)： 1. That means you eat it with your fingers.2. But its eaten everywhere in England.3. Help yourself to some fish.4. Its impolite to leave as soon as you finish eating.5. Remember that it is polite to say that yo

3、u enjoy every dish when it is served.6. But there is nothing similar to say in English.句 型：“民以食為天”，飲食的安全和健康受到越來(lái)越多的關(guān)注和重視。請(qǐng)你以“Say No to Junk Food”為題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。寫作要點(diǎn)：垃圾食品對(duì)健康無(wú)益；選擇正確的生活方式，如三餐要有規(guī)律，少吃垃圾食品；多吃蔬果等健康食物，以提供身體必需營(yíng)養(yǎng)。寫作要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80 左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上述所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮；3. 參考詞匯： 過(guò)多包裝over packagi

4、ng; 有規(guī)律地 regularly；營(yíng)養(yǎng)nutritionSay No to Junk FoodNowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food._1. 體裁：議論文2. 人稱：介紹個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱或第二人稱3. 時(shí)態(tài)：主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)【審題指導(dǎo)】【思路構(gòu)建】拒絕垃圾食品does harm to our health; brings more rubbish健康飲食建議eat r

5、egularly; take more fruits and vegetables; do more outdoor activitiesSay No to Junk FoodNowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food.There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious and attractive, but it surely

6、does harm to our health and brings more rubbish. To get away from junk food, we should focus on how【范文賞析】to keep a healthy lifestyle. First, eat regularly, three meals a day on time. Eat as little junk food as possible. Second, take more fruits and vegetables which can provide the nutrition weneed.

7、Whats more, do more outdoor activities. As long as you are busy with something interesting, you will more probably get away from junk food.In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food canhelp make us stronger and stronger.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言通順流暢。開(kāi)篇介紹人們對(duì)食品安全及健康的關(guān)注，并表明自己的態(tài)度。本文把對(duì)垃圾食品的拒絕和對(duì)健康飲食的建議合二為一，There is

8、 no doubt that 等句型和下文定語(yǔ)從句的使用體現(xiàn)了作者較好的語(yǔ)言功底，是得分的亮點(diǎn)。Whats more，In a word 等連接詞使得內(nèi)容富有邏輯，緊密相連。假如你是王明，你的一位好友Jazi 寄來(lái)一封信，信中說(shuō)他下星期來(lái)中國(guó)，并向你詢問(wèn)中國(guó)的餐桌禮儀，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回復(fù)，告訴他有關(guān)情況。要點(diǎn)：1. 讓客人和長(zhǎng)輩先吃菜；2. 不要用筷子敲碗；3. 不要將手伸到對(duì)面夾菜；4. 等大家到齊了，才開(kāi)始吃；5. 為主人的健康、成功干杯。寫作要求：1. 90 詞左右，開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 內(nèi)容必須包括要點(diǎn)提示, 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。參考詞

9、匯：guest 客人，elders 長(zhǎng)輩，tap 敲Dear Jazi,Thanks for your last letter._Best wishes!Yours,Wang Ming_Dear Jazi,Thanks for your last letter. Welcome to China! Now I want to tell you something about Chinese table manners. In China, the host or hostess doesnt eat the dishes until the guests and elders begin. You cant tap at bowls with the chopsticks. You shouldnt reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to eat. You ca