初中英語 滬教牛津版 9B U5-3 Writing My favourite sport 寫作課 課件

1、Unit 5 WritingDoris Jiang姜薇深圳市寶安中學（集團）外國語學校My Favourite SportObjectivesBy the end of this class, you will be able to write an article about your favourite sport use the four-step strategy of writing 姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）A pen姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）Get ready for the class!A notebookBlank sheets of paper A dictionary

2、 姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）What is your favourite sport?姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團） During the winter and summer holidays, a lot of students are turning into couch potatoes, as they stay home all the time and lack exercise. As we all know, there are a lot of sports can be done at home! These kinds of sports will help us kee

3、p fit as well. If you have any ideas, please write to us to talk about your favourite home sport. We will publish some of the articles and promote these sports in our community during the long holidays.Share your favourite home sport with us!The secret recipe for writing Identify the topicScratch an

4、 outlineEnrich the contentRevise and polish姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）The four-step strategy Step 1 Identify the topic 姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）Read the background information and requirements carefully and identify what you are going to write about. 姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）What sports can be done at home?Step 1 Identify the topic t

5、able tennisrunning on the treadmillyogaaerobicstaekwondoParagraph 1 姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）Step 2 Scratch an outline IntroductionBodyConclusionaaMany students are gaining weight during the long holidays, as they seldom go out for exercise. As a sport fanatic, I never have this kind of trouble because I enjoy

6、 playing table tennis at home.IntroductionTopic sentencesDemonstrate your central idea at the very first place.Paragraph 1 姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）Step 2 Scratch an outline IntroductionBodyConclusionParagraph 2 Paragraph 3 Details about the sport Bodywhen? how often? who? why?Why is it a good sport to play at

7、 home? Benifits of the sportYour memory or experience of itYour favourite team or star.Paragraph 1 姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）Step 2 Scratch an outline IntroductionBodyConclusionParagraph 2 Paragraph 3 ConclusionParagraph 4 If you are bored and sit around with nothing to do, why not try swinging the ball up in t

8、he air?Playing table tennis for an hour every day not only keeps my body strong, but brings lots of fun and joy to my whole family. Summary and call-on If you are sitting around with nothing to do, why not try swinging the ball up in the air?Paragraph 1 姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）Step 2 Scratch an outline Introd

9、uctionBodyConclusionParagraph 2 Paragraph 3 Details about the sport when? how often? who? why?Benifits of the sportParagraph 4 Summary and call-onTopic sentencesWhy is it a good sport to play at home? Your memory or experience of itYour favourite team or star.姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）Step 3 Enrich the content

10、aaAlthough the spread of coronavirus keeps us home, I never stop exercising to keep fit. As a sport fanatic, I enjoy playing table tennis most.aaMy favourite home sport is playing table tennis. I enjoy it very much.Try to use some compound or complex sentences. Better word choice helps catch readers

11、 interest and improve the quality of the article. Sentence skills aa姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）Step 3 Enrich the content in addition,. besides,. because, for, as, since, therefore, due to.although/though/even though,. Connecting words yet/still/nevertheless/however,. for example, for instance, in this case. Play

12、ing table tennis relieves the boredom of staying home. Moreover, our family is filled with laughter each time we play together.aaPlaying table tennis relieved the boredom of staying home. Our family are filled with laughter each time we play together. Review your draft. Check spelling and punctuatio

13、n.Rewrite carefully on your paper. 姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）Step 4 Revise and polish Check grammar. The four-step strategy for writing Identify the topicScratch an outlineEnrich the contentRevise and polish姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）IntroductionBodyConclusionDetails about the sport Benifits of the sportSummary and call-onT

14、opic sentencesSentence skills and connecting wordsspellig, punctuation and grammar姜薇 深圳市寶安中學（集團）aa Many students are gaining weight during the long holidays, as they seldom go out for exercise. As a sport fanatic, I never have this kind of trouble because I enjoy playing table tennis at home. Every

15、day after dinner, we start the joy of the evening by a game of table tennis. The living room is not spacious but enough for a home-made table tennis table- the dinning table. My mother and I always take turns against my father. My little sister, Jenny, usually sits aside and cheers for us. Table ten

16、nis is probably the best sport that we can play at home. A pair of bats, a ball and a dinning table are all the things we need to start the game. I still remember the day my father taught me how to hold the bat and told me to stay calm no matter what direction the ball would come from. This still inspi