高考英語 書面表達講評課件 新人教版

1、書面表達講評 有的放矢？1. 先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。2. 評分時注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯、語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。3. 拼寫與標點是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。4. 如書寫較差以致影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。評分標準寫作基本功一書寫要規(guī)范，字體大方、飽滿二. 句子要有準確性三. 語言要有閃光點四.文章要有流暢性1.At last ,we should be calm , waiting the rescue teammates to help us .2.Dont ta

2、ke a elevator or jump from high building.3.You must use a wet towel to cover you nose and mouth.4.There are some accidents happen everyday.5.You should keep clam . 6.It is wrong that to take a lift./foranyourwhichcalm/Correct the following sentences7.When you are caught in fire .8.You had better to

3、call 119 at once.9.When facing with the fire ,you should keep calm.10.This action enable us to get out of the fires easily./facedenables,1.We should do whatever we can to make ourselves safe . （錢倩）2.It is unwise to take an elevator or jump from the high build.（俏璐）3. There is no doubt that you must m

4、ake every effort to tell others you are in danger.（巧琴）4.Dangerous as you are ,you must keep calm.（葉晨）5.Here are some points that may help you when you are in danger of fire.（舒穎）6.Dont use the elevator ,or you will get into a worse situation .（笑航）Some wonderful sentences from our homework:7.The key t

5、o escaping from the fires is to keep calm.（慧君）8.It is your safety that is the most important.（淑萍）9.We should make every effort to get away from the fire quickly, for our life is more important than anything else.（瑩婷）10.Jumping from the high building is not a good idea .So dangerous is it that it wil

6、l make you die.（美娟）11.Whats the most important is that we should call 119 immediately. Only in this way can we deal with the fire as soon as possible.（倪麗麗）步驟1 審題（時態(tài)，人稱，分段）步驟2羅列要點（化繁為簡）步驟3組句成文 (連貫性-關(guān)聯(lián)詞)步驟4步驟5 抄寫檢查具體怎樣寫文章書面表達 為了普及“急救知識”，你所在的班級最近舉辦了一次急救知識大討論?，F(xiàn)請你根據(jù)以下要點以“First Aid in Fires” 為題寫一篇文章，說明發(fā)生火

7、災(zāi)時要注意的幾點事項，放在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站的英文專區(qū)里。 1.室內(nèi)有濃煙時，身體盡量低一些，用濕毛巾捂住鼻和口逃出； 2.不要乘坐電梯或從高層跳下； 3.你自己還有什么好的建議。 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100120； 2.可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。了解火災(zāi)中急救知識的重要性1.室內(nèi)有濃煙時，身體盡量低一些，用濕毛巾捂住鼻和口逃出；2.不要乘坐電梯或從高層跳下；3.你自己還有什么好的建議。Paragraph 1Paragraph 2 As we all know , first aid in fires is of importance, so we should have a great knowledg

8、e of it, which may help us escape from fires . When caught in a fire ,we shouldnt panic . Firstly ,we should call 119 and report the fire at once . When the room is full of thick smoke,we should keep close to the ground, using a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose. Secondly , it is unwise to take

9、a lift or jump from the high building. We can fasten ropes to something thats fixed inside the building and then slide down the ropes. Thirdly ,dont take anything with us .We should make every effort to get away from the fire as quickly as we can .After all ,our life is more important . 1.書寫 好 一般 有待于提高2.審題 時態(tài) 人稱 分段 3.要點 齊 漏（指出具體哪一點）4.病句 幾處5.閃光點 幾處6.文章流暢性 好 一般 差7. 總分 Homework25 假如你是李明，你的朋友Tom在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到一些令人煩心的事。請你根據(jù)下面的信息給他寫一封信，闡述你對此事的看法。注意：1. 對所給要點不要