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1、2021/8/11 星期三1高中英語復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)作文課件City life or country life2021/8/11 星期三2人們經(jīng)常討論鄉(xiāng)村生活和城市生活，一些人喜歡鄉(xiāng)村生活而另一人則喜歡城市生活。請你以Living in the Country or the City為題，按照以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文。鄉(xiāng)村生活：空氣清新、生活恬靜。城市生活：交通便捷、購物方便。我喜歡的生活和理由。注意：詞數(shù)100-120，文章的題目和開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。Living in the Country or in the City People are forever talking about li

2、ving in the country and in the city. 文體與時態(tài)。抓要點(diǎn)規(guī)定內(nèi)容開放內(nèi)容審題2021/8/11 星期三3明晰結(jié)構(gòu)（分段）,考慮連接(1)鄉(xiāng)村生活：空氣清新、生活恬靜。(2) 城市生活：交通便捷、購物方便。(3)我喜歡的生活和理由(1.2.)。1.(To begin with) Moreover In addition Additionally Furthermore2.For one thing, For another 3. In the first place, In the second place4. First(ly) Second(ly) Fin

3、ally段落間連接過渡詞On the contrary; however;段落間連接過渡詞PersonallyTo be honestTo be frankAs far as I am concerned段落內(nèi)連接規(guī)劃2021/8/11 星期三4表達(dá)喜歡的用語-likeprefer to live inprefer living inenjoy living inbe willing towould ratherbe fond of be attracted bybe fascinated by避免單一 表達(dá)2021/8/11 星期三5表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的基本用語-Some thinkothers th

4、inkbelieve.feelclaimstatestress insistmaintain避免單一2021/8/11 星期三6表達(dá)規(guī)定內(nèi)容-空氣清新、生活恬靜The air is fresh/clean.Life is quiet/peaceful. enjoy gentle way/pace of living交通便捷、購物方便Its easy to go around/here and there.People can go from one place to another without much difficulty.People can buy anything they wan

5、t.Shopping is convenient準(zhǔn)確靈活2021/8/11 星期三7語義不充分不連貫Some people like to live in the country. The air is fresh and clean. Moreover, Life is quiet and peaceful. Others, however, prefer to live in the city. They can go from one place to another without much difficulty. In addition, shopping is much more

6、convenient.下面段落有什么問題？2021/8/11 星期三8要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)拓展-添枝加葉1. The air is fresh.Obviously, the air there is much fresher than that in the city.They claim that the air there is fresher as there is less pollution.They think that the air there is fresher so that they can relax themselves both physically and mentally

7、.2. Life is quiet and peaceful.They insist that life is quiet and peaceful, which is beneficial for good health.2021/8/11 星期三9嘗試適當(dāng)拓展以下要點(diǎn)Its easy to go around.They feel its easy to go around as .They believe that its easy to go around so that They claim that its easy to go around, whichThey can buy a

8、nything they want.They think() they can buy anything they wantHave a try2021/8/11 星期三10表達(dá)開放部分-learn more social skills (getting along with different kinds of people)broaden our views ()make my life more colorful ()receive medical care more easily()get better education()brainstorm ideas富有思想精選能表達(dá)好且出彩的

9、兩到三點(diǎn)2021/8/11 星期三11抄寫字跡清楚，卷面零涂改。不用改正液、透明膠帶。注意大小寫，注意分段。不超邊框，不隨意換行。2021/8/11 星期三12課堂小結(jié)審題規(guī)劃表達(dá)相同語義表達(dá)規(guī)定部分內(nèi)容表達(dá)開放部分內(nèi)容抄寫抓要點(diǎn)段落和連接避免單一準(zhǔn)確靈活，適當(dāng)拓展富有思想，精選要點(diǎn)卷面整潔清楚2021/8/11 星期三13assignmentWrite the passage out and copy it down as neatly and clearly as possible.2021/8/11 星期三14段落組織1、寫好主題句。Personally, I am fascinated by city life.2、圍繞主題句展開2或3點(diǎn)。兩點(diǎn)連接詞