2003年考研真題作文

1、2003 年考研真題作文Directions:Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay inwhich you should:1. describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and2. point out its implications in our life.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWERSHEET 2. (20 points)The above two pictures

2、have shaped sharp contrast to eachother. In one picture, a flower grows in a greenhouse and is in fullbloom in spite of the outside rain. But in the other, the flower,moved outside and without the protection of the greenhouse, iswithering in the rain. The two pictures show us that the flower,which i

3、s raised in a greenhouse and carefully protected, cannotstand natural wind and rain, and therefore is withering.It is most likely that the drawer means to compare children inour country to the flower in his drawings and reflect a problem inthe present education of our children. For one thing, nowada

4、ys,most children are brought up by their parents with the best of care.Parents always try their best to meet the childrens demands, toprovide them with the best environment of growing and studyingand to protect them from any possible harms, setbacks andsufferings. For another, owing to the present e

5、xamination-orientededucation system, most children are too heavily burdened withstudies to have time to take part in social activities so that theylearn little about the society, the real world outside their familyand school. Growing up in such a way and environment, it will beinevitable and natural

6、 for our children to lack the ability to standsetbacks and sufferings and to overcome obstacles when theyleave their parents and step into the society.To sum up, the problem of childrens education must be sotimely and effectively because it is they that constitute the futureof our country.審題解題2003 畫

7、，闡述其含義；第二點是指出在我們生活中的含意，即暗含的意思。注意這里meaning和 implication是不同的，前者指圖通過類比（analogy）所揭示的道理。題目給出了兩幅相對的圖畫：上面一幅圖中，盡管外面正在下雨，溫室中的花朵卻在怒放?？墒窍旅娴囊环鶊D中，這花朵一旦搬到了外界，在雷雨中立即就凋謝了，由此我們得出了“溫室中的花朵經(jīng)不起風雨”的推論，這就是兩幅圖畫的含義。其暗含的意思可以想見，指的就是當前社會孩子的教育問題。許多父母對孩子呵護有加，百般溺愛，不讓孩子吃一點苦，受一點委屈，這樣對孩子就好嗎？此外在當前的教育制度下，孩子學習負擔過重，絕大部分時間都在學校和家庭度過，沒有多少接

8、觸社會的機會，又怎能茁壯成長呢？經(jīng)過分析文章最后定為三段。第一段是描述圖畫。第二段是類的原因。而后在段內(nèi)得出結(jié)論，這樣的孩子就象溫室里的花朵一樣，是經(jīng)不起人生的磨難的。最后一段是做結(jié)，由于提綱中沒有單獨列舉這一點，所以此段可以非常簡潔。核心詞匯shape sharp contrastin full bloomwithercannot stand natural wind and raincompare tobring up children with tender careowing tothe examination-oriented education systembe heavily b

9、urdened with studiestake part in social activitiesstand sufferings and overcome obstacles組詞成句首段首句是個模板句，說兩幅畫構(gòu)成了強烈的對比。The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to each other. it ismost likely that，以 it開頭做形式主語，顯得客觀，most表compareto，表示“把 Shall I compare thee toa summers day?莎士比亞十四行詩中著名句子，thee即是現(xiàn)在的

10、 you。這首十四行詩很可能是莎翁最著名的一首。)Robert Burns compared his lover to a red, red rose. 將他的愛人比做紅紅的玫瑰花。)嚴格說來，comparewith與但現(xiàn)在混用的情形越來越多了。此句后面的 reflect 比較好，一來是將圖畫與現(xiàn)實生活中的問題連接了起來，且接續(xù)緊密；二來引起了下文，顯得很工整。在考研寫作中應多注意句型的變換使用，但注意短句、散句千萬不要太多。The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to eachother. In one picture,a flow

11、er grows in a greenhouse and is in fullbloom in spite of the outside rain. But in the other, the flower,moved outside and without the protection of the greenhouse, iswithering in the thunderstorm. The two pictures show us that theflower, which is raised in a greenhouse and carefully protected,cannot

12、 stand natural wind and rain at all.It is most likely that the drawer means to compare children inour country to the flower in his drawings and reflect a problem inthe present education of our children. For one thing, nowadays,most children are brought up by their parents with tender care.Parents al

13、ways try their best to meet the childrens demands, toprovide them with the best environment of growth and study andto protect them from any possible harms, setbacks and sufferings.For another,owing to the present examination-oriented educationsystem, most children are too heavily burdened with studi

14、es tohave time to take part in social activities, so they learn little aboutthe society, the real world outside their family and school.Growing up in such a manner and such an environment, thechildren will inevitably and naturally lack the ability to standsufferings and overcome obstacles when they

15、leave their parentsand step into the society.To sum up, the problem of childrens education must be sotimely and effectively because it is they that constitute the futureof our country.結(jié)構(gòu)點評謀篇布局時我們一定要扣緊所給的指令，特別是提綱。本文共第二、三句分述兩幅圖，第四句是本段重點，在對比過程中，得出圖畫的含義。第二段首句推測繪畫者的意圖，引出了孩子教育這一重要問題。而后分兩個方面來描述其原因。此段的末句非常精

16、彩，是根據(jù)上述兩個原因所作的推論，說明在此種情形下，孩子們離開父母、獨自生活時又怎能經(jīng)得起人生的風雨呢？最后一段下結(jié)論，非常簡潔，但卻相當于原因辦法類混合模板中的辦法模塊，說這一問題必須盡管有效地解決，因為孩子是我們國家的未來。妙筆生花第一段第二句的in full bloom去分詞短語作后置定語，相當于一個定語從句。句中wither表thunderstorm第四句巧妙利用raise這一詞既可以描寫人、又可以描寫植物、動物的特性，與下文的bring up遙相呼應，非常精妙。句中的stand 第二段首句中的 mean 第三句是第二句的自然接續(xù)，句中使用了三個平行的不定式，其中meet demand

17、s harms, setbacks andsufferings 句中 owing to the examination-oriented educationsystem tooto結(jié)構(gòu)，在這里非常恰當；be heavily burdened with studiestake part in social activitiesthe real worldoutside their family and school 是 the society 的同位語這里使用了同位語之后，句中就顯得豐富地多了。同位語與插入語一樣，是看似平淡卻極顯功力的技巧，請大家細細琢磨，這一類的技巧還有標點符號的使用。最后一

18、句有多處平行，第一處是在現(xiàn)在分詞短語中的 in such a manner and such anenvironment such關(guān)鍵；之后有副詞inevitably and naturally的平行，而后是動賓詞組 stand sufferings和 overcome ，分別表示“經(jīng)受磨 leave their parents和 stepinto the and還表示了時間上的前后接續(xù)關(guān)系，這里也可以使用leave their parents and live on their own。最后一段只有一句話，使用了平行的副詞 timely 和調(diào)句，效果強烈。句中constitute the f

19、uture of our country 表示文后之思從 2000 年起，考研寫作全部考察了圖畫題，也就是越來越注重考察大家對于主題的把握這也就是與命題作文最大的區(qū)別。在把握了圖畫所包含的深刻寓意之后，就應該緊扣提綱展開文章。在謀篇布局完成之后，在具體寫作的過程中，遣詞同學畢竟是少數(shù)，最大的競爭還在語言本身。就枯萎了。江南、江北畫一個插在地上的小牌子，上面標出字即可The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to eachother. In one picture, a tree south of river grows abundant

20、ly. Butin the other, the tree, transplanted to the north of the river, iswithering after some time. The two pictures show us that the tree,which is planted in a certain environment, may not grow well oreven die in another environment.It is most likely that the drawer means to compare employeesof our

21、 times to the tree in his drawings and reflect a problem intodays job market. For one thing, nowadays, many employeesdream of finding jobs with ideal pay. Some people hop from onejob to another to find such positions even if they do not like them,or they have never thought about the problem. For another,otherpeople keep thinking of working in big companies, which theybelieve means more chances of pay r