高中英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫公開課優(yōu)質(zhì)課件(母愛)

1、Continuation writing1Continuation writing1 Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldnt help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a littl

2、e hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?

3、”“Oh,yes.but I dont have money on me,” she replied.“Thats nothing. Ill treat you today,” said the man.“Come in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.“What is it?” asked the man kindly.“Nothing, actually I was just touched by

4、 your kindness!”said Jenny. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of

5、 noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered Mothers familiar face and weathered hands. “Why d

6、id I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.Paragraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny

7、took a deep breath._Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._Task : a continuation(續(xù)寫) of the storyRead what happened _in_ the story Write what happened _ the storyParagraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath._Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.

8、_after2 Jenny was the only child in hStep 1 Reading3Step 1 3Task 1 Read for information contentwho when where what whyJennymothersellerthat afternoonthe house, in the streetran out of the househad a quarrel with her mother4Task 1 Read for informaTask 2 Read for plot ParaEvent (動(dòng)詞)Jennys Feeling(形容)P

9、ara1Para2-9The seller _Jenny _,and Jenny _ the seller a lot.The seller _ her how many times her mother _ for her and if she _ her mother.Para10-11She _ there,_Mothers familiar face and weathered hands. Realizing her mistakes, she _ to go home to _ her mother.Jenny _ her mother, _home and a few hours

10、 later,felt a little _. quarreled withlefthungrybrought a bowl of noodlesthankedaskedcooked thankedsatremenberingmade up her mindmake an apology toangry, weep sadtouchedthankful/ gratefulmercilesscomplainmisunderstandingregretful, ashamed,guilty5Task 2 Read for plot ParaEvenreading-continuationRead

11、for plot Paragraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.quarrel, ran out oftreat Jenny noodlesdecided to apologizeashamed, regretfulangry, sadthankful, touchedParagraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.beginningrising developmentClimaxEnding6reading-Step 2 Writing7Step 2 Wr

12、iting7Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. _Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. The 2nd beginning and a positive ending infers the content of Para 2 Two given sentences infers the content of Para 1 Infer the contenttwo given beginningsTips兩段首句定一框，二框二首正能

13、量8Paragraph 1 The 2nd beginning Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.Task 3 Outline possible plot（para.1）feelingactionscenedialogueReasonable動(dòng)作，心理，情感，環(huán)境/情景1）_ , she found her mother was not in.2) _ , she wondered, _3) Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind._4)_, sh

14、e failed to control her tears.9Paragraph 1Task 3 Outline possParagraph 1:Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she pushed the door open and entered the house, she found her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sank down onto the sofa.“Where could my mother be?” she wondered.“Was she s

15、till angry with me?”Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks.10Pa

16、ragraph 1:10Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.Task 3 Outline possible plot（para.2）feelingactionscenedialogueReasonable動(dòng)作，心理/對(duì)話，情感，環(huán)境11Paragraph 2Task 3 Outline poss Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of

17、 her mother.“Here you come! Ive been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldnt help throwing herself into her mothers arms.“Mum, Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled, pattin

18、g her back gently. With a bright light streaming through the window, flooding the opening and spreading in a wide circle on the ceiling, they hugged together and too thrilled to say anything.1212 Song of the Parting SonFrom the threads a mothers hands weaves,A gown for parting son is made.Sewn stitch by stitch before he leaves,For fear his return be delayed.Such kindne