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1、讀后續(xù)寫-荒野冒險(xiǎn) 12讀后續(xù)寫-荒野冒險(xiǎn) 12閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so

2、 angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyo

3、nd, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired th

4、at she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she foll

5、owed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the

6、 stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. B

7、utnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._ ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._2016年10月浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫22022/10/2閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。步驟？ReadThinkWrite1) 5W1H2) organization3) language關(guān)鍵詞開頭語Predict the plot properly1) Actions動作2) Feelings情感3) Surroundings環(huán)境Get the main idea32022/10/2步驟？ReadThinkWrite1) 5W1H2)

8、oRead for 5W1Hcontent who when where what Why Jane was lostthey quarreledJane, Tomone weekend in July in the forestmain idea?On weekend in July, Jane was lost in the forest because she had quarreled with Tom.42022/10/2Read for 5W1Hcontent who when One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had

9、driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path

10、to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply.

11、 If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her fam

12、ily. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berri

13、es. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to

14、 see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._ ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._In what order is the material developed?

15、One weekend in July, As night was beginning to fall, Jane rose at the break of the day, But and it was getting dark again.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Time Read for the organization52022/10/2In what order is the material 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband,

16、Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With

17、 no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!”

18、No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom an

19、d her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a

20、few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for

21、people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._ ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._With no path to follow, Jane, s

22、he turned around, hoping to Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that Jane rose, hungry and thirsty.If only she had not left her mobile phone Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Read for language62022/10/2閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。細(xì)讀兩段續(xù)寫的開頭語，理順續(xù)寫段落的邏輯關(guān)系；圍繞劃定的10個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞，合理創(chuàng)新故事情節(jié)。Par

23、a. 1: Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark. How did Jane feel then? What did Jane do then? How did Jane struggle through the night?Para. 2: ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup. Was Jane rescued? Who rescued Jane? How was she rescued? How did she feel then?Think72022/10/2細(xì)讀兩段續(xù)寫的開頭語，理順續(xù)寫段落的邏輯關(guān)系；Para. 1The und

24、erlined words where020304 yellow blousewalkedTomhelicopterJanelakestreamclimbedat a distanceto her great joyClassify 10 key words into different groups.82022/10/2The underlined words where0203Classify 10 key words into different groups._: Jane, Tom_: helicopter, yellow blouse_: walked, climbed_: lak

25、e, stream, at a distance_: to her great joycharactersactionsobjectssurroundingsfeelings92022/10/2Classify 10 key words into difA: actions 動作的豐富性F: feelings 情感表達(dá)的多樣性S: surroundings 恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用環(huán)境描寫Write102022/10/2A: actions 動作的豐富性Write102022/9He was so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open. Maybe

26、 ashamed of what he had done, he was about to turn away when I seized his arm quickly. I stared at him for several seconds and broke the silence, saying “Roy, trust me. I am willing to help you .” Having regretted what he had done , he couldnt hold back his tears ,bent down and burst out crying with

27、 his head buried in his hands. Tears welling up in my eyes, I picked him up and hugged him tightly. He put his head against my should, sobbing and saying “If I could turn the clock back, I wouldnt have stolen the money”. A: 動作的豐富性112022/10/2He was so surprised that he stF: 情感表達(dá)的多樣性 Janes feelingsIs

28、that for me?“Tom!”“Help!”confused,hungry and thirsty.walked away, turned around, criedactionswordsthoughtslooks122022/10/2F: 情感表達(dá)的多樣性 Janes Is that for But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. Amid the dreadful darkness, strange sounds of wild beasts were heard. “If it werent for t

29、hat stupid quarrel, I wouldnt be trapped here,” she thought to herself, regretful tears clouding her eyes. Surrounded by the fear and tiredness, Jane felt exhausted and finally slid into sleep. “Tom, is that you?”she murmured. “Tom, help!” In her dream, she saw a man extending his arms towards her a

30、t a distance. It was day break when Jane woke up. After a washing, Jane continued to force her way ahead. In the boundless search, she found it impossible to find a way out, which threw her into desperation. Fortunately, a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. In no time did Jane rush to the

31、 rock and climb onto it. She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter. To her great joy, this time, the helicopter spotted her. The moment Jane was reunited with her husband, her tears clouded her vision. They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.thoughtssurr

32、oundingslookswordsactions132022/10/2 But no more helicopter1. Stepping out of the office, we felt a sense of relief with the sun shining down over us.(Roy 續(xù)寫)2. They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.(范文)3. A ray of sunlight shines through the dark clouds, bringing warmt

33、h and hope to the world.4. Seeing the moon shining in the dark sky, he couldnt help thinking of the days that she spent with Tom and her family.(王晨崳)5. The cold wind blew violately in the gloomy air.(胡纓紅) 6. With the cold wind blowing, Jane had to .(姜玉萌)7. The sound of the stream sounded relaxing, w

34、hich relieved Janes anxiety.(馬瑩昕)S: 恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用環(huán)境描寫142022/10/21. Stepping out of the office, But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. Exhausted and hopeless, Jane sat beside a tree, stretching her acing arms. “Had I not qualrrelled with Tom, I wouldnt have been here.” She was so regretful

35、 that tears welled up in her eyes. Since Jane already worn out, she quickly fall asleep beside the tree. It was day break when Jane woke up. The sun shone through a break in the clouds. Jane walked along a stream, hoping to find the lake where Tom may camp at night. Suddenly, she heard a loud scream at a distance, “Jane, where are you?” To her great joy, it was Tom. They hugged t