高考英語作文提升訓(xùn)練課件：分類寫作-3請求求助信

1、分類寫作三、請求/求助信 全國高考英語二輪突破分類寫作三、請求/求助信 全國高考英語二輪突破an unforgettable experience 一次難忘的經(jīng)歷make preparations for 做準備have trouble in sth./doing sth. 有困難collect materialS 收集材料properly 合適地appreciate 感激；欣賞offer sb. a hand 提供幫助passenger 旅客airline company 航空公司flight 航班l(xiāng)eave sb. a deep impression 給某人留下深刻印象name and a

2、ddress 姓名和地址【必備詞語】an unforgettable experience 一course 課程accent 口音；方言manage to do sth. 設(shè)法成功地做了某事hobby 愛好symbol 象征luck and unity 運氣和團結(jié)silk thread 絲線customer 顧客further information 進一步的消息ask sb. a favor 請某人幫忙a precious gift 一份珍貴的禮物postage 郵資【必備詞語】course 課程【必備詞語】1. I wonder if you could do me a favor. 我想

3、請您幫個忙。2. I am wondering whether you could . 我想知道您是否能夠3. I would be very grateful if you could . 如果您能，我將感激不盡。4. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 如果您能幫助我，我將感激不盡。5. Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. 不知道我是否可以請您幫個忙？【好句朗誦】1. I wonder if you could do me6. I cant wait to see y

4、ou again! 我等不及再次見到你了！7. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply. 謝謝您的關(guān)注，期待收到您盡早的回復(fù)。8. If you need further information, do let me know. 如果您需要更多的信息，請告知我。9. Thank you very much for all the kindness. 謝謝您一切的好意。10. Hope everything is fine with you there. 希望您在

5、那里一切如意?！竞镁淅收b】6. I cant wait to see you aga1. The whole thing is getting very difficult and I real need your good advice!1. real改為really2. The main reason Im writing is that I have litte favour to ask.2. little前面加a【單句改錯】每句只有一個錯誤3. I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to these matters.

6、3. 刪掉the1. The whole thing is getting 4. I would like to bring your attention to some problems what are occurring in this block.4. what改為that/which5. The people in the apartment below mine often play loudly music late at night, making it very difficult for me to sleep.5. loudly改為loud【單句改錯】每句只有一個錯誤6.

7、 Also, there is often rubbish leaving in the stairway.6. leaving改為left4. I would like to bring your 7. I would appreciate you if you would help me solve these problems.7. 第一個you改為it8. Were trying to find someone to look after the cats while we away.8. away前加are【單句改錯】每句只有一個錯誤7. I would appreciate you

8、 if y9. There are hundreds of people go to work in cars and buses.9. go改為going10. I look forward to hear from you about the action that the council will take on this matter.10. hear改為hearing【單句改錯】每句只有一個錯誤9. There are hundreds of peopl【2013新課標1卷：請求幫助接機】假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中

9、國畫，同時詢問他是否可以接機。信中還需說明：李明：高個子，戴眼鏡航班號：CA985到達：8月6日上午11:30【真題滿分佳作賞析】 【2013新課標1卷：請求幫助接機】【真題滿分佳作賞析】 滿分佳作（一）Dear Peter, How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to have a meeting in your city. Do you remember the Chinese painting I promised you last year? My uncle will brin

10、g it to you soon. I hope you will like it. I wonder if you could do me a favour. This is the first time that my uncle visited the US, so I hope you can meet him at the airport. He arrives at 11:30 a.m. on August 6th and his flight number is CA 985. I would appreciate it if you could take him to his

11、hotel. My uncle is tall. He will be wearing dark glasses and a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua滿分佳作（一）滿分賞析Im writing to tell you that使用了賓語從句。the Chinese painting I promised you使用了定語從句，提升了文章的檔次。使用了I wonder if的結(jié)構(gòu)，表達了委婉的語氣。使用客氣套話I would appreciate it if顯得非常禮貌，語言得體。滿分賞析滿分佳作（二） Dea

12、r Peter, How are you doing? Do you remember the Chinese painting you like very much? Here is some good news for you. You know, my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting. He is to bring the painting to you. I am wondering whether you could pick him up at

13、the airport. My uncle is tall and wears a pair of glasses. His flight number is CA985. He will get there at 11:30 a.m. on August 6. I would be very grateful if you could meet him at the airport. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua滿分佳作（二）滿分賞析使用定語從句the Chinese painting you like very much，屬于高級句型

14、。本句是作者適當添加的內(nèi)容，起到很好的過渡作用，為下文轉(zhuǎn)入談?wù)撌迨鍨镻eter帶去他喜歡的那幅中國畫作鋪墊。使用I am wondering whether，語言表達委婉禮貌。高級句型I would be very grateful if是一大亮點，會讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。滿分賞析【2011山東卷改編：演講比賽寫稿求助】作文原題假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個月來到北京學習。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學生英語演講比賽(speech contest)，你在資料搜集、語言運用等方面遇到了困難。請根據(jù)以下要點給Tom寫一封電子郵件：1. 詢問Tom的生活和學習情況； 2. 談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請Tom幫

15、忙； 3. 告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他?！灸７路g】 【2011山東卷改編：演講比賽寫稿求助】【模仿翻譯】 作文翻譯親愛的Tom，你來北京學習已經(jīng)一個月了。一切如何？我真的很開心和你在這里度過這么難忘的一段經(jīng)歷。今年七月，我將參加中學生英語演講比賽。為了有更好的表現(xiàn)，我正在做準備。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困難。同時，我發(fā)現(xiàn)難以恰當?shù)厥褂糜⒄Z。如果你能幫助我，我會非常感激。你知道，自從你離開后，我一直想著你，所以我希望在英語比賽后在北京見到你。我等不及再次和你見面了。你的,李華作文翻譯Dear Tom, Its been a month since you studied in Beij

16、ing. How is everything going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here. I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trou

17、ble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I cant wait to see you again!Yours,Li Hua高考英語作文提升訓(xùn)練課

18、件：分類寫作-3請求求助信【2010重慶卷改編：請求尋找物品】作文原題假設(shè)你是李華，于2010年6月3日搭乘國外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回國后，發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一個行李箱（suitcase）。現(xiàn)請用英文給該航空公司寫一封信，請他們幫你尋找。信件要點包括：1. 陳述寫信原因;2. 簡要描述該行李;3. 說明其重要性;4. 期待回復(fù)并表示感謝。【2010重慶卷改編：請求尋找物品】作文翻譯尊敬的先生， 我的名字是李華，你們航空公司BA793航班的一個乘客。我是在2010年6月3日乘坐這趟班機的。 你們優(yōu)質(zhì)的服務(wù)給我留下了很深的印象。但是，不幸的是，我到家時，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我把一個旅

19、行箱落在了飛機上。 您想象不到這個旅行箱對我是多么重要。里面有我需要參加一個工作面試的文件和我的身份證，沒有身份證我不能參加一場重要的考試。我的旅行箱較小，藍色，有一條拉鏈。在把手處有一個標簽，上面有我的姓名和地址。 謝謝你善意的關(guān)心，我期待收到您盡早的回復(fù)。您真摯的，李華作文翻譯Dear Sir, My name is Li Hua, a passenger of flight BA793 of your airline company. It was on June 3rd, 2010 that I took this flight. Your good service left me a

20、 deep impression. But unfortunately, the moment I got home, I found I had left a suitcase in your plane. You cant imagine how important the suitcase is to me. There are some documents I need for a job interview and my ID card, without which I cant take an important exam. My suitcase is a small blue

21、one with a zip. There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.Yours Sincerely,Li HuaDear Sir,【2011新課標卷：預(yù)約課程信息幫助】 假定你是李華，正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學校輔導(dǎo)中心（Learning Centre）的幫助。根據(jù)學校規(guī)定，你須書面預(yù)約，請按下列要點寫一封

22、信： 1. 本人簡介； 2. 求助內(nèi)容； 3. 約定時間； 4. 你的聯(lián)系方式（Email:;Phone:12345678）Dear Sir/Madam,.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【全真考場】 【2011新課標卷：預(yù)約課程信息幫助】【全真考場】 【2011新課標卷：預(yù)約課程信息幫助】Dear Sir/Madam, Im Li hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Everything is going well. I enjoy all the

23、 courses here but one offered by Professor Martin Bygate. I have difficulty understanding him in class. He has a very strong accent, which makes it hard for me to follow him in class. I feel worried about this. I was told that I can go to the Learning Centre for help. Im wondering if I could come on

24、 Wednesday or Friday afternoons. I have no classes at both times and can manage to come for help and suggestions. Please let me know which time is OK with you either via or on 12345678.Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua【2011新課標卷：預(yù)約課程信息幫助】【2013全國大綱卷：請求代賣中國結(jié)】 假定你是李華，自制了一些中國結(jié)（Chinese knot）。給開網(wǎng)

25、店的美國朋友Tom寫封信，請他代賣，要點包括： 1. 外觀（尺寸、顏色、材料）； 2. 象征意義； 3. 價格。Dear Tom,How are you doing? Yours,Li Hua【2013全國大綱卷：請求代賣中國結(jié)】【2013全國大綱卷：請求代賣中國結(jié)】Dear Tom, How are you doing? I am so excited to know that you have set up a shop on the Internet. My hobby is making Chinese knots by hand. Could you sell some for me

26、? As a symbol of good luck and unity, Chinese knots have a long history. They are still popular today. The colour includes red, green and yellow. They are as large as a handkerchief and made of red silk threads, cloth and other materials. Chinese knots are usually used as a gift for friends and can be hung on the wall to decorate the room. So I guess some customers may like them. I suggest you sell them for 15 dollars each. If you need further information, do let me know.Yours,Li Hua【2013全