21 發(fā)言稿讀后續(xù)寫概要寫作-2020-2021學(xué)年下學(xué)期高一英語寫作銜接練(通用版)

1、2020-2021 學(xué)年下學(xué)期高一英語寫作銜接練（通用版） 發(fā)言稿讀后續(xù)寫+要寫作假設(shè)你叫李華，是一名高一學(xué)生。為了幫助同學(xué)們盡快適應(yīng)新的校園生活，在英口語課上，老師讓同 學(xué)們分享交友經(jīng)驗。請你寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿分享你的交友經(jīng)驗。注意： 詞數(shù) 100 右； 開和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Im m glad to share with my ideas on how to friends. That Thank you!【答案】Dear Im m glad to share with my ideas on how to friends.The greatest gift of life

2、 is friendship and all us need friends out when run into trouble. How canyou friends? Here are some tips for you. First of be friendly to others so d like to make friends you.Second, it is a join a club it possible for find someone who same but not you should be active in others know about you.If yo

3、u follow my advice, I sure you will make friends soon.That Thank you!Li 【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于發(fā)言稿。為了幫助同學(xué)們盡快適應(yīng)新的校園生活，在英語口語課上，老師讓學(xué)們分享 交友經(jīng)驗。要求寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿分享交友經(jīng)驗?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求： 介紹友誼的重要性； 提供幾點交友建議。第二步：列提綱（重點詞組） make friends; help us out; friendly join a sa

4、me follow advice第三步：連詞成句1. m glad share you my ideas to make friends. greatest gift of life and all us to help us out run into First all, friendly to s so d like to make friends with you. Second, it a join a club it possible for find someone who same not you should be active in that others can more

5、about you.6. If you follow advice, I sure will make more friends 根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序First of all, Second, Last but not least連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰?！军c睛】高分句型 Second, it a join a club it possible for find someone who same運了 it作形式主語，where 和 引導(dǎo)的定語從句)高分句型 not y

6、ou be active in others can more about 運了 so that引導(dǎo)的狀語從句高分句型 If you follow advice, m you will make friends 運 if 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句Ali and sister, Zahra, with their parents neighborhood. Their was very father was to find and they had only money with buy As they paid rent for sever

7、al months, the landlord was necks(著他).One day, Ali took Zahras shoes to a shoe repairman fixed, but he lost them on way home. It wasn untilhe got home that realized he shoes. afraid that his parents would be angry and he his sister to secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Alis running sh

8、oes Zahras schoolhours were in the so she wear them first. After give them Ali. He then his which began Although he ran as fast as could, Ali late was by Ali about a long that for boys in the city. he learned prizewas of shoes, he to take part. home win the shoes. his sister he wouldThe arrived. Ali

9、 had a strong but halfway the race tired and legsbegan to ache. Getting and more he thought Zahra his promise of he would win for his sister third. as finish line runner collided(撞) with Ali 注意： 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 左右； 應(yīng)使用 以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 1:Ali up and other rush

10、ing ahead. _Paragraph 2:Filled with Ali walked _【答案】 1:Ali looked and saw the boys rushing ahead. Refusing up at his ran as fast he dashed across finishing the fourth Thinking he would let Ali couldn sobbing. Just suddenly heard the announcement the broadcast that he won the prize collided with Ali

11、was for rule. Holding the close his the ceremony, Ali felt and he won the shoes for 2:Filled Ali quickly.He could not wait to his sister and arrival, Ali found waiting outside. Nervous and Zahra her broughther she expecting. “Zahra, I have got for ” Ali excitedly, taking the prize of his bagwith han

12、ds. The Zahra the lit So thrilled was she she threw Ali. you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled in their eyes the brother and the sister hugged tightly together.【分析】本文為續(xù)寫作文。首先要認(rèn)真讀懂給作提供的材料，弄清整篇文章的中心是什么。根據(jù)中心，續(xù)事情的發(fā)展和故事的結(jié)局。想象要符合原文的發(fā)展，人物和事物要與原文保持連續(xù)性和一致性。要有確的中心， 重點突出，有詳有略。故事情節(jié)的向后延續(xù)發(fā)展要合乎情理?！驹斀狻壳拔闹饕v述的是阿里家境貧窮，一天阿里給

13、妹妹修鞋的路上，把妹妹的鞋弄丟了，他準(zhǔn)備通參加學(xué)校的長跑比賽，獲得三等獎的獎品一雙鞋子，給妹妹作補償，但在終點的時候發(fā)生一點意外在給的第一段開頭中Ali up and saw the other boys 阿里抬頭一看，看到其他男孩沖在前，可知本段是續(xù)寫比賽中阿里被撞后是如何做的段是文章的關(guān)鍵段是以 Filled with delight, Ali walkedhome quickly.(Filled with delight, Ali walked 開頭句中的 delight 是鍵詞阿里為什么高興， 是因為他達(dá)到目的了，上一段已經(jīng)指出他獲得了三等獎，本段重點講述他回家后發(fā)生的事情?！军c睛】高

14、分句型Ali couldnt sobbing because didn to disappoint his sister. 望。運用 because 引的原因狀語從句。請閱讀下面短文寫一篇 60 詞右的概要：阿里忍不住哭泣，因為他不想讓妹妹失The earthquake that hit Francisco on April 18, 1906 shook down hundreds of thousands of dollars worth of (囪). But the that followed burned up hundreds of millions of dollars worth

15、 of buildings homes. in a city been completely destroyed. San Francisco gone. the and and great houses of rich are gone.On morning at past five earthquake. A moment was fact. of Market Street, in the working-class and in the factories, fires started. Within hour earthquake, of Franciscos fires could

16、 seen 100 miles sun was in the dark was the to the given did best there was organize communicate. railway were useless.And the great pipes water burst. All of ways had made the city safe were gone the thirty earth By afternoon, half of the city gone. At that time, I watched disaster from ship the ba

17、y (海灣) it was calm. No wind came from every directioneast, west, andsouthstrong blew upon the city homes had in its green hills. Wednesdaynight saw e very heart of the city. Man himself had to make ruins of some the s bestbuildings would not danger in streets.Tens of thousands had their left city fo

18、r shelter the were only in blankets and carried the things that rescue from there no fights and pushing shoving. worst of broughtout the best in the Never in all San terrible night. 【答案】A great earthquake shook San on leaving city destroyed. It was am began, later in of city was left without means o

19、fcommunication or transportation. By half of heart city disappeared. When night fell, seeing destruction, homeless city find shelter. Although in disaster, had shown their kindness.【分析】這是一篇概要寫作。【詳解】寫作步驟）細(xì)讀原文。首先要仔細(xì)閱讀短文，掌握文章主旨和結(jié)構(gòu)，明確各段的大意。文章要說明了 1906 年 月 18 日舊金山發(fā)生大地震，整個城市被徹底摧毀。地震發(fā)生在凌 點 15 分，隨后市場街部起火，整個城市通訊和交通癱瘓。到了下午，半個市中心消失了。夜幕降臨，看到滿目瘡痍，無家可歸人