讀后續(xù)寫專題野外遇險兩篇學(xué)案-高考英語復(fù)習(xí)作文備考

冒險/遇險類1.野外迷路struggletodo2.regainone’scalmcameintooursightcatchsightof

losesightof

at

the

sight

of4.safeandsound5.hadnoalternativebuttodosth6.bones-chillingnight7.yelledwithallherstrength8.wave/flagyellowblouse9.pickupone’sconfidence10.satbythestream/leantagainstatree11.restone’sachingfeet12.yelledwithallherstrength2，構(gòu)建可能的情節(jié)時間（天色漸晚）/過渡

1.The

sky

started

to

become.天空開始變得更加黑暗。

2.The

night.夜幕降臨3.The

sun

was

.太陽落山了Immediately,anabsolutedarknesstheforest絕對的黑暗統(tǒng)治了整個森林

6.The

night

sky

was

夜空像最深的海洋一樣黑暗

7.Darkness

me.黑暗包裹著我

2.

地點(diǎn)（森林）/

場景描寫

/

烘托情緒

The

shadows

of

trunks

and

branches

moved

with

the

wind,

just

like

hundreds

of

tigers,

lions

which

opened

their

mouth

and

tried

to

kill

me.樹干和樹枝的影子隨風(fēng)而動，就像成百上千的老虎、獅子，它們張開嘴，試圖殺死我。

I

heard

some

wolves

in

the

distance.我聽到遠(yuǎn)處傳來一些狼的吼聲。

The

cold

wind

through

the

branches

and

I

couldn’t

help

but

.寒風(fēng)吹過樹枝，我不禁打了個寒顫。

3.

情緒

被“救”前：害怕

My

blood

ran

cold

while

the

sounds

were

getting

closer!我血脈賁張，而聲音卻越來越近！我被恐怖的氣氛所籠罩。

,

my

heart

rapidly

and

my

started

to

sweat.

I

looked

around

,

only

to

see...我被恐怖所攫取，心臟急劇跳動，手心開始冒汗。

我拼命地向四周張望，只見......seeing/hearingsth,sbfeltagreatsenseeof+情緒wellingupinone’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.看到/聽到sth,sb感到一種強(qiáng)烈的情緒涌上某人心頭，并且涌邊全身

Fear

and

hunger

me

soon,

which

sent

my

mind

.

I

thought

to

myself...恐懼和饑餓很快抓住了我，這讓我的思緒飄忽不定。

我心想...

被“救”前：后悔

“How

silly

I

am!”

I

,

regretting

ignoring

Sb’s

warning,

“what

if

they

just

forgot

about

me?”"我真是太傻了！"

我心想，后悔無視Sb的警告，"如果他們只是忘記了我怎么辦？"

“If

I

had

taken

his

advice,

I

wouldn’t

be

trapped

here,”

I

thought

to

myself,

regretful

tears.my

eyes."如果我聽了他的建議，我就不會被困在這里了，"我心想，后悔的淚水蒙住了我的眼睛。“ifihaddonesth,iwouldn’tdosth”sbthought,withtearsinsb’seyes/"如果我做了......，我就不會做......"某人遺憾地想，眼淚在眼眶里打轉(zhuǎn)。Janestood,startingtoherself.“howsillyiam....”簡無望地站著，開始自責(zé)。"我是多么愚蠢啊...."

被“救”前：累、餓、冷

I

felt

exhausted

and

finally

(不知不覺睡著了）.我感到筋疲力盡，最后滑入夢鄉(xiāng)（不知不覺睡著了）。

My

legsfelt

like

jelly

and

I

had

no

left.

I

was

!

我的腿像果凍一樣，沒有一點(diǎn)力氣了。

我已經(jīng)筋疲力盡了!

,

I

felt

tired

and

hungry

and

in

the

darkness.似乎過了很久，我覺得又累又餓，就躺在黑暗中。

,

I

lay

down

near

a

big

rock,

my

friends/family.我又累又餓，躺在一塊大石頭旁，想念我的朋友/家人。Feelingscaredandhopeless,Janesatbesideatreeandtomakeherselfwarm.簡感到害怕和無望，坐在一棵樹旁，用胳膊抱著肩膀，讓自己感到溫暖。被“救”后：高興、如釋重負(fù)、羞愧認(rèn)錯

Upon

seeing

them,

my

heart

was

brightened

and

the

smile

of

happiness

crossed

my

face.看到他們，我的心豁然開朗，臉上掠過幸福的微笑。

I

came

back

,

which

made

everyone

我平安無事地回來了，這讓大家松了一口氣。

There

was

Sb,

an

expression

of

.還有Sb，也露出了如釋重負(fù)的表情。

about

what

I

had

done,

I

did

not

dare

to

look

up

to我對自己所做的事感到內(nèi)疚，不敢抬頭與他們對視。Tearsofjoyandreliefastheyfinallyheldeachothertightly當(dāng)他們終于緊緊地?fù)肀г谝黄饡r，喜悅和欣慰的淚水涌了出來。Sb’sfaceasmileassbsawstandingthere,.theyhuggedtightlywithtearstheircheeks.當(dāng)Sb看到站在那里，安然無恙時，Sb的臉裂開了，露出了笑容。

4.

動作

被“救”前：不知所措/尋找出路+大聲求救+停下休息、祈求被發(fā)現(xiàn)

There

I

was,

completely

what

to

do

next.我在那里，完全不知道接下來該怎么做。

I

decided

not

to

aimlessly

but

stayed

in

that

place,

my

team

to

come

to)

my

我決定不再漫無目的地走動，而是呆在那個地方，等待（我的團(tuán)隊來）我的救援。

I

and

decided

the

first

thing

I

had

to

do

was

to

find

a

,

a

safe

place

any

hungry

animals.我讓自己冷靜下來，決定首先要做的是找到一個避難所，一個遠(yuǎn)離任何饑餓動物的安全地方。

I

for

help

at

the

of

my

voice

but

my

cry

was

by

the

forest我用最大的聲音呼喊/喊救命，但我的呼喊被森林吞沒了。

I

for

help

at

the

loudest

of

my

voice

but

only

was

by

the

all

around

the

forest.我用最響亮的聲音喊救命，但只被森林周圍的回聲所掩蓋。

I

seated

myself

by

a

tree,

that

they

could

find

me

soon.我坐在一棵樹旁，祈禱他們能盡快找到我。Sheyelledwithinadesperatetofreeherself.她用盡全身力氣大喊，拼命想掙脫。

被“救”后：被救+和家人朋友擁抱+道歉

I

finally

got

back

to

my

group

with

the

help

of

rescuers.

Sb

were

there

waiting

for

me.在救援人員的幫助下，我終于回到了我的小組。

Sb在那里焦急地等待著我。

They

checked

if

I

was

injured

and

then

took

me

to

.他們檢查了我是否受傷，然后把我?guī)У疥犖樗诘牡胤健?/p>

seeing

me,

Sb.

immediately

to

me

and

hugged

me

tightly.看到我后，Sb.立即沖到我身邊，緊緊地抱住我。

They

me

instead

of

scolding

me.他們安慰我，而不是責(zé)罵我。OnseeingJane,Tomimmediatelyrushedouttoher,aroundher.看到簡，湯姆立即沖到她身邊，用手臂抱住她。Luckily/Fortunately,itdidn’ttakesbdid...幸運(yùn)的是，她不就就找到了一個山洞5.

升華

This

experience

taught

a

lesson

in

my

life,

through

which

I

knew

the

importance

of

...這次可怕的經(jīng)歷給我的人生上了寶貴的一課，通過它我知道了......的重要性。whatalessonfrosbtolearn!多么寶貴的經(jīng)驗教訓(xùn)！

While

this

had

been

a

experience,

it

is

one

that

I

will

never

forget.

雖然這是一次具有挑戰(zhàn)性的經(jīng)歷，但我將永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記。

第一篇：One

Friday

afternoon,some

of

my

classmates

planned

to

take

a

hike

in

a

jungle（叢林）including

my

friends

Jake

and

Liam.They

asked

me

if

I

would

like

to

go

with

them.I

love

outdoor

activities,so

I

immediately

said

yes.

It

was

sunny

the

following

morning.I

was

in

a

very

good

mood.I

was

so

excited

about

hiking

since

it

was

the

first

time

that

I

had

hiked

with

them.I

ate

a

light

breakfast.After

that,I

hurriedly

ran

out

of

my

house

to

meet

them

in

the

school

playground.

The

jungle

where

we

were

going

was

far

from

our

school.It

took

about

three

hours

to

go

there

by

bus,but

it

wasn't

a

boring

journey

as

we

were

all

eager

to

hike.After

we

got

off

the

bus,we

found

a

local

guide

to

ensure

our

safety.The

guide,whose

name

is

Thomas,said

that

he

had

hiked

there

lots

of

times

and

that

he

was

familiar

with

the

route.When

we

arrived,Thomas

told

us

neverleavethegroup.He

warned

us

that

we

would

easily

get

lost

in

the

jungle

if

we

walked

alone.Then

we

began

to

hike.

There

were

various

plants

which

we

had

never

seen

before.All

of

us

were

amazed

at

the

beauty

of

the

scenery

and

the

sounds

of

the

creatures.Sadly,after

hiking

for

about

an

hour,I

found

that

my

watch

on

my

wrist

was

gone.I

realized

that

my

watch

had

fallen

off.It

was

a

gift

from

my

grandma,and

I

loved

it

very

much.Without

thinking,I

turned

back

and

tried

to

find

my

watch.Since

I

was

the

last

one

walking

in

the

group,nobody

noticed

it

when

Iwalkedaway.

I

wasn't

worried

about

getting

lost

because

I

thought

I

could

find

my

watch

easily.

However,when

I

finally

found

my

watch

and

tried

to

catch

up

with

my

friends:they

had

gone

far.I

immediately

realized

that

I

was

alone

and

lost.

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