高中英語改錯專題訓(xùn)練和答案

Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingbutcouldmakedecisionsbymyself.Besides,myparentsdidn'tseemtothinkso.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghomeforcollege.Atlast,Iwillbeontheirown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturnwheneverIneedhelp.Theteenageyearfrom13to19wer亡themostdifficulttimeforme.TEl亡丫wereyearsalsothebestandwze亡yearsinmylife.Attl\iirEtnIthought]kneweveyttriug;butv^orstand.couldmakedecisionsbymyself.Bssidss,myparentsdidn'xseemrothinkso-.TheyHoweveralwaystellmewhatrodoand.ho取todoir.Alcnetime,Ievenfeltmypaienrsro-ldcouldn'tunderstandmeso]hop亡d]could.be班亡lyfromtheiTLI血時亡dthemIfreewasindependentby化arstrangecl&tiies.NowIamleavinghomeforcollege.Atlast,wearingIwillbeontiieifown,butIsti11wanttohavemyparentstoturn-■^vhm.^er]needmytoIwasreadinganarticleinabookwhileIcameacrossawordIdidn'tknow.“Dad,whatisthemeaningoftheword”Mydad,asheusualdidafterwork,waswatchinghismostfavoriteshow.“Youhavethedictionary,don'tyou”heshotback.Hedidn'tevenlookupmyface.Iwentbackmyroom,andthereonmystudytableisthatdictionary.Ilookeditupandfoundit'sexactmeaning.TenyearhavepassedandIstillusethatdictionary,alongwiththelessonIreceivedearlierinlifefrommyoldman:tobeindependent.Iwasreadingan^rtiGLeinabookwhilclcameacnssawordIdidn^th?5r.竝whatistbcmcaamg4ftbcWhi<iLwwd?Trf/da&aslieusualdid■after附山wuwatdkingbisawtfovulte曲id碉^Ybuhaveth&dktiaiarvdozft

usually\ayniT'beshoebactHedidn'tevaloolupmvfkc.IwanbactAmyroam,audibcrcanmystudytableisthatattowasdjctian町.IIfwkcditup-aodfowdifscmctmeaning,layearhavepassedandlsuUuscthm4jciiciDar);alongwithitsyear(hrIckqd1rwriviodcarlwrjnlife&ommyqUmao;iQb^iudcpaulnit.earlyDearSir,I'velearnedateachingassistantforforeignteachersiswantedinyourschool.I'mwritingtoapplytotheposition.Firstofall,IhadgraduatedfromAnhuiUniversityonemonthago.Havingexposedtoforeignteacherssinceayoungage,IcancommunicatewithothersinfluentlyEnglish,What'smore,yearsofexperiencesofbeingmonitormakesmeabrilliantorganizer,whowillhelpalottokeeptheclassinorder.ThemostimportantfactoristhatIlovekids,andI'mconfidentofmypatienceandcarewillundoubtedly,winhistrust.Allinall,Ithinkmyenthusiasmandfullsenseofresponsibilitywillmakemeaqualifyingteachingassistant.I'dappreciateyouifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,LiHun【解析】1.句意為我想要應(yīng)聘這個職位。applyfor為固定搭配，表示申請。故將to改為for。句意為我一個月前從大學(xué)畢業(yè)。這里考查的是時態(tài)問題。從amonthago可知，畢業(yè)應(yīng)該是過去時，應(yīng)該用一般過去時。故將had去掉。3?句意為從小的時候開始我就接觸了外國老師?？疾靍xplose用法，暴露與作者之間應(yīng)該是被動語態(tài)。故在having后面添加been。4.句意為我能和他人用流利的英語交流。fluently為副詞，不能修飾名詞。故將fluently改為fluent。句意為當(dāng)班長的多年經(jīng)歷讓我成為一個很好的組織者。experience沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將experiences改為experience。句意為這會對保持班級秩序有很大幫助。該句為非限制性定語從句，而且此處的關(guān)系代詞應(yīng)該是指的是作者是一個很好的組織者，為一件事，不能用who。故將who改為which。7.句意為我的耐心和關(guān)懷會毫無疑問的贏得他們的信任，對此我很有信心obeconfidentof后面加名詞。beconfidentthat引導(dǎo)從句。故將of改為that。8?由文意可知，作者是想當(dāng)助教。因此贏得的信任應(yīng)該是一群學(xué)生，而不是一個人。故將his改為their。句意為我認為我的熱情和責(zé)任感，會讓我成為一名合格的助教。考查形容詞。qualified為符合資格的。故將qualifying改為qualified。{句意為如果你將我的申請列入考慮范圍內(nèi)的話，我將非常感謝。考察appreciate用法。wouldappreciateit...為固定搭配表示感謝。故將you改為it。OnenightIwasgoingtoworkonmyusuallybusroute.Uponourarriveattheterminal,InoticedthatIwastheonlypassengerleftonthebus.Ilookedaroundandsawamobilephoneinachairthatmusthavebeenleftbehindbythepassenger.Igiveittotheconductor.Twodaylater,theconductortoldmethatthepassengerwasverymuchhappythatIreturnedthemobilephone.Thepassengerwastryingtogethername,soshewantedtopostonFacebookaboutwhathadhappenedasasortofappreciation.Ithoughtitwasunnecessary.WhatwasimportantwaswhenIsawthesmileonherface,Iwashappy.46.第1處【答案】usually改為usual【解析】用形容詞修飾名詞。第2處【答案】arrive改為arrival【解析】Uponone'sarrival是固定用法，意思是某人到來時。第3處【答案】on改為in【解析】句意：我發(fā)現(xiàn)我是汽車里唯一剩下的乘客，on改為in。第4處【答案】the改為a解析】泛指“一位乘客”，所以用不定冠詞。第5處【答案】give改為gave【解析】發(fā)生在過去的事情，所以用一般過去式。第6處【答案】day改為days【解析】Day是可數(shù)名詞，且被“two"修飾，所以用名詞復(fù)數(shù)。第7處【答案】去掉much【解析】"非常高興”，直接說veryhappy，所以去掉much。第8處【答案】her改為my【解析】句意：這名乘客想要知道我的名字，所以her改為my。第9處【答案】so改為because【解析】句意：因為她想要張貼在臉書上。表示原因，所以so改為because。第10處【答案】when前加thatThebluewhaleiscertainlythelargestanimalsontheplanettoday.Justtheheartofabluewhalecanweightasmanyasafamilycar.Youmightthinkthatsuchabiganimalwouldneedtoeatanotherbiganimalstosurviving.Surprising,thebluewhalefeedsonsomeofthesmalleroceananimals.Abluewhalecanlivebetween80and90years.Unfortunately,itisbelievethattherewereonly10,000to25,000alive.Theywerehuntedforinthe1900sbuthundredsofthousandsofthemwerekilled.Let'shopenumberofwhalesontheplanetstartstoincreaseinthecomingyears.Thebluewhaleiscertainlythelargestanimalsontheplanettoday.Justtheheartofablueanimalwhalecanweightasmanyasafamilycar.Youmightthinkthatsuchabiganimalwouldneedtomucheatanotherbiganimalstosurviving.Surprising,thebluewhalefeedsonsomeofthesmallerothersurviveSurprisingly<oceananimals.Abluewhalecanlivebetween80and90years.Unfortunately,itisbelievethattherewerearebelievedonly10,000to25,000alive.Theywerehuntedforinthe1900sbuthundredsofthousandsofthemare去掉forandwerekilled.Let'shopeAnumberofwhalesontheplanetstartstoincreaseinthecomingyears.aWhenmytwentiethbirthdayscame,Iwasnotathome.Inordertocelebratesuchimportantdaywithmyparents,Iwrotehimaletter,inwhichIthankedthemforhavingraisedmefortwentyyears,andexpressedmyloveforthem.Latermymothertellmewhentheyreadtheletter,tearswerefilledhereyes.Andmyfatherappearedverycool.Beforethat,hereaditalonecareful,andthenheputitawayintoadeskdrawer.IcanimaginethesceneclearlybecauseIknowfather.Beingamanwithlittlewords,heprefersshowhisloveformeinasilentway.61.birthdays改為birthday62.such后加an改為them64.tell改為told65.去掉were66.And改為But67.Before改為After68.careful改為carefully69.little改為few70.prefers后加toMyparentsliveinthecountry.TheykeepadogcallingAhFu.OnedaymyparentwenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong.Whiletheyworking,mysisterwalkedtotherivernearby.AhFufollowsherthere.Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhileshefellintotheriver.AhFubarkedandjumpedtothewaterimmediately.WhenmyparentsheardofAhFubarking,theyrantotheriver.TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryinghislittlesister.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarm.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesister.calling改為calledparent改為parentsthey后加werethe改為afollows改為followedwhile改為whento改為into

8.去掉heard后面的of9.his改為my10.warm改為warmlyLastsummer,tomydelight,IgotachancetogototheUnitedKingdom.IwaseagertoseehowEnglandwaslike.Althoughmyparentsobjectedtomydecisionatfirst,butfinallytheywerepersuaded.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhavetravelledabroadalone.Feltexcited,Iboardedtheplane.Suddenly,however,Ifoundmyluggagesgoneandfelthelplessly.Itwasonthatmomentthattheairhostesscametomyassistance.Afterhelpingmefinditback,shesuggestedthatIattachedalabeltomysuitcaseonmynextjourney.Iwasthankfullytothekindladyforhishelp!Whatunforgettabletrip!Lastsummer,tomydelight,IgotachancetogototheUnitedKingdom.Iwaseagertoseehowwhatwerepersuaded.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhavetravelledabroadalone.Feltexcited，1howwhatwerepersuaded.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhavetravelledabroadalone.Feltexcited，1boardedtheplane.Suddenly,however,Ifoundmyluggages

luggagegoneandfelthelplessly.Itwasonatthatmomentthattheairhostesscametomyassistance.Afterhelpingmefinditback,shesuggestedthatIattached

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attachthankfullyalabeltomysuitcaseonmynextjourney.Iwas惱nkfultothekindladyforhis

herhelp!WhatAanunforgettabletrip!Nowadays,asthedevelopmentofhightechnology,smartphoneisverypopulartohighschoolstudent.Smartphoneonceisforbidden.Butnowithasbecomeaverycommontoolforstudents.Alotofstudentskeephiseyesonsmartphonesallthetime.Teachersareannoyingaboutthissituation,sotheyfeelmoststudentsignorethemwhentheyaregivinglessons.Someteachersthinkitistimetoletthestudentshandtohandintheirsmartphones.Idon'tthinkitisgoodidea.Evenfortheteachers,theyusedtheirphonessomuch,letalonethestudents.Theteachersshouldimprovetheirteachingmethodstocatchthestudents'interest.

asNowadays,w^thedevelopmentofhightechnology,smartphoneisverypopularasTOC\o"1-5"\h\ztoiswith/amonghighschoolstudents.Smartphoneoncew^forbidden.Butnowithasbecomeatoolshisverycommon品&forstudents.Alotofstudentskeep￡^7eyesonsmartphonesallthetime._annoyingsoTeachersareannoyedaboutthissituation,because/astheyfeelthatmoststudentsignorethemwhentheyaregivinglessons.Someteachersthinkitistimetoletthestudentstohandintheirsmartphones.AusedIdon'tthinkitisagoodidea.Evenfortheteachers,theytheirphonessomuch,letausealonethestudents.Theteachersshouldimprovetheirteachingmethodstocatchthestudents'interest.DearSir,I'mXiaoli,astudentofSenior3.Iamwritingtoaskyourselfforsomeadvice.SinceIenteredSenior3,myparentsandteachershavekeptaskingmetoboard（寄宿）intheschool.Theysayitwillbeverymuchconvenientformetoaskquestionwheneverandwherever.However,theythinkboardingwillmakethispossibletomakefullusemynighttime,andthatIcanalsodeveloptheabilitytolookaftermyself.However,inmyopinion,stayathomeintheeveningallowmemoretimetoworkatmylessons.Atasametime,IcanlearnwhichIthinkI'mnotgoodat.Ireallydon'tknowhowtodealwiththedisagreement.CanyouhelpmeoutYours,Xiaoli71.yourself改為you72.去掉much73.question改為questions74.However改為Besides75.this改為it76.use后面加of77.stay改為staying80.which改為what78.allow改為allows79.a改為theAsaSeniorTwostudent,myfavoritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourschoolfootball

team.WepracticeforthreetimesaweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchonTVorontheInternettogether.Playfootballnotonlymakesusgrowtallandstrongbutalsogiveusasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepinmindsthatweplayfortheteaminsteadourselves.Also,sportsteachustheimportantofobeyingtherulesinamatch.Eachplayermustlistentothecaptain,whichistheleaderoftheteam.Andtheymustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthegame.wasmatch_threetimesaweekandoftenwatchfootballmamatch_threetimesaweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchesonTVoronPlaygivetheInternettogether.footballnotonlymakesusgrowtallandstrongbutalso晶品usasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepinmindsasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepinmindthatweplayfortheteaminsteadofobeyingtherulesinamatch.EachplayerAimportantofobeyingtherulesinamatch.Eachplayerofourselves.Also,sportsteachustheimportancewhichtheymustlistentothecaptain,耐。istheleaderoftheteam.Andwemustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthegame.Thewinterholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgesthatwecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.71.【答案】第1處how改為what第2處chose改為choose第3處take改為taking第4處but改為and;第5處about后加the第6處your改為our第7處knowledges改為knowledge第8處刪除can或can改為should第9處thought改為think第10處many改為muchAsthesayinggoes,chancesfavoredthepreparedmind.Ilearnedthisfromoneofmyexperience.Iwasnotchosenasmemberofthevolleyballteamofourschool.Becauseofthis,Idecidedtogiveupplayvolleyball.Luckily,mybestfriendstoppedmebutpointedoutthatitwasmylazinessandpoorpreparationwhichledtomyfailure.Afterthat,Ipracticedplayingvolleyballoneveryday.Whenanothertryoutarrived,Iwasfullpreparedandtriedmybest.Asaresult,Iwasselectedandbecameanimportantplayeronourschoolteam.Fromthis,Iamfirmlyconvincingthat,nomatterwhenchancesarrive,wewereabletoseizethemaslongaswegetwellprepared.Asthesayinggoes,chancesfavoredthepreparedmind.Ilearnedthisfromoneofmyfavorexperience.experiencesIwasnotchosenasAmemberofthevolleyballteamofourschool.Becauseofthis,I%adecidedtogiveupplayvolleyball.Luckily,mybestfriendstoppedmebutpointedoutthatitwasplayingandmylazinessandpoorpreparationwhichledtomyfailure.Afterthat,Ipracticedplayingvolleyballthatoneveryday.Whenanothertryoutarrived,Iwasfullpreparedandtriedmybest.Asaresult,Iwas去掉onfullyselectedandbecameanimportantplayeronourschoolteam.

Fromthis,Iamfirmlyconvincingthat,nomatterwhenchancesarrive,wewereabletoseizeconvincedarethemaslongaswegetwellprepared.It'snoteasyforustoacceptthefactwhichwearegoingtoleaveourbelovedschool.However,wearelookedforwardtoourfuturelife.Lastnight,myfriendsandIwalkaroundourschooltalkingaboutthefunnythingsthathadbeenhappenedinthepastthreeyears.Suddenly,Igotanidea.Isaidtohimweshouldmakeadealthatwecouldgettogetherherefouryearslate.Myfriendsweresoexcitingaboutit,andtheyagreedwithme.IstartedtothinkaboutwhatIwouldbecomeinthefuture.Imaybecomingateacher,oradoctor.Ithinkdealwillhelpuskeepintouchtoeachother.51.which-that52.looked-looking53.walk-walked56.late-later59.deal前加the57.exciting-excited58.becoming-become56.late-later59.deal前加the57.exciting-excited58.becoming-become60.to-withOneneighborofmyisauntyAnabel.Everyoneintheneighborhoodknowsherforthe“queenoftheneighborhood”.Youmayaskwhat.Well,it'sbecausesheusedtocookingfortheentireneighborhoodwhenevertherewasfestival.IrememberthedaythatMr.Carterceleberatedhis90thbirthday.Inordertomakesureeveryoneknewaboutit,hemadeMrs.Carterbakesmallcookies.Thenhewalkedaroundandgiveeveryhouseonecookie.Believeitornot,butitwasaninvitation.Assoonasmyauntyheardthenews,shegotallneighbortogetherandstartedahugebarbecuepartyforhim.Therewasn'tonepersonwhowillingstayedhomethatday.myforOneneighborofmjneisauntyAnabel.Everyoneintheneighborhoodknowsher￡thewhatcooking"queenoftheneighborhood”.Youmayask耐丫.Well,it'sbecausesheusedtocookfortheAthatentireneighborhoodwhenevertherewasafestival.Iremembertheday齊石MrCarterceleberatedhis90thbirthday.Inordertomakesureeveryoneknewaboutit,hemadeMrsCartergivebakesmallcookies.Thenhewalkedaroundandgaveeveryhouseonecookie.Believeitornot,neighborbu^itwasaninvitation.Assoonasmyauntyheardthenews,shegotallneighborstogetherand

startedahugebarbecuepartyforhim.Therewasn'tonepersonwhowillingwillinglystartedahugebarbecuepartyforhim.Therewasn'tonepersonwhowillingwillinglystayedhomethatday.Onemorning,ablindboysatonasquarewithahatbyherfeet.Heheldupasignwhichwassaid:“Iamblind,pleasehelpme.”Therewasonlyafewcoinsinthehat.Amanwaswalkingby.Hetookthesign,turningitaround,andwrotesomethingonit.Heputthesignbacksothateveryonewalkedbywouldseethenewwords.Surprising,soonalotmorepeopleweregivingmoneytotheblindboy.Thatafternoon,themanwhohadchangedthesigncametoseewhatthingswere.Theboyrecognizedhisfootstepandasked:“AreyoutheonewhochangedmysignthismorningHowdidyouwrite”Themansaid:“TodayisabeautifuldayandIcannotseeit.”herOnemorning,ablindboysatonasquarewithahatbyfeet.Heheldupasignwhichwassaid:"Iamblind,pleasehelpme.”Therewereonlyafewcoinsinthehat.Amanwasturningwalkingby.Hetookthesign,neditaround,andwrotesomethingonit.HeputthesignbackASurprisingsothateveryone耐。walkedbywouldseethenewwords.surprisingly,soonalotmorepeopleweregivingmoneytotheblindboy.Thatafternoon,themanwhohadchangedthesignfootstepfootstepsandasked:"Areyoutheonefootstepfootstepsandasked:"Areyoutheonecametoseehowthingswere.TheboyrecognizedhiswhochangedmysignthismorningHowwhochangedmysignthismorningWhatdidyouwrite”Themansaid:"Todayisabeautifuldayand贏1cannotseeit.”DearHarry,\IhavegoodnewsforyouthattherewillbeainternationalmusiccampinourcitythissummerThecampisopenlytostudentsfromallovertheworldwhoisinterestedinplayingmusicalinstruments.Iknowyouareamusiclover,sowhynottojointhecamptogetherwithusAtthecamp,campersaregivingclassesbyexpertsinthemoringandintheafternoontheydoacoupleofhourofpractice.Intheevening,thereisamusicexchangeconcertthatcamperscangiveperformancesandplaysdifferentkindsofmusicfromtheirowncounties.I'msureyouwillhavealotoffunsthere.I'mlookingforwardyourreply.

Yours,