黑龍江省部分名校2020-2021學年上學期高二英語期中試題精選匯編：書面表達專題（部分詳解）

黑龍江省部分名校2020-2021學年上學期高二英語期中試題精選匯編書面表達專題黑龍江省大慶鐵人中學2020-2021學年高二英語上學期期中試題第三節(jié):書面表達(滿分25分)72.假設你是高二學生李華，想應聘學校英語校報的記者兼編輯。請根據(jù)下面的個人情況用英語寫一篇求職信。姓名:李華年齡:17性別:女獲獎情況:全國中學生英語能力競賽(NEPCS)一等獎，校英語演講比賽第一名經(jīng)歷:主持過年級英語歌唱比賽愛好:看英文小說、寫英文日記聯(lián)系方式：Lihua2015@163.com注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Deareditor,IamLiHua,a17-year-oldgirlfromSenior2._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Sincerely,Lihua【答案】Deareditor,IamLiHua,a17--year-oldgirlfromSenior2.Iamwritingtorecommendmyselfasthereporterandeditorforyournewspaper.MyinterestandskillsinEnglishcontributetomyqualificationsforthejob.Asanoutgoinggirlfullofenergy,IlikeallkindsofmeaningfulactivitiesandwonfirstprizeinNEPCSinourschoolEnglishspeakingcompetition,whichhasbuiltupmyconfidenceinlearningEnglishwell.Besides,IhavehostedseveralEnglishsingingcompetitionsinourschool.Inmysparetime,IenjoyreadingEnglishnovelsandwritingEnglishdiarieswithacomputerskillfully.IwouldliketobeamemberofyournewspapersinceitwouldbeagreatopportunityformetopractiseusingEnglishandmakefriendswithmanyotherstudents.IcanbereachedanytimeviaemailatLihua2015@163.com.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Sincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生一篇求職信，應聘學校英語校報的記者兼編輯?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時，少量一般過去式。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.姓名:李華2.年齡:173.性別:女4.獲獎情況:全國中學生英語能力競賽(NEPCS)一等獎，校英語演講比賽第一名5.經(jīng)歷:主持過年級英語歌唱比賽6.愛好:看英文小說、寫英文日記7.聯(lián)系方式：Lihua2015@163.com第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）17--year-old;recommend;contributeto;outgoing;meaningfulactivities;winfirstprize;buildup;makefriendswith;lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.IamLiHua,a17--year-oldgirlfromSenior2.2.Iamwritingtorecommendmyselfasthereporterandeditorforyournewspaper.3.MyinterestandskillsinEnglishcontributetomyqualificationsforthejob.4.Asanoutgoinggirlfullofenergy,IlikeallkindsofmeaningfulactivitiesandwonfirstprizeinNEPCSinourschoolEnglishspeakingcompetition,whichhasbuiltupmyconfidenceinlearningEnglishwell.5.Inmysparetime,IenjoyreadingEnglishnovelsandwritingEnglishdiarieswithacomputerskillfully.6.IwouldliketobeamemberofyournewspapersinceitwouldbeagreatopportunityformetopractiseusingEnglishandmakefriendswithmanyotherstudents.7.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤色修改【點睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復合句，如：Asanoutgoinggirlfullofenergy,IlikeallkindsofmeaningfulactivitiesandwonfirstprizeinNEPCSinourschoolEnglishspeakingcompetition,whichhasbuiltupmyconfidenceinlearningEnglishwell.這句話運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句；使用了一些固定詞組，如winfirstprize;buildup;makefriendswith;lookforwardto等。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。黑龍江省哈爾濱市第六高中2020-2021學年高二英語上學期期中試題第四節(jié)作文（滿分20分）87.假定你是李華，想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽時間、地點；2.展覽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearHenry，I'mverydelightedtowritealettertotellyousomethingaboutChinesepaper-cuttingexhibition，whichwillstartonJune20inourschoollecturehallandlastforaweek．Asiswell-knowntousall，Chinesepaper-cuttingisfamousallovertheworldandI'msureyouwillbeinterestedinit，soIplantoinviteyoutopayaclosevisit．Theexhibitionisacollectionofworkscreatedbysomefamouspaper-cuttingartistsinChina．Duringtheactivity，IwillshowyouaroundourschoolandthisisagoodchanceforyoutoenjoyyourselfandlearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture．Wouldyoupleasehavealookattheexhibitionwithme？I'dappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation．I'mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplyassoonaspossible．Yours，LiHua【解析】【分析】這是一篇提綱類作文。【詳解】首先審題，這篇文章要求假定你是李華，想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽時間、地點；2.展覽內(nèi)容。其次選用正確的人稱和時態(tài)，用一般將來時、第一人稱來寫。然后寫出單個句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時，要注意文中給出的細節(jié)都要包括，不要遺漏。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！军c睛】本篇書面表達要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的復合句。例如：使用了定語從句I'mverydelightedtowritealettertotellyousomethingaboutChinesepaper-cuttingexhibition，whichwillstartonJune20inourschoollecturehallandlastforaweek．和賓語從句Asiswell-knowntousall，Chinesepaper-cuttingisfamousallovertheworldandI'msureyouwillbeinterestedinit，soIplantoinviteyoutopayaclosevisit．黑龍江省佳木斯市第一中學2020-2021學年高二英語上學期期中試題VIII.書面表達（滿分25分）72.假設你是佳木斯第一中學學生李華。你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中詢問你的高二生活情況。請你給他回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.近況；2.感受；3.愿望。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJim,Nicetohearfromyou!Inyourletter,youaskedmeaboutmylife.Asthefinalexaminationisdrawingnear,I’mtryingmybesttoprepareforit.Exercisesandexamshavetakenupmostofmytime.I’veneverbeenbusierandcanonlyfindtimetolistentomusiconthewayhome.Asyoucantell,theprocessistoughandI’mtired,butalongtheway,IhavemanagedtodowhatIthoughtimpossible.Althoughthereisstillalotformetoimproveon,Idohaveconfidenceinmyself.Ihopewithsomucheffort,Iwillgetadmittedtomydreamuniversity.I’malsoexpectingthecomingsummerholiday,forIwillsurelyhaveplentyoftimetoenjoymyself!What’syourplanafterhighschool?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求以李華的身份向美國朋友Jim回信：關(guān)于你高二的生活情況?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應用文。時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法要求：1.近況；2.感受；3.愿望。第二步：列提綱（重點短語）thefinalexaminationisdrawing;theprocessistough;alotformetoimproveon;getadmittedto；expectingthecomingsummerholiday第三步：連詞成句1.Nicetohearfromyou!Inyourletter,youaskedmeaboutmylife.Asthefinalexaminationisdrawingnear,I’mtryingmybesttoprepareforit.2.Asyoucantell,theprocessistoughandI’mtired,butalongtheway,IhavemanagedtodowhatIthoughtimpossible.Althoughthereisstillalotformetoimproveon,Idohaveconfidenceinmyself.3.Ihopewithsomucheffort,Iwillgetadmittedtomydreamuniversity.I’malsoexpectingthecomingsummerholiday,forIwillsurelyhaveplentyoftimetoenjoymyself!根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：說明近況；講述感受；提出愿望。2.表并列補充關(guān)系：and3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：but；although+從句4.表因果關(guān)系：for第五步：潤色修改【點睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當，上下文意思連貫。復合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多的高端句式，如原因狀語從句：I’malsoexpectingthecomingsummerholiday,forIwillsurelyhaveplentyoftimetoenjoymyself!;祈使句：Hopetohearfromyousoon.等。文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然。為文章增色添彩。黑龍江省鶴崗市綏濱縣第一中學2020-2021學年高二英語上學期期中試題書面表達假定你是李華。你們班的外教Smith先生即將回國。你將代表全班在歡送會上發(fā)言。請你用英文寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．贊揚Smith的人品和工作。2．感謝他在學習和生活中給予的幫助。3．表達對Smith的祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。DearMr.Smith，It'shardtosay“goodbye”.__________________________________________________________________________________________________[答案]Dear_Mr._Smith，It's_hard_to_say_“goodbye”．_Youaresohumorousandeasy－goingthateveryonewantstobeyourfriends.Wedoappreciatethewayofyourteaching.Itseemsthatyouhavemagictomakeyourlectureslivelyandinteresting.Withyourguidance,allofushavemadegreatprogress.Youcareaboutnotonlyourstudybutalsoourlife.Wheneverwe'reintrouble,you'realwaysthefirstmanwecandependon.Afterclassyouoftenjoinusingames,duringwhichwe'vesharedmuchhappiness.Thankyouagainforeverythingyou'vedoneforus.Wishyouasafejourneyhomeandahappylifeinthefuture.黑龍江省